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* FurBikini: Rokuna, cosplaying as Lum in ''Birthday of Destiny''.

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* FurBikini: Rokuna, cosplaying as Lum [[UruseiYatsura Lum]] in ''Birthday of Destiny''.
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*** Konata compares Yutaka to [[{{Kanon}} Ayu Tsukimiya]] in chapter 2.

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*** Konata compares Yutaka to [[{{Kanon}} [[VisualNovel/{{Kanon}} Ayu Tsukimiya]] in chapter 2.
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*** [[https://charahub.com/user/McKnight While he has also yet to appear]], [[spoiler: Ivo's full name is a reference to both [[SonicSatAM Dr. Ivo Robotnik]] and [[MegaManZero Dr. Weil]]. His planned design is after [[http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100909213637/megaman/images/5/57/MMZCW_Dr_Weil.jpg a teenage prototype]] of the latter character.]]

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*** [[https://charahub.com/user/McKnight While he has also yet to appear]], [[spoiler: Ivo's full name is a reference to both [[SonicSatAM [[WesternAnimation/SonicSatAM Dr. Ivo Robotnik]] and [[MegaManZero [[VideoGame/MegaManZero Dr. Weil]]. His planned design is after [[http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100909213637/megaman/images/5/57/MMZCW_Dr_Weil.jpg a teenage prototype]] of the latter character.]]
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*** [[spoiler: The cell phone that Chitose gives her]] has a keychain of [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Madoka Kaname]] attached to it.

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*** [[spoiler: The cell phone that Chitose gives her]] has a keychain of [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagica [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Madoka Kaname]] attached to it.
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* ThrowItIn: That whole storyline about buying stuff for Gyopi all started with what might have been either an artistic shortcut or [[ArtisticLicenceAnimalCare simply assuming that water and rocks are a sufficient environment for fish to live in]]. To start with, the author had Kagami give a few simple instructions to Inori and Matsuri on how to take care of it, simply because it was already canon. His main beta-reader explained more that there is to it (as well as assuming it lived in a bowl or tank, due to a lack of familiarity of the show). He then showed his beta a certain scene from the anime's 15th episode, to which she replied how insufficient a habitat it is.

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* PlotTumor: That whole storyline about buying stuff for Gyopi all started with what might have been either an artistic shortcut or [[ArtisticLicenceAnimalCare simply assuming that water and rocks are a sufficient environment for fish to live in]]. To start with, the author had Kagami give a few simple instructions to Inori and Matsuri on how to take care of it, simply because it was already canon. His main beta-reader explained more that there is to it (as well as assuming it lived in a bowl or tank, due to a lack of familiarity of the show). He then showed his beta a certain scene from the anime's 15th episode, to which she replied how insufficient a habitat it is.


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* ThrowItIn: That whole storyline about buying stuff for Gyopi all started with what might have been either an artistic shortcut or [[ArtisticLicenceAnimalCare simply assuming that water and rocks are a sufficient environment for fish to live in]]. To start with, the author had Kagami give a few simple instructions to Inori and Matsuri on how to take care of it, simply because it was already canon. His main beta-reader explained more that there is to it (as well as assuming it lived in a bowl or tank, due to a lack of familiarity of the show). He then showed his beta a certain scene from the anime's 15th episode, to which she replied how insufficient a habitat it is.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Rokuna's hair was green in MonColleKnights. Here, it's brown.

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* AdaptationDyeJob: Rokuna's hair was green in MonColleKnights.''Anime/MonColleKnights''. Here, it's brown.



* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: '''Averted'''. Unlike his [[MonColleKnights MCK]] counterpart, Mondo does not actually hit up on any of the girls, the reason the original Rokuna comically beat him up, although though he ''does'' refer to them as "chicks" and "hot-babes". This trope is not one that the author is fond of, given how rarely it's played with the gender roles reversed.

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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: '''Averted'''. Unlike his [[MonColleKnights [[Anime/MonColleKnights MCK]] counterpart, Mondo does not actually hit up on any of the girls, the reason the original Rokuna comically beat him up, although though he ''does'' refer to them as "chicks" and "hot-babes". This trope is not one that the author is fond of, given how rarely it's played with the gender roles reversed.



* {{Expy}}: Rokuna's friends Rin, Junko, and Chitose are those respectively of Lei Lei, Beginner, and Hanazono no Utahime[[note]]Known as Kahimi in the English dub[[/note]] from MonColleKnights.

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* {{Expy}}: Rokuna's friends Rin, Junko, and Chitose are those respectively of Lei Lei, Beginner, and Hanazono no Utahime[[note]]Known as Kahimi in the English dub[[/note]] from MonColleKnights.''Anime/MonColleKnights''.



* LethalChef: As per MonColleKnights, Rokuna's cooking in chapter 2 is so overly rich in garlic that Miyuki becomes nauseous and goes outside upon trying some of it out.

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* LethalChef: As per MonColleKnights, ''Anime/MonColleKnights'', Rokuna's cooking in chapter 2 is so overly rich in garlic that Miyuki becomes nauseous and goes outside upon trying some of it out.



** Rokuna's off-putting cuisine in chapter 2, adapted straight from [[MonColleKnights her source series]].

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** Rokuna's off-putting cuisine in chapter 2, adapted straight from [[MonColleKnights [[Anime/MonColleKnights her source series]].



*** Rokuna's horrid cooking is a recurring gag from MonColleKnights.

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*** Rokuna's horrid cooking is a recurring gag from MonColleKnights.''Anime/MonColleKnights''.
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** The latter half of the first chapter is an entire homage to the beginning of Earthbound, with some of EarthboundZero thrown in:

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** The latter half of the first chapter is an entire homage to the beginning of Earthbound, with some of EarthboundZero ''VideoGame/EarthBoundBeginnings'' thrown in:



** Shigesato, as established above, was named after the very creator of Earthbound. He is also an expy of George from EarthboundZero, complete with having kept a diary of relevant events.

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** Shigesato, as established above, was named after the very creator of Earthbound. He is also an expy of George from EarthboundZero, ''VideoGame/EarthBoundBeginnings'', complete with having kept a diary of relevant events.
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** During chapter 3, Konata mentions Hiyori having worn her hair upwards to Comiket the previous summer. This refers to a piece of fanart that the author had a friend photoshop for him and [[http://forums.luckystarshrine.com/showthread.php?t=4730 keeps as his signature on the Lucky Star Shrine Forum]].

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** During chapter 3, Konata mentions Hiyori having worn her hair upwards to Comiket the previous summer. This refers to a piece of fanart promotional artwork that the author had a friend photoshop for him and [[http://forums.luckystarshrine.com/showthread.php?t=4730 keeps as his signature on the Lucky Star Shrine Forum]].

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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: The main four agree with Rokuna to meet up somewhere in a forest between her house and Konata's. Google Maps will reveal that there are no woods anywhere near Konata's house, whose real-life coordinates are [[http://luckystar.wikia.com/wiki/Izumi_Household specified on the wiki]].



* GeographicFlexibility: The main four agree with Rokuna to meet up somewhere in a forest between her house and Konata's. Google Maps will reveal that there are no woods anywhere near Konata's house, whose real-life coordinates are [[http://luckystar.wikia.com/wiki/Izumi_Household specified on the wiki]].
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* PlotTumor: That whole storyline about buying stuff for Gyopi all started with what might have been either an artistic shortcut or [[ArtisticLicenceAnimalCare simply assuming that water and rocks are a sufficient environment for fish to live in]]. To start with, the author had Kagami give a few simple instructions to Inori and Matsuri on how to take care of it, simply because it was already canon. His main beta-reader explained more that there is to it (as well as assuming it lived in a bowl or tank, due to a lack of familiarity of the show). He then showed his beta a certain scene from the anime's 15th episode, to which she replied how insufficient a habitat it is.
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: ''Averted''. Unlike his [[MonColleKnights MCK]] counterpart, Mondo does not actually hit up on any of the girls, the reason the original Rokuna comically beat him up, although though he ''does'' refer to them as "chicks" and "hot-babes". This trope is not one that the author is fond of, given how rarely it's played with the gender roles reversed.

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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: ''Averted''.'''Averted'''. Unlike his [[MonColleKnights MCK]] counterpart, Mondo does not actually hit up on any of the girls, the reason the original Rokuna comically beat him up, although though he ''does'' refer to them as "chicks" and "hot-babes". This trope is not one that the author is fond of, given how rarely it's played with the gender roles reversed.
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Averted. Unlike his [[MonColleKnights MCK]] counterpart, Mondo does not actually hit up on any of the girls, the reason the original Rokuna comically beat him up, although though he ''does'' refer to them as "chicks" and "hot-babes". This trope is not one that the author is fond of, given how rarely it's played with the gender roles reversed.

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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Averted.''Averted''. Unlike his [[MonColleKnights MCK]] counterpart, Mondo does not actually hit up on any of the girls, the reason the original Rokuna comically beat him up, although though he ''does'' refer to them as "chicks" and "hot-babes". This trope is not one that the author is fond of, given how rarely it's played with the gender roles reversed.
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*** [[spoiler: Nursen derives her family name from that of a Turkish couple that the author's father was once friends with.]]

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*** [[spoiler: Nursen NurÅŸen derives her family name from that of a Turkish couple that the author's father was once friends with.]]
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-->''Rokuna was so flattered by everyone's comments, that she failed to notice at first how truly mortified Mondo was. The boy gritted his teeth, not used to wearing speedos, let alone in a room mostly full of thoroughly-dressed girls commenting on his nearly-naked male body. Rin, Chitose, Patricia, Ayano, Yui, Yutaka, Hiyori, Matsuri, every single one of them.''

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-->''Rokuna was so flattered by everyone's comments, that she failed to notice at first how truly mortified Mondo was. The boy gritted his teeth, not used to wearing speedos, let alone in a room mostly full of thoroughly-dressed girls commenting on on'' his nearly-naked ''nearly-naked male body. Rin, Chitose, Patricia, Ayano, Yui, Yutaka, Hiyori, Matsuri, every single one of them.''
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* [[EmbarrassingButEmpoweringOutfit Embarrassing but Empowering Hairstyle]]: The Magé Stones grant their hosts sixth senses and psionic powers to hone, but need a lot of hair to wrap themselves around first. Kagami and Miyuki don't like it.

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* [[EmbarrassingButEmpoweringOutfit Embarrassing but Empowering Hairstyle]]: The Magé Stones grant their hosts sixth senses and psionic powers to hone, but need a lot of hair to wrap themselves around nest in first. Kagami and Miyuki don't like it.
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* CuteKitten: Tsukasa pets one, and even squeezes it against her face, at a pet store.

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* CuteKitten: Tsukasa pets one, one at a pet store, and even squeezes it against her face, at a pet store.face.
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* SurpriseParty: Held in ''Birthday of Destiny''. [[GenreSavvy Rokuna anticipates it]] ''long'' before her friends can pull it off.
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* PapaWolf: Played straight and inverted simultaneously during the poltergeist attack, where Kagami saves him with a baseball bat after he himself re-entered the house to save Tsukasa. Played again when both he and Soujiro (along with Yui) drive the Starman Jr. away from the latter's house while everyone else flees.

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* PapaWolf: Played straight and inverted simultaneously during the poltergeist attack, where Kagami saves him Tadao with a baseball bat after he himself re-entered the house to save Tsukasa. Played again when both he and Soujiro (along with Yui) drive the Starman Jr. away from the latter's house while everyone else flees.
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** The very first lines in the fic are a spin on how Earthbound begins.
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* ChekhovsGunman: While she first appears in homeroom after Minoru tells Konata about Miyuki's incident, Nanako's actual involvement in things begins with a cutaway at the end of chapter 2 before becoming directly involved with the main characters. Who better than her to drive them to the beach once the first PlotCoupon is revealed.

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* ChekhovsGunman: While she first appears in homeroom after Minoru tells Konata about Miyuki's incident, Nanako's actual involvement in things begins with a cutaway at the end of chapter 2 2, when she's playing her [=MMO=] and receives the news from Konata. From there, she drives to Konata's house to speak with Soujiro, before becoming directly involved with paying the main characters.party a visit at the twins house and being directed to Rokuna's. Who better than her to drive them to the beach once the first PlotCoupon is revealed.
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* ChekhovsGunman: Nanako first appears in a cutaway at the end of chapter 2 before becoming directly involved with the main characters. Who better than her to drive them to the beach once the first PlotCoupon is revealed.

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* ChekhovsGunman: Nanako While she first appears in homeroom after Minoru tells Konata about Miyuki's incident, Nanako's actual involvement in things begins with a cutaway at the end of chapter 2 before becoming directly involved with the main characters. Who better than her to drive them to the beach once the first PlotCoupon is revealed.

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*** Rokuna's horrid cooking is a recurring gag from MonColleKnights.



*** Rokuna's horrid cooking is a recurring gag from MonColleKnights.
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*** And like with Pokey and Picky from their own parents, an earful from their entire family awaited Tsukasa and Kagami once they got to Rokuna's family. (Good thing ''they'' have a much more loving family than the Minchs.)

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*** And like with Pokey and Picky from their own parents, an earful from their entire family awaited Tsukasa and Kagami once they got to Rokuna's family.house. (Good thing ''they'' have a much more loving family than the Minchs.)
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** Rokuna's off-putting cuisine in chapter 2, adapted straight from [[MonColleKnights her source series]].
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*** Patricia's first of two lines in chapter 5 is a reference to ''The Chris & Scottie Road Trip'', in which a Taco Bell is shown in the background when the titular duo visits "Mexico".
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--> '''Kagami:''' ''[[{{Hypocrite}} You're one to talk, Patricia.]]''

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--> '''Kagami:''' ''[[{{Hypocrite}} ''[[{{HypocriticalHumor}} You're one to talk, Patricia.]]''
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* {{Expy}}: Rokuna's friends Rin, Junko, and Chitose are those respectively of Lei Lei, Beginner, and Hanazono no Utahime from MonColleKnights.

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* {{Expy}}: Rokuna's friends Rin, Junko, and Chitose are those respectively of Lei Lei, Beginner, and Hanazono no Utahime Utahime[[note]]Known as Kahimi in the English dub[[/note]] from MonColleKnights.
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* LethalChef: As per MonColleKnights, Rokuna's cooking in chapter 2 is so rich overly in garlic that Miyuki becomes nauseous and goes outside upon trying some of it out.

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* LethalChef: As per MonColleKnights, Rokuna's cooking in chapter 2 is so rich overly rich in garlic that Miyuki becomes nauseous and goes outside upon trying some of it out.
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** Kagami asks Mondo to get "out of [Miyuki's] hair" upon speaking to him for the first time.

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** Kagami asks Chapter 4 begins with Mondo asking Miyuki some stuff about her hair and the Magé Stone inhabiting it after she leaves the burger joint restroom. Kagami, sensing the exchange and mistaking him for just another pest, asks him to get "out of [Miyuki's] hair" upon speaking to him for the first time.before noticing that Rokuna actually knows him.

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