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''The greatest, most absurdly brilliant Everybody Edits story ever'' is a fanfic of ''VideoGame/EverybodyEdits'' written by [=Arceus64=]. It features many players and forum users who were active at the time, on a comedic but dangerous adventure to stop an automated level that has gone out of control.
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''The greatest, most absurdly brilliant Everybody Edits story ever'' is a short fanfic of ''VideoGame/EverybodyEdits'' written by [=Arceus64=]. It features many players and forum users who were active at the time, on a comedic but dangerous adventure to stop an automated level that has gone out of control.
* AndTheRest: When ThePlan is laid out, nine names of the involved people are listed out, followed by "a few others who aren't important in the story".
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* TheCakeIsALie: Everyone is [[IWasToldThereWouldBeCake invited to the auditorium for cake]], but this turns out to be a lie.
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* TheCakeIsALie: Everyone is [[IWasToldThereWouldBeCake invited to the auditorium for cake]], but this the cake turns out to be a lie.lie.
* CrazyEnoughToWork: An extreme [[ThePlan plan]] to [[spoiler:climb to {{heaven}} to negotiate with {{God}}]] succeeds.
* CrazyEnoughToWork: An extreme [[ThePlan plan]] to [[spoiler:climb to {{heaven}} to negotiate with {{God}}]] succeeds.
* DivineIntervention: {{God}} intervenes [[spoiler:to fix the malfunctioning bots, solving the main conflict]].
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* {{Infodump}}: The story begins with an overview of ''Everybody Edits'''s history.
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* {{God}}: [=RPGMaster2000=] suggests meeting God to negotiate with him. Later on, [[spoiler:when [=Arceus64=] meets him, God immediately knows the problem and provides DivineIntervention to solve the problem]].
* {{Heaven}}: {{God}} is in heaven, behind a staircase and a password-protected gate.
* {{Infodump}}: The story begins withan a fairly lengthy overview of ''Everybody Edits'''s history.
* {{Heaven}}: {{God}} is in heaven, behind a staircase and a password-protected gate.
* {{Infodump}}: The story begins with
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** [=Arceus64=] has a secret project they refer to as Xx xx Xxxxxxxx.
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** [=Arceus64=] has a secret project they refer he refers to as Xx xx Xxxxxxxx.
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* BattleDiscretionShot: The attempt to infiltrate the World Wide Web headquarters isn't shown, but the aftermath results in two deaths by gunshot and at least one other injury.
* BoomHeadshot: Rurigok mentions that two of the WWW infiltrators were [[RedShirt killed in the "most respectful way possible"]]--a gunshot to the head.
* TheCakeIsALie: Everyone is [[IWasToldThereWouldBeCake invited to the auditorium for cake]], but this turns out to be a lie.
* CurbStompBattle: {{Implied|Trope}}. A team tries to break into the World Wide Web headquarters, though when they return there is nothing to report except injuries and [[RedShirt two deaths]].
* DueToTheDead: After Rurigok announces that two troopers died, everybody bows in a moment of silence.
* BoomHeadshot: Rurigok mentions that two of the WWW infiltrators were [[RedShirt killed in the "most respectful way possible"]]--a gunshot to the head.
* TheCakeIsALie: Everyone is [[IWasToldThereWouldBeCake invited to the auditorium for cake]], but this turns out to be a lie.
* CurbStompBattle: {{Implied|Trope}}. A team tries to break into the World Wide Web headquarters, though when they return there is nothing to report except injuries and [[RedShirt two deaths]].
* DueToTheDead: After Rurigok announces that two troopers died, everybody bows in a moment of silence.
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* MeaningfulName: [=BuzzerBee=] and BEE speak entirely through buzzing, like bees.
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* IWasToldThereWouldBeCake: Everybody gets invited back to the auditorium for cake. [[TheCakeIsALie There is no cake.]]
* MeaningfulName: [=BuzzerBee=] and BEEspeak entirely through buzzing, like bees.just make buzzing sounds, which bees are known to do.
* MeaningfulName: [=BuzzerBee=] and BEE
* RedShirt: When attempting to break into the WWW headquarters for heroic purposes, two end up dead.
* ShoutOut: After everyone is [[IWasToldThereWouldBeCake invited to the auditorium for cake]], it's stated [[TheCakeIsALie the cake was a lie]], paraphrasing a message from ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}''.
* ShoutOut: After everyone is [[IWasToldThereWouldBeCake invited to the auditorium for cake]], it's stated [[TheCakeIsALie the cake was a lie]], paraphrasing a message from ''VideoGame/{{Portal}}''.
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* WritersCannotDoMath: It's stated that "Endless Explosions" has had over five million rounds, which--even at a rate of four rounds every single minute, would still make it older than ''Everybody Edits'' was at the time.
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* WritersCannotDoMath: It's stated that "Endless Explosions" has had over five million rounds, which--even at a rate of four rounds every single minute, would still make it older than ''Everybody Edits'' it was at the time.time of the story's release.
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''The greatest, most absurdly brilliant Everybody Edits story ever'' is a fanfic of ''VideoGame/EverybodyEdits'' written by [=Arceus64=]. It features many players and forum users who were active at the time, on a comedic but dangerous adventure to stop an automated level that has gone out of control.
It was posted on the ''Everybody Edits'' forums in 2012 [[https://forums.everybodyedits.com/viewtopic.php?pid=341546#p341546 here]], though most of the punctuation was corrupted during a forum move.
!!Examples:
* AIIsACrapshoot: The ''Everybody Edits'' bots gain minds of their own, with the bot "Explosions Everywhere" causing players' monitors to explode, even when commanded to stop.
* BasedOnAGreatBigLie: The end describes the story as 99.9% fake.
* {{Infodump}}: The story begins with an overview of ''Everybody Edits'''s history.
* MeaningfulName: [=BuzzerBee=] and BEE speak entirely through buzzing, like bees.
* NapInducingSpeak: Around 83 minutes into Chris's speech, people start falling asleep.
* SpellMyNameWithABlank: At several points in the story, names of unimportant things are written entirely in X's.
** The Everybody Edits headquarters is located in Xxxxxxxxxx, Xxxxxxxxx.
** The characters swim across the Xxxxxx Ocean.
** [=Arceus64=] has a secret project they refer to as Xx xx Xxxxxxxx.
* TakeThat: Chris apologizes for high plane bills, explaining that it's "what you get for flying Delta Airlines". Later on, Deetz complains about spending $5,000 on a plane ticket.
* WritersCannotDoMath: It's stated that "Endless Explosions" has had over five million rounds, which--even at a rate of four rounds every single minute, would still make it older than ''Everybody Edits'' was at the time.
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It was posted on the ''Everybody Edits'' forums in 2012 [[https://forums.everybodyedits.com/viewtopic.php?pid=341546#p341546 here]], though most of the punctuation was corrupted during a forum move.
!!Examples:
* AIIsACrapshoot: The ''Everybody Edits'' bots gain minds of their own, with the bot "Explosions Everywhere" causing players' monitors to explode, even when commanded to stop.
* BasedOnAGreatBigLie: The end describes the story as 99.9% fake.
* {{Infodump}}: The story begins with an overview of ''Everybody Edits'''s history.
* MeaningfulName: [=BuzzerBee=] and BEE speak entirely through buzzing, like bees.
* NapInducingSpeak: Around 83 minutes into Chris's speech, people start falling asleep.
* SpellMyNameWithABlank: At several points in the story, names of unimportant things are written entirely in X's.
** The Everybody Edits headquarters is located in Xxxxxxxxxx, Xxxxxxxxx.
** The characters swim across the Xxxxxx Ocean.
** [=Arceus64=] has a secret project they refer to as Xx xx Xxxxxxxx.
* TakeThat: Chris apologizes for high plane bills, explaining that it's "what you get for flying Delta Airlines". Later on, Deetz complains about spending $5,000 on a plane ticket.
* WritersCannotDoMath: It's stated that "Endless Explosions" has had over five million rounds, which--even at a rate of four rounds every single minute, would still make it older than ''Everybody Edits'' was at the time.
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