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''Superman of 2499: The Great Confrontation'' is a ''Franchise/{{Superman}}'' story by Creator/{{DarkMark}} and Dannell Lites.
It's the 25th century. The descendants of the first Superman and the offspring of the first Comicbook/{{Supergirl}} have become a huge family, torn by petty internal conflicts. Per tradition there can only be a Superman and a ComicBook/{{Superboy}}, and maybe a Supergirl; and the rest of the family chafes under the weight of hiding who they are in order to not make Terrans uncomfortable or frightened.
It's the 25th century. The descendants of the first Superman and the offspring of the first Comicbook/{{Supergirl}} have become a huge family, torn by petty internal conflicts. Per tradition there can only be a Superman and a ComicBook/{{Superboy}}, and maybe a Supergirl; and the rest of the family chafes under the weight of hiding who they are in order to not make Terrans uncomfortable or frightened.
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''Superman of 2499: The Great Confrontation'' is a ''Franchise/{{Superman}}'' ''ComicBook/{{Superman}}'' story by Creator/{{DarkMark}} and Dannell Lites.
It's the 25th century. The descendants of the first Superman and the offspring of the firstComicbook/{{Supergirl}} ComicBook/{{Supergirl}} have become a huge family, torn by petty internal conflicts. Per tradition there can only be a Superman and a ComicBook/{{Superboy}}, and maybe a Supergirl; and the rest of the family chafes under the weight of hiding who they are in order to not make Terrans uncomfortable or frightened.
It's the 25th century. The descendants of the first Superman and the offspring of the first
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* AdaptationExpansion: Klar Ken showed up in a few Silver Age stories (Superman #181, Action Comics #338-339 and World's Finest #166). This story greatly expands on his world and his -mess of a- family.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Klar Ken showed up in a few Silver Age stories (Superman (''ComicBook/Superman1939'' #181, Action Comics ''ComicBook/ActionComics'' #338-339 and World's Finest ''ComicBook/WorldsFinest1941'' #166). This story greatly expands on his world and his -mess of a- messy family.
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* AffairHair: Variant. One night, Adam insists on staying in Kat's apartment, but she bluntly kicks him out. Before leaving, though, he stares towards Kat's bedroom for several seconds, and Kat realizes he has used his SuperSenses to spot one hair of his brother Alan's head which she forgot removing from her bed.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Klar Ken showed up in a few Silver Age stories (Action Comics #338-339 and World's Finest #166). This story greatly expands on his world and his -mess of a- family.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Klar Ken showed up in a few Silver Age stories (Action (Superman #181, Action Comics #338-339 and World's Finest #166). This story greatly expands on his world and his -mess of a- family.
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Tal Thorn is a Rannian, but thanks to his GreenLanternRing he can understand and speak English.
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Tal Thorn is a Rannian, but thanks to his GreenLanternRing Green Lantern ring he can understand and speak English.
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* HumanMomNonHumanDad: Alan and Adam Kent have a Kryptonian father (Klar) and a human mother (Lyra).
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* {{Diary}}: Katherine de Ka'an inherits her ancestress Kara's diaries and learns about her life and [[Fanfic/HellsisterTrilogy her romance with Dev-Em]] through them.
-->Even before her mother passed the diaries of Kara Zor-El, the Prime Supergirl, to her to read and contemplate when she was of age, she had felt a distinct kinship with her. They were both Krypts, after all. In an unbroken line for over five hundred years, she was descended from The Last Daughter of Krypton. And she found no trouble at all in understanding "Linda Lee's" youthful frustration. Delegated to her older cousin Kal-El's shadow and sworn to silence about her very existence, the Maid of Might's desire for her own fame and destiny pricked Katherine sharply as most merely physical things could not.\\
But like herself, "Linda" had endured and been rewarded. True, Katherine was not allowed to throw off the shackles of Family tradition and join The Superman in the spotlight of public fame. But she had Klarior's respect. She knew that and found warmth and heart in the fact. The many branched House of El made him her "Uncle" in name only, but he was Moliom of his House and none denied that. He had earned it many times over.\\
And, reading Kara's diaries, she found a kindred spirit and it was a fine, reassuring thing to know that she was not alone in her search for purpose and love. Kara, too, had sought and needed these things. And found them.
-->Even before her mother passed the diaries of Kara Zor-El, the Prime Supergirl, to her to read and contemplate when she was of age, she had felt a distinct kinship with her. They were both Krypts, after all. In an unbroken line for over five hundred years, she was descended from The Last Daughter of Krypton. And she found no trouble at all in understanding "Linda Lee's" youthful frustration. Delegated to her older cousin Kal-El's shadow and sworn to silence about her very existence, the Maid of Might's desire for her own fame and destiny pricked Katherine sharply as most merely physical things could not.\\
But like herself, "Linda" had endured and been rewarded. True, Katherine was not allowed to throw off the shackles of Family tradition and join The Superman in the spotlight of public fame. But she had Klarior's respect. She knew that and found warmth and heart in the fact. The many branched House of El made him her "Uncle" in name only, but he was Moliom of his House and none denied that. He had earned it many times over.\\
And, reading Kara's diaries, she found a kindred spirit and it was a fine, reassuring thing to know that she was not alone in her search for purpose and love. Kara, too, had sought and needed these things. And found them.
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''Superman of 2499: The Great Confrontation'' is part of Dark Mark’s FanVerse together with ''Fanfic/HellsisterTrilogy'', ''Fanfic/KaraOfRokyn'', ''Fanfic/AVeryKaraChristmas'', ''Fanfic/AForceOfFour'', ''Fanfic/DanceWithTheDemons'', ''Fanfic/WithThisRingGreenLantern'', ''Fanfic/FuneralForAFlash'', ''Fanfic/SupermanAndMan'' and ''Fanfic/TheVampireOfSteel''. Dark Mark has also written ''Fanfic/HereThereBeMonsters'', ''Fanfic/APrizeForThreeEmpires'', ''Fanfic/XMen1970'', ''Fanfic/{{FIRE}}'', ''Fanfic/DevilsDiary'', ''Fanfic/TheUnfantasticAdventuresOfBizarroNo1'', ''Fanfic/EverybodysGottaLeaveSometime'' and ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''.
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''Superman of 2499: The Great Confrontation'' is part of Dark Mark’s FanVerse together with ''Fanfic/HellsisterTrilogy'', ''Fanfic/KaraOfRokyn'', ''Fanfic/AVeryKaraChristmas'', ''Fanfic/AForceOfFour'', ''Fanfic/DanceWithTheDemons'', ''Fanfic/WithThisRingGreenLantern'', ''Fanfic/FuneralForAFlash'', ''Fanfic/SupermanAndMan'' and ''Fanfic/TheVampireOfSteel''. Dark Mark has also written ''Fanfic/HereThereBeMonsters'', ''Fanfic/APrizeForThreeEmpires'', ''Fanfic/XMen1970'', ''Fanfic/{{FIRE}}'', ''[[Fanfic/FireDarkMark FIRE!]]'', ''Fanfic/DevilsDiary'', ''Fanfic/TheUnfantasticAdventuresOfBizarroNo1'', ''Fanfic/EverybodysGottaLeaveSometime'' and ''Fanfic/MaybeTheLastArchieStory''.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: In the XXVth century, the descendants of Superman and Supergirl are a large House divided against itself by petty jealousies and conflicts. Suffice it say that Klar Kent isn't sure who is scheming his son against: his brother or himself.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: In the XXVth [=XXVth=] century, the descendants of Superman and Supergirl are a large House divided against itself by petty jealousies and conflicts. Suffice it say that Klar Kent isn't sure who is scheming his son against: his brother or himself.
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* HumanMomNonHumanDad: Alan and Adam Kent have a Kryptonian father (Klar) and a human mother (Lyra).
