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* IllBoy: Courtesy of his metabolism not playing well with medications, Remy ends up feverish and delirious for his rescue.
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Dewicked trope
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* AdultFear: When his son fails to come home after two weeks, Jean-Luc personally goes to retrieve him - and finds Remy has been tortured and is currently sick like a dog from being drugged.
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* NotSoStoic: For all his smugness, Gambit is barely fifteen year old. When he's seriously roughed up, he crumbles and starts babbling and calling for help.
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* RealityEnsues:
** For all his smugness, Gambit is barely fifteen year old. When he's seriously roughed up, he crumbles and starts babbling and calling for help.
** The mutants in Bio-Storage are kept sedated and medicated, but Remy's body has adverse reactions to drugs. When Jean-Luc rescue him, the teen quickly grows fevered and delirious.
** After almost losing his adopted son, Jean-Luc is too busy fussing over the teen to care about the fact Gambit failed his mission.
** For all his smugness, Gambit is barely fifteen year old. When he's seriously roughed up, he crumbles and starts babbling and calling for help.
** The mutants in Bio-Storage are kept sedated and medicated, but Remy's body has adverse reactions to drugs. When Jean-Luc rescue him, the teen quickly grows fevered and delirious.
** After almost losing his adopted son, Jean-Luc is too busy fussing over the teen to care about the fact Gambit failed his mission.
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Mid-teens.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: By stumbling over Gambit, Weapon X made him lose enough time for the guards to find the kid and capture him.
* WouldHurtAChild: The staff from the Weapon X facility. Even if their boss is the only one who outright electroshocks or strike Remy, the researchers think nothing of forcibly sedating him and locking him in a tube.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Contrasting with the facility's staff, Weapon X is content to merely sniff Remy when he stumbles on the teen before leaving him alone.
* WouldHurtAChild: The staff from the Weapon X facility. Even if their boss is the only one who outright electroshocks or strike Remy, the researchers think nothing of forcibly sedating him and locking him in a tube.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Contrasting with the facility's staff, Weapon X is content to merely sniff Remy when he stumbles on the teen before leaving him alone.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: By stumbling over Gambit, Weapon X made him lose enough time for the guards to find the kid and capture him.
* WouldHurtAChild: The staff from the Weapon X facility. Even if their boss is the only one who outright electroshocks or strike Remy, the researchers think nothing of forcibly sedating him and locking him in a tube.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Contrasting with the facility's staff, Weapon X is content to merely sniff Remy when he stumbles on the teen before leaving him alone.him.
* WouldHurtAChild: The staff from the Weapon X facility. Even if their boss is the only one who outright electroshocks or strike Remy, the researchers think nothing of forcibly sedating him and locking him in a tube.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Contrasting with the facility's staff, Weapon X is content to merely sniff Remy when he stumbles on the teen before leaving him alone.
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* OneSceneWonder: Weapon X appears in all his hairy, bloody glory for a couple of paragraphs, but it's enough to scare seven kinds of crap out of teen Gambit.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11645701/1/The-Job-Gone-Wrong The Job Gone Wrong]]'' is a ForWantOfANail fanfic by [=AhmoseInarus=].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11645701/1/The-Job-Gone-Wrong The Job Gone Wrong]]'' is a ForWantOfANail ''Franchise/XMen'' fanfic by [=AhmoseInarus=].
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* IWantMyMommy: After being captured, drugged, put into a humiliating position and facing electrical torture, Remy loses any pretence to dignity and screams for his papa to save him. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming It took him a couple of weeks, but Jean-Luc came.]]
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* IWantMyMommy: After being captured, drugged, put into a humiliating position and facing electrical torture, Remy loses any pretence to dignity and screams for his papa to save him. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming It took him a couple of weeks, but Jean-Luc came.]]
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* EveryoneHasStandards: At least one researcher is startled when the director starts to torture Remy with a cattle prod.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: EveryoneHasStandards:
** At least one researcher is startled when the director starts to torture Remy with a cattle prod.
** At least one researcher is startled when the director starts to torture Remy with a cattle prod.
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* HumanPopsicle: When he finally wakes up in safety, Remy frets about the possibility he spent months or ''years'' sleeping in his tank. Jean-Luc reassures him it was only two weeks.
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* OneSceneWonder: Weapon appears in all his hairy, bloody glory for a couple of paragraphs, but it's enough to scare seven kinds of crap out of teen Gambit.
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* OneSceneWonder: Weapon X appears in all his hairy, bloody glory for a couple of paragraphs, but it's enough to scare seven kinds of crap out of teen Gambit.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: By stumbling over Gambit, Weapon X made him lose enough time for the guards to find the kid and capture him.
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* CruelToBeKind: When she sees how feverish Remy is, [[TheMedic Mattie]] orders a cold bath for him. The teen does not appreciate.
* ElectricTorture: The facility's director interrogates Gambit with a cattle prod. The kid quickly breaks.
* ElectricTorture: The facility's director interrogates Gambit with a cattle prod. The kid quickly breaks.
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* NoNameGiven: The researchers and any thief who's not a [=LeBeau=].
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* PapaWolf: Breaking into a top-secret facility to steal his kid back? Not a problem for Jean-Luc [=LeBeau=].
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* PullTheIV: Downplayed, but Remy is put on a respirator and IV lines when he goes into storage. When everything is pulled off, there's mention of blood and retching.
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* WouldHurtAChild: The staff from the Weapon X facility. Even if their boss is the only one who outright electroshocks or strike Remy, the researchers think nothing of forcibly sedating him and locking him in a tube.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Gambit's narration makes no mystery of the fact he tends to be a cocky little shit. Then he's scared out of his mind by a feral mutant, captured, brutally interrogated, pumped full of drugs making him sick and locked within a glass tank. When his papa comes to retrieve him and keeps him close, he kinda needs it.
* RealityEnsues:
** For all his smugness, Gambit is barely fifteen year old. When he's seriously roughed up, he crumbles and starts babbling and calling for help.
** The mutants in Bio-Storage are kept sedated and medicated, but Remy's body has adverse reactions to drugs. When Jean-Luc rescue him, the teen quickly grows fevered and delirious.
** After almost losing his adopted son, Jean-Luc is too busy fussing over the teen to care about the fact Gambit failed his mission.
** For all his smugness, Gambit is barely fifteen year old. When he's seriously roughed up, he crumbles and starts babbling and calling for help.
** The mutants in Bio-Storage are kept sedated and medicated, but Remy's body has adverse reactions to drugs. When Jean-Luc rescue him, the teen quickly grows fevered and delirious.
** After almost losing his adopted son, Jean-Luc is too busy fussing over the teen to care about the fact Gambit failed his mission.
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* TearsOfFears: Remy weeps a ''lot'' here, especially when threatened with a cattle prod and dunked into a glass tank.
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* TearsOfFears: TearsOfFear: Remy weeps a ''lot'' here, especially when threatened with a cattle prod and dunked into a glass tank.
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* TheBadGuyWins: Even if his diary was destroyed, Essex still managed to get a hold of Remy's genetic material.
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* FanDisservice: No matter how much you squint, a panicked and sobbing fifteen-years-old teen being forcibly stripped naked to be prodded and shocked is ''not'' sexy. Even when it's [[PrettyBoy Gambit]].
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* FanDisservice: No matter how much you squint, a panicked terrified and sobbing fifteen-years-old teen being forcibly stripped naked to be prodded and shocked is ''not'' sexy. Even when it's [[PrettyBoy Gambit]].
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* IWantMyMommy: After being captured, drugged, put into a humiliating position and facing electrical torture, Remy loses any pretence to dignity and screams for his papa to save him. [[CrowningMomemtOfHeartwarming It took him a couple of weeks, but Jean-Luc came.]]
* PeopleJars: What "Bio-Storage" is all about. Remy himself suffers this for twoo weeks.
* PeopleJars: What "Bio-Storage" is all about. Remy himself suffers this for twoo weeks.
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* IWantMyMommy: After being captured, drugged, put into a humiliating position and facing electrical torture, Remy loses any pretence to dignity and screams for his papa to save him. [[CrowningMomemtOfHeartwarming [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming It took him a couple of weeks, but Jean-Luc came.]]
* NobodyPoops: Averted. Before putting Remy in a tube, the researchers take care of cleaning his bowels and bladder and fitting him with a urinary catheter.
* OneSceneWonder: Weapon appears in all his hairy, bloody glory for a couple of paragraphs, but it's enough to scare seven kinds of crap out of teen Gambit.
* PeopleJars: What "Bio-Storage" is all about. Remy himself suffers this fortwoo weeks.two weeks.
* ShamefulStrip: Waking up naked does not help Remy feel safe.
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable: How Remy wakes up after being captured. This is in this position that he's interrogated and prepped for storage.
* TearsOfFears: Remy weeps a ''lot'' here, especially when threatened with a cattle prod and dunked into a glass tank.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Contrasting with the facility's staff, Weapon X is content to merely sniff Remy when he stumbles on the teen before leaving him alone.
* NobodyPoops: Averted. Before putting Remy in a tube, the researchers take care of cleaning his bowels and bladder and fitting him with a urinary catheter.
* OneSceneWonder: Weapon appears in all his hairy, bloody glory for a couple of paragraphs, but it's enough to scare seven kinds of crap out of teen Gambit.
* PeopleJars: What "Bio-Storage" is all about. Remy himself suffers this for
* ShamefulStrip: Waking up naked does not help Remy feel safe.
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable: How Remy wakes up after being captured. This is in this position that he's interrogated and prepped for storage.
* TearsOfFears: Remy weeps a ''lot'' here, especially when threatened with a cattle prod and dunked into a glass tank.
* WouldntHurtAChild: Contrasting with the facility's staff, Weapon X is content to merely sniff Remy when he stumbles on the teen before leaving him alone.
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* AndIMustScream: Remy is utterly panicked when he's put in a tube and drugged into unconsciousness, fearing he will never wake up again.
* EveryoneHasStandards: At least one researcher is startled when the director starts to torture Remy with a cattle prod.
** The Thieves are unanimously disgusted by Bio-Storage.
* EveryoneHasStandards: At least one researcher is startled when the director starts to torture Remy with a cattle prod.
** The Thieves are unanimously disgusted by Bio-Storage.
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* IllBoy: Courtesy of his metabolism not playing well with medications, Remy ends up feverish and delirious for his rescue.
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* IllBoy: Courtesy of his metabolism not playing well with medications, Remy ends up feverish and delirious for his rescue.rescue.
* IWantMyMommy: After being captured, drugged, put into a humiliating position and facing electrical torture, Remy loses any pretence to dignity and screams for his papa to save him. [[CrowningMomemtOfHeartwarming It took him a couple of weeks, but Jean-Luc came.]]
* PeopleJars: What "Bio-Storage" is all about. Remy himself suffers this for twoo weeks.
* IWantMyMommy: After being captured, drugged, put into a humiliating position and facing electrical torture, Remy loses any pretence to dignity and screams for his papa to save him. [[CrowningMomemtOfHeartwarming It took him a couple of weeks, but Jean-Luc came.]]
* PeopleJars: What "Bio-Storage" is all about. Remy himself suffers this for twoo weeks.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11645701/1/The-Job-Gone-Wrong The Job Gone Wrong]]'' is a ForWantOfANail fanfic by [=AhmoseInarus=].
Tales of Weapon X relates the short story of a fifteen year old ComicBook/{{Gambit}} breaking into the facility to steal a diary, the same night that Weapon X escaped. He allowed for the feral mutant's leaving to cover his own... except that it could have not worked.
Still, Jean-Luc [=LeBeau=] isn't about to lose his adopted son.
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* AdultFear: When his son fails to come home after two weeks, Jean-Luc personally goes to retrieve him - and finds Remy has been tortured and is currently sick like a dog from being drugged.
* FanDisservice: No matter how much you squint, a panicked and sobbing fifteen-years-old teen being forcibly stripped naked to be prodded and shocked is ''not'' sexy. Even when it's [[PrettyBoy Gambit]].
* IllBoy: Courtesy of his metabolism not playing well with medications, Remy ends up feverish and delirious for his rescue.
Tales of Weapon X relates the short story of a fifteen year old ComicBook/{{Gambit}} breaking into the facility to steal a diary, the same night that Weapon X escaped. He allowed for the feral mutant's leaving to cover his own... except that it could have not worked.
Still, Jean-Luc [=LeBeau=] isn't about to lose his adopted son.
!Tropes availables:
* AdultFear: When his son fails to come home after two weeks, Jean-Luc personally goes to retrieve him - and finds Remy has been tortured and is currently sick like a dog from being drugged.
* FanDisservice: No matter how much you squint, a panicked and sobbing fifteen-years-old teen being forcibly stripped naked to be prodded and shocked is ''not'' sexy. Even when it's [[PrettyBoy Gambit]].
* IllBoy: Courtesy of his metabolism not playing well with medications, Remy ends up feverish and delirious for his rescue.
