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''The Peace Not Promised'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro. Upon his canonical death, Severus Snape meets Albus Dumbledore in the afterlife, and is offered a chance to [[PeggySue go back to an earlier point in his life]] (shortly after the breaking of his friendship with Lily Evans), to remedy his many regrets. He accepts in hopes of keeping Lily alive; everything else, he feels, is secondary to that. However, the changes in himself and the changes he brings about once he arrives in the past have the effect of softening her anger toward him and persuading her to give him another chance.

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''The Peace Not Promised'' is a ''Literature/HarryPotter'' PeggySue fanfiction by Tempest Kiro. Kiro.

Upon his canonical death, Severus Snape meets Albus Dumbledore in the afterlife, and is offered a chance to [[PeggySue go back to an earlier point in his life]] (shortly after the breaking of his friendship with Lily Evans), to remedy his many regrets. He accepts in hopes of keeping Lily alive; everything else, he feels, is secondary to that. However, the changes in himself and the changes he brings about once he arrives in the past have the effect of softening her anger toward him and persuading her to give him another chance.
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** When Severus agrees to [[spoiler:continue brewing Wolfsbane for Remus indefinitely]], at Lily's request, Remus' reaction is to assume that he's holding his compliance hostage to keep Lily's friendship.

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** When Severus agrees to [[spoiler:continue brewing Wolfsbane for Remus indefinitely]], at Lily's request, Remus' reaction is to assume that he's holding using his compliance hostage as a bargaining tool to keep Lily's friendship.
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** Rita Skeeter brushes Lily off, derisively stating that she's trying to talk to Severus Snape, not "the leader of the Quidditch cheer squad." Mere seconds later, [[spoiler:she finds out that the girl she just dismissed is Severus' wife, and is quite happy to throw her rudeness back in her face.]]

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** Rita Skeeter brushes Lily off, derisively stating that she's trying to talk to Severus Snape, not "the leader of the Quidditch cheer squad." Mere seconds later, [[spoiler:she finds out that the girl she just dismissed is Severus' wife, and who is quite happy to throw her rudeness back in her face.]]
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Too bad that means there will be no infant Harry Potter to defeat Voldemort this time...
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* PeerAsTeacher: Severus Snape is hired as the Defence Against the Dark Arts professor as a new graduate of Hogwarts, even though professors are not normally appointed younger than twenty-three. Abraxas Malfoy points out to the board of governors that no professor has been appointed at that age before, even internationally. However, Snape's able to command the students' respect, because [[spoiler:he killed a basilisk the year before]].

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* ButterflyOfDoom: Severus is able to nudge many students away from becoming Death Eaters, often with quite small interventions. Even those who initially resist his efforts, such as [[spoiler:Avery and Regulus]], often come to him later when they are faced with the harsh realities of serving Voldemort. [[spoiler: Barty Crouch Jr]] is a particularly notable example of redemption through early intervention and sympathy.

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Severus is able to nudge many students away from becoming Death Eaters, often with quite small interventions. Even those who initially resist his efforts, such as [[spoiler:Avery and Regulus]], often come to him later when they are faced with the harsh realities of serving Voldemort. [[spoiler: Barty Crouch Jr]] is a particularly notable example of redemption through early intervention and sympathy.sympathy.
** Dumbledore has to strike a balance between using Severus' information to make the war go better, vs leaving things predictable. He chooses to draw a line and make a large splash, with accompanying ripples, by [[spoiler:preventing the assassination of Benjy Fenwick, the Order's spymaster]].
---> This was where the course of the war would change well beyond Snape's prediction or control. His black eyes met those piercing blue ones, and in that moment his worst fears were confirmed. But he had always known that this would come to pass, for no true victory could be had following that script, not without incurring cost too terrible to consider.

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* ButterflyOfDoom: Severus is able to nudge many students away from becoming Death Eaters, often with quite small interventions. Even those who initially resist his efforts, such as [[spoiler:Avery and Regulus]], often come to him later when they are faced with the harsh realities of serving Voldemort. [[spoiler: Barty Crouch Jr]] is a particularly notable example of redemption through early intervention and sympathy.



* ForWantOfANail: Severus is able to nudge many students away from becoming Death Eaters, often with quite small interventions. Even those who initially resist his efforts, such as [[spoiler:Avery and Regulus]], often come to him later when they are faced with the harsh realities of serving Voldemort. [[spoiler: Barty Crouch Jr]] is a particularly notable example of redemption through early intervention and sympathy.
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* FirstPersonDyingPerspective: The fic opens with Severus Snape looking into Harry's eyes as he dies, seeing how much they look like Lily's and reminding him of how he failed her, which is his last thought. (Until he awakens in the afterlife and encounters a chance to [[PeggySue try things again]].)
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--> "What am I thinking?" Lily had asked one evening in a strangely low-pitched voice. Perhaps that should have been Snape's first clue.
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* AccidentalGoodOutcome: Severus' wedding ring is set with chips from both [[spoiler:an alchemical Death Focus Stone]] and [[spoiler:a Philosopher's Stone]]. He only intended it as jewelry, but the combination of the two powerful magics turns out to be [[spoiler:a protection against the Killing Curse]].

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* ReformationAcknowledgement: Lily's father Martin is initially opposed to her and Severus dating, knowing that Severus comes from an abusive household, and that he has called Lily by a racial slur once when he lost his temper (but not knowing that Severus is now [[PeggySue several decades older]] and has spent that time regretting his choices), and Severus acknowledges that he has cause. However, after observing Severus over the summer holidays, seeing his dedication to keeping his word, his sincere devotion to Lily, and his respect, Martin decides that he has indeed changed.
--> ''Lily had told me you are a changed man. Something I am inclined to agree with, but I suppose that is what growing up is about. I had been so worried for my daughter when she first told me about her plans with you. But you laid them to rest with your behaviour and demeanour over the holidays. You are not the boy you once were, and you are certainly not your father.''

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Lily's father Martin is initially opposed to her and Severus dating, knowing that Severus comes from an abusive household, and that he has called Lily by a racial slur once when he lost his temper (but not knowing that Severus is now [[PeggySue several decades older]] and has spent that time regretting his choices), and Severus acknowledges that he has cause. However, after observing Severus over the summer holidays, seeing his dedication to keeping his word, his sincere devotion to Lily, and his respect, Martin decides that he has indeed changed.
--> ---> ''Lily had told me you are a changed man. Something I am inclined to agree with, but I suppose that is what growing up is about. I had been so worried for my daughter when she first told me about her plans with you. But you laid them to rest with your behaviour and demeanour over the holidays. You are not the boy you once were, and you are certainly not your father.''''
** After Severus [[spoiler:kills the basilisk from the Chamber of Secrets]], James starts seriously reining his friends in, figuring that Severus has proved himself to be a good guy and doesn't deserve harassment anymore.
---> '''James:''' If that's not worthy of respect what is?
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* SkewedPriorities: Lily asks Marlene not to let Severus know that it was Susan who [[spoiler:spilled all sorts of personal details about him and Lily to a reporter]] -- and half-jokingly adds that it's not to spare Susan, it's because being expelled just before graduation would be unfortunate for Severus, and murder would look bad on his resumé.
--> '''Marlene:''' Oh, I reckon he's crafty enough to get away with it.
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** Rita Skeeter derisively states that she's trying to talk to Severus Snape, not "the leader of the Quidditch cheer squad." Mere seconds later, [[spoiler:she finds out that the girl she just dismissed is his wife, who is quite happy to throw her rudeness back in her face.]]

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** Rita Skeeter brushes Lily off, derisively states stating that she's trying to talk to Severus Snape, not "the leader of the Quidditch cheer squad." Mere seconds later, [[spoiler:she finds out that the girl she just dismissed is his Severus' wife, who and is quite happy to throw her rudeness back in her face.]]
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* FightingBackIsWrong: Professor [=McGonagall=] doesn't actually ''punish'' Lily for stepping in to shield a third-year Hufflepuff from a seventh-year Slytherin who wanted to throw his weight around, but she does sternly tell Lily off. Her take is that since the bullying wouldn't have resulted in hospitalising anyone, whereas the resulting altercation did, Lily ought to have gone after a teacher instead. Since Lily's only spells were used to shield herself and then confuse Mulciber into attacking a different target (who was the one hospitalised), Marlene isn't impressed.
--> '''Marlene:''' Someone was getting attacked who didn't deserve it. We acted when they needed help the most and bullocks to any who says otherwise.
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** Severus is offered the chance to go back to his teen years and try again, because "your regrets chain you to the living". He can't find peace in the afterlife, even though it's available to him, because he can't let go of his mistakes.
---> '''Severus:''' Was death not supposed to take that from me?\\
'''Dumbledore:''' If death was all it took to wash away regrets, then ghosts would not exist.

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