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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17741579/chapters/41858024 Snow Leopard]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fanficton by [[@/{{Shyhero}} Hero_Shepherd]]. It tells the story of Weiss Shine rediscovering a part of her identity that she didn't realize she was missing, that she was actually a faunus. Jaune helps her regrow her tail.
Over the course of her first day after regrowing her tail, Weiss has to manage public relations, helping her friends, Faunus racism, the worst of which comes from her own father.
Over the course of her first day after regrowing her tail, Weiss has to manage public relations, helping her friends, Faunus racism, the worst of which comes from her own father.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17741579/chapters/41858024 Snow Leopard]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fanficton fanfiction by [[@/{{Shyhero}} Hero_Shepherd]]. It tells the story of Weiss Shine rediscovering a part of her identity that she didn't realize she was missing, that she was actually a faunus. Jaune helps her regrow her tail.
Over the course of her first day after regrowing her tail, Weiss has to manage public relations, helping her friends, and Faunus racism, the worst of which comes from her own father.
Over the course of her first day after regrowing her tail, Weiss has to manage public relations, helping her friends, and Faunus racism, the worst of which comes from her own father.
%%* BackForTheDead: Penny is brought back in the fic.
%%* CuteMute: [[spler: Neoplitan]]
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%%* DynamicEntry: Penny is brought back into the story by crash landing.
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* GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere: The writer doesn't even know how Team CRDL got in the city.
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* GiantSpaceFleaFromNowhere: The writer doesn't even know how Team CRDL got in into the city.
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* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: The writer usually uses a full stop in the dialogue when a comma is what you're supposed to use.
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* BigEater: Nora normally, and Weiss temporarily as a side effect of regrowing a limb.
* CircusBrat: [[spoiler: Neopolitan]]
* FantasticRacism: The Faunus.
* CircusBrat: [[spoiler: Neopolitan]]
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* GoodCostumeSwitch: [[spoiler: Neopolitan receives a small one with a cute pink hoodie.]]
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* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Everybody else orders fairly normal things at an ice cream place, Nora doesn't...
* TheGenieKnowsJackNicholson: Real-world songs are referenced in the story.
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Being outed as a faunus doesn't change anything about Jakque's racism to his own covering.
* TheGenieKnowsJackNicholson: Real-world songs are referenced in the story.
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Being outed as a faunus doesn't change anything about Jakque's racism to his own covering.
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%%* BigEater: Nora normally, and Weiss temporarily as a side effect of regrowing a limb.
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%%* BizarroUniverse: Ruby claims to have been too one off-screen.
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* AccentAdaptation: Velvet has an Australian accent in the story. [[spoiler: Neopaltan is translated with a French one.]]
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* AccentAdaptation: Velvet has an Australian accent in the story. [[spoiler: Neopaltan Neopolitan is translated with a French one.]]
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%%* BizarroUniverse: Ruby claims to have been too one off-screen.
* CircusBrat: [[spoiler: Neoplatian]]
* CircusBrat: [[spoiler: Neoplatian]]
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* NoodleIncident: Ruby casually mentions that she was in the reverse world at some point.
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* InterfaceSpoiler: [[spoiler: Neopolitan's presence is a plot twist spoiled by AO3 tags.]]
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* InterfaceSpoiler: [[spoiler: Neopolitan's presence is a plot twist spoiled by AO3 [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]] tags.]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17741579/chapters/41858024 Snow Leopard]] is a ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fanficton by [[@/{{Shyhero}} Hero_Shepherd]]. It tells the story of Weiss Shine rediscovering a part of her identity that she didn't realize she was missing, that she was actually a faunus. Jaune helps her regrow her tail.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17741579/chapters/41858024 Snow Leopard]] is a WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Fan Fiction.''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' fanficton by [[@/{{Shyhero}} Hero_Shepherd]]. It tells the story of Weiss Shine rediscovering a part of her identity that she didn't realize she was missing, that she was actually a faunus. Jaune helps her regrow her tail.
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Over the course of her first day after regrowing her tail, Weiss has to manage public relations, helping her friends, faunus racism, the worst of which comes from her own father.
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Over the course of her first day after regrowing her tail, Weiss has to manage public relations, helping her friends, faunus Faunus racism, the worst of which comes from her own father.
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%%* FantasticRacism: The faunus.Faunus.
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* InterfaceSpoiler: [[spoiler: Neopolitan's presses presence is a plot twist spoiled by AO3 tags.]]
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Over the course of her first day after regrowing her tail, Weiss has to manage public relations, helping her friends, faunus racism, The worst of which comes from her own father.
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[[folder: tropes]]
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Over the course of her first day after regrowing her tail, Weiss has to manage public relations, helping her friends, faunus racism, The the worst of which comes from her own father.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: At least a fifth of the time, the text accidentally uses "where" instead of the verb "were".
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* TomatoInTheMirror: Weiss is a faunus.
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* FantasticRacism: The faunus.
* Fiction500: Jacque Has enough money to buy an entire continent several times over just in a secret account.
* GiantSpaceFleafromNowhere: the writer doesn't even know how Team CRDL got in the city.
* GoodCostumeSwitch: [[spoiler: Neopolitan receives a small one with a cute pink hoodie.]]
* FantasticRacism: The faunus.
* Fiction500: Jacque Has enough money to buy an entire continent several times over just in a secret account.
* GiantSpaceFleafromNowhere: the writer doesn't even know how Team CRDL got in the city.
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* TheGenieKnowsJackNicholson: Real-world songs are referenced in the story.
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* InterfaceSpoiler: [[spoiler: Neoplaitan's Neopolitan's presses is a plot twist spoiled by AO3 tags.]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17741579/chapters/41858024 Snow Leopard]] is a WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} Fan Fiction. It tells the story of Weiss Shine rediscovering a part of her identity that she didn't realize she was missing, that she was actually a faunus. Jaune helps her regrow her tail.
Over the course of her first day after regrowing her tail, Weiss has to manage public relations, helping her friends, faunus racism, The worst of which comes from her own father.
[[spoiler: Neopolitan joins the group. She also turns out to be a faunus and Weiss's cousin.]]
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* AccentAdaptation: Velvet has an Australian accent in the story. [[spoiler: Neopaltan is translated with a French one.]]
* BigEater: Nora normally, and Weiss temporarily as a side effect of regrowing a limb.
* FantasticRacism: The faunus.
* Fiction500: Jacque Has enough money to buy an entire continent several times over just in a secret account.
* GiantSpaceFleafromNowhere: the writer doesn't even know how Team CRDL got in the city.
* GoodCostumeSwitch: [[spoiler: Neopolitan receives a small one with a cute pink hoodie.]]
* GotMeDoingIt: Velvet says "crikey" a few times in the fic, and so do Nora, Ruby, and Weiss.
* InterfaceSpoiler: [[spoiler: Neoplaitan's presses is a plot twist spoiled by AO3 tags.]]
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Everybody else orders fairly normal things at an ice cream place, Nora doesn't...
* TheGenieKnowsJackNicholson: Real-world songs are referenced in the story.
* TomatoInTheMirror: Weiss is a faunus.
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Being outed as a faunus Doesn't change anything about Jakque's racism to his own covering
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Over the course of her first day after regrowing her tail, Weiss has to manage public relations, helping her friends, faunus racism, The worst of which comes from her own father.
[[spoiler: Neopolitan joins the group. She also turns out to be a faunus and Weiss's cousin.]]
[[folder: tropes]]
* AccentAdaptation: Velvet has an Australian accent in the story. [[spoiler: Neopaltan is translated with a French one.]]
* BigEater: Nora normally, and Weiss temporarily as a side effect of regrowing a limb.
* FantasticRacism: The faunus.
* Fiction500: Jacque Has enough money to buy an entire continent several times over just in a secret account.
* GiantSpaceFleafromNowhere: the writer doesn't even know how Team CRDL got in the city.
* GoodCostumeSwitch: [[spoiler: Neopolitan receives a small one with a cute pink hoodie.]]
* GotMeDoingIt: Velvet says "crikey" a few times in the fic, and so do Nora, Ruby, and Weiss.
* InterfaceSpoiler: [[spoiler: Neoplaitan's presses is a plot twist spoiled by AO3 tags.]]
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: Everybody else orders fairly normal things at an ice cream place, Nora doesn't...
* TheGenieKnowsJackNicholson: Real-world songs are referenced in the story.
* TomatoInTheMirror: Weiss is a faunus.
* YouAreWhatYouHate: Being outed as a faunus Doesn't change anything about Jakque's racism to his own covering
[[/folder]]
