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* BoyfriendBlockingDad: Shanks freaks out when Riskua mentions that she wants to have at least three children.In an omake [[spoiler: He ends up attacking Ace after being clued in that he and Riskua are together.]]
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* OverprotectiveDad: Shanks freaks out when Riskua mentions that she wants to have at least three children.In an omake [[spoiler: He ends up attacking Ace after being clued in that he and Riskua are together.]]
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* LaughingThemselvesSick: When the Marines assume Mihawk is the father of Riskua, he laughs out loud for all to hear while not correcting them.
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* LaughingThemselvesSick: LaughThemselvesSick: [[spoiler: When the Marines assume Mihawk is the father of Riskua, Riskua due to strong family resemblance, he laughs out loud for all to hear while not correcting them.them]].
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* SinsOfTheFather: Mihawk is aware of this and protects his niece Riskua from being discovered as the daughter of Shanks by going along with the World Government's assumption of being her father.
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* SinsOfTheFather: Mihawk is aware of this and protects his niece Riskua [[spoiler: from being discovered as the daughter of Shanks by going along with the World Government's assumption of being her father.father]].
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** Law is partial to the unconventional FlawedBeauty type.
* IAmNotPretty: Riskua does not believe that she is attractive due to her unusual eyes and small bust. Ace, Trafalgar Law and a large part of the Whitebeards would beg to differ. So would Nami.
* IAmNotPretty: Riskua does not believe that she is attractive due to her unusual eyes and small bust. Ace, Trafalgar Law and a large part of the Whitebeards would beg to differ. So would Nami.
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** Law is partial to the unconventional FlawedBeauty BlemishedBeauty type.
* IAmNotPretty: Riskua does not believe that she is attractive due to her unusual eyes and small bust. Ace, Trafalgar Law and a large part of the Whitebeards would beg to differ. [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer So would Nami.]]
* IAmNotPretty: Riskua does not believe that she is attractive due to her unusual eyes and small bust. Ace, Trafalgar Law and a large part of the Whitebeards would beg to differ. [[EvenTheGirlsWantHer So would Nami.]]
* LaughingThemselvesSick: When the Marines assume Mihawk is the father of Riskua, he laughs out loud for all to hear while not correcting them.
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* MSFanservice: After two years of Winter Islands, Riskua has a habit of sunbathing on the decks of ships wearing only a tiny thong. Sanji ends up having a massive NoseBleed. The Whitebeards walk into the masts of the Moby dick.
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* MSFanservice: After two years of Winter Islands, Riskua has a habit of sunbathing on the decks of ships wearing only a tiny thong. thong with Sanji ends up having a massive NoseBleed. The NoseBleed and the Whitebeards walk into the masts of the Moby dick.Dick.
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* SinsOfTheFather: Mihawk is aware of this and protects his niece Riskua from being discovered as the daughter of Shanks by going along with the World Government's assumption of being her father.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12187990/1/Tell-it-to-the-Marines Tell It To the Marines]] is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' [[SelfInsertFic Self-Insert]] FanFiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2221413/Tsume-Yuki Tsume Yuki]]. The female protagonist Dracule Riskua born as the result of a one-night stand between Dracule Raowl (Mihawk's younger sister) and Red-Haired Shanks. She develops a dream to be the greatest Haki expert in the world, gaining training to that effect from her father and uncle, and at the age of nine, she leaves her home island with Shanks at her dying mother's request, and he naturally takes her to Dawn Island where she becomes Luffy's big sister. The fic began in October 2016. It reached the Top 20 One Piece fics five months later, and the Top 10 two months after that.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12187990/1/Tell-it-to-the-Marines Tell It To the Marines]] Marines]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' [[SelfInsertFic Self-Insert]] FanFiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2221413/Tsume-Yuki Tsume Yuki]]. The female protagonist Dracule Riskua born as the result of a one-night stand between Dracule Raowl (Mihawk's younger sister) and Red-Haired Shanks. She develops a dream to be the greatest Haki expert in the world, gaining training to that effect from her father and uncle, and at the age of nine, she leaves her home island with Shanks at her dying mother's request, and he naturally takes her to Dawn Island where she becomes Luffy's big sister. The fic began in October 2016. It reached the Top 20 One Piece fics five months later, and the Top 10 two months after that.
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* RealityEnsues: Despite understanding the reasons for Ace's behavior at first eventually Riskua hits her limit and starts to utterly ignore him until he stops being a brat
** [[spoiler: The first time Conqueror's Haki is used someone ends up recognizing Roger in Ace. Riskua is forced to kill for the very first time.]]
** Riskua's Revolutionary missions are most often located in Winter Islands. Once her two years of volunteering for the cause are over she ensures to sunbathe as much as possible in warmer climates.
** [[spoiler: The first time Conqueror's Haki is used someone ends up recognizing Roger in Ace. Riskua is forced to kill for the very first time.]]
** Riskua's Revolutionary missions are most often located in Winter Islands. Once her two years of volunteering for the cause are over she ensures to sunbathe as much as possible in warmer climates.
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* FamilyThemeNaming: Every Dracule appearing onscreen will be named after a bird, with a two letters prefix -- Mi''hawk'', Ra''owl'' and Ri''skua''.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: Sabo is equally attracted to men and women. Nami crushes on Sabo, Riskua and Koala. Trafalgar Law is also hinted to swing both ways.
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* BashBrothers: The ASL brothers kick a lot of arse together. Luffy also develops this with Zorro. Riskua, Sabo and Koala during Riskua's two year tenure with the Revolutionaries.
* ForegoneConclusion: [[spoiler: The omakes show that Riskua and Ace do get together.]]
* IDontWantToRuinOurFriendship: Ace is in love with Riskua but afraid to act on those feelings for fear to destroying their friendship.
* OverprotectiveDad: Shanks freaks out when Riskua mentions that she wants to have at least three children.In an omake [[spoiler: He ends up attacking Ace after being clued in that he and Riskua are together.]]
* ProperlyParanoid: Riskua purposefully invokes this on Thatch. [[spoiler: It works.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaption: [[spoiler: Thatch survives Blackbeard's attack. While visiting the Whitebeards, Riskua told him that while spying around for the Revolutionaries she had heard that someone had joined a powerful crew in order to obtain a specific fruit and were willing to do anything to get it. Even commit mutiny and murder a crewmate. The resulting paranoia enables Thatch to see the attack coming and manage to survive.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaption: SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Thatch survives Blackbeard's attack. While visiting the Whitebeards, Riskua told him that while spying around for the Revolutionaries she had heard that someone had joined a powerful crew in order to obtain a specific fruit and were willing to do anything to get it. Even commit mutiny and murder a crewmate. The resulting paranoia enables Thatch to see the attack coming and manage to survive.]]
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* TechnicalVirgin: Riskua, [[spoiler: after spending a few days on the Polar Tang with Law.]]
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* DistractedByTheSexy: Ace invades Riskua and Sabo's fort to steal their drinkable water. He ends up finding Riskua's lingerie drawer and becomes thoroughly distracted by the contents.
** Sabo and Riskua sunbathe on the deck of the Moby Dick while visiting Ace. Marco and Ace have to chase away a lot of ooglers.
** Sabo and Riskua sunbathe on the deck of the Moby Dick while visiting Ace. Marco and Ace have to chase away a lot of ooglers.
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* MSFanservice: After two years of Winter Islands, Riskua has a habit of sunbathing on the decks of ships wearing only a tiny thong. Sanji ends up having a massive NoseBleed. The Whitebeards walk into the masts of the Moby dick.
* MRFanservice: Sabo ends up joining her whenever she does that.
* MRFanservice: Sabo ends up joining her whenever she does that.
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** Riskua's Revolutionary missions are most often located in Winter Islands. Once her two years of volunteering for the cause are over she ensures to sunbathe as much as possible in warmer climates.
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* SecretSecretKeeper: Riskua knows pretty much all the secrets the Straw Hats and a lot of other characters have. They themselves have no idea.
** [[spoiler: Buggy figures out whose daughter Riskua really is after taking one look at her. He decides to keep quiet about it since he has standards.]]
** [[spoiler: Buggy figures out whose daughter Riskua really is after taking one look at her. He decides to keep quiet about it since he has standards.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaption: [[spoiler: Thatch survives Blackbeard's attack. While visiting the Whitebeards, Riskua told him that while spying around for the Revolutionaries she had heard that someone had joined a powerful crew in order to obtain a specific fruit and were willing to do anything to get it. Even commit mutiny and murder a crewmate. The resulting paranoia enables Thatch to see the attack coming and manage to survive.]]
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* AttractiveGenderBender: [[spoiler: In order to smuggle Sabo out of Dawn Island, Ivankov transforms him into a girl, much to his ire and Riskua's amusement. Luffy remarks that Sabo makes a very pretty girl.]]
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* AttractiveGenderBender: AttractiveBentGender: [[spoiler: In order to smuggle Sabo out of Dawn Island, Ivankov transforms him into a girl, much to his ire and Riskua's amusement. Luffy remarks that Sabo makes a very pretty girl.]]
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* PowerIncontinence: When Shanks was a child he awakened his Conqueror's Haki and was unable to turn it off, causing every person and animal around him to pass out. Thankfully Roger found him and was able to help him control it.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Riskua is one for Shanks and Makino.
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* AttractiveGenderBender: [[spoiler: In order to smuggle Sabo out of Dawn Island, Ivankov transforms him into a girl, much to his ire and Riskua's amusement. Luffy remarks that Sabo makes a very pretty girl.]]
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* GoingComando: [[spoiler: While traveling with the Heart Pirates Riskua only has one change of clothes, Law has to examine her injuries while her panties are in the wash.]] In one of the Omakes, the Strawhats plus Ace, Sabo and Koala play strip poker on a day Riskua decided to go comando.
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* GoingComando: GoingCommando: [[spoiler: While traveling with the Heart Pirates Riskua only has one change of clothes, Law has to examine her injuries while her panties are in the wash.]] In one of the Omakes, the Strawhats plus Ace, Sabo and Koala play strip poker on a day Riskua decided to go comando.commando.
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* HasAType:
** Riskua likes the TallDarkAndHandsome type, including Ace and Law.
** Koala prefers blondes.
** Law is partial to the unconventional FlawedBeauty type.
** Riskua likes the TallDarkAndHandsome type, including Ace and Law.
** Koala prefers blondes.
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* ReallyGetsAround: Sabo has friendships with benefits with several of his fellow revolutionaries, had a one night stand with Nojiko, a threesome with two women he rescued and is hinted to have a fling with one of the Whitebeards.
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* BadassAdorable: Luffy.
*BiTheWay: Sabo is equally attracted to men and women. Nami crushes on Sabo, Riskua and Koala. Trafalgar Law is also hinted to swing both ways.
*BiTheWay: Sabo is equally attracted to men and women. Nami crushes on Sabo, Riskua and Koala. Trafalgar Law is also hinted to swing both ways.
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* CoolUncle: Mihawk to Riskua. He helps her develop her Haki and fighting skills, is supportive of her decision not to take up the sword, visits her as much as his career will allow and keeps her relatively safe by not correcting the marines when they think he is her father.
* DisappearedDad: As per canon, Monkey D. Dragon, Riskua holds a grudge toward him for it. Shanks is forced to be one much to his disappointment.
* DotingParent: Shanks happily talks the ear off anyone trustworthy enough to be informed that he has a daughter.
* TheGadfly: Sabo takes almost sadistic pleasure in teasing the heck out of Ace and Riskua.
* GoingComando: [[spoiler: While traveling with the Heart Pirates Riskua only has one change of clothes, Law has to examine her injuries while her panties are in the wash.]] In one of the Omakes, the Strawhats plus Ace, Sabo and Koala play strip poker on a day Riskua decided to go comando.
* DisappearedDad: As per canon, Monkey D. Dragon, Riskua holds a grudge toward him for it. Shanks is forced to be one much to his disappointment.
* DotingParent: Shanks happily talks the ear off anyone trustworthy enough to be informed that he has a daughter.
* TheGadfly: Sabo takes almost sadistic pleasure in teasing the heck out of Ace and Riskua.
* GoingComando: [[spoiler: While traveling with the Heart Pirates Riskua only has one change of clothes, Law has to examine her injuries while her panties are in the wash.]] In one of the Omakes, the Strawhats plus Ace, Sabo and Koala play strip poker on a day Riskua decided to go comando.
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* IAmNotPretty: Riskua does not believe that she is attractive due to her unusual eyes and small bust. Ace, Trafalgar Law and a large part of the Whitebeards would beg to differ. So would Nami.
* LittleMissBadass: By the age of nine, Riskua is able to to kill a Mount Columbo wolf with one hit.
* ObliviousToLove: Ace has been in love with Riskua since he hit puberty, she is completely unaware, despite Sabo's blatant statements.
* LittleMissBadass: By the age of nine, Riskua is able to to kill a Mount Columbo wolf with one hit.
* ObliviousToLove: Ace has been in love with Riskua since he hit puberty, she is completely unaware, despite Sabo's blatant statements.
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Riskua, Sabo, and Koala for Cocoyashi village. They liberate it from Arlong 3 years before schedule.]] Luffy also rescues Nami from Nezumi
* EntertaininglyWrong: [[spoiler: The Marine top brass and Dofflamingo end up concluding that Mihawk is Riskua's father. Mihawk, who is in the room, laughs at them but does not bother to correct them.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Buggy is an utter asshole but even he would not sink so low as to rat out Riskua's real paternity. After all, he remembers what happened in Baterilla. He might hate Shanks but he will not use in his words, an innocent to get back to his old rival.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler: Buggy is an utter asshole but even he would not sink so low as to rat out Riskua's real paternity. After all, he remembers what happened in Baterilla. He might hate Shanks but he will not use in his words, an innocent to get back to his old rival.]]
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Riskua has Shanks hair, skin tone, and facial features. The only typically Dracule feature she has is her ringed golden eyes.
* ThroughHisStomach: Thatch manages to earn Ace's trust by feeding him.
* WillfullyWeak: [[spoiler: The first and so far only time Riskua used Conqueror's Haki she had to kill a pirate that noticed the resemblance between Ace and Roger. The emotional trauma has sealed her Conqueror's Haki. She also advises Ace to keep his own, well developed and powerful Haki as either as a last resort move or to only use if he can stand to kill his opponent.]]
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Riskua has Shanks hair, skin tone, and facial features. The only typically Dracule feature she has is her ringed golden eyes.
* ThroughHisStomach: Thatch manages to earn Ace's trust by feeding him.
* WillfullyWeak: [[spoiler: The first and so far only time Riskua used Conqueror's Haki she had to kill a pirate that noticed the resemblance between Ace and Roger. The emotional trauma has sealed her Conqueror's Haki. She also advises Ace to keep his own, well developed and powerful Haki as either as a last resort move or to only use if he can stand to kill his opponent.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12187990/1/Tell-it-to-the-Marines Tell It To the Marines]] is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' [[SelfInsertFic Self-Insert]] FanFiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2221413/Tsume-Yuki Tsume Yuki]]. The female protagonist Dracule Riskua born as the result of a one-night stand between Dracule Raowl (Mihawk's younger sister) and Red-Haired Shanks. She develops a dream to be the greatest Haki expert in the world, gaining training to that effect from her father and uncle, and at the age of nine, she leaves her home island with Shanks at her dying mother's request, and he naturally takes her to Dawn Island where she becomes Luffy's big sister. The fic began in October 2016. It reached the Top 20 One Piece fics five months later, and the Top 10 two months after that.
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!Tropes contained in ''Tell It To The Marines''
* CoolBigSis: Riskua full stop towards Luffy. She introduces herself to him by saving him from a wolf and proceeds to be his authority figure, the source of emotional support and partner in crime. Later she becomes his first mate.
* GreenEyedMonster: A lot of Ace's initial meanness and bratty behavior toward Luffy and Riskua is due to him being jealous of the unconditional affection/love between the two of them.
* RealityEnsues: Despite understanding the reasons for Ace's behavior at first eventually Riskua hits her limit and starts to utterly ignore him until he stops being a brat
** The first time Conqueror's Haki is used someone ends up recognizing Roger in Ace. Riskua is forced to kill for the very first time.
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!Tropes contained in ''Tell It To The Marines''
* CoolBigSis: Riskua full stop towards Luffy. She introduces herself to him by saving him from a wolf and proceeds to be his authority figure, the source of emotional support and partner in crime. Later she becomes his first mate.
* GreenEyedMonster: A lot of Ace's initial meanness and bratty behavior toward Luffy and Riskua is due to him being jealous of the unconditional affection/love between the two of them.
* RealityEnsues: Despite understanding the reasons for Ace's behavior at first eventually Riskua hits her limit and starts to utterly ignore him until he stops being a brat
** The first time Conqueror's Haki is used someone ends up recognizing Roger in Ace. Riskua is forced to kill for the very first time.
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