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* AdaptationExpansion: The way the author wants his retelling to do so in canon, especially it's about Shu's POV.
* AscendedExtra: Pretty much the rest of Funeral Parlor besides Ayase and Tsugumi. Kyo has some role for Shu in a mission before her death.
* AscendedExtra: Pretty much the rest of Funeral Parlor besides Ayase and Tsugumi. Kyo has some role for Shu in a mission before her death.
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* NaiveNewcomer: Shu when joining Funeral Parlor, even the point when the mercenaries called him 'rookie'.
* OriginsEpisode: Chapter 14 of Funeral Parlor's history.
* OriginsEpisode: Chapter 14 of Funeral Parlor's history.
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* NaiveNewcomer: Shu when joining Funeral Parlor, even to the point when that the mercenaries called call him 'rookie'.
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%%* TheHero: Shu Ouma.
%%* TheHeroine: Inori Yuzuriha.
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* LaResistance: Funeral Parlor.
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* LaResistance: Funeral Parlor.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7987310/1/Shackles-of-Guilt Shackles of Guilt]] is a complete reconstruction of Anime/GuiltyCrown, done by the author, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3871014/Vuken Vuken]]. It is an attempt to give more logic and coherence to the story and redeem the main protagonist, Shu Ouma, by making him epic while keeping the "Guilty Crown" theme.
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!!''Shackles of Guilt'' provide examples
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* ThatManIsDead: Implied in a heroic sense in Chapter 7 (Interlude 6.5) when describing that 'Shu' and 'Triton' were 'dead', while 'Shu of Funeral Parlor' and 'Tsutsugami Gai' are born.
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* ThatManIsDead: Implied in a heroic sense in Chapter 7 (Interlude 6.5) when describing that 'Shu' and 'Triton' were 'dead', while 'Shu of Funeral Parlor' and 'Tsutsugami Gai' are born.born.
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*OriginsEpisode: Chapter 14 of Funeral Parlor's history.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Shu Ouma becomes one.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Shu Ouma becomes one.one, especially joining Funeral Parlor right away.
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* NaiveNewcomer: Shu when joining Funeral Parlor, even the point when the mercenaries called him 'rookie'.
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* LaResistance: Funeral Parlor.
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* LaResistance: Funeral Parlor.Parlor.
* ThatManIsDead: Implied in a heroic sense in Chapter 7 (Interlude 6.5) when describing that 'Shu' and 'Triton' were 'dead', while 'Shu of Funeral Parlor' and 'Tsutsugami Gai' are born.
* ThatManIsDead: Implied in a heroic sense in Chapter 7 (Interlude 6.5) when describing that 'Shu' and 'Triton' were 'dead', while 'Shu of Funeral Parlor' and 'Tsutsugami Gai' are born.
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* ForgottenFirstMeeting: Shu and Gai as childhood friends actually reunited and remember each other early on in Chapter 6.
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* TheHeroine: Inori Yuzuriha.
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* TheHeroine: Inori Yuzuriha.Yuzuriha.
*LaResistance: Funeral Parlor.
*LaResistance: Funeral Parlor.
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*TheHero: Shu Ouma.
*TheHeroine: Inori Yuzuriha.
*TheHero: Shu Ouma.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7987310/1/Shackles-of-Guilt Shackles of Guilt]] is a complete reconstruction of Anime/GuiltyCrown, done by the author, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3871014/Vuken Vuken]]. It is an attempt to give more logic and coherence to the story and redeem the main protagonist, Shu Ouma, by making him epic while keeping the "Guilty Crown" theme.
!The story provide examples of:
*AdaptationalBadass: Shu Ouma becomes one.
*AdaptationalExpansion: The way the author wants his retelling to do so in canon.
!The story provide examples of:
*AdaptationalBadass: Shu Ouma becomes one.
*AdaptationalExpansion: The way the author wants his retelling to do so in canon.
