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* FreudianTrio: The Good Hunter and his first two apprentices, Sanakan and Hugh, count as this, since he took them in at the beginning of the story. While the Good Hunter has two more added to the band, Sanakan and Hugh are more experienced than the other two, and they are childhood friends that cannot afford to leave one another. Before the Rebel Scum Arc, this trio is primarily responsible for eliminating outside threats.
** Id: Sanakan, the loud and brash apprentice hunter.
** Superego: Hugh, the mute and smug apprentice hunter.
** Ego: Kyril, the master of the two apprentices.
** Id: Sanakan, the loud and brash apprentice hunter.
** Superego: Hugh, the mute and smug apprentice hunter.
** Ego: Kyril, the master of the two apprentices.
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* PlayingWithFire: While any magic user can do this, fire manipulation is Olga's speciality.
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* TerrorHero: Despite being uncaring about maintaining his reputation as a knight, Kyril does exploit his [[TheDreaded fearsome reputation]] to crush his enemies or root out traitors, [[CombatPragmatist if it makes the process easier]]. One notable example of this is his preference of personally travelling to enemy territory, so that any schemers would be forced to hasten their plans, increasing their chances of exposure. This is featured in the Liberation of Ansur and the Rebel Scum Arcs respectively.
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* TerrorHero: Despite being uncaring about maintaining his reputation as a knight, Kyril does exploit his [[TheDreaded fearsome reputation]] to crush his enemies or root out traitors, [[CombatPragmatist if it makes the process easier]]. One notable example of this is his preference of personally travelling to enemy territory, so that any schemers would be forced to hasten their plans, increasing their chances of exposure. This is featured in the Liberation of Ansur and the Rebel Scum Arcs respectively.
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* GoodIsNotNice: Notably [[ZigZaggingTrope Zigzagged]]. Kyril's apathy and callousness towards others is expected for a hunter experienced with bloodshed from the Night of the Hunt. However, simply be a [[NiceGuy decent person]] instead of a [[Jerkass jerk]], and he will [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe return the favour with kindness and, surprisingly, loyalty]]. Sometimes, he can be affable to his foes, talking to them as if he is talking about the weather, though that does not stop him from killing them afterward. In addition, showing a useful skill or two (e.g. sneaking around, doing paperwork, or even [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking making delicious food!]]) rather than [[BullyingADragon picking a fight]] [[DoNotTauntCthulhu for no reason]] generally works too. HOWEVER, being a decent person or his ally does not guarantee being immune from his wrath should he be in a bad mood. Just look at Chapter 13, where he is really annoyed and pissed off [[spoiler:because of a rumour claiming he slept with Maia, the Queen of Mercenaries]].
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* GoodIsNotNice: Notably [[ZigZaggingTrope Zigzagged]]. Kyril's apathy and callousness towards others is expected for a hunter experienced with bloodshed from the Night of the Hunt. However, simply be a [[NiceGuy decent person]] instead of a [[Jerkass jerk]], jerk, and he will [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe return the favour with kindness and, surprisingly, loyalty]]. Sometimes, he can be affable to his foes, talking to them as if he is talking about the weather, though that does not stop him from killing them afterward. In addition, showing a useful skill or two (e.g. sneaking around, doing paperwork, or even [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking making delicious food!]]) rather than [[BullyingADragon picking a fight]] [[DoNotTauntCthulhu for no reason]] generally works too. HOWEVER, being a decent person or his ally does not guarantee being immune from his wrath should he be in a bad mood. Just look at Chapter 13, where he is really annoyed and pissed off [[spoiler:because of a rumour claiming he slept with Maia, the Queen of Mercenaries]].
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* GoodIsNotNice: Notably [[ZigZaggingTrope Zigzagged]]. Kyril's apathy and callousness towards others is expected for a hunter experienced with bloodshed from the Night of the Hunt. However, simply be a [[NiceGuy decent person]] instead of a [[Jerkass jerk]], and he will [[BecauseYouWereNiceToMe return the favour with kindness and, surprisingly, loyalty]]. Sometimes, he can be affable to his foes, talking to them as if he is talking about the weather, though that does not stop him from killing them afterward. In addition, showing a useful skill or two (e.g. sneaking around, doing paperwork, or even [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking making delicious food!]]) rather than [[BullyingADragon picking a fight]] [[DoNotTauntCthulhu for no reason]] generally works too. HOWEVER, being a decent person or his ally does not guarantee being immune from his wrath should he be in a bad mood. Just look at Chapter 13, where he is really annoyed and pissed off [[spoiler:because of a rumour claiming he slept with Maia, the Queen of Mercenaries]].
** Unless they are either [[BestFriend the Doll]] or [[TheApprentice one of Kyril's apprentices]], that is.
** Unless they are either [[BestFriend the Doll]] or [[TheApprentice one of Kyril's apprentices]], that is.
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** On the other hand, he does exploit his [[TheDreaded fearsome reputation]] to crush his enemies or root out traitors, if it makes the process easier. One notable example of this is his preference of personally travelling to enemy territory, so that any schemers would be forced to hasten their plans, increasing their chances of exposure.
* TerrorHero: Despite being uncaring about maintaining his reputation as a knight, Kyril does exploit his [[TheDreaded fearsome reputation]] to crush his enemies or root out traitors, [[CombatPragmatist if it makes the process easier]]. One notable example of this is his preference of personally travelling to enemy territory, so that any schemers would be forced to hasten their plans, increasing their chances of exposure. This is featured in the Liberation of Ansur and the Rebel Scum Arcs respectively.
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* TheStoic: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]]. As Kyril's attire includes a wide tricorn hat and a bandanna, it is hard for people to discern his visage, let alone know how he feels by simply looking at him. This, along with his talent for slaughter, gives an image of a cold, merciless killer. In fact, Kyril does show emotion, just not to the same extent as anyone else. The reason for his stoicism is not because of him actively hiding his feelings, but because of his general dispassion about other things, as well as being [[ConditionedToAcceptHorror Conditioned to Accept Horror]] from slaughtering vicious beasts, blood-drunk madmen, and overworldly beings in Yharnam for who knows how long.
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* TheStoic: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]]. As Kyril's attire includes a wide tricorn hat and a bandanna, it is hard for people to discern his visage, let alone know how he feels by simply looking at him. This, along with his talent for slaughter, gives invokes an image of a cold, merciless killer. In fact, Kyril does show emotion, emotion throughout the story, just not to the same extent as anyone else. The reason for his stoicism is not because of him actively hiding his feelings, but because of his general dispassion about other things, as well as being [[ConditionedToAcceptHorror Conditioned to Accept Horror]] from slaughtering vicious beasts, blood-drunk madmen, and overworldly beings in Yharnam for who knows how long. Besides, Kyril is tight-lipped about his origins, [[spoiler:in fear of exposing the Eldritch Truth he holds]].
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* ThousandYardStare: Being a [[ShellShockedVeteran Shell-Shocked Veteran hunter]], Kyril does this a lot in front of almost anyone or when in deep thought, something that disturbs the people around him.
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* ThinkNothingOfIt: Kyril often downplays his exploits when others take note of them, as he [[SociallyAwkwardHero dislikes fame and generally being in the centre of attention]].
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* TheStoic: Kyril rarely emotes towards other people.
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* TheStoic: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]]. As Kyril's attire includes a wide tricorn hat and a bandanna, it is hard for people to discern his visage, let alone know how he feels by simply looking at him. This, along with his talent for slaughter, gives an image of a cold, merciless killer. In fact, Kyril rarely emotes towards does show emotion, just not to the same extent as anyone else. The reason for his stoicism is not because of him actively hiding his feelings, but because of his general dispassion about other people.things, as well as being [[ConditionedToAcceptHorror Conditioned to Accept Horror]] from slaughtering vicious beasts, blood-drunk madmen, and overworldly beings in Yharnam for who knows how long.
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* ThinkNothingOfIt: Kyril often downplays his exploits when others take note of them, as he [[SociallyAwkwardHero dislikes fame and generally being in the centre of attention]].
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Vault, the leader of the Black Dogs, is an esteemed warrior in Eostia and a favourite of the Seven Shields. In the original version, this is subverted when the Black Dogs decide to rebel to build a Sex Empire for themselves. In the remastered version, however, this trope still holds as of now. Even his ambitions come to light, the fact that [[spoiler:[[KilledOfForReal Kyril killed Vault]] after the assault of the Black Fortress]] causes 5 of the Seven Shields to distrust him.
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* HomeSweetHome: The Good Hunter has repeatedly expressed his desire to [[CallToAgriculture purchase a piece of farmland]], lay down his blades and live the rest of his life in peace after the war is over. The remastered version takes this trope to another level: not only does he desire to live in peace, he also wants to bring the Workshop in the Hunter's Dream to life.
* ReputationApathy: Seeing no difference between nobility or peasant, Sir Kyril does not care about maintaining his reputation as a knight. While he is disdained by many at first, especially those from the nobility, more people gradually [[MightMakesRight either respect his strength begrudgingly, or figure out that it is best to get on his good side if he has one]].
** On the other hand, he does exploit his [[TheDreaded fearsome reputation]] to crush his enemies or root out traitors, if it makes the process easier. One notable example of this is his preference of personally travelling to enemy territory, so that any schemers would be forced to hasten their plans, increasing their chances of exposure.
** On the other hand, he does exploit his [[TheDreaded fearsome reputation]] to crush his enemies or root out traitors, if it makes the process easier. One notable example of this is his preference of personally travelling to enemy territory, so that any schemers would be forced to hasten their plans, increasing their chances of exposure.
* ThinkNothingOfIt: Kyril often downplays his exploits when others take note of them, as he [[SociallyAwkwardHero dislikes fame and generally being in the centre of attention]].
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* TranquilFury: Being [[TheStoic The Stoic]], Kyril often shows this during hunting.
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* TranquilFury: Being [[TheStoic The Stoic]], Kyril often shows this during hunting.when he is hunting or is irritated.
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-->''"It was always the most reprehensible that asked for mercy before their deaths. The ones that truly believed in their cause, the zealots, never retreated from their values. They never doubted themselves as they pursued a great cause with the vilest methods.That was how the Healing Church of Yharnam fell, they sought the Eldritch Truth for power. In doing so they damned themselves by disregarding the consequences."''
-->''"Here, in Eostia, the Good Hunter did not deal with madmen obsessed with wisdom, or the remnants of something proud, a rotting facade of what was once a glorious institution that used the Blood of otherworldly beings to heal any ailment. He was not dealing with horrific beasts who were once noble Hunters of the Church, who went and spread the good word with fire and sword."''
-->''"No. He dealt with petty criminals, the rapists, the slavers, the thieves and the conniving schemers that sought their ascension above the concerns of all others. Who took advantage of the meek, the lowly, and the fearful. Few spat in defiance of their fate. Many begged for mercy that they never showed their victims. It was not given. The Good Hunter made certain that those who survived his wrath would rue the day they chose to cross him."''
-->''"Here, in Eostia, the Good Hunter did not deal with madmen obsessed with wisdom, or the remnants of something proud, a rotting facade of what was once a glorious institution that used the Blood of otherworldly beings to heal any ailment. He was not dealing with horrific beasts who were once noble Hunters of the Church, who went and spread the good word with fire and sword."''
-->''"No. He dealt with petty criminals, the rapists, the slavers, the thieves and the conniving schemers that sought their ascension above the concerns of all others. Who took advantage of the meek, the lowly, and the fearful. Few spat in defiance of their fate. Many begged for mercy that they never showed their victims. It was not given. The Good Hunter made certain that those who survived his wrath would rue the day they chose to cross him."''
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-->''"It was always the most reprehensible that asked for mercy before their deaths. The ones that truly believed in their cause, the zealots, never retreated from their values. They never doubted themselves as they pursued a great cause with the vilest methods.That was how the Healing Church of Yharnam fell, they sought the Eldritch Truth for power. In doing so they damned themselves by disregarding the consequences."''
-->''"Here,consequences.
-->Here, in Eostia, the Good Hunter did not deal with madmen obsessed with wisdom, or the remnants of something proud, a rotting facade of what was once a glorious institution that used the Blood of otherworldly beings to heal any ailment. He was not dealing with horrific beasts who were once noble Hunters of the Church, who went and spread the good word with fire andsword."''
-->''"No.sword.
-->No. He dealt with petty criminals, the rapists, the slavers, the thieves and the conniving schemers that sought their ascension above the concerns of all others. Who took advantage of the meek, the lowly, and the fearful. Few spat in defiance of their fate. Many begged for mercy that they never showed their victims. It was not given. The Good Hunter made certain that those who survived his wrath would rue the day they chose to cross him."''
-->''"Here,
-->Here, in Eostia, the Good Hunter did not deal with madmen obsessed with wisdom, or the remnants of something proud, a rotting facade of what was once a glorious institution that used the Blood of otherworldly beings to heal any ailment. He was not dealing with horrific beasts who were once noble Hunters of the Church, who went and spread the good word with fire and
-->''"No.
-->No. He dealt with petty criminals, the rapists, the slavers, the thieves and the conniving schemers that sought their ascension above the concerns of all others. Who took advantage of the meek, the lowly, and the fearful. Few spat in defiance of their fate. Many begged for mercy that they never showed their victims. It was not given. The Good Hunter made certain that those who survived his wrath would rue the day they chose to cross him."''
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* StoryArc:StoryArc: The original version is separated into these:
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* Continuation: This fanfic takes place after the main events of ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'', as well as [[spoiler:the Childhood's Beginning Ending]].
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-->''"It was always the most reprehensible that asked for mercy before their deaths. The ones that truly believed in their cause, the zealots, never retreated from their values. They never doubted themselves as they pursued a great cause with the vilest methods.That was how the Healing Church of Yharnam fell, they sought the Eldritch Truth for power. In doing so they damned themselves by disregarding the consequences.
Here, in Eostia, the Good Hunter did not deal with madmen obsessed with wisdom, or the remnants of something proud, a rotting facade of what was once a glorious institution that used the Blood of otherworldly beings to heal any ailment. He was not dealing with horrific beasts who were once noble Hunters of the Church, who went and spread the good word with fire and sword.
No. He dealt with petty criminals, the rapists, the slavers, the thieves and the conniving schemers that sought their ascension above the concerns of all others. Who took advantage of the meek, the lowly, and the fearful. Few spat in defiance of their fate. Many begged for mercy that they never showed their victims. It was not given. The Good Hunter made certain that those who survived his wrath would rue the day they chose to cross him."''
Here, in Eostia, the Good Hunter did not deal with madmen obsessed with wisdom, or the remnants of something proud, a rotting facade of what was once a glorious institution that used the Blood of otherworldly beings to heal any ailment. He was not dealing with horrific beasts who were once noble Hunters of the Church, who went and spread the good word with fire and sword.
No. He dealt with petty criminals, the rapists, the slavers, the thieves and the conniving schemers that sought their ascension above the concerns of all others. Who took advantage of the meek, the lowly, and the fearful. Few spat in defiance of their fate. Many begged for mercy that they never showed their victims. It was not given. The Good Hunter made certain that those who survived his wrath would rue the day they chose to cross him."''
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-->''"It was always the most reprehensible that asked for mercy before their deaths. The ones that truly believed in their cause, the zealots, never retreated from their values. They never doubted themselves as they pursued a great cause with the vilest methods.That was how the Healing Church of Yharnam fell, they sought the Eldritch Truth for power. In doing so they damned themselves by disregarding the consequences.
Here,consequences."''
-->''"Here, in Eostia, the Good Hunter did not deal with madmen obsessed with wisdom, or the remnants of something proud, a rotting facade of what was once a glorious institution that used the Blood of otherworldly beings to heal any ailment. He was not dealing with horrific beasts who were once noble Hunters of the Church, who went and spread the good word with fire andsword.
No.sword."''
-->''"No. He dealt with petty criminals, the rapists, the slavers, the thieves and the conniving schemers that sought their ascension above the concerns of all others. Who took advantage of the meek, the lowly, and the fearful. Few spat in defiance of their fate. Many begged for mercy that they never showed their victims. It was not given. The Good Hunter made certain that those who survived his wrath would rue the day they chose to cross him."''
Here,
-->''"Here, in Eostia, the Good Hunter did not deal with madmen obsessed with wisdom, or the remnants of something proud, a rotting facade of what was once a glorious institution that used the Blood of otherworldly beings to heal any ailment. He was not dealing with horrific beasts who were once noble Hunters of the Church, who went and spread the good word with fire and
No.
-->''"No. He dealt with petty criminals, the rapists, the slavers, the thieves and the conniving schemers that sought their ascension above the concerns of all others. Who took advantage of the meek, the lowly, and the fearful. Few spat in defiance of their fate. Many begged for mercy that they never showed their victims. It was not given. The Good Hunter made certain that those who survived his wrath would rue the day they chose to cross him."''
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* Continuation: This fanfic takes place after the main events of ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'', as well as [[spoiler:the Childhood's Beginning Ending]].
* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: The antagonists of ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'' VS The antagonists of this fanfic, described below:
-->''"It was always the most reprehensible that asked for mercy before their deaths. The ones that truly believed in their cause, the zealots, never retreated from their values. They never doubted themselves as they pursued a great cause with the vilest methods.That was how the Healing Church of Yharnam fell, they sought the Eldritch Truth for power. In doing so they damned themselves by disregarding the consequences.
Here, in Eostia, the Good Hunter did not deal with madmen obsessed with wisdom, or the remnants of something proud, a rotting facade of what was once a glorious institution that used the Blood of otherworldly beings to heal any ailment. He was not dealing with horrific beasts who were once noble Hunters of the Church, who went and spread the good word with fire and sword.
No. He dealt with petty criminals, the rapists, the slavers, the thieves and the conniving schemers that sought their ascension above the concerns of all others. Who took advantage of the meek, the lowly, and the fearful. Few spat in defiance of their fate. Many begged for mercy that they never showed their victims. It was not given. The Good Hunter made certain that those who survived his wrath would rue the day they chose to cross him."''
* ContrastingSequelAntagonist: The antagonists of ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'' VS The antagonists of this fanfic, described below:
-->''"It was always the most reprehensible that asked for mercy before their deaths. The ones that truly believed in their cause, the zealots, never retreated from their values. They never doubted themselves as they pursued a great cause with the vilest methods.That was how the Healing Church of Yharnam fell, they sought the Eldritch Truth for power. In doing so they damned themselves by disregarding the consequences.
Here, in Eostia, the Good Hunter did not deal with madmen obsessed with wisdom, or the remnants of something proud, a rotting facade of what was once a glorious institution that used the Blood of otherworldly beings to heal any ailment. He was not dealing with horrific beasts who were once noble Hunters of the Church, who went and spread the good word with fire and sword.
No. He dealt with petty criminals, the rapists, the slavers, the thieves and the conniving schemers that sought their ascension above the concerns of all others. Who took advantage of the meek, the lowly, and the fearful. Few spat in defiance of their fate. Many begged for mercy that they never showed their victims. It was not given. The Good Hunter made certain that those who survived his wrath would rue the day they chose to cross him."''
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** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril should be perfectly capable of releasing his full power and ending any conflict in an instant, yet he very often relies on his superhuman hunter form throughout the series. Going all out comes with a price: dooming countless people with madness and insanity, and Kyril has repeatedly emphasised that any secret related to Yharnam and the Eldritch Truth must be concealed at all costs. Therefore, he rarely utilises his powers as a great one in order to avoid unnecessary collateral damage, and any instance of using his "over-worldly" power is heavily implied to be [[PowerLimiter subdued]] and [[GodzillaThreshold treated as a last resort]].]]
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** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril should be perfectly capable of releasing his full power and ending any conflict in an instant, yet he very often relies on his superhuman hunter form throughout the series. Going all out comes with a price: dooming countless people with madness and insanity, and Kyril has repeatedly emphasised that any secret related to Yharnam and the Eldritch Truth must be concealed at all costs. Therefore, he rarely utilises his powers as a great one in order to avoid unnecessary collateral damage, and any instance of using his "over-worldly" power is heavily implied to be [[PowerLimiter [[HoldingBackThePhlebotinum subdued]] and [[GodzillaThreshold treated as a last resort]].]]
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** In Chapter 29, [[spoiler:Evetta is shown to crush three traitorous guards without lifting a finger. {{Understatement It seems that the time of being a great one's caretaker has given her quite the attitude.}}]]
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** In Chapter 29, [[spoiler:Evetta is shown to crush three traitorous guards without lifting a finger. {{Understatement It seems that the time of being a great one's caretaker has given her quite the attitude.}}]]]]
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* Catchphrase: Whenever Kyril shows indifference or dismissiveness, he often utters "so I have been told", "so am I", "so he/she is", or something similar.
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** In Chapter 29, [[spoiler:Evetta is shown to crush three traitorous guards without lifting a finger. {{Understatement It seems that the time of being a great one's caretaker has given her quite the attitude.]]}}]]
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* Catchphrase: Whenever Kyril shows indifference or dismissiveness, he often utters "so I have been told", "so am I", "so he/she is", or something similar.
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** Chapter 4-5: Interaction Arc: As the Black Dogs suffer a heavy blow from Kyril and his company, people are getting to interact and know more about this bloodthirsty legend, praying that they won't die by his blade in the process.
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** Chapter 4-5: Interaction Arc: Arc 1: Transition between the Assault of the Black Fortress Arc and the Feoh/Ur Arc. As the Black Dogs suffer a heavy blow from Kyril and his company, people are getting to interact and know more about this bloodthirsty legend, praying that they won't die by his blade in the process.
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** Chapter 31-33: Hunter's Secrets Arc: A transition between the aftermath of the Hunt for Mandeville Arc and the "discontinued" Thorn Arc. Certain people are lucky enough to proceed one step closer to the Hunter's secrets, for better or for worse.
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** Chapter 31-33: Hunter's Secrets Arc: A transition Transition between the aftermath of the Hunt for Mandeville Arc and the "discontinued" Thorn Arc. Certain people are lucky enough to proceed one step closer to the Hunter's Kyril's secrets, for better or for worse.
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** During the Feoh/Ur Arc, Alicia [[spoiler:surrendered to the Black Dogs and their army, allowing them to [[RapePillageBurn take over the fortresses]]. Among the victims are a number of nuns, including Lily.]] When the two meet at Chapter 9 and Alicia apologies for her actions, she received a slap in the face from Lily, saying that she will never forgive Alicia for putting her sisters in harm's way.
** Prior to the story, Olga [[spoiler:sacrificed a city to the orcs to recruit them and augment her forces to fight Celestine, leading to Grace losing her home and husband.]] She explicitly states that if she were Sir Kyril, she would not hesitate to kill her, and hopes that he does the same if he knew what happened.
* TimeSkip: In order to advance the plot, the training montage of Kyril's 4 apprentices are cut short into a couple of lessons and combat scenes, in order to avoid describing the "gitting gud" process one is expected to experience when playing ''VideoGame/BloodBorne''.
** During the Feoh/Ur Arc, Alicia [[spoiler:surrendered to the Black Dogs and their army, allowing them to [[RapePillageBurn take over the fortresses]]. Among the victims are a number of nuns, including Lily.]] When the two meet at Chapter 9 and Alicia apologies for her actions, she received a slap in the face from Lily, saying that she will never forgive Alicia for putting her sisters in harm's way.
** Prior to the story, Olga [[spoiler:sacrificed a city to the orcs to recruit them and augment her forces to fight Celestine, leading to Grace losing her home and husband.]] She explicitly states that if she were Sir Kyril, she would not hesitate to kill her, and hopes that he does the same if he knew what happened.
* TimeSkip: In order to advance the plot, the training montage of Kyril's 4 apprentices are cut short into a couple of lessons and combat scenes, in order to avoid describing the "gitting gud" process one is expected to experience when playing ''VideoGame/BloodBorne''.
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* FixFic: Due to the presence of the Good Hunter, most of the Seven Shields avoid their cruel fate of being enslaved and raped by the Black Dogs in the actual canon of Kuroinu.
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* FixFic: Due to the presence of the Good Hunter, most of the Seven Shields avoid [[spoiler:avoid their cruel fate of being enslaved and raped by the Black Dogs Dogs]] in the actual canon of Kuroinu.
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** Chapter 6-8: Feoh and Ur Arc: Kyril and his company frees Feoh and Ur, home to Alicia and Prim of the Seven Shields respectively from the Black Dogs' clutches.
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** Chapter 6-8: Feoh and Ur Arc: Kyril and his company frees free Feoh and Ur, home to Alicia and Prim of the Seven Shields respectively from the Black Dogs' clutches.
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** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril releasing his full power comes with a price: dooming countless people with madness and insanity. Therefore, he has to rely on his superhuman hunter form every time in order to avoid unnecessary collateral damage, and any instance of using his "over-worldly" power is heavily implied to be [[PowerLimiter subdued]].]]
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** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril should be perfectly capable of releasing his full power and ending any conflict in an instant, yet he very often relies on his superhuman hunter form throughout the series. Going all out comes with a price: dooming countless people with madness and insanity. insanity, and Kyril has repeatedly emphasised that any secret related to Yharnam and the Eldritch Truth must be concealed at all costs. Therefore, he has to rely on rarely utilises his superhuman hunter form every time powers as a great one in order to avoid unnecessary collateral damage, and any instance of using his "over-worldly" power is heavily implied to be [[PowerLimiter subdued]].subdued]] and [[GodzillaThreshold treated as a last resort]].]]
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* TrialByCombat: Chapter 8 of the original version has Claudia demanding Kyril this, after Celestine and Olga read [[ArtifactOfDoom Kyril's journal]] out of curiosity. Chapter 12 of the remastered version has this featuring Alicia and Maia against Kyril, due to him [[spoiler:[[KilledOfForReal killing Vault]], a person of esteem]]. Guess who wins?
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12589157/1/The-Night-Unfurls-UNDERGOING-REVISION The Night Unfurls]] is a {{Fanfic}} by [=StaffSergeant=]. It is a crossover between ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'' and ''Kuroinu: Kedakaki Seijo wa Hakudaku ni Somaru''. The summary is as follows:
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Unsatisfied by how the story was going, the author discontinued it and a remake is available, named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13607401/1/The-Night-Unfurls-Re-Imagined The Night Unfurls: Re-Imagined]], which is currently ongoing.
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Unsatisfied by how the story was going, the author discontinued it and a remake is available, named [[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13607401/1/The-Night-Unfurls-Re-Imagined The Night Unfurls: Re-Imagined]], Re-Imagined]]'', which is currently ongoing.
!!''The Night Unfurls'' provides examples of:
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* UnwantedHarem: Towards the "unfortunate" end of the original story, Kyril has at least 4 women of high status who either has a crush on him, or is actively seeking for his affections. Soren has joked that, had Kyril knew that he would "end up with a string of women in front of his door", he would definitely get an aneurysm. Justified, as he is a brutal hunter from Yharnam, [[spoiler:as well as a [[EldritchAbomination great one]]]].
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* UnwantedHarem: Towards the "unfortunate" end of the original story, Kyril has at least 4 women of high status who either has a crush on him, or is actively seeking for his affections. Soren has joked that, had Kyril knew that he would "end up with a string of women in front of his door", he would definitely get an aneurysm. Justified, as he is a brutal hunter from Yharnam, [[spoiler:as well as a [[EldritchAbomination great one]]]].one]]]].
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* DefectorFromDecadence: The remastered version of this fanfic introduces Black Dog members that cannot tolerate with [[BigBad Vault]] and his ambitions to build a Sex Empire, in contrast with the original version depicting the Black Dogs as [[AlwaysChaoticEvil Always Chaotic Evil]]. They include [[AlmightyJanitor Boris]], Fredrick, [[WeHardlyKnewYe Oliver]], and [[AdaptationalBackstoryChange Soren]], who is not a Black Dog member in the original, and is not an apprentice of Kyril yet as of now.
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* Retcon: In ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'', whenever a hunter connected to the Hunter's Dream dies, they simply [[ResurrectiveImmortality respawn with no further impediment]]. However, in Chapter 32, [[spoiler:Kyril is seen missing an eye after being shot in the eye by an assassin, experiencing his first death while [[TakingTheBullet protecting Celestine]].]] This is never explained, due to the original version of the story being discontinued.
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* Retcon: RetCon: In ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'', whenever a hunter connected to the Hunter's Dream dies, they simply [[ResurrectiveImmortality respawn with no further impediment]]. However, in Chapter 32, [[spoiler:Kyril is seen missing an eye after being shot in the eye by an assassin, experiencing his first death while [[TakingTheBullet protecting Celestine]].]] This is never explained, due to the original version of the story being discontinued.
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* LightningBruiser: Being a hunter straight from ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'', his fighting style is [[AttackAttackAttack highly aggressive, specialising in dodging and side-stepping to avoid damage]]. In case he does take damage, he can just restore health via injecting a Blood Vial and keep going. Whenever he fights, there will be at least one instance where his foe is surprised by not only his strength, but also how lightning fast he is.
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* TheRival: [[HonorBeforeReason Claudia of the Dawn Templars]] is considered this to [[NoNonsenseNemesis Kyril]] [[CombatPragmatist Sutherland]]. Whenever both people are present, they often come into blows due to differing ideologies, with Claudia strongly strongly disproves of his tendency of brutality and leaving no prisoners. Later on the story, when Kyril is promoted to Lord Executioner, he is known as the "Bloody Left Hand of the Goddess", in contrast to Claudia being Celestine's Right Hand.
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* Retcon: In ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'', whenever a hunter connected to the Hunter's Dream dies, they simply [[ResurrectiveImmortality respawn with no further impediment]]. However, in Chapter 32, [[spoiler:Kyril is seen missing an eye after being shot in the eye by an assassin, experiencing his first death while [[TakingTheBullet protecting Celestine]].]] This is never explained, due to the original version of the story being discontinued.
* TheRival: [[HonorBeforeReason Claudia of the Dawn Templars]] is considered this to [[NoNonsenseNemesis Kyril]] [[CombatPragmatist Sutherland]]. Claudia strongly disproves of his tendency for brutality and leaving no prisoners. Whenever both people are present, they often come into blows due to differingideologies, with Claudia strongly strongly disproves of his tendency of brutality and leaving no prisoners. ideologies. Later on the story, when Kyril is promoted to Lord Executioner, he is known as the "Bloody Left Hand of the Goddess", in contrast to Claudia being Celestine's second-in-command and Right Hand.
* TheRival: [[HonorBeforeReason Claudia of the Dawn Templars]] is considered this to [[NoNonsenseNemesis Kyril]] [[CombatPragmatist Sutherland]]. Claudia strongly disproves of his tendency for brutality and leaving no prisoners. Whenever both people are present, they often come into blows due to differing
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Unsatisfied by how the story was going, the author discontinued it and a remake is available, named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13607401/1/The-Night-Unfurls-Re-Imagined The Night Unfurls: Re-Imagined]].
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Unsatisfied by how the story was going, the author discontinued it and a remake is available, named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13607401/1/The-Night-Unfurls-Re-Imagined The Night Unfurls: Re-Imagined]].Re-Imagined]], which is currently ongoing.
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** Liberation of Ansur Arc: [[BoisterousWeakling Michelle]].
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** Liberation of Ansur Arc: [[BoisterousWeakling Michelle]].Michelle Pantielle]].
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* TheRival: [[HonorBeforeReason Claudia of the Dawn Templars]] is considered this to [[NoNonsenseNemesis Kyril]] [[CombatPragmatist Sutherland]]. Whenever both people are present, they often come into blows due to differing ideologies, with Claudia strongly strongly disproves of his tendency of brutality and leaving no prisoners. Later on the story, when Kyril is promoted to Lord Executioner, he is known as the "Bloody Left Hand of the Goddess", in contrast to Claudia being Celestine's Right Hand.
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** Tragedy of Rad Arc: [[EvilSorcerer Shamuhaza]] and [[spoilers:[[BrainwashedAndCrazy Luu-Luu]]]].
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** Tragedy of Rad Arc: [[EvilSorcerer Shamuhaza]] and [[spoilers:[[BrainwashedAndCrazy [[spoiler:[[BrainwashedAndCrazy Luu-Luu]]]].
* ArtifactOfDoom: Both Kyril's saw cleaver and journal are said to have an own will, that anybody who makes contact with it risk [[GoMadFromTheRevelation going mad from the nightmarish horrors of Yharnam]]. Hicks, Celestine and Olga almost learn it the hard way.
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* KnightInSourArmour: As much as Kyril desires a quiet, peaceful life and forget about the horrors of the Hunt, he still chooses to fight against the Black Dogs and their desire to rape and enslave people under their Sex Empire.
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* KnightInSourArmour: As much as Kyril desires a quiet, peaceful life and forget about the horrors of the Hunt, he still chooses to fight against the Black Dogs and their desire to rape and enslave people under their Sex Empire.Empire, when he could have left those people to stand alone.
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* BestFriend: While their exact relationship is up to interpretation, the Doll, Evetta, is this to Kyril, being the closest and the one Kyril seeks for either turning his blood echoes to strength or [[Pun plain comfort]] during the Night of the Hunt.
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* ArcVillain: Each arc, excluding the transitionary/interaction-focused ones, has at least one.
** Assault of the Black Fortress Arc: [[DarkActionGirl Olga Discordia]].
** Feoh and Ur Arc: [[DirtyOldMan Beasley]] and the [[PigMan Mortadella brothers]].
** Liberation of Ansur Arc: [[BoisterousWeakling Michelle]].
** Tragedy of Rad Arc: [[EvilSorcerer Shamuhaza]] and [[spoilers:[[BrainwashedAndCrazy Luu-Luu]]]].
** Leaping Lizards Arc: Shamuhaza, again.
** Rebel Scum Arc: [[CorruptChurch Archbishop Grishom]].
** Hunt for Mandeville Arc: [[SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil Mandeville]].
* BestFriend: While their exact relationship is up to interpretation, the Doll, Evetta, is this to Kyril, being the closest and the one Kyril seeks for either turning his blood echoes to strength or[[Pun plain comfort]] comfort during the Night of the Hunt.
** Assault of the Black Fortress Arc: [[DarkActionGirl Olga Discordia]].
** Feoh and Ur Arc: [[DirtyOldMan Beasley]] and the [[PigMan Mortadella brothers]].
** Liberation of Ansur Arc: [[BoisterousWeakling Michelle]].
** Tragedy of Rad Arc: [[EvilSorcerer Shamuhaza]] and [[spoilers:[[BrainwashedAndCrazy Luu-Luu]]]].
** Leaping Lizards Arc: Shamuhaza, again.
** Rebel Scum Arc: [[CorruptChurch Archbishop Grishom]].
** Hunt for Mandeville Arc: [[SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil Mandeville]].
* BestFriend: While their exact relationship is up to interpretation, the Doll, Evetta, is this to Kyril, being the closest and the one Kyril seeks for either turning his blood echoes to strength or
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* DramaticIrony: If the readers have played ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'' before, it is very likely that they would know how strong the Good Hunter is, as well as [[spoiler:[[EldritchAbomination his identity as a great one]]]]. They are expected to cringe on whoever crosses him, as the chances of them prevailing are nil.
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* DarkFantasy: The genre of this fanfic.
* DramaticIrony: If the readers have played ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'' before, it is very likely that they would know how strong the Good Hunter is, as well as [[spoiler:[[EldritchAbomination his identity as a greatone]]]].one, should the Childhood's Beginning Ending is chosen]]]]. They are expected to cringe on whoever crosses him, as the chances of them prevailing are nil.
* DramaticIrony: If the readers have played ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'' before, it is very likely that they would know how strong the Good Hunter is, as well as [[spoiler:[[EldritchAbomination his identity as a great
* KnightInSourArmour: As much as Kyril desires a quiet, peaceful life and forget about the horrors of the Hunt, he still chooses to fight against the Black Dogs and their desire to rape and enslave people under their Sex Empire.
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** Time is needed to head from one location to another, and Kyril cannot be at many places at once. Although he has access to the Hunter's Dream, he can only instantly travel from one place to another if he has explored that place and lit a lantern beforehand, just like in the game. Therefore, it is not possible for him to save every single life or prevent every tragedy, especially during periods of warfare.
** Kyril has [[ResurrectiveImmortality Resurrective Immortality]] due to his connection with the Hunter's Dream, so it is possible for him to [[OneManArmy defeat every foe alone]]. However, he has to attack with his troops for the wars to end more quickly. This comes with a trade-off: the need to feed troops, provide them with new weapons, and raise their morale, all of which being out of Kyril's league, as he is more of a killer than a commander, leaving other people like Bergen and Roland to do such jobs.
** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril releasing his full power comes with a price: dooming countless people with madness and insanity. Therefore, he has to rely on his superhuman hunter form every time, and any instance of using his "over-worldly" power is heavily implied to be [[PowerLimiter subdued]].]]
** Kyril has [[ResurrectiveImmortality Resurrective Immortality]] due to his connection with the Hunter's Dream, so it is possible for him to [[OneManArmy defeat every foe alone]]. However, he has to attack with his troops for the wars to end more quickly. This comes with a trade-off: the need to feed troops, provide them with new weapons, and raise their morale, all of which being out of Kyril's league, as he is more of a killer than a commander, leaving other people like Bergen and Roland to do such jobs.
** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril releasing his full power comes with a price: dooming countless people with madness and insanity. Therefore, he has to rely on his superhuman hunter form every time, and any instance of using his "over-worldly" power is heavily implied to be [[PowerLimiter subdued]].]]
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** Time is needed to head from one location to another, and Kyril cannot be at many places at once. Although he has access to the Hunter's Dream, he can only instantly travel from one place to another if he has explored that place and lit a lantern beforehand, just like in the game. Therefore, [[PyrrhicVictory it is not possible for him to save every single life or prevent every tragedy, especially during periods of warfare.
warfare.]]
** Kyril has [[ResurrectiveImmortality Resurrective Immortality]] due to his connection with the Hunter's Dream, so it is possible for him to [[OneManArmy defeat every foe alone]]. However, he has to attack with his troops for the wars to end more quickly.This This, in turn, comes with a trade-off: the need to feed troops, provide them with new weapons, and raise their morale, all of which being out of Kyril's league, as he is more of a killer than a commander, leaving other people like Bergen and Roland to do such jobs.
** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril releasing his full power comes with a price: dooming countless people with madness and insanity. Therefore, he has to rely on his superhuman hunter form everytime, time in order to avoid unnecessary collateral damage, and any instance of using his "over-worldly" power is heavily implied to be [[PowerLimiter subdued]].]]
** Kyril has [[ResurrectiveImmortality Resurrective Immortality]] due to his connection with the Hunter's Dream, so it is possible for him to [[OneManArmy defeat every foe alone]]. However, he has to attack with his troops for the wars to end more quickly.
** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril releasing his full power comes with a price: dooming countless people with madness and insanity. Therefore, he has to rely on his superhuman hunter form every
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** In Chapter 29, [[spoiler:Evetta is shown to crush three traitorous guards without lifting a finger. [[Understatement It seems that the time of being a great one's caretaker has given her quite the attitude.]]]]
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** In Chapter 29, [[spoiler:Evetta is shown to crush three traitorous guards without lifting a finger. [[Understatement It seems that the time of being a great one's caretaker has given her quite the attitude.]]]]]]
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* BestFriend: While their exact relationship is up to interpretation, the Doll, Evetta, is this to Kyril, being the closest and the one Kyril seeks for either turning his blood echoes to strength or plain comfort during the Night of the Hunt.
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* BestFriend: While their exact relationship is up to interpretation, the Doll, Evetta, is this to Kyril, being the closest and the one Kyril seeks for either turning his blood echoes to strength or [[Pun plain comfort comfort]] during the Night of the Hunt.
* CurbStompBattle: EVERY encounter against the Good Hunter is bound to be this.
* TookALevelInBadass:
** Kyril's 4 apprentices went from being weak, desperate, starving, and poor commoners to 4 of the deadliest hunters after Kyril took them under his wing.
** In Chapter 29, [[spoiler:Evetta is shown to crush three traitorous guards without lifting a finger. [[Understatement It seems that the time of being a great one's caretaker has given her quite the attitude.]]]]
** Kyril's 4 apprentices went from being weak, desperate, starving, and poor commoners to 4 of the deadliest hunters after Kyril took them under his wing.
** In Chapter 29, [[spoiler:Evetta is shown to crush three traitorous guards without lifting a finger. [[Understatement It seems that the time of being a great one's caretaker has given her quite the attitude.]]]]
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* Unwanted Harem: Towards the "unfortunate" end of the original story, Kyril has at least 4 women of high status who either has a crush on him, or is actively seeking for his affections. Soren has joked that, had Kyril knew that he would "end up with a string of women in front of his door", he would definitely get an aneurysm. Justified, as he is a brutal hunter from Yharnam, [[spoiler:as well as a [[EldritchAbomination great one]]]].
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* Unwanted Harem: UnwantedHarem: Towards the "unfortunate" end of the original story, Kyril has at least 4 women of high status who either has a crush on him, or is actively seeking for his affections. Soren has joked that, had Kyril knew that he would "end up with a string of women in front of his door", he would definitely get an aneurysm. Justified, as he is a brutal hunter from Yharnam, [[spoiler:as well as a [[EldritchAbomination great one]]]].
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* DramaticIrony: If the readers have played ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'' before, it is very likely that they would know how strong the Good Hunter is, as well as [[EldritchAbomination his identity as a great one]]. They are expected to cringe on whoever crosses him, as the chances of them prevailing are nil.
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* DramaticIrony: If the readers have played ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'' before, it is very likely that they would know how strong the Good Hunter is, as well as [[EldritchAbomination [[spoiler:[[EldritchAbomination his identity as a great one]].one]]]]. They are expected to cringe on whoever crosses him, as the chances of them prevailing are nil.
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** Chapter 1-3: Assault of the Black Fortress Arc: Kyril is recruited by Celestine, the Goddess Incarnate, to end the war with her former friend Olga, via launching an assault alongside the Black Dogs, a mercenary group that the Seven Shields heavily rely on. It ends with Kyril successfully bringing back Olga alive and him promoted as knight, together with the reveal of the Black Dogs' ambitions and betrayal.
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** Chapter 4-5: :
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** Chapter 1-3: Assault of the Black Fortress Arc: Kyril is recruited by Celestine, the Goddess Incarnate, to end the war with her former friend Olga, via launching an assault alongside the Black Dogs, a mercenary group that the Seven Shields heavily rely on. It ends with Kyril successfully bringing back Olga alive and him promoted as knight, together with the reveal of At this point, the Black Dogs' ambitions are laid bare, and betrayal.
another war is imminent when one ends.
** Chapter 4-5::Interaction Arc: As the Black Dogs suffer a heavy blow from Kyril and his company, people are getting to interact and know more about this bloodthirsty legend, praying that they won't die by his blade in the process.
** Chapter 4-5:
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** Chapter 9-11: Liberation of Ansur Arc:
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** Chapter 14-16: Tragedy of Rad Arc: The appearance of a sorcerer meant that Rad and its people is beyond saving. While Kyril and his company head to Rad in hopes of cleaning up the mess, he cannot help but feel the familiarity of its atmosphere.
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** Chapter 12-13: :
** Chapter 14-16: Tragedy of Rad Arc: The appearance of a sorcerer meant that Rad and its people is beyond saving. While Kyril and his company head to Rad in hopes of cleaning up the mess, he cannot help but feel the familiarity of its atmosphere.
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** Chapter 9-11: Liberation of Ansur Arc:
Arc: Kyril turns Ansur's criminal underworld upside down to root out any Black Dog supporters.
** Chapter 12-13::
Transition between Ansur and Rad Arcs.
** Chapter 14-16: Tragedy of Rad Arc: The appearance of a sorcerer meant that Rad and its peopleis are beyond saving. While Kyril and his company head to Rad in hopes of cleaning up the mess, he cannot help but feel the familiarity of its atmosphere.
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** Chapter -22: :17-22: Leaping Lizards Arc: While Kyril and his company continue hunting down another group of Black Dog supporters, the Leaping Lizards, as well as any remnants of the sorcerer's forces, it is clear that traitors exist amongst Celestine's kingdom, and it paves way for future scandals and political intrigue.
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** Chapter 27-30: Hunt for Mandeville Arc:
Arc: The political intrigue set up in the previous arcs head to a climax as trails of Mandeville are exposed.
** Chapter 31-33: Hunter's Secrets Arc: A transition between the aftermath of the Hunt for Mandeville Arc and the "discontinued" Thorn Arc. Certain people are lucky enough to proceed one step closer to the Hunter's secrets, for better or for worse.
** Chapter 31-33: Hunter's Secrets Arc: A transition between the aftermath of the Hunt for Mandeville Arc and the "discontinued" Thorn Arc. Certain people are lucky enough to proceed one step closer to the Hunter's secrets, for better or for worse.
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* DramaticIrony: If the readers have played ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'' before, it is very likely that they would know how strong the Good Hunter is, as well as [[EldritchAbomination his identity as a great one]]. They are expected to cringe on whoever crosses him, as the chances of them prevailing are nil.
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** Kyril has [[ResurrectiveImmortality Resurrective Immortality]] due to his connection with the Hunter's Dream, so it is possible for him to [[OneManArmy defeat every foe alone]]. However, he has to attack with his troops for the wars to end more quickly. This comes with a trade-off: the need to feed troops, provide them with new weapons, and raise their morale, all of which being out of Kyril's league, as he is more of a killer than a commander, leaving other people like Bergen and Roland to do such jobs.
** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril releasing his full power comes with a price:doom dooming countless people with madness and insanity. Therefore, he has to rely on his superhuman hunter form every time, and any instance of using his "over-worldly" power is heavily implied to be [[PowerLimiter subdued]], and he has to rely on his superhuman hunter form every time.subdued]].]]
** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril releasing his full power comes with a price:
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* RealityEnsues: Just because Kyril is overpowered in this story, does not necessarily mean an "instant win" situation:
** Time is needed to head from one location to another, and Kyril cannot be at many places at once. Although he has access to the Hunter's Dream, he can only instantly travel from one place to another if he has explored that place and lit a lantern beforehand, just like in the game. Therefore, it is not possible for him to save every single life or prevent every tragedy, especially during periods of warfare.
** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril releasing his full power comes with a price: doom countless people with madness and insanity. Therefore, any instance of using his "over-worldly" power is heavily implied to be [[PowerLimiter subdued]], and he has to rely on his superhuman hunter form every time.]]
** Time is needed to head from one location to another, and Kyril cannot be at many places at once. Although he has access to the Hunter's Dream, he can only instantly travel from one place to another if he has explored that place and lit a lantern beforehand, just like in the game. Therefore, it is not possible for him to save every single life or prevent every tragedy, especially during periods of warfare.
** [[spoiler:As a [[EldritchAbomination great one]], Kyril releasing his full power comes with a price: doom countless people with madness and insanity. Therefore, any instance of using his "over-worldly" power is heavily implied to be [[PowerLimiter subdued]], and he has to rely on his superhuman hunter form every time.]]
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* TranquilFury: Being [[TheStoic The Stoic]], Kyril often shows this during hunting.
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* TranquilFury: Being [[TheStoic The Stoic]], Kyril often shows this during hunting.hunting.
* Unwanted Harem: Towards the "unfortunate" end of the original story, Kyril has at least 4 women of high status who either has a crush on him, or is actively seeking for his affections. Soren has joked that, had Kyril knew that he would "end up with a string of women in front of his door", he would definitely get an aneurysm. Justified, as he is a brutal hunter from Yharnam, [[spoiler:as well as a [[EldritchAbomination great one]]]].
* Unwanted Harem: Towards the "unfortunate" end of the original story, Kyril has at least 4 women of high status who either has a crush on him, or is actively seeking for his affections. Soren has joked that, had Kyril knew that he would "end up with a string of women in front of his door", he would definitely get an aneurysm. Justified, as he is a brutal hunter from Yharnam, [[spoiler:as well as a [[EldritchAbomination great one]]]].
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* CombatPragmatist: Kyril has a distaste for honourable combat, something he learned through his accumulated combat experience from the Night of the Hunt, as well as his mentor, Gehrman, the First Hunter.
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** Chapter 1-3: The Assault of the Black Fortress Arc: Kyril is recruited by Celestine, the Goddess Incarnate, to end the war with her former friend Olga, via launching an assault alongside the Black Dogs, a mercenary group that the Seven Shields heavily rely on. It ends with Kyril successfully bringing back Olga alive and him promoted as knight, together with the reveal of the Black Dogs' ambitions and betrayal.
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** Chapter 23-26: Rebel Scum Arc: In order to prevent a war of two fronts, Celestine has no choice but to put down an uprising by force. It ends with Kyril being promoted to Lord Executioner.
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** Chapter 31-33:
** Chapter 14-16: Tragedy of Rad Arc: The appearance of a sorcerer meant that Rad and its people is beyond saving. While Kyril and his company head to Rad in hopes of cleaning up the mess, he cannot help but feel the familiarity of its atmosphere.
** Chapter 17- : :
** Chapter -22: :
** Chapter 23-26: Rebel Scum Arc: In order to prevent a war of two fronts, Celestine has no choice but to put down an uprising by force. It ends with Kyril being promoted to Lord Executioner.
** Chapter 27-30: Hunt for Mandeville Arc:
** Chapter 31-33:
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* BestFriend: While their exact relationship is up to interpretation, the Doll, Evetta, is this to Kyril, being the closest and the one Kyril seeks for either turning his blood echoes to strength or plain comfort during the Night of the Hunt.
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* StoryArc:
** Chapter 1-3: The Assault of the Black Fortress Arc: Kyril is recruited by Celestine, the Goddess Incarnate, to end the war with her former friend Olga, via launching an assault alongside the Black Dogs, a mercenary group that the Seven Shields heavily rely on. It ends with Kyril successfully bringing back Olga alive and him promoted as knight, together with the reveal of the Black Dogs' ambitions and betrayal.
** Chapter 4-5:
** Chapter 6-8: Feoh and Ur Arc: Kyril and his company frees Feoh and Ur, home to Alicia and Prim of the Seven Shields respectively from the Black Dogs' clutches.
** Chapter 9-11: Liberation of Ansur Arc:
** Chapter 1-3: The Assault of the Black Fortress Arc: Kyril is recruited by Celestine, the Goddess Incarnate, to end the war with her former friend Olga, via launching an assault alongside the Black Dogs, a mercenary group that the Seven Shields heavily rely on. It ends with Kyril successfully bringing back Olga alive and him promoted as knight, together with the reveal of the Black Dogs' ambitions and betrayal.
** Chapter 4-5:
** Chapter 6-8: Feoh and Ur Arc: Kyril and his company frees Feoh and Ur, home to Alicia and Prim of the Seven Shields respectively from the Black Dogs' clutches.
** Chapter 9-11: Liberation of Ansur Arc:
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* FiveManBand: Later on in the original story, Kyril gains 4 apprentice hunters, making him and his band of hunters this:
** TheHero: Kyril, the Good Hunter and the master of all 4 apprentices.
** TheLancer: Sanakan, Kyril's second-in-command. She is Kyril's representative when Kyril is away.
** TheSmartGuy: Soren, the most recent addition to the team. Excels most in sneaking, spying, lock-picking, and gaining intel.
** TheBigGuy: Hugh, the team's mute hunter and is considered the most deadly out of the 4 apprentices.
** TheChick: Lily, the main support member of the team. She often de-escalates the situation when Kyril comes into blows with other people, given that he is more than capable of offing them without consideration.
* FixFic: Due to the presence of the Good Hunter, most of the Seven Shields avoid their cruel fate of being enslaved and raped by the Black Dogs in the actual canon of Kuroinu.
** TheHero: Kyril, the Good Hunter and the master of all 4 apprentices.
** TheLancer: Sanakan, Kyril's second-in-command. She is Kyril's representative when Kyril is away.
** TheSmartGuy: Soren, the most recent addition to the team. Excels most in sneaking, spying, lock-picking, and gaining intel.
** TheBigGuy: Hugh, the team's mute hunter and is considered the most deadly out of the 4 apprentices.
** TheChick: Lily, the main support member of the team. She often de-escalates the situation when Kyril comes into blows with other people, given that he is more than capable of offing them without consideration.
* FixFic: Due to the presence of the Good Hunter, most of the Seven Shields avoid their cruel fate of being enslaved and raped by the Black Dogs in the actual canon of Kuroinu.
* TheStoic: Kyril rarely emotes towards other people.
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* TranquilFury: Being [[TheStoic]], [[TheStoic The Stoic]], Kyril often shows this during hunting.
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Unsatisfied by how the story was going, the author discontinued it and a remake is available, named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13607401/1/The-Night-Unfurls-Re-Imagined The Night Unfurls: Re-Imagined]]
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Unsatisfied by how the story was going, the author discontinued it and a remake is available, named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13607401/1/The-Night-Unfurls-Re-Imagined The Night Unfurls: Re-Imagined]]Re-Imagined]].
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* AntiHero: A hunter from Bloodborne, calling Kyril a "hero" would not be exactly accurate. Even Kyril himself has mentioned that he hates being called one. While he does have moral standards, and his main enemies in the Kuroinu 'verse are slavers and rapists, he has no qualms in killing and using brutality against his enemies.
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* AntiHero: A Being a hunter from Bloodborne, calling Kyril a "hero" would not be exactly accurate. Even Kyril himself has mentioned that he hates being called one. While he does have moral standards, and his main enemies in the Kuroinu 'verse are slavers and rapists, rapists who wants to build a "Sex Empire", he has no qualms in killing and using brutality against his enemies.enemies, something that his allies and the Seven Shields call him out for.
* TheDreaded: The Good Hunter, Kyril, is so powerful that both his allies and enemies fear him. Among the populace, he is infamously known as "Sir Kyril the Bloody".
* GodzillaThreshold: Kyril, to Celestine. Despite having a vision about the Good Hunter ends up either the saviour or destroyer of her land, the latter being the more likely outcome as he is a brutal killer, she has no choice but to call for his assistance, in order to end the war with Olga swiftly.
* [[spoiler:HumanoidAbomination]]: The Good Hunter, [[spoiler:who achieved the Childhood's Beginning Ending]].
* ShellShockedVeteran: Going through the hell and nightmare that is Yharnam would do that to the Good Hunter.
* TheDreaded: The Good Hunter, Kyril, is so powerful that both his allies and enemies fear him. Among the populace, he is infamously known as "Sir Kyril the Bloody".
* GodzillaThreshold: Kyril, to Celestine. Despite having a vision about the Good Hunter ends up either the saviour or destroyer of her land, the latter being the more likely outcome as he is a brutal killer, she has no choice but to call for his assistance, in order to end the war with Olga swiftly.
* [[spoiler:HumanoidAbomination]]: The Good Hunter, [[spoiler:who achieved the Childhood's Beginning Ending]].
* ShellShockedVeteran: Going through the hell and nightmare that is Yharnam would do that to the Good Hunter.
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* TheDreaded: The Good Hunter, Kyril, is so powerful that both his allies and enemies fear him. Among the populace, he is infamously known as "Sir Kyril the Bloody".
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* TheDreaded: The Good Hunter, Kyril, is so powerful that both his allies and enemies fear him. Among the populace, he is infamously known as "Sir TranquilFury: Being [[TheStoic]], Kyril the Bloody".often shows this during hunting.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12589157/1/The-Night-Unfurls-UNDERGOING-REVISION The Night Unfurls]] is a {{Fanfic}} by [=StaffSergeant=]. It is a crossover between ''VideoGame/BloodBorne'' and ''Kuroinu: Kedakaki Seijo wa Hakudaku ni Somaru''. The summary is as follows:
The Hunt begins again. Leaving Yharnam to its fate, the Good Hunter finds himself in the war torn country of Eostia. Tasked with ending the war, he joins the Black Dog Mercenaries as they launch an assault on the Black Fortress of Olga Discordia. If only he knew how complicated his life was going to become.
Unsatisfied by how the story was going, the author discontinued it and a remake is available, named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13607401/1/The-Night-Unfurls-Re-Imagined The Night Unfurls: Re-Imagined]]
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* AntiHero: A hunter from Bloodborne, calling Kyril a "hero" would not be exactly accurate. Even Kyril himself has mentioned that he hates being called one. While he does have moral standards, and his main enemies in the Kuroinu 'verse are slavers and rapists, he has no qualms in killing and using brutality against his enemies.
* SwordAndGun: Kyril often uses his Saw Cleaver and Hunter's Pistol as his main weapons, though he uses other weapons available in the game later on.
* TheDreaded: The Good Hunter, Kyril, is so powerful that both his allies and enemies fear him. Among the populace, he is infamously known as "Sir Kyril the Bloody".
The Hunt begins again. Leaving Yharnam to its fate, the Good Hunter finds himself in the war torn country of Eostia. Tasked with ending the war, he joins the Black Dog Mercenaries as they launch an assault on the Black Fortress of Olga Discordia. If only he knew how complicated his life was going to become.
Unsatisfied by how the story was going, the author discontinued it and a remake is available, named [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13607401/1/The-Night-Unfurls-Re-Imagined The Night Unfurls: Re-Imagined]]
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* AntiHero: A hunter from Bloodborne, calling Kyril a "hero" would not be exactly accurate. Even Kyril himself has mentioned that he hates being called one. While he does have moral standards, and his main enemies in the Kuroinu 'verse are slavers and rapists, he has no qualms in killing and using brutality against his enemies.
* SwordAndGun: Kyril often uses his Saw Cleaver and Hunter's Pistol as his main weapons, though he uses other weapons available in the game later on.
* TheDreaded: The Good Hunter, Kyril, is so powerful that both his allies and enemies fear him. Among the populace, he is infamously known as "Sir Kyril the Bloody".
