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* MagneticWeapons: Railguns were equipped on the Zumwalts and the Mirais. They were effective against the Abyssals, but tend to overheat.

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* MagneticWeapons: Railguns were are equipped on the Zumwalts and the Mirais. They were are effective against the Abyssals, but tend to overheat.
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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) works in Advanced R&D Divison, O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Force, and San Diego is working on reactivating the Kitty Hawk]].

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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) works in Advanced Naval Weapon R&D Divison, O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Force, and San Diego is working on reactivating the Kitty Hawk]].
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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) work in Advanced R&D Divison, O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Forces, and San Diego is working on reactivating the Kitty Hawk]].

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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) work works in Advanced R&D Divison, O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Forces, Force, and San Diego is working on reactivating the Kitty Hawk]].
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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) work in Advanced R&D Divison, O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Forces, and San Diego is working on reactivating the Kitty Hawk]].


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* MagneticWeapons: Railguns were equipped on the Zumwalts and the Mirais. They were effective against the Abyssals, but tend to overheat.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In a span of one day, the [=DesDivSix=] girls find a laptop, have it hacked by Yubari and proceed to look up on the topics of[[spoiler: The Rape of Nanking, The Holocaust, and 'making love'.]]
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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: [[spoiler:Hibiki]], very much so.

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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: [[spoiler:Hibiki]], Hibiki, very much so.so. ''No one'' noticed this until Tenryuu finally noticed it in the aftermath of the internet incident, noting that Hibiki probably had seen a LOT of things as Verniy.
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** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'', aka Yvonne Swanson.]]

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** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'', aka Yvonne Swanson. Immediately followed by the appearances of two more US ship girls in O'Bannon and San Diego.]]
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* WiseBeyondTheirYears: [[spoiler:Hibiki]], very much so.

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* TheCameo: Two from ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', another Kancolle fic on this wiki: [[spoiler: Enterprise aka Yvonne Swanson, and O'Bannon as of the latest chapters.]]


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* CrossOver: With ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'': [[spoiler: Enterprise (disguised as 'Yvonne Swanson'), and O'Bannon as of the latest chapters.]]
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* TheCameo: Two from ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'', another Kancolle fic on this wiki: [[spoiler: Enterprise aka Yvonne Swanson, and O'Bannon as of the latest chapters.]]
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** [[spoiler: She has another one in a later chapter where she imagines a worst-case scenario of her not watching her diet, turning her into a big, ugly, and fat monstrous version of herself that gets killed in one hit by an Abyssal torpedo.]]
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** [[spoiler: Enterprise]] has one after going through a nightmare of her turning into a fat, huge version of herself.

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* TheReveal: Chapter 6 has one in the form of [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity being none other than that of USS ''Enterprise'' CV-6, aka "The Grey Ghost".]]

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* TheReveal: Chapter 6 has one in the form of [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity being none other than that of USS ''Enterprise'' CV-6, aka "The Grey Ghost".]]]] And since cat's out of the bag after that, the interlude after chapter 7 casually reveals [[spoiler:2 more US shipgirls: the San Diego and the O'Bannon]].


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* WeightWoe: Interlude after chapter 7 reveals that Yvonne develops this after a particularly bad nightmare.
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** [[spoiler:Her nightmares about Pearl Harbour have her believing that she could have helped if she were present. But how much good could one intelligence officer do?]]

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** [[spoiler:Her nightmares about Pearl Harbour have her believing that she could have helped if she were present. But how much good could one intelligence officer do?]]do? Further, her nightmares never specified that the ''Abyssals'' were the ones attacking Pearl Harbor.]]

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* BadDreams: The story begins with Yvonne reliving the Abyssal attack on Pearl in her nightmares. Chapter 5 has Yvonne reliving the Pearl attack again.

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* BadDreams: The story begins with Yvonne reliving the Abyssal attack on Pearl Harbor in her nightmares. Chapter 5 has Yvonne reliving the Pearl attack again.again.
** [[spoiler:With the revelation that Yvonne is Enterprise, history-savvy readers will realize that her dream is her reliving the aftermath of the original attack in 1941, which Enterprise missed entirely and sailed in after the Japanese left.]]
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** A big one that set off chapter 5. [[spoiler: Attempting to sink ''Bismarck'' in the exact same manner and at the exact same location as her namesake. When the ''Hood'' intervenes and saves the ''Bismarck'', an Abyssal super-sub, taking a page out of the playbook of [=USS=] "Hit 'em again" ''Harder'', plows through several of ''Hood''s escorts while no-selling their depth charges, and re-enacts the magazine-detonating hit that sunk the original ''Hood'' by '''JUMPING OUT OF THE WATER AND LAUNCHING A TORPEDO AT HOOD'S FACE, BLOWING HER HEAD CLEAN OFF'''. ]]

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** A big one that set off in chapter 5. [[spoiler: Attempting to sink ''Bismarck'' in the exact same manner and at the exact same location as her namesake. When the ''Hood'' intervenes and saves the ''Bismarck'', an Abyssal super-sub, taking a page out of the playbook of [=USS=] "Hit 'em again" ''Harder'', plows through several of ''Hood''s escorts while no-selling their depth charges, and re-enacts the deck-penetrating magazine-detonating hit shot that sunk the original ''Hood'' by '''JUMPING OUT OF THE WATER AND LAUNCHING A TORPEDO AT HOOD'S FACE, BLOWING HER HEAD CLEAN OFF'''. ]]
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* BreakTheCutie: The [=DesDiv=] Six do this ''to themselves'', [[spoiler: by researching Imperial Japanese war crimes]] in Chapter 7.

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* BreakTheCutie: The [=DesDiv=] Six girls do this ''to themselves'', [[spoiler: by researching Imperial Japanese war crimes]] in Chapter 7.
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** Emulating German U-Boat wolf packs.

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** Emulating German U-Boat wolf packs.packs in the Atlantic.



** Attempting Doolittle's raid with little success.

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** Attempting Doolittle's raid raid, albeit with little success.
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** A big one that set off chapter 5. [[spoiler: Attempting to sink ''Bismarck'' in the exact same manner and at the exact same location as her namesake. When the ''Hood'' intervenes and saves the ''Bismarck'', an Abyssal super-sub, taking a page out of the playbook of [=USS=] "Hit 'em again" ''Harder'', plows through several of ''Hood''s escorts and re-enacts the magazine-detonating hit that sunk the original ''Hood'' by '''JUMPING OUT OF THE WATER AND LAUNCHING A TORPEDO AT HOOD'S FACE, BLOWING HER HEAD CLEAN OFF'''. ]]

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** A big one that set off chapter 5. [[spoiler: Attempting to sink ''Bismarck'' in the exact same manner and at the exact same location as her namesake. When the ''Hood'' intervenes and saves the ''Bismarck'', an Abyssal super-sub, taking a page out of the playbook of [=USS=] "Hit 'em again" ''Harder'', plows through several of ''Hood''s escorts while no-selling their depth charges, and re-enacts the magazine-detonating hit that sunk the original ''Hood'' by '''JUMPING OUT OF THE WATER AND LAUNCHING A TORPEDO AT HOOD'S FACE, BLOWING HER HEAD CLEAN OFF'''. ]]
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** A more traditional example later in the chapter: [[spoiler: Yvonne reveals herself as the USS Enterprise and launches her air wing to rescue Yamato. See GunshipRescue below.]]
* BigSecret: Chapter 5 mentions that Yvonne and Dakota seem to be hiding something. [[spoiler:Chapter 6 reveals that the former is the USS Enterprise.]]

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** A more traditional example later in the chapter: [[spoiler: Yvonne reveals herself as the USS Enterprise ''Enterprise'' and launches her air wing to rescue Yamato. See GunshipRescue below.]]
* BigSecret: Chapter 5 mentions that Yvonne and Dakota seem to be hiding something. [[spoiler:Chapter 6 reveals that the former is the USS Enterprise.''Enterprise''.]]



* TheReveal: Chapter 6 has one in the form of [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity being none other than that of ''USS Enterprise'' CV-6, aka "The Grey Ghost".]]

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* TheReveal: Chapter 6 has one in the form of [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity being none other than that of ''USS Enterprise'' USS ''Enterprise'' CV-6, aka "The Grey Ghost".]]



** The CNN-style news interludes mention the reactivated ''USS Missouri'' being put under the command of [[Film/{{Battleship}} Captain Alex Hopper]].

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** The CNN-style news interludes mention the reactivated ''USS Missouri'' USS ''Missouri'' being put under the command of [[Film/{{Battleship}} Captain Alex Hopper]].



* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler: Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. Hints are dropped that at least some Abyssal ringleaders are vengeful spirits. Yamato sorties into battle and is mortally wounded, and it's revealed that Yvonne isn't a human officer, she's a shipgirl: the ''USS Enterprise'' CV-6. And by the time reinforcements arrive, both Yamato and Enterprise are missing in action, presumed dead.]].

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler: Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. Hints are dropped that at least some Abyssal ringleaders are vengeful spirits. Yamato sorties into battle and is mortally wounded, and it's revealed that Yvonne isn't a human officer, she's a shipgirl: the ''USS Enterprise'' USS ''Enterprise'' CV-6. And by the time reinforcements arrive, both Yamato and Enterprise are missing in action, presumed dead.]].

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* BreakTheCutie: The [=DesDiv=] Six lolis do this ''to themselves'', [[spoiler: by researching Imperial Japanese war crimes]] in Chapter 7.

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* BreakTheCutie: The [=DesDiv=] Six lolis do this ''to themselves'', [[spoiler: by researching Imperial Japanese war crimes]] in Chapter 7.



* {{Malaproper}}: When she first appears, Akatsuki embarrasses herself with a barrage of these.



* {{Malaproper}}: When she first appears, Akatsuki embarrasses herself with a barrage of these.



* TheReveal: Chapter 6 has one in the form of [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity being none other than that of ''Enterprise'', aka "The Grey Ghost".]]

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* TheReveal: Chapter 6 has one in the form of [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity being none other than that of ''Enterprise'', ''USS Enterprise'' CV-6, aka "The Grey Ghost".]]



* TemptingFate: An unrelenting string of 'how bad could it be?' from the [=DesDiv=] Six girls in chapter 7.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler: Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. Hints are dropped that at least some Abyssal ringleaders are vengeful spirits. Yamato sorties into battle and is mortally wounded, and it's revealed that Yvonne isn't a human officer, she's a shipgirl: the USS Enterprise. And by the time reinforcements arrive, both Yamato and Enterprise are missing in action, presumed dead.]].

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* TemptingFate: An unrelenting string of 'how '[[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong How bad could it be?' be?]]' from the [=DesDiv=] Six girls in chapter 7.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler: Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. Hints are dropped that at least some Abyssal ringleaders are vengeful spirits. Yamato sorties into battle and is mortally wounded, and it's revealed that Yvonne isn't a human officer, she's a shipgirl: the USS Enterprise.''USS Enterprise'' CV-6. And by the time reinforcements arrive, both Yamato and Enterprise are missing in action, presumed dead.]].
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** [[spoiler:Dakota's full name would be another one. The "Leigh Gatch" part references to Captain [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thomas_Leigh_Gatch Thomas Leigh Gatch]].]]
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* BreakTheCutie: The [=DesDiv=] Six lolis do this ''to themselves'', [[spoiler: by researching Imperial Japanese war crimes in Chapter 7.]]

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* BreakTheCutie: The [=DesDiv=] Six lolis do this ''to themselves'', [[spoiler: by researching Imperial Japanese war crimes crimes]] in Chapter 7.]] 7.


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* TemptingFate: An unrelenting string of 'how bad could it be?' from the [=DesDiv=] Six girls in chapter 7.
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* BreakTheCutie: The [=DesDiv=] Six lolis do this ''to themselves'', [[spoiler: by researching Imperial Japanese war crimes in Chapter 7.]]
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While in Zipang the class name is Yukinami, in The Greatest Gen the lead ship is explicitly stated to be Mirai.


** The two ''Yukinami''-class guided missile destroyers (''Mirai'' and ''Yukinami'') are one to ''{{Manga/Zipang}}''.

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** The two ''Yukinami''-class ''Mirai''-class guided missile destroyers (''Mirai'' and ''Yukinami'') are one to ''{{Manga/Zipang}}''.



** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'' aka Yvonne Swanson.]]

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** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'' ''Enterprise'', aka Yvonne Swanson.]]
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** [[spoiler:Being good with a bow for recreational hunting is one thing. But good enough to stand against the carrier girls who train to fight with it?]]

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** [[spoiler:Being good with a bow for recreational hunting is one thing. But good enough to stand against the carrier girls who train to fight with it?]]it? And not just that, but to perfectly execute kyudo?`]]

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* RealityEnsues: Just because everyone's fighting a war against the common enemy that is the Abyssals doesn't mean that all past hatreds and grudges magically vanish. [[spoiler:Zuikaku]] is the most obvious kanmusu with objections to Yvonne's actions, but far from the only one.

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* RealityEnsues: RealityEnsues:
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Just because everyone's fighting a war against the common enemy that is the Abyssals doesn't mean that all past hatreds and grudges magically vanish. [[spoiler:Zuikaku]] is the most obvious kanmusu with objections to Yvonne's actions, but far from the only one.


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** In chapter 6 the narration notes that Japan, being as resource-starved as it is, can't make good use of refugee labour the way Australia or other more bountiful nations can.
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* RealityIsUnrealistic: [[http://www.navweaps.com/index_tech/tech-031.htm As this article explains,]] [[spoiler:hiding a carrier strike group from detection is not as impossible as one might first think, and that's with full-sized warships. With human-sized Abyssals...]]
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* BreakOutTheMusuemPiece: Following the devastating attacks on Pearl Harbor and Norfolk by the Abyssals, and the amount of surface ships lost in the fighting afterwards, the [=US=] Navy has had to re-activate whatever ships they could just to get back on their feet. A [=CNN=]-style news article details the reactivation of the ''Missouri'', ''Kitty Hawk'', and ''Little Rock''.

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* BreakOutTheMusuemPiece: BreakOutTheMuseumPiece: Following the devastating attacks on Pearl Harbor and Norfolk by the Abyssals, and the amount of surface ships lost in the fighting afterwards, the [=US=] Navy has had to re-activate whatever ships they could just to get back on their feet. A [=CNN=]-style news article details the reactivation of the ''Missouri'', ''Kitty Hawk'', and ''Little Rock''.
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* BringOutTheMusuemPiece: Following the devastating attacks on Pearl Harbor and Norfolk by the Abyssals, and the amount of surface ships lost in the fighting afterwards, the [=US=] Navy has had to re-activate whatever ships they could just to get back on their feet. A [=CNN=]-style news article details the reactivation of the ''Missouri'', ''Kitty Hawk'', and ''Little Rock''.

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* BringOutTheMusuemPiece: BreakOutTheMusuemPiece: Following the devastating attacks on Pearl Harbor and Norfolk by the Abyssals, and the amount of surface ships lost in the fighting afterwards, the [=US=] Navy has had to re-activate whatever ships they could just to get back on their feet. A [=CNN=]-style news article details the reactivation of the ''Missouri'', ''Kitty Hawk'', and ''Little Rock''.

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