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* ActionGirl: Nic.
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* FireForgedFriends: Nic and Whiplash.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Nic's uncle Terry.
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* {{Woobie}}: Whiplash, in spades. Poor guy can't catch a break. Nic also, though to a much lesser degree, and she's much less obvious about it.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Rumble's word-for-word response to Nic's rock-throwing gambit the first time.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Rumble's word-for-word response to Nic's rock-throwing gambit the first time.time.
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Redheaded Hero is being cut per the Appearance tropes cleanup thread.
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* RedHeadedHero: Nic again. Not quite with the stereotypical "fiery" personality, though she is rather forthright and strong-willed.
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* SurvivorGuilt: Whiplash, the lone survivor of not one but two separate Decepticon attacks.
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* ColossusClimb: Whiplash doesn't normally like to engage an enemy directly because most Decepticons are much larger and more powerful. But when he has to, this is his favored tactic.
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* NoOSHACompliance: The Eyesore, a half-finished office building left to languish as an abandoned construction site in Topeka. [[SarcasmMode The lobby seems like a great place to have a giant robot battle.]]
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* ABoyAndHisX: A Kansas biker chick and her alien robot. Or an alien robot and his plucky native guide.
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* {{Woobie}}: Whiplash, in spades. Poor guy can't catch a break. Nic also, though to a much lesser degree, and she's much less obvious about it.
* RedHeadedHero: Nic again. Not quite with the stereotypical "fiery" personality, though she is rather forthright and strong-willed.
* HumansThroughAlienEyes: Whenever Whiplash (or any other Autobot) has the POV.
* RedHeadedHero: Nic again. Not quite with the stereotypical "fiery" personality, though she is rather forthright and strong-willed.
* HumansThroughAlienEyes: Whenever Whiplash (or any other Autobot) has the POV.
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* ABoyAndHisX: A Kansas biker chick and her alien robot. Or an alien robot and his plucky native guide.
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* ABoyAndHisX: A Kansas biker chick ChaseScene: Whiplash, a little gun-shy from ages of running alone from enemies, mistakes the still-mute Bumblebee for Decepticon pursuit. Chase through midday traffic ensues.
* DaddysGirl: Nic and heralien father were very close before he died.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Nic's first impulse when trying to distract Rumble away from Whiplash? Throw a rock at the evil robot.Or an alien robot and his plucky native guide.She does it twice. In her defense, though, it works. Also counts for her suggestion to jump the overpass.
* DaddysGirl: Nic and her
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Nic's first impulse when trying to distract Rumble away from Whiplash? Throw a rock at the evil robot.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Nic's first impulse when trying to distract Rumble away from Whiplash? Throw a rock at the evil robot. She does it twice. In her defense, though, it works. Also counts for her suggestion to jump the overpass.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Rumble's word-for-word response to the above rock-throwing gambit the first time.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Rumble's word-for-word response to the above rock-throwing gambit the first time.
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* DaddysGirl: Nic and her father were very close before he died.
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* DaddysGirl: HumansThroughAlienEyes: Whenever Whiplash (or any other Autobot) has the POV.
* ImNotAHeroIm: When it's pointed out that the damaged and desperate Whiplash wouldn't have gotten as far as he did without her help, Nic turns bashful and says she merely did what needed to be done.
* ImportantHaircut: Rumble snips a section of Nic's waist-length hair with a bladed spinner-rim (he was aiming for herfather were very close before he died.head). Later Nic herself trims the rest to match and doesn't look back.
* JumpedAtTheCall: After only a little hesitation, Nic decides that if she doesn't go with Whiplash, the might-have-beens would haunt her forever.
* ImNotAHeroIm: When it's pointed out that the damaged and desperate Whiplash wouldn't have gotten as far as he did without her help, Nic turns bashful and says she merely did what needed to be done.
* ImportantHaircut: Rumble snips a section of Nic's waist-length hair with a bladed spinner-rim (he was aiming for her
* JumpedAtTheCall: After only a little hesitation, Nic decides that if she doesn't go with Whiplash, the might-have-beens would haunt her forever.
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* ChaseScene: Whiplash, a little gun-shy from ages of running alone from enemies, mistakes the still-mute Bumblebee for Decepticon pursuit. Chase through midday traffic ensues.
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* ChaseScene: RedHeadedHero: Nic again. Not quite with the stereotypical "fiery" personality, though she is rather forthright and strong-willed.
* {{Woobie}}: Whiplash, in spades. Poor guy can't catch alittle gun-shy from ages of running alone from enemies, mistakes the still-mute Bumblebee for Decepticon pursuit. Chase through midday traffic ensues.break. Nic also, though to a much lesser degree, and she's much less obvious about it.
* WakeUpCallBoss: Ravage. Rumble, though a legitimate threat, is easy to derail with taunting and distraction. Ravage is an [[ImplacableMan utterly implacable foe]] that is focused exclusively on his target, Whiplash, sparing only enough attention to Nic to absently swat her away.
* {{Woobie}}: Whiplash, in spades. Poor guy can't catch a
* WakeUpCallBoss: Ravage. Rumble, though a legitimate threat, is easy to derail with taunting and distraction. Ravage is an [[ImplacableMan utterly implacable foe]] that is focused exclusively on his target, Whiplash, sparing only enough attention to Nic to absently swat her away.
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* ImportantHaircut: Rumble snips a section of Nic's waist-length hair with a bladed spinner-rim (he was aiming for her head). Later Nic herself trims the rest to match and doesn't look back.
* JumpedAtTheCall: After only a little hesitation, Nic decides that if she doesn't go with Whiplash, the might-have-beens would haunt her forever.
* ImNotAHeroIm: When it's pointed out that the damaged and desperate Whiplash wouldn't have gotten as far as he did without her help, Nic turns bashful and says she merely did what needed to be done.
* WakeUpCallBoss: Ravage. Rumble, though a legitimate threat, is easy to derail with taunting and distraction. Ravage is an [[ImplacableMan utterly implacable foe]] that is focused exclusively on his target, Whiplash, sparing only enough attention to Nic to absently swat her away.
* JumpedAtTheCall: After only a little hesitation, Nic decides that if she doesn't go with Whiplash, the might-have-beens would haunt her forever.
* ImNotAHeroIm: When it's pointed out that the damaged and desperate Whiplash wouldn't have gotten as far as he did without her help, Nic turns bashful and says she merely did what needed to be done.
* WakeUpCallBoss: Ravage. Rumble, though a legitimate threat, is easy to derail with taunting and distraction. Ravage is an [[ImplacableMan utterly implacable foe]] that is focused exclusively on his target, Whiplash, sparing only enough attention to Nic to absently swat her away.
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* ImportantHaircut: Rumble snips a section of YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Rumble's word-for-word response to Nic's waist-length hair with a bladed spinner-rim (he was aiming for her head). Later Nic herself trims rock-throwing gambit the rest to match and doesn't look back.
* JumpedAtTheCall: After only a little hesitation, Nic decides that if she doesn't go with Whiplash, the might-have-beens would haunt her forever.
* ImNotAHeroIm: When it's pointed out that the damaged and desperate Whiplash wouldn't have gotten as far as he did without her help, Nic turns bashful and says she merely did what needed to be done.
* WakeUpCallBoss: Ravage. Rumble, though a legitimate threat, is easy to derail with taunting and distraction. Ravage is an [[ImplacableMan utterly implacable foe]] that is focused exclusively on his target, Whiplash, sparing only enough attention to Nic to absently swat her away.first time.
* JumpedAtTheCall: After only a little hesitation, Nic decides that if she doesn't go with Whiplash, the might-have-beens would haunt her forever.
* ImNotAHeroIm: When it's pointed out that the damaged and desperate Whiplash wouldn't have gotten as far as he did without her help, Nic turns bashful and says she merely did what needed to be done.
* WakeUpCallBoss: Ravage. Rumble, though a legitimate threat, is easy to derail with taunting and distraction. Ravage is an [[ImplacableMan utterly implacable foe]] that is focused exclusively on his target, Whiplash, sparing only enough attention to Nic to absently swat her away.
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* ImNotAHeroIm: When it's pointed out that the damaged and desperate Whiplash wouldn't have gotten as far as he did without her help, Nic turns bashful and says she merely did what needed to be done.
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* ImNotAHeroIm: When it's pointed out that the damaged and desperate Whiplash wouldn't have gotten as far as he did without her help, Nic turns bashful and says she merely did what needed to be done.done.
* WakeUpCallBoss: Ravage. Rumble, though a legitimate threat, is easy to derail with taunting and distraction. Ravage is an [[ImplacableMan utterly implacable foe]] that is focused exclusively on his target, Whiplash, sparing only enough attention to Nic to absently swat her away.
* WakeUpCallBoss: Ravage. Rumble, though a legitimate threat, is easy to derail with taunting and distraction. Ravage is an [[ImplacableMan utterly implacable foe]] that is focused exclusively on his target, Whiplash, sparing only enough attention to Nic to absently swat her away.
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* WronskiFeint: Whiplash uses a handy tornado to get rid of Ravage. By driving straight at it.
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* WronskiFeint: Whiplash uses a handy tornado to get rid of Ravage. By driving straight at it.it.
* ImportantHaircut: Rumble snips a section of Nic's waist-length hair with a bladed spinner-rim (he was aiming for her head). Later Nic herself trims the rest to match and doesn't look back.
* JumpedAtTheCall: After only a little hesitation, Nic decides that if she doesn't go with Whiplash, the might-have-beens would haunt her forever.
* ImNotAHeroIm: When it's pointed out that the damaged and desperate Whiplash wouldn't have gotten as far as he did without her help, Nic turns bashful and says she merely did what needed to be done.
* ImportantHaircut: Rumble snips a section of Nic's waist-length hair with a bladed spinner-rim (he was aiming for her head). Later Nic herself trims the rest to match and doesn't look back.
* JumpedAtTheCall: After only a little hesitation, Nic decides that if she doesn't go with Whiplash, the might-have-beens would haunt her forever.
* ImNotAHeroIm: When it's pointed out that the damaged and desperate Whiplash wouldn't have gotten as far as he did without her help, Nic turns bashful and says she merely did what needed to be done.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Nic's first impulse when trying to distract Rumble away from Whiplash? Throw a rock at the evil robot. She does it twice. In her defense, though, [[AndItWorked it works]]. Also counts for her suggestion to jump the overpass.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Nic's first impulse when trying to distract Rumble away from Whiplash? Throw a rock at the evil robot. She does it twice. In her defense, though, [[AndItWorked it works]].works. Also counts for her suggestion to jump the overpass.
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* {{Woobie}}: Whiplash, in spades. Poor guy can't catch a break. Nic also, to a much lesser degree, though she's much less obvious about it.
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* {{Woobie}}: Whiplash, in spades. Poor guy can't catch a break. Nic also, though to a much lesser degree, though and she's much less obvious about it.
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* ABoyandhisX: A Kansas biker chick and her alien robot. Or an alien robot and his plucky native guide.
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* ABoyandhisX: ABoyAndHisX: A Kansas biker chick and her alien robot. Or an alien robot and his plucky native guide.