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* NeverMyFault: Sakura really should have known better than to try to get even for something that wasn't worth getting even over. And at her trial, she continued to insist that Kagami somehow had it coming and bragged that she taught her a lesson.
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* TooDumbToLive: During her trial, Sakura makes no attempt to rationalize what she did, insisting that Kagami somehow had it coming and openly bragging that she "taught that bitch a lesson". Not surprisingly, her lack of remorse earns her a 20 year sentence.
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* TooDumbToLive: During her trial, Sakura makes no attempt to rationalize what she did, defend her actions, insisting that Kagami somehow had it coming and openly bragging that she "taught that bitch a lesson". Not surprisingly, her lack of remorse earns her a 20 year sentence.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily on sweet. Kagami sustained grievous injuries and is wheelchair-bound until she heals, and Konata also sustained injuries. However, Sakura is now in prison, and Konata and Kagami are an OfficialCouple.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily on sweet. Kagami sustained grievous serious injuries and is wheelchair-bound until she heals, and Konata was also sustained injuries.pretty badly injured. However, Sakura is now in prison, and Konata and Kagami are an OfficialCouple.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily on sweet. Kagami has sustained grievous injuries and is wheelchair-bound until she heals, and Konata also sustained some injuries. However, Sakura is now in prison, and Konata and Kagami are an OfficialCouple.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily on sweet. Kagami has sustained grievous injuries and is wheelchair-bound until she heals, and Konata also sustained some injuries. However, Sakura is now in prison, and Konata and Kagami are an OfficialCouple.
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* BittersweetEnding: Leaning heavily on sweet. Kagami has sustained grievous injuries and is wheelchair-bound until she heals, and Konata also sustained some injuries. However, Sakura is now in prison, and Konata and Kagami are an OfficialCouple.
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* BerserkButton: DO NOT put Kagami in harm's way, ''DON'T'' laugh at her suffering, and '''NEVER''' make her cry. Konata will be '''''FUCKING PISSED''''' if you do any of those things. Sakura ended up doing all three of those things.
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* BerserkButton: DO NOT put Any manner of hurting Kagami in harm's way, ''DON'T'' laugh at her suffering, and '''NEVER''' make her cry. Konata will be '''''FUCKING PISSED''''' if you do any of those things. Sakura ended riles up doing all three of those things.Konata.
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* SecretRelationship: Konata and Kagami agree to keep their relationship under wraps for a bit, only for it to become common knowledge in the sequel. Beforehand, though, the Les Yay between the two in the actual series can be chalked to them actually them struggling to keep it secret.
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* SecretRelationship: Konata and Kagami agree to keep their relationship under wraps for a bit, only for it to become common knowledge in the sequel. Beforehand, though, Since the Les Yay sequel takes place after the main series, this creates some FridgeBrilliance, in that the LesYay between the two in the actual series can be chalked to them Konata and Kagami is actually them struggling trying very hard to keep it secret.cover up their relationship, and that Kagami most likely hates having to put on a {{Tsundere}} act.
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* BerserkButton: DO NOT put Kagami in harm's way, ''DON'T'' laugh at her suffering, and '''NEVER''' make her cry. Konata will be '''FUCKING PISSED''' if you do any of those things. Sakura ended up doing all three of those things.
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* BerserkButton: DO NOT put Kagami in harm's way, ''DON'T'' laugh at her suffering, and '''NEVER''' make her cry. Konata will be '''FUCKING PISSED''' '''''FUCKING PISSED''''' if you do any of those things. Sakura ended up doing all three of those things.
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* BerserkButton: DO NOT put Kagami in harm's way, ''NEVER'' laugh at her pain, and '''DON'T EVER''' make her cry. Konata will be ''absolutely fucking'' '''PISSED''' if you do any of those things. Sakura did all of them.
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* BerserkButton: DO NOT put Kagami in harm's way, ''NEVER'' ''DON'T'' laugh at her pain, suffering, and '''DON'T EVER''' '''NEVER''' make her cry. Konata will be ''absolutely fucking'' '''PISSED''' '''FUCKING PISSED''' if you do any of those things. Sakura did ended up doing all three of them.those things.
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** Not only that, but a mob of angry students tried to get at her as she was being led out of the school by the police in pursuit of vigilante justice. It took every faculty member on the first floor to calm the mod down and get Sakura out of the building.
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** Not only that, but a mob of angry students tried to get at her as she was being led out of the school by the police in pursuit of vigilante justice. It took the efforts of every faculty member on the first floor to calm the mod down the mob and get safely escort Sakura out of the building.
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* BadassAdorable / CuteBruiser / TookALevelInBadass: Konata definitely qualifies, as she shows no hesitation in fighting back against Kagami's attacker.
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* BadassAdorable / CuteBruiser / TookALevelInBadass: Konata definitely qualifies, qualifies in this fanfic, as she shows no hesitation in fighting back going up against Kagami's attacker.Sakura.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Sakura had held a grudge towards Kagami for god knows how long. The moment she can no longer take it is when Kagami scored higher than her on the midterm. What does Sakura do? Beat the living daylights out of Kagami, and injure her badly enough that she has to be taken to the hospital.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Sakura had held a grudge towards Kagami for god only knows how long. The moment she can no longer take it is when Kagami scored higher than her on the midterm. What So what does Sakura do? Beat She beats the living daylights out of Kagami, and injure her the poor girl badly enough that she has to be taken to the hospital.
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* LaughingMad: During Chapter 4, after hearing Kagami beg her to stop, Sakura starts laughing in a "borderline maniacal" manner, [[KickTheDog and then she slashes Kagami with her knife yet again]], [[NothingCanSaveUsNow and to top it off she boasts that no one can save her now]].
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* LaughingMad: During Chapter 4, after hearing Kagami beg tearfully begs her to stop, Sakura starts laughing in a "borderline maniacal" manner, [[KickTheDog and then she slashes Kagami with her knife yet again]], [[NothingCanSaveUsNow and to top it off she finally boasts that no one can save her now]].now]].
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* SanitySlippage: Sakura undergoes a serious case of this during her assault on Kagami.
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* SmugSnake: Sakura, again.
