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* UnwittingPawn: Hans turns his brothers into this using his way with words. [[spoiler:The Sorcerer lets him know that it was ''him'' influencing them, not Hans]].
** [[spoiler: Elsa appears to be this to Markus, given the way he manipulated her in her youth]].
* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: Hans confesses this trope to his mother on the anniversary of her death.
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler:Ed!Anna breaks away from her Anna-persona for a brief moment when Elsa hits a nerve, and eventually admits to being Odon.]]
** [[spoiler: Elsa appears to be this to Markus, given the way he manipulated her in her youth]].
* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: Hans confesses this trope to his mother on the anniversary of her death.
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler:Ed!Anna breaks away from her Anna-persona for a brief moment when Elsa hits a nerve, and eventually admits to being Odon.]]
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* %%Administrivia/ZeroContextExample* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: Hans confesses this trope to his mother on the anniversary of her death.
* VillainousBreakdown:[[spoiler:Ed!Anna [[spoiler: The villainous Ed!Anna breaks away from her Anna-persona for a brief moment when Elsa hits a nerve, and eventually admits to being Odon.]]
%%Administrivia/ZeroContextExample** Hans turns his brothers into this using his way with words. [[spoiler:The Sorcerer lets him know that it was ''him'' influencing them, not Hans]].
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* WeakButSkilled: The Sorcerer sees himself as this, in contrast to Elsa's UnskilledButStrong in relation to their powers.
** [[spoiler: Elsa]] ultimately becomes this.
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* WifeHusbandry: See MayDecemberRomance.
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* SlowlySlippingIntoEvil: [[spoiler:Elsa went through this as part of her upbringing by Markus. Saul undergoes this after the Sorcerer begins influencing his actions]].
* SoulJar: [[spoiler:The reliquary. Chapter 27 confirms that it is all that is keeping Elsa alive]].
* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Elsa has this reaction [[spoiler:after killing her parents]]. She is convinced that ItGetsEasier.
** [[spoiler:Prince Saul]] gets this after killing [[spoiler:his brother Reid]]. They rationalize it by blaming the Sorcerer's influence.
* SoulJar: [[spoiler:The reliquary. Chapter 27 confirms that it is all that is keeping Elsa alive]].
* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Elsa has this reaction [[spoiler:after killing her parents]]. She is convinced that ItGetsEasier.
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* UnskilledButStrong: Elsa is incredibly powerful, yet lacks fine control over her powers. The Sorcerer is WeakButSkilled.
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** Elsa is incredibly powerful, yet lacks fine control over her powers. The Sorcerer is WeakButSkilled.
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* RedHerring: Almost the entire story is built to keep readers guessing.
** RedHerringTwist: [[spoiler:Edmund is suspicious, until Gustaf reveals himself to be the Sorcerer, and the matter is dropped. Later, Edmund is revealed to have been the Sorcerer, and Gustaf a decoy]].
* RestoredMyFaithInHumanity: Subverted. Elsa only cares about Anna.
** [[spoiler:In the end, Elsa gives the world a chance, but because her faith in ''herself'' is restored rather than humanity at large.]]
** RedHerringTwist: [[spoiler:Edmund is suspicious, until Gustaf reveals himself to be the Sorcerer, and the matter is dropped. Later, Edmund is revealed to have been the Sorcerer, and Gustaf a decoy]].
* RestoredMyFaithInHumanity: Subverted. Elsa only cares about Anna.
** [[spoiler:In the end, Elsa gives the world a chance, but because her faith in ''herself'' is restored rather than humanity at large.]]
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* OneTrueLove: Anna and Elsa. Deconstructed. [[spoiler:But ultimately reconstructed.]]
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* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:Markus. Elsa and the Sorcerer may also qualify, due to having no hearts]].
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* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:Markus. Elsa and the Sorcerer may also qualify, due to having no hearts]].[[spoiler:Markus]].
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* MoreThanMindControl: Chapter 27 reveals that [[spoiler:this is how the Sorcerer's brainwashing works: he simply removes the inhibitions in the victim's mind that prevent him/her acting on their existing urges]].
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** Chapter 27 reveals that [[spoiler:this is how the Sorcerer's brainwashing works: he simply removes the inhibitions in the victim's mind that prevent him/her acting on their existing urges]].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Very minor, but Elsa admits she had this reaction [[spoiler:after demanding that Anna come to the Southern Isles at the beginning. She quickly took it back and made it very clear that she didn't ''have'' to come, but Anna was convinced that was just a lie and she didn't really have a choice in the matter]].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
** Very minor, but Elsa admits she had this reaction [[spoiler:after demanding that Anna come to the Southern Isles at the beginning. She quickly took it back and made it very clear that she didn't ''have'' to come, but Anna was convinced that was just a lie and she didn't really have a choice in the matter]].
** Very minor, but Elsa admits she had this reaction [[spoiler:after demanding that Anna come to the Southern Isles at the beginning. She quickly took it back and made it very clear that she didn't ''have'' to come, but Anna was convinced that was just a lie and she didn't really have a choice in the matter]].
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* LackOfEmpathy: [[spoiler:Elsa shows this to anyone who isn't Anna. She doesn't enjoy it]].
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* MeaningfulName: Gustaf means either "Royal Staff" or "Staff of the Gods." It's a name commonly held by monarchs, and hints at the high hopes Markus held for him.
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* MercyKill: [[spoiler:How Elsa dispatches the Sorcerer]].
* MoralityPet: Anna is this of sorts to Elsa.
** Anna can also count as one for [[spoiler:Prince Hans]].
* MoralityPet: Anna is this of sorts to Elsa.
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* JackOfAllTrades: Edmund may qualify as this, seeing as he likes to imitate what each of his brothers do and with his eidetic memory, he's probably very good at them.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Subverted. Elsa actually loves her powers.
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* TheHeart: Anna.
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Hans loses function in his legs after he saves Anna from a collapsing warehouse]].
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* HiddenDepths: Edmund has eidetic memory and is an avid reader, fluent in several languages. [[spoiler:He's also TheChessmaster]].
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** Edmund has eidetic memory and is an avid reader, fluent in several languages. [[spoiler:He's also TheChessmaster]].
** Edmund has eidetic memory and is an avid reader, fluent in several languages. [[spoiler:He's also TheChessmaster]].
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* HumanPopsicle: [[spoiler:WordOfGod confirms Markus to be this, courtesy of Elsa]].
* IJustWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Saul has this mindset, encouraging Anna to accept her feelings for Elsa, whom he felt LoveAtFirstSight for.
* IJustWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Saul has this mindset, encouraging Anna to accept her feelings for Elsa, whom he felt LoveAtFirstSight for.
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* DeathEqualsRedemption: [[spoiler:Markus]] uses his dying breath to warn Elsa.
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* FinalBoss: Markus.
** [[spoiler:An Edmund-possessed Anna]].
* FireForgedFriends: [[spoiler:Alek and Hans]].
* {{Flashback}}: When approaching reliquaries.
** [[spoiler:An Edmund-possessed Anna]].
* FireForgedFriends: [[spoiler:Alek and Hans]].
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* BecomingTheMask: How Elsa became the ruler she is.
** [[spoiler: After possessing Anna, Edmund comes to hate his previous life so much he tries to mimic Anna's mannerism and even love for Elsa. Elsa lampshades this.]]
* BigBad: Markus.
** [[spoiler: After possessing Anna, Edmund comes to hate his previous life so much he tries to mimic Anna's mannerism and even love for Elsa. Elsa lampshades this.]]
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* ChildProdigy: Elsa.
** Subverted with [[spoiler:Edmund]], who once struggled with magic.
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* CurbStompBattle: Most battles fought by Elsa are this, due to years of practicing using her powers.
* DarkMessiah: [[spoiler:What Ed!Anna sees herself as.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Hans becomes a bit prone to this [[spoiler:after he loses his legs]].
* DarkMessiah: [[spoiler:What Ed!Anna sees herself as.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: At least, anyone who is part of the Southern Isles royal family...
** [[spoiler: Kristoff]]
* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: No one will miss Reid]].
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* AGodAmI: Markus.
* AbusiveParents: Elsa's birth parents. [[spoiler:However, it's revealed that this was never the case. See FakeMemories below]].
** Markus is shown to not care much about his sons and bluntly ridicules Stefan and Rafael for their interests in the arts. He also emotionally manipulates Elsa to become dependent on him and purposefully [[spoiler:drives Edmund to attempted suicide ''at age five'']], all for the sake of his plans.
* AbusiveParents: Elsa's birth parents. [[spoiler:However, it's revealed that this was never the case. See FakeMemories below]].
** Markus is shown to not care much about his sons and bluntly ridicules Stefan and Rafael for their interests in the arts. He also emotionally manipulates Elsa to become dependent on him and purposefully [[spoiler:drives Edmund to attempted suicide ''at age five'']], all for the sake of his plans.
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** Markus is shown to not care much about his sons and bluntly ridicules Stefan and Rafael for their interests in the arts. He also emotionally manipulates Elsa to become dependent on him and purposefully [[spoiler:drives Edmund to attempted suicide ''at age five'']], all for the sake of his plans.
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* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler: Elsa removes Tobias' arm to prevent his body from freezing over]].
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* {{Adorkable}}: Anna is this, of course. Edmund also definitely qualifies.
** [[spoiler:Or so he would seem...]]
** [[spoiler:Or so he would seem...]]
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* ShoutOut: Other than some toward [[Disney/{{Frozen}} the obvious]], there's a few.
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''Tempest'' is a fanfiction of the 2013 film {{Disney/Frozen}} written by the author [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5415970/kaiserklee kaiserklee]]. It takes place in alternate universe where Elsa is Queen of the Southern Isles and is raised as a weapon of war due to her powers. After declaring war on Arendelle [[CurbStompBattle and promptly winning said war in a matter of hours]], Elsa claims complete sovereignty over the nation. Once her terms of surrender are complied to, she grants the opportunity of leniency to Arendelle in her policies.
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The story is being hosted on Website/FanFictionDotNet and the first chapter can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9972423/1/Tempest here]]. As of January 30, 2015, it is complete at 52 chapters (the last chapter is an author's note with a [[SequelHook short scene]]).
On the 27th of February 2015, Kaiserklee [[http://kaiserklee.tumblr.com/post/112208916030/polaris-tempest-sequel announced a sequel, titled Polaris]] [[MeaningfulName after the North Star]] used by lost travelers to find their way home.
On the 27th of February 2015, Kaiserklee [[http://kaiserklee.tumblr.com/post/112208916030/polaris-tempest-sequel announced a sequel, titled Polaris]] [[MeaningfulName after the North Star]] used by lost travelers to find their way home.
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** BiggerBad: [[spoiler:The Sorcerer]].
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*CombatBreakdown: [[spoiler:Elsa's battle against Markus.]] It starts with both of them flinging around spells trying to overpower each other, then they both switched to swords and had a magically augmented duel, before it eventually dissolved into a magicless slug fight with Elsa trying to choke [[spoiler:Markus]] to death.
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* HandicappedBadass:[[spoiler: Hans]] during the final battle. Being stuck in a wheelchair limits him to mounted combat, but that just gives him the motivation to kill anyone who comes close. He even manages to fight [[spoiler: a mind controlled [[BadassNormal Alek]]]] to a draw.
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'''''Tempest''''' is a fanfiction of the 2013 film {{Disney/Frozen}} written by the author [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5415970/kaiserklee kaiserklee]]. It takes place in alternate universe where Elsa is Queen of the Southern Isles and is raised as a weapon of war due to her powers. After declaring war on Arendelle [[CurbStompBattle and promptly winning said war in a matter of hours]], Elsa claims complete sovereignty over the nation. Once her terms of surrender are complied to, she grants the opportunity of leniency to Arendelle in her policies.
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* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler: Played with, somewhat. Although Elsa, Marcus and even Gustaf were all stronger than the sorcerer, his plans playing out turned him into the most dangerous villain by the final segment of the story. In another form, although Anna starts out as a helpless girl, her possession by the sorcerer turned her into an utter ''nightmare''.]]
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* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler: Edmund's body is dying, and he has utterly lost faith in himself. He decides to steal Anna's body and identity. He succeeds(somewhat).]]
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On the 27th of February 2015, Kaiserklee [[http://kaiserklee.tumblr.com/post/112208916030/polaris-tempest-sequel announced a sequel, titled Polaris]] [[MeaningfulName after the North Star]] used by lost travelers to find their way home.
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* OneOfUs: Kaiserklee frequents Tvtropes.
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