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* LukeIMightBeYourFather: Conversed. [[CloudCuckoolander Colin]] theorizes that Lightning was the result of the Grand Ruler having an affair, which LaserGuidedAmnesia caused them both to forget. Percy immediately deems this theory ridiculous.
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* ContinuityReboot: Effectively one for ''Starfleet Magic''.
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* MixAndMatchCritters: The Neo-Equestrians are alicorns like in the original, but it's [[DownplayedTrope downplayed]]. They all function like regular earth ponies, unicorns, and pegasi, with their respective features being heightened (unicorns have longer horns and shorter wings, earth ponies are more physically fit but have shorter horns ''and'' wings, etc).
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** Colin and Percy get some slight hints as well.
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** Colin and Percy get Colin/Percy gets some slight hints as well.
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As ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn Starfleet Magic]]'' has a sizable {{hatedom}}, a fic ([[FanFic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis or]] [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony three]]) that deconstructs it was inevitable. Or at least, one FixFic.
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As ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn Starfleet Magic]]'' has a sizable {{hatedom}}, a fic ([[FanFic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis or]] [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony three]]) that deconstructs it was inevitable. Or at least, one FixFic.
a reconstruction.
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* {{Reconstruction}}: Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'' {{deconstruct}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes as well as give them a better system of morals.
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Surprised nobody caught that...
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*** Also by extension, Greenland --> Emerald PlainsFields
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** When the group is walking, Colin mentions how Percy liked a theory from ''Adolescent Avengers'', a ShowWithinAShow based on ''WesternAnimation/TeenTitans'', that [[Recap/TeenTitansS5E13ThingsChange the schoolgirl is really]] [[CaptainErsatz Gaia/Terra]].
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** When the group is walking, Colin mentions how Percy liked a theory from of his for ''Adolescent Avengers'', a ShowWithinAShow based on ''WesternAnimation/TeenTitans'', that [[Recap/TeenTitansS5E13ThingsChange the schoolgirl is really]] [[CaptainErsatz Gaia/Terra]].
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** When the group is walking, Colin mentions how Percy liked a theory from "Adolescent Avengers", a ShowWithinAShow based on "WesternAnimation/TeenTitans", that [[Recap/TeenTitansS5E13ThingsChange the schoolgirl is really]] [[CaptainErsatz Gaia/Terra]].
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** When the group is walking, Colin mentions how Percy liked a theory from "Adolescent Avengers", ''Adolescent Avengers'', a ShowWithinAShow based on "WesternAnimation/TeenTitans", ''WesternAnimation/TeenTitans'', that [[Recap/TeenTitansS5E13ThingsChange the schoolgirl is really]] [[CaptainErsatz Gaia/Terra]].
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* ShipTease: Lightning/Astra gets plenty in the latter's debut, though at least one Lightning/Crystal hint has been made.
** Colin and Percy get some slight hints as well.
** Colin and Percy get some slight hints as well.
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* AlternativeContinuity: Serves as this to ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn Starfleet Magic]]''.
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* ContinuityReboot: The very idea of this fic is to start ''FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn'' over from scratch; this includes most of the characters, as well as the overall lore.
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: The Grand Ruler believes a Starfleet officer’s greatest weapon is their bond with those around them.
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: The Grand Ruler believes a Starfleet officer’s greatest weapon is their bond with those around them.
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* ShoutOut: The time frame between Titan's imprisonment and the present, 962 years, is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/XiaolinShowdown''. See the page quote for ThousandYearReign.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut
** The time frame between Titan's imprisonment and the present, 962 years, is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/XiaolinShowdown''. See the page quote forThousandYearReign.ThousandYearReign.
** When the group is walking, Colin mentions how Percy liked a theory from "Adolescent Avengers", a ShowWithinAShow based on "WesternAnimation/TeenTitans", that [[Recap/TeenTitansS5E13ThingsChange the schoolgirl is really]] [[CaptainErsatz Gaia/Terra]].
** The time frame between Titan's imprisonment and the present, 962 years, is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/XiaolinShowdown''. See the page quote for
** When the group is walking, Colin mentions how Percy liked a theory from "Adolescent Avengers", a ShowWithinAShow based on "WesternAnimation/TeenTitans", that [[Recap/TeenTitansS5E13ThingsChange the schoolgirl is really]] [[CaptainErsatz Gaia/Terra]].
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--> Compared to me, that cragadile will be mere foal’s play.
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--> Compared "Compared to me, that cragadile will be mere foal’s play."
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** Dimension of Darkness / Dark Planet --> Planet Eris
** White Village --> Diamond Village
** Buddy Rose --> Garter Variety
** Rainbow Dish --> Sweet N' Sleep
** Cookie Dough --> Caesar Salad
** Artie Bristles --> Colin Canvas
*** By extension, Orange Range --> Golden Acres
** Starla Shine --> Astra Physics
** Rhymey --> [[GenderFlip Percy Prose]]
** Inquerius --> Ingrid Tuition
** Abra Kadabra --> Hocus Pocus
** Brain --> Equal Librium
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** White Village --> Diamond Village
** Buddy Rose --> Garter Variety
** Rainbow Dish --> Sweet N' Sleep
** Cookie Dough --> Caesar Salad
** Artie Bristles --> Colin Canvas
*** By extension, Orange Range --> Golden Acres
** Starla Shine --> Astra Physics
** Rhymey --> [[GenderFlip Percy Prose]]
** Inquerius --> Ingrid Tuition
** Abra Kadabra --> Hocus Pocus
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* OfficialCouple: Ingrid Tuition and Hocus Pocus.
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* ContinuityReboot: The very idea of this fic is to start over from scratch; this includes most of the characters, as well as the overall lore.
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* ContinuityReboot: The very idea of this fic is to start ''FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn'' over from scratch; this includes most of the characters, as well as the overall lore.
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* ContinuityReboot: The very idea of this fic is to start over from scratch; this includes most of the characters, as well as the overall lore.
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* ShoutOut: The time frame between Titan's imprisonment and the present, 962 years, is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/XiaolinShowdown''. See the page quote for ThousandYearReign.
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* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: The idea of belief is still present, but [[DeconstructedTrope only as a means of motivation]], rather than being the main theme of the story (see ThePowerOfFriendship below).
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* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: The idea of belief is still present, but [[DeconstructedTrope [[DownplayedTrope only as a means of motivation]], rather than being the main theme of the story (see ThePowerOfFriendship below).
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General cleanup.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Several will be present throughout the fic. Listed in order of appearance:
** Unicornicopia is now Neo-Equestria, for instance.
** Krysta --> Crystal.
** Unicornicopia is now Neo-Equestria, for instance.
** Krysta --> Crystal.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Several will be are present throughout the fic. Listed in order of appearance:
** Unicornicopiais now Neo-Equestria, for instance.
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** Krysta -->Crystal.Crystal
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* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: Technically, the The idea of belief is still present, but [[DeconstructedTrope only as a means of motivation]] and not even motivation]], rather than being the main theme of the story (see ThePowerOfFriendship below).
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* RecursiveFanfiction: It's a FixFic ''of'' a Fix Fic ([[MindScrew the latter of which also happens to be a]] HateFic).
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* RecursiveFanfiction: It's a FixFic ''of'' a Fix Fic ([[MindScrew Fic, [[MindScrew the latter of which is also happens to be a]] HateFic).HateFic.
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* TrainingFromHell: To make sure that Starfleet's officers manage to reach their full potential, the Grand Ruler has them go through rigorous training to prepare for any threats ahead. Hence why only those whose determination is stronger than the rest tend to pass. He even admits this to Lightning Dawn before the latter chooses to join.
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* TrainingFromHell: To make sure that Starfleet's Starfleet officers manage to reach their full potential, the Grand Ruler has them go through rigorous training to prepare them for any threats ahead. Hence why only those whose determination is stronger than the rest tend to pass. He even they may face. As he admits this to Lightning Dawn before the latter chooses to join.join:
--> Compared to me, that cragadile will be mere foal’s play.
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* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: Technically, the idea of belief is still present, but [[DeconstructedTrope only as a means of motivation]] and not even the main theme of the story (see ThePowerOfFriendship below).
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But as they do, they have to come face to face with several powerful monsters, crafty henchmen, and their own inner demons as they discover the true meaning of friendship wherever they go. They must make new allies in the most unlikely of places, and work together to bring down the dark sorcerer that threatens all of existence, even as their struggle brings them to a world similar to their own...
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But as they do, they have to come face to face with several powerful monsters, crafty henchmen, and their own inner demons as they discover the true meaning of friendship wherever they go. They must make new allies in the most unlikely of places, and work together to bring down the dark sorcerer that threatens all of existence, even as their struggle brings them to [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic a world similar to their own...
own]]...
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: The Grand Ruler believes a Starfleet officer’s greatest weapon is their bond with those around them.
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: The Grand Ruler believes a Starfleet officer’s greatest weapon is their bond with those around them.them.
* TrainingFromHell: To make sure that Starfleet's officers manage to reach their full potential, the Grand Ruler has them go through rigorous training to prepare for any threats ahead. Hence why only those whose determination is stronger than the rest tend to pass. He even admits this to Lightning Dawn before the latter chooses to join.
* TrainingFromHell: To make sure that Starfleet's officers manage to reach their full potential, the Grand Ruler has them go through rigorous training to prepare for any threats ahead. Hence why only those whose determination is stronger than the rest tend to pass. He even admits this to Lightning Dawn before the latter chooses to join.
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I'm sorry for all my own edits! DX
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* AdaptationNameChange: Several will be present throughout the fic. Listen Listed in order of appearance:
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May as well add any and all changes I made here, right?
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* AdaptationNameChange: Several will be present throughout the fic. Listen in order of appearance:
** Unicornicopia is now Neo-Equestria, for instance.
** Krystahas been renamed Crystal.--> Crystal.
** Violet Swamp --> Amethyst Bog
** Unicornicopia is now Neo-Equestria, for instance.
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** Violet Swamp --> Amethyst Bog
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* RecursiveFanfiction: It's a FixFic ''of'' a [[MindScrew Fix Fic that happens to be a]] HateFic.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: It's a FixFic ''of'' a [[MindScrew Fix Fic that ([[MindScrew the latter of which also happens to be a]] HateFic.HateFic).
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Again, hope nobody minds...if they do, I'll stop editing my own page.
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As ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn Starfleet Magic]]'' has a sizable {{hatedom}}, a fic ([[FanFic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis or]] [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony three]]) that deconstructs it was inevitable.
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As ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn Starfleet Magic]]'' has a sizable {{hatedom}}, a fic ([[FanFic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis or]] [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony three]]) that deconstructs it was inevitable.
inevitable. Or at least, one FixFic.
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Wow, my work has a trope page now! I just decided to add something to it, actually. Hope it isn't against the rules. ^^;
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In the far-off reaches of Neo-Equestria, a race of actually heroic space ponies venture across the universe to save any planets in need of dire assistance. For nearly a millennium, they served to protect, acting as a beacon of hope. But an ancient evil has begun to awaken from its long imprisonment, and so it's up to the newer generation of ponies to save the day!
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In the far-off reaches of Neo-Equestria, a race of '''''[[AdaptationalHeroism actually heroic heroic]]''''' space ponies venture across the universe to save any planets in need of dire assistance. For nearly a millennium, they served to protect, acting as a beacon of hope. But an ancient evil has begun to awaken from its long imprisonment, and so it's up to the newer generation of ponies to save the day!
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It can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/278960/my-brave-pony-starfleet-nemesis here]].
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It can be read [[http://www.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/278960/my-brave-pony-starfleet-nemesis net/story/380041/starfleet-redone-season-1 here]].
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Granted, I'm not sure that this fic is a deconstruction...
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In the far-off reaches of Neo-Equestria, a race of actually heroic space ponies venture across the universe to save any planets in need of dire assistance. For nearly a millennium, they served to protect, acting as a beacon of hope. But an ancient evil has begun to awaken from its long imprisonment, and so it's up to the newer generation of ponies to save the day!
But as they do, they have to come face to face with several powerful monsters, crafty henchmen, and their own inner demons as they discover the true meaning of friendship wherever they go. They must make new allies in the most unlikely of places, and work together to bring down the dark sorcerer that threatens all of existence, even as their struggle brings them to a world similar to their own...
Let the adventures begin!
It can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/278960/my-brave-pony-starfleet-nemesis here]].
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!!This story provides examples of:
* AdaptationNameChange: Krysta has been renamed Crystal.
* IdentityAmnesia: Lightning Dawn and Crystal met each other on the first day they could remember.
* ThePowerOfFriendship: The Grand Ruler believes a Starfleet officer’s greatest weapon is their bond with those around them.
In the far-off reaches of Neo-Equestria, a race of actually heroic space ponies venture across the universe to save any planets in need of dire assistance. For nearly a millennium, they served to protect, acting as a beacon of hope. But an ancient evil has begun to awaken from its long imprisonment, and so it's up to the newer generation of ponies to save the day!
But as they do, they have to come face to face with several powerful monsters, crafty henchmen, and their own inner demons as they discover the true meaning of friendship wherever they go. They must make new allies in the most unlikely of places, and work together to bring down the dark sorcerer that threatens all of existence, even as their struggle brings them to a world similar to their own...
Let the adventures begin!
It can be read [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/278960/my-brave-pony-starfleet-nemesis here]].
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!!This story provides examples of:
* AdaptationNameChange: Krysta has been renamed Crystal.
* IdentityAmnesia: Lightning Dawn and Crystal met each other on the first day they could remember.
* ThePowerOfFriendship: The Grand Ruler believes a Starfleet officer’s greatest weapon is their bond with those around them.
