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* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: During his TheReasonYouSuck speech to [[spoiler:everyone involved in the peace talks, Jaune goes through Cinder, Adam, Ironwood, and Ozpin while systematically explaining everything wrong with their ideologies. Then he gets to Roman, calls him useless, and moves on]].

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* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: During his TheReasonYouSuck speech to When Jaune snaps and lashes out at [[spoiler:everyone involved in the peace talks, Jaune goes through Cinder, Adam, Ironwood, and Ozpin while systematically explaining everything wrong with their ideologies. Then he gets to Roman, calls him useless, and moves on]].
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* ContinuityNod: Adam tells Mercury about a female White Fang operative who also fell for Blake, clearly referring to Ilia.

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* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: During his TheReasonYouSuck speech to [[spoiler:everyone involved in the peace talks, Jaune goes through Cinder, Adam, Ironwood, and Ozpin while systematically explaining everything wrong with their ideologies. Then he gets to Roman, calls him useless, and moves on]].



* OnlySaneMan: Inverted with Sterling. While everyone else working for Café Prime is fairly reasonable, Sterling has to be repeatedly stopped from making a bad situation worse for himself. For example, when Sterling shows up at Jaune's cafe with a lawyer and bodyguard demanding a meeting with Jaune, his lawyer accepts the request to make an appointment for the next day (Jaune was taking the day off due to lack of sleep) while Sterling starts shouting for Velvet to bring Jaune to him and for everyone in the cafe to leave immediately because he demands it be closed.

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Inverted with Sterling. While everyone else working for Café Prime is fairly reasonable, Sterling has to be repeatedly stopped from making a bad situation worse for himself. For example, when Sterling shows up at Jaune's cafe with a lawyer and bodyguard demanding a meeting with Jaune, his lawyer accepts the request to make an appointment for the next day (Jaune was taking the day off due to lack of sleep) while Sterling starts shouting for Velvet to bring Jaune to him and for everyone in the cafe to leave immediately because he demands it be closed.closed.
** [[spoiler:Jaune lampshades how ridiculous it is that out of everyone involved in the peace talks, Adam is the only one who is acting any degree of reasonable]].
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** Jaune's problems with Café Prim officially end after the breach, when he gives out most of his gifts to those injured. His generosity and goodwill make him so beloved that he is untouchable to Café Prime, as it would destroy their reputation.
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* MoralMyopia: [[spoiler:Cinder claims that she earned the Maiden's power by defeating Amber in fair combat, and that Ozpin twisted the nautral power inheritence by transferring it to Pyrrha instead. Leaving aside the question of whether a three-on-one ambush counts as "fair," she also used a Grimm parasite to steal the power; this is why she only got half of it in the first place]].

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* MoralMyopia: [[spoiler:Cinder claims that she earned the Maiden's power by defeating Amber in fair combat, and that Ozpin twisted the nautral natural power inheritence inheritance by transferring it to Pyrrha instead. Leaving aside the question of whether a three-on-one ambush counts as "fair," she also used a Grimm parasite to steal the power; this is why she only got half of it in the first place]].

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* BlackAndWhiteInsanity: Jaune feels this way when [[spoiler:peace talks between Ozpin's faction and Cinder's faction break down. Neither side is willing to compromise at all, or even admit that they are wrong in the slightest. While Jaune is missing a ''lot'' of context (such as the part where Cinder is knowingly working for a woman dedicated to wiping out the human race), he is right that neither side is negotiating in good faith. The one actual decent compromise (the White Fang gives up its leaders to be legally punished in exchange for Faunus rights) gets dismissed out of hand, and Jaune eventually snaps]].



* DeathSeeker: Somewhere along the way, Adam stopped caring about his own life. Blake specifically notes the similarity between this attitude and the attitude he demonstrated towards the SDC employees on the train. He wasn't going out of his way to kill them, but he saw no reason to try to save them. Likewise, he's not going to sacrifice his life needlessly, but he's not going to particularly care if it comes to that.

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Somewhere along the way, Adam stopped caring about his own life. Blake specifically notes the similarity between this attitude and the attitude he demonstrated towards the SDC employees on the train. He wasn't going out of his way to kill them, but he saw no reason to try to save them. Likewise, he's not going to sacrifice his life needlessly, but he's not going to particularly care if it comes to that.that.
** During negotiations, [[spoiler:Adam agrees to be arrested or executed without a blink if that's what it takes to get Ironwood to grant the White Fang what they want]].



* HonorBeforeReason: When [[spoiler:the Grimm start flooding into Vale]], Jaune refuses to leave an elderly couple that can't walk quickly, even when they ''insist'' that Jaune leave them behind, much to Miltia's chagrin.
-->'''Militia''': Of course you'd fucking risk your life to help someone else. You..You stupid fucking bastard.

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When [[spoiler:the Grimm start flooding into Vale]], Jaune refuses to leave an elderly couple that can't walk quickly, even when they ''insist'' that Jaune leave them behind, much to Miltia's chagrin.
-->'''Militia''': --->'''Militia''': Of course you'd fucking risk your life to help someone else. You..You... You stupid fucking bastard.bastard.
** During negotiations, [[spoiler:Ironwood dismisses pretty much every compromise suggested because he refuses to deal with terrorists. There are genuine problems with the suggested compromises (Adam wants the SDC punished for their crimes, but they are a MegaCorp with legions of lawyers, it's not that simple), but Ironwood is clearly insulted at the mere idea of negotiating with a terrorist. Jaune notes that while all the Kingdoms have some form of "we do not negotiate with terrorists" rule, Atlas tends to get ''really'' heavy-handed about it]].
* HumanShield: Ironwood accuses the White Fang of doing this by hiding in civilian Faunus populations. [[spoiler:Considering Atlas' habit of bombing those civilian populations ''anyway'', he doesn't have much of a leg to stand on. Even worse, Jaune points out that he is essentially hiding behind the civilians of Vale in the same way. Ironwood clearly hadn't even considered it]].


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* MoralMyopia: [[spoiler:Cinder claims that she earned the Maiden's power by defeating Amber in fair combat, and that Ozpin twisted the nautral power inheritence by transferring it to Pyrrha instead. Leaving aside the question of whether a three-on-one ambush counts as "fair," she also used a Grimm parasite to steal the power; this is why she only got half of it in the first place]].
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** [[spoiler: After seeing the peace negotiations go south]], Jaune snaps at everyone, smashing up the place, even cussing the various parties out and furiously calling them children. The sight of Jaune utterly losing it shocks everyone.

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* AgreeToDisagree: [[DownplayedTrope While they remain on opposite sides]], [[spoiler: Adam and Blake bury most of their animosity, and accept each other's choices, even if it means they may face each other in battle]].

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* AgreeToDisagree: [[DownplayedTrope While they remain on opposite sides]], [[spoiler: Adam [[spoiler:Adam and Blake bury most of their animosity, and accept each other's choices, even if it means they may face each other in battle]]. battle]].



* BadassCreed: Just as in author's other stories, unlocking somebody's aura comes with an unique chant, this time from Cinder. Surprisingly, it doesn't sound evil, just more cynical and, well, hardcore than the one Pyrrha gives.
-->It is in our darkest moments that we achieve strength. Through suffering, we gain the power to shape our own destiny. Infinite in potential and unbound by expectation, I release your soul, and by my hand, empower thee.



* BadassCreed: Just as in author's other stories, unlocking somebody's aura comes with an unique chant, this time from Cinder. Surprisingly, it doesn't sound evil, just more cynical and, well, hardcore than the one Pyrrha gives.
--> It is in our darkest moments that we achieve strength. Through suffering, we gain the power to shape our own destiny. Infinite in potential and unbound by expectation, I release your soul, and by my hand, empower thee.



* BeYourself: [[spoiler: When Miltia tries to act more feminine to get Jaune's attention, Melanie points out that Jaune does like her for who she is, and she shouldn't try and change for him]].
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Adam makes a point of ordering his men not to harm Jaune's diner or it's employees due to being one of the few places that neither discriminates against Faunus nor tolerates discrimination.

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* BeYourself: [[spoiler: When Miltia tries to act more feminine to get Jaune's attention, Melanie points out that Jaune does like her for who she is, and she shouldn't try and change for him]].
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Adam makes a point of ordering his men not to harm Jaune's diner or it's employees due to being one of the few places that neither discriminates against Faunus nor tolerates discrimination.



* BeYourself: [[spoiler:When Miltia tries to act more feminine to get Jaune's attention, Melanie points out that Jaune does like her for who she is, and she shouldn't try and change for him]].



** The Malachite Sisters and the Huntresses of Beacon, despite their mutual animosity [[spoiler: work together to help Jaune and his diner after the former is assaulted and robbed]]. Velvet even uses their term "Mutual enemies" to describe herself.

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** The Malachite Sisters and the Huntresses of Beacon, despite their mutual animosity [[spoiler: work [[spoiler:work together to help Jaune and his diner after the former is assaulted and robbed]]. Velvet even uses their term "Mutual enemies" to describe herself.



** Roman, despite being a criminal, looks down on street hoods, seeing them as immature and unprofessional. [[spoiler: He has particular contempt for one of the thugs who attacked Jaune and ransacked his diner, due to being some rich kid who wasted his potential on a drug habit]].

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** Roman, despite being a criminal, looks down on street hoods, seeing them as immature and unprofessional. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He has particular contempt for one of the thugs who attacked Jaune and ransacked his diner, due to being some rich kid who wasted his potential on a drug habit]].



* EvilVersusOblivion: [[spoiler: Junior and the Malachite twins decide to stop Cinder's plan-because their livelihoods depend on Vale ''not'' being overrun by Grimm]].
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* EvilVersusOblivion: [[spoiler: Junior [[spoiler:Junior and the Malachite twins decide to stop Cinder's plan-because their livelihoods depend on Vale ''not'' being overrun by Grimm]].
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* FairWeatherFriend: Russell is this toward Velvet. While he does get along well with Velvet at work, he is not willing to stick his neck out her when [[FantasticRacism she is bullied for her Faunus heritage]]. [[spoiler: He does begin to grow out of this]].

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* FairWeatherFriend: Russell is this toward Velvet. While he does get along well with Velvet at work, he is not willing to stick his neck out her when [[FantasticRacism she is bullied for her Faunus heritage]]. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He does begin to grow out of this]]. this]].



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* HeadTiltinglyKinky: [[spoiler: When Militia pins Jaune down in the middle of the cafe both [[MsFanservice Yang]] and [[CovertPervert Blake]] are stunned, and Yang even compares it to a zombie movie.]]

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* HeadTiltinglyKinky: [[spoiler: When [[spoiler:When Militia pins Jaune down in the middle of the cafe both [[MsFanservice Yang]] and [[CovertPervert Blake]] are stunned, and Yang even compares it to a zombie movie.]]



* HonorBeforeReason: When [[spoiler: the Grimm start flooding into Vale]], Jaune refuses to leave an elderly couple that can't walk quickly, even when they ''insist'' that Jaune leave them behind, much to Miltia's chagrin.

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* HonorBeforeReason: When [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the Grimm start flooding into Vale]], Jaune refuses to leave an elderly couple that can't walk quickly, even when they ''insist'' that Jaune leave them behind, much to Miltia's chagrin.



* INever: The Twins take Jaune to the club's private room with Neo and Pyrrha in Chapter 24 for a few rounds of this. We learn in short order that he's been caught masturbating, gone through public exposure, and never kissed a girl. [[spoiler:Milita and Pyrrha happily correct that last one. A minute each. With tongue.]]
* IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: Jaune's sister Coral has decided write a book about his work as a barista. When Jaune bluntly asks his father if it's smut, the older Arc's refusal to respond is telling.



* InnocentlyInsensitive:

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* InnocentlyInsensitive: INever: The Twins take Jaune to the club's private room with Neo and Pyrrha in Chapter 24 for a few rounds of this. We learn in short order that he's been caught masturbating, gone through public exposure, and never kissed a girl. [[spoiler:Milita and Pyrrha happily correct that last one. A minute each. With tongue.]]
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* InstantWebHit: Velvet taking down Sterling's bodyguard is filmed by Blake then uploaded to the internet. By the following day, the video has already gone viral.



* InstantWebHit: Velvet taking down Sterling's bodyguard is filmed by Blake then uploaded to the internet. By the following day, the video has already gone viral.



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* ItIsDehumanizing: IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: Jaune's sister Coral has decided write a book about his work as a barista. When Jaune bluntly asks his father if it's smut, the older Arc's refusal to respond is telling.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Cardin may be a racist but he also saved Russell's life from the latter's abusive father.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Cardin may be a racist but he also saved Russell's life from the latter's abusive father.
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** [[spoiler:It’s noted repeatedly that during his meeting with Cinder and Adam, Ozpin never tries to deny any of their points because no matter how morally wrong they may be, there’s still enough logic behind them to prevent a full rebuttal]].

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** [[spoiler:It’s [[spoiler:It's noted repeatedly that during his meeting with Cinder and Adam, Ozpin never tries to deny any of their points because no matter how morally wrong they may be, there’s there's still enough logic behind them to prevent a full rebuttal]].



* KickTheSonOfABitch:

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* KickTheSonOfABitch: JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Cardin may be a racist but he also saved Russell's life from the latter's abusive father.
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* [[invoked]]{{Moe}}: Velvet, which earns her a lot of fans online when videos of her talking to the press and taking down Sterling's bodyguard are uploaded. Russel lampshades that she just looks like she needs protecting, then has to look away, claiming "it's too powerful".



* [[invoked]]{{Moe}}: Velvet, which earns her a lot of fans online when videos of her talking to the press and taking down Sterling's bodyguard are uploaded. Russel lampshades that she just looks like she needs protecting, then has to look away, claiming "it's too powerful".



** An indirect example. [[spoiler: The thugs who put Jaune in the hospital and trash his business]] inadvertently put themselves in the crosshairs of the hormonal Huntsmen and Huntresses in training, and the [[TheUnfettered even less-morally restrained]] criminal underground, that love Jaune [=and/or=] his diner.

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** An indirect example. [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The thugs who put Jaune in the hospital and trash his business]] inadvertently put themselves in the crosshairs of the hormonal Huntsmen and Huntresses in training, and the [[TheUnfettered even less-morally restrained]] criminal underground, that love Jaune [=and/or=] his diner.



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* NeighborhoodFriendlyGangsters: Junior and his crew are this to Jaune, willing to go to bat for him [[spoiler: when a pack of violent criminals injure Jaune and trash his diner]].

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* NeighborhoodFriendlyGangsters: Junior and his crew are this to Jaune, willing to go to bat for him [[spoiler: when [[spoiler:when a pack of violent criminals injure Jaune and trash his diner]]. diner]].



* NoSympathy: Pyrrha laughs at Jaune's and Russel's sudden internet fame due to them standing up to Cafe Prime. Velvet she feels bad for.
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* NoSympathy: Pyrrha laughs at Jaune's and Russel's sudden internet fame due to them standing up to Cafe Prime. Velvet she feels bad for.
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* NotAfraidToDie:
** When the Grimm attack Vale, Mrs Higgens and her husband, an elderly couple that frequent Jaune's, refuse to flee for the shelters, citing that they'll never make it old as they are and they've lived good lives. Jaune, however, [[HonorBeforeReason refuses to leave them behind]].
** [[spoiler:Adam tells Ironwood that he’s willing to submit himself for execution if it means amnesty for the rest of the White Fang]].

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NoSympathy: Pyrrha laughs at Jaune's and Russel's sudden internet fame due to them standing up to Cafe Prime. Velvet she feels bad for.
* NotAfraidToDie:
** When the Grimm attack Vale, Mrs Higgens and her husband, an elderly couple that frequent Jaune's, refuse to flee for the shelters, citing that they'll never make it old as they are and they've lived good lives. Jaune, however, [[HonorBeforeReason refuses to leave them behind]].
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** [[spoiler:Adam tells Ironwood that he’s he's willing to submit himself for execution if it means amnesty for the rest of the White Fang]].



* NothingPersonal: Cinder tells [[spoiler:Pyrrha]] that she has nothing against the girl personally, but Cinder is tasked with getting either the Fall Maiden's powers or the Relic, meaning [[spoiler:Pyrrha]], as the new Fall Maiden, has to die.



* NothingPersonal: Cinder tells [[spoiler:Pyrrha]] that she has nothing against the girl personally, but Cinder is tasked with getting either the Fall Maiden's powers or the Relic, meaning [[spoiler:Pyrrha]], as the new Fall Maiden, has to die.



--> '''Ozpin''': So much evil, Glynda. How can one coffee chain contain so much evil?

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--> '''Ozpin''': -->'''Ozpin''': So much evil, Glynda. How can one coffee chain contain so much evil?



* PaedoHunt: Pyrrha once hugged her agent after a match and the media immediately assumed they were dating, despite her being underage. Even though his name was cleared, his life had been ruined to the point he quit to avoid future allegations.



* PaedoHunt: Pyrrha once hugged her agent after a match and the media immediately assumed they were dating, despite her being underage. Even though his name was cleared, his life had been ruined to the point he quit to avoid future allegations.



** Zigzagged with Cinder. Cinder ultimately sees Jaune's diner as little more than a place to discuss business, and implies that [[spoiler: she'll destroy it in her gambit for power]]. However, [[spoiler: she still somewhat comforts Jaune personally after he attacked by a pack of thugs, and unlocks his aura. While the latter can be explained as wanting to help him keep his business open for her own gain, the former can be chalked up as genuine fondness]].

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** Zigzagged with Cinder. Cinder ultimately sees Jaune's diner as little more than a place to discuss business, and implies that [[spoiler: she'll [[spoiler:she'll destroy it in her gambit for power]]. However, [[spoiler: she [[spoiler:she still somewhat comforts Jaune personally after he attacked by a pack of thugs, and unlocks his aura. While the latter can be explained as wanting to help him keep his business open for her own gain, the former can be chalked up as genuine fondness]].



** [[spoiler: Mercury doesn't care about Cinder's plan, and only follows her because [[LackOfEmpathy he also doesn't care about Vale]] and [[ForcedIntoEvil he wasn't in a position to say no to her.]]]]
** Junior suspects that [[spoiler: Roman squealed to Jaune because [[EvenEvilHasStandards he also didn't really want to join in the destruction of Vale, and was subconsciously hoping Jaune could help him find a way out]] ]].
* RageBreakingPoint: Jaune reaches his during [[spoiler:the meeting between Cinder, Adam, Ozpin, and Ironwood, during which he smashes a tray of cakes on the table, yells so ferociously that even General Ironwood sits down on his order, and then proceeds to curse out everyone in the room (except Pyrrha) as being prideful idiots who are going to destroy Vale if they won’t talk like adults. Other than Roman (who didn’t care anyway), everyone is shown to be more willing to compromise after his rant is over.]]
* RealMenWearPink: Junior is a mafia boss and addicted to Jaune's lattes. Chapter 39 reveals that his DrinkOrder is an extra large extra marshmallow chocolate sprinkle cappuccino.
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** [[spoiler: Mercury [[spoiler:Mercury doesn't care about Cinder's plan, and only follows her because [[LackOfEmpathy he also doesn't care about Vale]] and [[ForcedIntoEvil he wasn't in a position to say no to her.]]]]
** Junior suspects that [[spoiler: Roman [[spoiler:Roman squealed to Jaune because [[EvenEvilHasStandards he also didn't really want to join in the destruction of Vale, and was subconsciously hoping Jaune could help him find a way out]] ]].
* RageBreakingPoint: Jaune reaches his during [[spoiler:the meeting between Cinder, Adam, Ozpin, and Ironwood, during which he smashes a tray of cakes on the table, yells so ferociously that even General Ironwood sits down on his order, and then proceeds to curse out everyone in the room (except Pyrrha) as being prideful idiots who are going to destroy Vale if they won’t won't talk like adults. Other than Roman (who didn’t didn't care anyway), everyone is shown to be more willing to compromise after his rant is over.]]
* RealMenWearPink: Junior is a mafia boss and addicted to Jaune's lattes. Chapter 39 reveals that his DrinkOrder is an extra large extra marshmallow chocolate sprinkle cappuccino.
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** During the meeting, Jaune breaks a tray of cakes out of rage, cutting himself in multiple places, then proceeds to loudly curse out everyone in the room. While the speech succeeds in its goal, between the multiple sites of bleeding and the adrenaline crash he suffers, Jaune passes out as soon as he’s finished.

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** During the meeting, Jaune breaks a tray of cakes out of rage, cutting himself in multiple places, then proceeds to loudly curse out everyone in the room. While the speech succeeds in its goal, between the multiple sites of bleeding and the adrenaline crash he suffers, Jaune passes out as soon as he’s finished.he's finished.
* RealMenWearPink: Junior is a mafia boss and addicted to Jaune's lattes. Chapter 39 reveals that his DrinkOrder is an extra large extra marshmallow chocolate sprinkle cappuccino.



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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Nora has trouble being teammates with Cardin due to his alpha-male personality and FantasticRacism.



* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Nora has trouble being teammates with Cardin due to his alpha-male personality and FantasticRacism.



** The Malachite twins behave this way toward Jaune. They alternate between liking Jaune for his excellence service and food, teasing him with innuendos and treating him like an amusing pet, and seeing him as a somewhat silly friend. [[spoiler: The lengths they go to help Jaune rebuild his business and his spirits, imply that they do see him as a friend, but even then, they still deny it]]. Even they struggle to comprehend their true attitudes toward Jaune.

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** The Malachite twins behave this way toward Jaune. They alternate between liking Jaune for his excellence service and food, teasing him with innuendos and treating him like an amusing pet, and seeing him as a somewhat silly friend. [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The lengths they go to help Jaune rebuild his business and his spirits, imply that they do see him as a friend, but even then, they still deny it]]. Even they struggle to comprehend their true attitudes toward Jaune.



* VillainRespect: Adam Taurus comes to respect both Jaune and Velvet. Jaune, because he doesn't even consider discriminating against Faunus nor does he allow them to be discriminated against in his cafe. Velvet because she's managed to find the happiness and equality that the White Fang fight for.


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* JerkassHasAPoint: Both Russell and Velvet rather crudely call out Pyrrha on her belief that Jaune is her only real friend because "he can see past her fame" since he's completely ignorant of said fame.

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* NotAfraidToDie: When the Grimm attack Vale, Mrs Higgens and her husband, an elderly couple that frequent Jaune's, refuse to flee for the shelters, citing that they'll never make it old as they are and they've lived good lives. Jaune, however, [[HonorBeforeReason refuses to leave them behind]].

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* RageBreakingPoint: Jaune reaches his during [[spoiler:the meeting between Cinder, Adam, Ozpin, and Ironwood, during which he smashes a tray of cakes on the table, yells so ferociously that even General Ironwood sits down on his order, and then proceeds to curse out everyone in the room (except Pyrrha) as being prideful idiots who are going to destroy Vale if they won’t talk like adults. Other than Roman (who didn’t care anyway), everyone is shown to be more willing to compromise after his rant is over.]]


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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Velvet, of all people, gives Pyrrha such a rant, pointing out that much of her issues are self-imposed, as she keeps isolating herself and acting downright manipulative purely out of cowardice. However, it reads more like a DareToBeBadass speech, as the intent is to make Pyrrha recognise how pointless this behaviour is and hopefully change it.

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** Part of Jaune's rant against everyone involved is that while Vale and Atlas might well win a war against Cinder and the White Fang, countless civilians will die because of it.
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** Jaune gives one to Cinder, Ironwood, Adam, and Ozpin over their insistence on having their little war in Vale, where countless civilians will die. He's specifically most angry at Ironwood and Ozpin since they're the ones who are supposed to protect said civilians, not drag their war into the middle of a bustling city of people who have nothing to do with it. Adam and Cinder might be instigating the conflict but neither has any interest in civilian casualties and are only fighting in Vale because their goals (the Maiden for Cinder and Atlas military for Adam) are currently located.

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* WhatTheHellHero: Ozpin calls out Qrow for using Jaune as bait for Cinder. When the man brushes off Jaune's possible death, saying it's "part of a Huntsman's job", Ozpin reminds him that Jaune is a civilian and it's their job to keep him safe.

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** In chapter 59, Jaune gives a massive one to Ozpin, Ironwood, Adam, and Cinder both collectively and individually for "choosing to fight a war in the middle of Vale and letting innocent people die" rather than compromise or "take their damn war elsewhere".
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* DuelToTheDeath: Roman suggests one between Cinder and [[spoiler:Pyrrha]], citing that if the latter wins, they'll call off the attack since no one but Cinder is interested in attacking Beacon. And if the former wins, there'll be no need to attack Beacon.
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* NeverMyFault: Ironwood blames the White Fang for "hiding behind civilians" when Atlas bombed a Faunus village, killing everyone present including children.


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* TautologicalTemplar: When Ironwood declares that Atlas has never killed any innocent civilians, Roman snarks that Atlas is the one who records who they kill, so naturally they're biased. Adam in turn brings up a small village of three hundred Faunus that Atlas bombed because there were White Fang members in the village.
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* AtLeastIAdmitIt: When Adam finally has a chance to confront Ironwood, he points out that both Atlas and the White Fang have innocent blood on their hands. The only difference is the White Fang doesn't pretend otherwise.


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* TheMenFirst: When trying to negotiatie with Ironwood, Adam says he'll gladly submit to imprisonment or execution in exchange for amnesty for his men.


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* NothingPersonal: Cinder tells [[spoiler:Pyrrha]] that she has nothing against the girl personally, but Cinder is tasked with getting either the Fall Maiden's powers or the Relic, meaning [[spoiler:Pyrrha]], as the new Fall Maiden, has to die.


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** While Ozpin condemns Cinder for murdering Amber, Cinder rightfully points out that her forces fought Amber to obtain the Fall Maiden's power the only way they could, through murder, and they won. Even though Cinder's methods are neither moral nor legal, she won Amber's powers "playing by the rules of the game". She also rightfully points out that [[spoiler:Pyrrha]] will be hunted by Salem's forces for the rest of her life.
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When Jaune's forged transcripts were rebuffed, his only option was to return home in disgrace or forge a new life in Vale. Opening a diner was an impetuous decision, being good at it a stroke of luck. Becoming the favourite haunt for students, teachers and criminals alike…? That was neither, but it sure did keep things interesting. Wasn't the civilian life supposed to be easier?

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When Jaune's forged transcripts were rebuffed, his only option was to return home in disgrace or forge a new life in Vale. Opening a diner was an impetuous decision, being good at it a stroke of luck. Becoming the favourite haunt for students, teachers and criminals alike…? alike...? That was neither, but it sure did keep things interesting. Wasn't the civilian life supposed to be easier?

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When Jaune's forged transcripts were rebuffed, his only option was to return home in disgrace or forge a new life in Vale. Opening a diner was an impetuous decision, being good at it a stroke of luck. Becoming the favourite haunt for students, teachers and criminals alike…? That was neither, but it sure did keep things interesting. Wasn't the civilian life supposed to be easier?

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When Jaune's forged transcripts were rebuffed, his only option was to return home in disgrace or forge a new life in Vale. Opening a diner was an impetuous decision, being good at it a stroke of luck. Becoming the favourite haunt for students, teachers and criminals alike…? alike…? That was neither, but it sure did keep things interesting. Wasn't the civilian life supposed to be easier?



* FromTheMouthsOfBabes: Ruby comments that Pyrrha is thirsty and when Weiss asks if she even knows what that means, Ruby says Pyrrha "wants Jaune to pin her against a wall and bang her." Ruby then tells a shocked Weiss that she's fifteen, not five; of course she knows about sex.

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* FromTheMouthsOfBabes: Ruby comments that Pyrrha is thirsty and when thirsty; Weiss asks if she even knows what that means, means. Ruby says Pyrrha "wants Jaune to pin her against a wall and bang her." Ruby then tells a shocked Weiss that she's fifteen, not five; five, of course she knows about sex.



** After Jaune gets Mercury to agree to [[spoiler:talk to Cinder and try to convince her to meet with Ozpin, Mercury agrees but says that he doesn’t think she’ll go for it. Cut to Ozpin telling James about the meeting, which he said earlier he would only do if Cinder agreed to it]].

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** After Jaune gets Mercury to agree to [[spoiler:talk to Cinder and try to convince her to meet with Ozpin, Mercury agrees but says that he doesn’t doesn't think she’ll she'll go for it. Cut to Ozpin telling James about the meeting, which he said earlier he would only do if Cinder agreed to it]].



-->'''Militia''': "Of course you'd fucking risk your life to help someone else. You..You stupid fucking bastard."

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-->'''Militia''': "Of Of course you'd fucking risk your life to help someone else. You..You stupid fucking bastard."



* INever: The Twins take Jaune to the club’s private room with Neo and Pyrrha in Chapter 24 for a few rounds of this. We learn in short order that he’s been caught masturbating, gone through public exposure, and never kissed a girl. [[spoiler:Milita and Pyrrha happily correct that last one. A minute each. With tongue.]]

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* INever: The Twins take Jaune to the club’s club's private room with Neo and Pyrrha in Chapter 24 for a few rounds of this. We learn in short order that he’s he's been caught masturbating, gone through public exposure, and never kissed a girl. [[spoiler:Milita and Pyrrha happily correct that last one. A minute each. With tongue.]]



** [[spoiler:After Jaune talks Cinder down and reveals that he knows she's a terrorist, Cinder stops referring to Snow as "she" in an attempt to distance herself from her dog.]]

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** [[spoiler:After Jaune talks Cinder down and reveals that he knows she's a terrorist, Cinder stops referring to Snow as "she" "he" in an attempt to distance herself from her dog.]]



* MustHaveCaffeine: This trait is why Jaune's cafe is under the protection of [[TheMafia Junior]], Roman Torchwick, and Cinder Fall, with Junior and his men ordering fifty coffees twice a day. His is the only coffeehouse in the city that isn't a mediocre franchise and his stock has enough quality and variety to make even coffee hater Ruby visit several times a week for a cup. Understandably, the need for caffeine shows through the most when Team RWBY has to wake up at 3am to help Jaune run his shop for a day.
-->'''Weiss:''' Coffee.\\

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-->'''Weiss:''' --->'''Weiss:''' Coffee.\\



* RefugeInAudacity: What Jaune is clearly going for with his plan to [[spoiler:have Ozpin and Cinder sit down in his diner and try to talk their issues out. Even though everyone points out that there’s next to no way this could actually work, Jaune just points out that there’s no way to know because no one’s ever actually tried it before]].

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* RefugeInAudacity: What Jaune is clearly going for with his plan to [[spoiler:have Ozpin and Cinder sit down in his diner and try to talk their issues out. Even though everyone points out that there’s there's next to no way this could actually work, Jaune just points out that there’s there's no way to know because no one’s one's ever actually tried it before]].



--> '''Glynda:''' (thinking) ''They're adorable...''

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* CoffeeShopAUFic: The entire fic is based around Jaune owning and running a coffee shop instead of going to Beacon. The author has repeatedly [[LampshadeHanging hung a lampshade]] on just how ironic this is given that he hates coffee and prefers tea.

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* GilliganCut: When interviewing Russel and Velvet, Jaune thinks to himself that he only needs a single helper and Russel is far more qualified so he has to do what's best for his business. The next scene has him telling Team RWBY that he hired both of them.

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When interviewing Russel and Velvet, Jaune thinks to himself that he only needs a single helper and Russel is far more qualified so he has to do what's best for his business. The next scene has him telling Team RWBY that he hired both of them.them.
** After Jaune gets Mercury to agree to [[spoiler:talk to Cinder and try to convince her to meet with Ozpin, Mercury agrees but says that he doesn’t think she’ll go for it. Cut to Ozpin telling James about the meeting, which he said earlier he would only do if Cinder agreed to it]].



* NoodleIncident: Ozpin and Oobleck get into a "coffee off", which Ozpin loses.

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** Roman and Lisa Lavender reference several past encounters during their meeting.


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* YouDidntSeeThat: Upon stumbling across Cinder playing with a puppy, Mercury quickly asserts he didn't see anything with Cinder insisting he didn't.

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* YouDidntSeeThat: Upon stumbling across Cinder playing with a puppy, Mercury quickly asserts he didn't see anything with Cinder insisting he didn't.didn't.
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* InstantlyProvenWrong: When Glynda bemoans that Ozpin and Ironwood are discussing security for the Vytal Festival in a diner, where anyone can be listening in, Ozpin assures her that the White Fang isn't going to be at Jaune's of all places. A few tables over, Adam (the ''leader'' of the White Fang in Vale) rolls his eyes while sharing a table with Mercury (the minion of Cinder Fall, BigBad of the first three seasons).

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When Glynda bemoans that Ozpin and Ironwood are discussing security for the Vytal Festival in a diner, where anyone can be listening in, Ozpin assures her that the White Fang isn't going to be at Jaune's of all places. A few tables over, Adam (the ''leader'' of the White Fang in Vale) rolls his eyes while sharing a table with Mercury (the minion of Cinder Fall, BigBad of the first three seasons).seasons).
** When Ruby hears Jaune's "plan" to prevent the attack on Beacon, she insists Blake would never help him, only for Jaune to tell her Blake's already agreed.

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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Shortly after offering Adam a LastSecondChance, Blake realizes she insulted him and his dedication to his men by doing so.

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Shortly after offering Adam a LastSecondChance, Blake realizes she insulted him and his dedication to his men by doing so.so.
** Pyrrha and Russel's animosity is kicked off by the fact that he told her he was a fan. He meant it as a compliment, but Pyrrha naturally assumed that he was like her other "fans" and distanced herself from him.



* ItIsDehumanizing: Cardin refers to Velvet as "something" and an "animal".

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Cardin refers to Velvet as "something" and an "animal"."animal".
** [[spoiler:After Jaune talks Cinder down and reveals that he knows she's a terrorist, Cinder stops referring to Snow as "she" in an attempt to distance herself from her dog.]]

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* DamnedByFaintPraise: Inverted trope. Weiss calls Jaune's coffee "acceptable" which would normally be this trope played straight, but Ruby notes Weiss never calls ''anything'' acceptable so it's actaully a mark of quality instead.

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Inverted trope. Weiss calls Jaune's coffee "acceptable" which would normally be this trope played straight, but Ruby notes Weiss never calls ''anything'' acceptable so it's actaully actually a mark of quality instead.instead.
** Weiss' sister Winter is even worse. She tells Jaune that he meets all the health and safety standards as if that's supposed to be a compliment.

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