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The fic itself is part prequel fic and part {{Interquel}}, and part AdaptationExpansion, as the new story also includes the events of the movie, but it's told from Elsa's perspective instead of Anna's perspective, to fill in plot holes in the story.

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The fic itself is part largely prequel fic and part {{Interquel}}, and part AdaptationExpansion, as with the new first three quarters of the story also includes covering the five years leading up to Elsa's coronation, while the last quarter is a retelling of the events of the movie, but it's told movie from Elsa's perspective instead of Anna's perspective, to fill in plot holes in the story.
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* AuthorityInNameOnly: Upon her parents' death, Elsa technically becomes queen of Arendelle, but she's only a regent ruling in her parents' stead with no actual power of her own until her coronation at age 21. She has the authority to conduct business with others, but she can't change, introduce or repeal any existing laws.



* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Anna and Elsa have an argument in the cellars a few months before the coronation about how messed up their lives are, with each sister calling the other out for not understanding the other's problems.

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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Anna and Elsa have an argument in the cellars a few months before the coronation about how messed up their lives are, with each sister calling the other out for not understanding the other's problems.problems in a very "Life's Too Short" way.



* EyesNeverLie: Despite Elsa's attempts to act stoic, Anna can always read her emotions with her eyes.

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* EyesNeverLie: Despite Elsa's attempts It doesn't matter how hard Elsa tries to act stoic, lock down her emotions to avoid losing control of her powers, Anna can always read her emotions with tell how she really feels just from looking at her eyes.



* RebelliousPrincess: Being that the sisters are both teenagers, it's inevitable that both of them show shades of this. Anna, being younger, tends to show this more often, but Elsa also tends to act like one.
* {{Retcon}}: Jennifer Lee has said that Elsa's birthday is at the winter solstice, while Anna's birthday is at the summer solstice. This story reverses it so that Elsa's birthday is in the summer while Anna's birthday is right before Christmas.

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* RebelliousPrincess: Being that the sisters are both teenagers, it's inevitable that both of them show shades of this. Anna, being younger, tends to show this more often, but even Elsa also tends to act acts like one.this.
* {{Retcon}}: Jennifer {{Retcon}}:
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Lee has said that Elsa's birthday is at the winter solstice, while Anna's birthday is at the summer solstice. This story reverses it so that Elsa's birthday is in the summer while Anna's birthday is right before Christmas.



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* MeaningfulEcho: During the coronation ball, the Duke of Weselton approaches Elsa and tries to ask her about raising taxes. Elsa immediately recalls an incident 18 years earlier where, as a child, she'd snuck down to the throne room while her father was arguing with this same Duke about taxes, and doesn't hesitate to remind him of what he'd said to her father:

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* MeaningfulEcho: During the coronation ball, the Duke of Weselton approaches Elsa and tries to ask her about raising taxes. Elsa immediately recalls an incident 18 years earlier where, as a child, she'd snuck down to the throne room while her father was arguing with this same Duke about taxes, and doesn't hesitate to remind him of what he'd said to this when he starts asking her father:again about tax hikes:



* NotSoStoic: Despite Elsa attempting to shut down her emotions (since her powers respond to her emotions), there are times where her attempts at staying emotionless and impassive fail.

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* NotSoStoic: Despite Elsa attempting to shut down her emotions (since her powers respond to her emotions), there are times where her attempts at staying emotionless and impassive fail.don't always work out.



* PoorCommunicationKills: It's clear that Elsa's inability to explain her powers to Anna, and their parents' refusal to talk about the topic, greatly frustrates Anna.

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* PoorCommunicationKills: It's clear that Elsa's inability to explain her powers to Anna, and their parents' refusal to talk about the topic, greatly frustrates Anna.Anna to no end.



** As a teenage girl, Elsa resents hate being confined to her room, and lectured for things that aren't her fault. One scene has her venting her rage by throwing icicles and breaking a window in her room. Even though Elsa's trying to bottle her emotions, she reacts like any other teenager would.

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** As a teenage girl, Elsa resents hate being confined to her room, and getting lectured for things that aren't her fault. One scene has her venting her rage by throwing icicles and breaking a window in her room. Even though Elsa's trying to bottle her emotions, pushed too far and she reacts acts out just like any other teenager would.Anna does.



** Agdar and Idun decide to keep Anna in the dark about Elsa's powers. Appropriately, it angers Anna that she knows something's wrong with Elsa, but neither Elsa nor their parents want to even tell her what's going on.

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** Agdar and Idun decide (from their interpretation of the trolls' advice) to keep Anna in the dark about Elsa's powers. Appropriately, it angers Anna that she knows something's wrong with Elsa, but neither Elsa nor their parents want are willing to even tell be open enough to give her what's going on.the information she needs to help.

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** Anna and Elsa play "Jingle Bells" on the piano in chapter 26. The song was first written in 1857, but common consensus is that ''Frozen'' takes place around the 1830s.

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** Anna and Elsa play "Jingle Bells" on the piano in chapter 26.during Anna's 16th birthday. The song was first written in 1857, but common consensus is that ''Frozen'' takes place around the 1830s. They also sing Irving Berlin's "White Christmas" a full century before the song was even written.



** When Hans reveals his true colors to Anna, he mentions that the reason why he pretended to fall for her is because Elsa wasn't getting anywhere with any suitors. It's implied that even after bumping into Anna, Hans still thought he could make a pass at Elsa and found she wasn't exactly open to forming a relationship. Some new material is added to fill in the gap: after Elsa foists Anna onto the Duke of Weselton to avoid dancing with him, Hans approaches Elsa and tries to solicit a dance from her, and when that doesn't work, he tries to offer a courtship. However, Elsa has a sixth sense about Hans and has a sneaking suspicion that he's up to something, so she quickly turns him down. It also explains Elsa's swift rejection of Hans' attempt to get hitched with Anna later. Further explanation for Hans's line is that, during the three years between the deaths of her parents and her coronation, Elsa is shown to receive and turn down multiple marriage proposals from other kingdoms, getting further incensed when a few that are meant for Anna are received.

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** When Hans reveals his true colors to Anna, he mentions that the reason why he pretended to fall for her is because Elsa wasn't getting anywhere with any suitors. It's implied that even after bumping into Anna, Hans still thought he could make a pass at Elsa and found she wasn't exactly open to forming a relationship. Some new material is added to fill in the gap: after Elsa foists takes notice of Hans during the orb and scepter ceremony at the church and can't help but see him looking way too much at Anna onto rather than on her, the newly crowned queen of Arendelle, and her sixth sense thinks everything is off about him. Later, during the ball, while Anna is off "dancing" with the Duke of Weselton to avoid dancing with him, Weselton, Hans approaches Elsa and tries to solicit a dance from her, and when that doesn't work, her. She refuses. So he tries to offer a courtship. However, At this point, Elsa has a sixth sense about enough and just shuts him down, eliciting an expression of disappointment from Hans. She is visibly alarmed to find Hans and has a sneaking suspicion that he's trying to hook up to something, so she quickly turns him down. It also explains Elsa's swift rejection of Hans' attempt to get hitched with Anna later. Further hours later.
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explanation for Hans's line is that, during the three years between the deaths of her parents and her coronation, Elsa is shown to receive and turn down multiple marriage proposals from other kingdoms, getting further incensed when a few that are meant for Anna are received.



** In the resulting argument that leads to Elsa's powers being exposed, two things happen that get new context. First, Elsa's insistence on talking to Anna alone is because she wants to explain her powers to Anna and set her straight about Hans, but Anna misinterprets it as solely being about Hans. As things get heated, it's made clear that Anna is just trying to get Elsa to rethink her decision about Hans, and Anna is aware this isn't the appropriate place to be lashing out at Elsa, but her mouth gets ahead of her thinking.

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** In the resulting argument that leads to Elsa's powers being exposed, two things happen that get new context. First, Elsa's insistence on talking to Anna alone is because she wants to explain her powers to Anna and set her straight about Hans, Hans (including her suspicions that Hans might be traitorous), but Anna misinterprets it as solely being about Hans. the latter. As things get heated, it's made clear that Anna is just trying to get Elsa to rethink her decision about Hans, and Anna is also aware this isn't the appropriate place to be lashing out at Elsa, but her mouth gets ahead of her thinking.thinking...causing the inevitable.



**Elsa uses her ice magic to open locks, referencing her doing the same thing in ''Series/OnceUponATime''.



* ShoutOut: Elsa is shown to have an ability to open locks, referencing her doing the same thing in ''Series/OnceUponATime''.

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* ShoutOut: Elsa is shown to have an ability to open locks, referencing her doing the same thing in ''Series/OnceUponATime''.



* StayInTheKitchen: Elsa takes great offense at the language of various marriage offers she gets on her 19th birthday, insisting that she doesn't need a man to help her with governing Arendelle.



* TemptingFate: In a flashback in Chapter 14, Elsa recalls as a three year old that she once crashed a late night meeting between her father and the Duke of Weselton, and called the Duke out for being sleazy. Agdar quickly takes to Elsa's defense. The Duke replies, "I don't look forward to that little brat on the throne of Arendelle in the future." 18 years later, Elsa becomes Queen and when she runs into the Duke at the coronation ball, they both still very well remember this.

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* TemptingFate: In a flashback in Chapter 14, 15, Elsa recalls as a three year old that she once crashed a late night meeting between her father and the Duke of Weselton, and called the Duke out for being sleazy. Agdar quickly takes to Elsa's defense. The Duke replies, "I don't look forward to that little brat on the throne of Arendelle in the future." 18 years later, Elsa becomes Queen and when she runs into the Duke at the coronation ball, they both still very well remember this.



* UnfamiliarCeiling: When Elsa is forced by Gerda to sleep in Anna's bedroom after her suicide attempt, the first thing she says when she wakes up is, "Why am I in Anna's room? Oh...I remember now."
* WellDoneSonGuy: Elsa's "Be the good girl you always have to be" line from "Let It Go" gets some roots to it. We see that a lot of her isolation from Anna is as a result of her parents imposing it on her. This is shown whenever she has dreams about the night she froze Anna's head, and always gets the same disapproval from her parents of "Elsa, what have you done? This is getting out of hand."

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* UnfamiliarCeiling: When UnfamiliarCeiling:
**Elsa has a moment of this after she deliberately makes herself ill so that her parents will let her see Anna. She ends up passing out in her bedroom and doesn't wake up until she's been moved to a guest room.
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Elsa is forced by Gerda to sleep in Anna's bedroom after her suicide attempt, the first thing she says when she wakes up is, "Why am I in Anna's room? Oh...I remember now."
* WellDoneSonGuy: Elsa's "Be the good girl you always have to be" line from "Let It Go" gets some roots to it. We see that a lot of her isolation from Even Anna realizes Elsa is as a result of her parents imposing it on her.being forced to act like something she's not to appease their parents. This is shown whenever she has dreams about the night she froze Anna's head, and always gets the same disapproval from her parents of "Elsa, what have you done? This is getting out of hand."

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** Gerda manages to slip Elsa a warning that Hans is up to no good, which is what gives her the provocation needed to escape. It's also suggested on the fjord that Elsa does hear Hans drawing his sword to slice at her, but she doesn't even know that Anna's come to stop Hans until she hears Anna's BigNo and Anna has frozen solid.
** To get back to the castle after Anna punches out Hans, Elsa creates an ice path across the waters of the fjord (though not before first getting properly introduced to Kristoff.
* {{Adorkable}}: Elsa's just as capable of being this as Anna can be. For example, in one scene, she deliberately freezes her bedroom door so that Kai cannot replace the lock (on her parents' orders). To undo it, Elsa's response is to use her fist to break the ice on her side of the door, which Kai remarks is something Anna would do.

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** Gerda manages to slip Elsa a warning that Hans is up to no good, which is what gives her the provocation needed to escape. It's also suggested on escape when he and his men come down to the fjord that dungeons. Elsa does hear Hans drawing his sword to slice at her, but she doesn't even know that Anna's come to stop Hans until she hears Anna's BigNo and Anna has frozen solid.solid. And because she's got her eyes squeezed shut from crying while hugging Anna's frozen body, she doesn't realize Anna is thawing until she suddenly feels Anna moving.
** To get back to the castle from the ship after Anna punches out Hans, Elsa creates an ice path across the waters of the fjord (though not before first getting properly introduced to Kristoff.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Anna and Elsa's parents are subjected to this, treating Elsa like the MadwomanInTheAttic at times.

** To get back to the castle after Anna punches out Hans, Elsa creates an ice path across the waters of the fjord (though not before first getting properly introduced to Kristoff.
* {{Adorkable}}: Elsa's just as capable of being this as Anna can be. For example, in one scene, When her parents decide to move the lock on her bedroom door to the outside so that Anna can't go in, she deliberately freezes her bedroom door so that Kai cannot replace the lock (on her parents' orders).lock. To undo it, Elsa's response is to use her fist to break the ice on her side of the door, which Kai remarks is something Anna would do.



** The shackles in the cell that Hans places Elsa in after ringing her back from the North Mountain weren't made overnight. They've been around since before Elsa was even born, and a conversation Gerda overhears between Anna and Elsa's parents implies that there have been previous people with ice magic in their lineage.






** In the resulting argument that leads to Elsa's powers being exposed, two things happen that get new context. First, Elsa's insistence on talking to Anna alone is because she wants to explain her powers to Anna, which Anna misinterprets as her wanting to set her straight about Hans. As things get heated, it's made clear that Anna is just trying to get Elsa to rethink her decision about Anna's whirlwind courtship with Hans, and Anna is aware this isn't the appropriate place to be lashing out at Elsa, but her mouth gets ahead of her thinking.

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** In the resulting argument that leads to Elsa's powers being exposed, two things happen that get new context. First, Elsa's insistence on talking to Anna alone is because she wants to explain her powers to Anna, which Anna and set her straight about Hans, but Anna misinterprets it as her wanting to set her straight solely being about Hans. As things get heated, it's made clear that Anna is just trying to get Elsa to rethink her decision about Anna's whirlwind courtship with Hans, and Anna is aware this isn't the appropriate place to be lashing out at Elsa, but her mouth gets ahead of her thinking.thinking.
** Elsa taking the lead in showing Anna around the impromptu skating rink in the closing shot of the movie is set up by a scene prior to her coronation of her deciding to try skating on her own ice after she unintentionally freezes everything in her room.



* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: At one point, when Anna is brushing Elsa's hair, she comments about how thick Elsa's hair is, a subtle nod to how the animators gave Elsa over 420,000 CGI threads, compared to just 140,000 for Anna.



* MoralityChain: Anna functions as one to Elsa. It's the thought that Anna might not think highly of Elsa killing people that keeps her from finishing off the Duke of Weselton's bodyguards in the ice palace.

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* MoralityChain: Anna functions as one to Elsa. It's the thought that Anna might not think highly of Elsa killing people people, combined with Hans's plea, that keeps her from finishing off the Duke of Weselton's bodyguards in the ice palace.palace.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Besides her reaction to realizing she's frozen over Arendelle, Elsa has a similar reaction when the news of her parents' death gets to her and Anna, as she had predicted that there was a storm coming, and she didn't say anything to them because she was afraid they'd lock her in the dungeon again.



* MysticalWhiteHair: Even without knowledge of Elsa's powers, Anna still regards Elsa's hair in this way, since neither of their parents have it.



* OhCrap: Elsa's go-to reaction whenever she realizes Anna is noticing evidence of her powers, from unintentionally using her powers to add snow to a snowball right in front of Anna, to the room temperature dropping whenever she's upset. Her biggest one is at the coronation ball, when she turns around to a persistent Anna to say "[[BigShutUp I said, ENOUGH!]]" and gestures with her unexposed left hand...realizing a second too late that she's motioned with her wrong hand before the giant wall of ice spikes is created.



* PerspectiveFlip: The story alternates between Anna's and Elsa's perspectives during the chapters covering the five years before the movie, though skewed more towards Elsa. The chapters covering the events of the movie are told entirely from Elsa's perspective (although part of the scene where Anna and Kristoff meet Olaf is still included). In the final chapter's author's notes, the author explained that the story originally started as an attempt to tell the main plot of the movie from Elsa's point of view, and explain what she did while confined in her room, since all that's obvious from the movie is that Elsa is scared and having a hard time controlling her powers, and the author also notes that in the movie, Elsa is never seen outside of either of her 'extreme' personas; "either she's declaring her freedom as the Snow Queen on the North Mountain or she's terrified".

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* PerspectiveFlip: The story alternates between Anna's and Elsa's perspectives during the chapters covering the five years before the movie, though skewed more towards Elsa. The chapters covering the events of the movie are told entirely from Elsa's perspective (although part of the scene where Anna and Kristoff meet Olaf is still included). In the final chapter's author's notes, the author explained that the story originally started as an attempt to tell the main plot of the movie from Elsa's point of view, and explain what she did while confined in her room, since all that's obvious from the movie is that Elsa is scared and having a hard time controlling her powers, and the author also notes that in the movie, Elsa is never seen outside of either of her 'extreme' personas; "either she's declaring her freedom as the Snow Queen on the North Mountain or she's terrified".


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* WellDoneSonGuy: Elsa's "Be the good girl you always have to be" line from "Let It Go" gets some roots to it. We see that a lot of her isolation from Anna is as a result of her parents imposing it on her. This is shown whenever she has dreams about the night she froze Anna's head, and always gets the same disapproval from her parents of "Elsa, what have you done? This is getting out of hand."
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* {{Retcon}}: The story places Elsa's birthday in the summer and Anna's birthday in the winter, the reverse of how they're normally depicted.

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* {{Retcon}}: The story places Jennifer Lee has said that Elsa's birthday in is at the summer and winter solstice, while Anna's birthday is at the summer solstice. This story reverses it so that Elsa's birthday is in the winter, the reverse of how they're normally depicted.summer while Anna's birthday is right before Christmas.

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* CallForward[=/=]{{Foreshadowing}}: Many instances of foreshadowing towards the events of the movie are planted throughout the story.

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* CallForward[=/=]{{Foreshadowing}}: CallForward[=/=]ContinuityNod: Many instances of foreshadowing towards the events of the movie are planted throughout the story.



** The existence of secret tunnels in the castle may be a nod to the ''Frozen'' tie-in book ''Phantoms of Arendelle''.



* ContinuityNod: Several are made to the main movie even before the plot happens, often in the form of dialogue.
** The existence of secret tunnels in the castle may be a nod to the ''Frozen'' tie-in book ''Phantoms of Arendelle''.

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* ContinuityNod: Several are made to the main movie even before the plot happens, often in the form of dialogue.
** The existence of secret tunnels in the castle may be a nod to the ''Frozen'' tie-in book ''Phantoms of Arendelle''.



* HopeSpot: When saying goodbye to their parents before the fateful voyage, Anna tells them about Elsa contemplating suicide, finally convincing them to have a chat with Elsa to talk through her issues once they get back. Too bad that will never happen.



* MythologyGag: The argument Anna and Elsa have in the cellar a few months before the coronation calls to mind both "For The First Time in Forever (Reprise)" but also the CutSong that it replaced, "Life's Too Short".

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* MythologyGag: The MoralityChain: Anna functions as one to Elsa. It's the thought that Anna might not think highly of Elsa killing people that keeps her from finishing off the Duke of Weselton's bodyguards in the ice palace.
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**At Christmastime in chapter 10, when Anna and Elsa are making a snowman in the courtyard, Anna retorts to Elsa that "You're supposed to be queen, not me. I'm just the spare." It's a subtle nod to "More than Just the Spare," the song that was replaced with "For the First Time in Forever".
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argument Anna and Elsa have in the cellar a few months before the coronation calls to mind both "For The First Time in Forever (Reprise)" but also the CutSong that it replaced, "Life's Too Short".



* NeatFreak: Elsa always keeps her room very nice and tidy, as imposed by her parents after an accidental loss of control of her powers led to her ruining a dress and several books. This contrasts with Anna, whose room is very much a mess.

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* NeatFreak: Elsa always keeps her room very nice and tidy, as imposed by her parents after an accidental loss of tidy so that no clothes or books will be damaged when she loses control of her powers led to powers. Her parents have more or less compelled her ruining to do this ever since she accidentally ruined a dress and several books. This contrasts with Anna, whose a few books during one such episode while she was nine. Elsa is stunned when she sneaks into Anna's room a few times to find that Anna's room is very much a mess.complete mess by comparison.



* ThePianoPlayer: Elsa is able to play Beethoven's ''Moonlight Sonata'' on the piano just fine.

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* ThePianoPlayer: Elsa is able to play Beethoven's ''Moonlight Sonata'' on the piano just fine.piano, as well as several other songs.



* YouAreInCommandNow: Elsa is left in charge of Arendelle while her parents are away. When they die, Elsa finds herself saddled with running Arendelle from behind closed doors.

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* YouAreInCommandNow: Elsa is left in charge of Arendelle while her parents are away. When they die, Elsa finds herself saddled with running Arendelle from behind closed doors.doors.
* YouNoTakeCandle: Marshmallow when communicating with Elsa.
-->"[[NoIndoorVoice MARSHMALLOW WILL GUARD OUTSIDE. PROTECT ELSA'S FORTRESS.]]"

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* BeneathTheMask: Elsa has a distant attitude towards Anna (a combination of her own fears and her parents' overprotectiveness). But she really ''hates'' having to always repress her emotions, showing a playful and creative side with a lot of artistic sense while in private.



** Anna sees Elsa going outside and always wearing her gloves, and assumes that it's because Elsa's got a thing about dirt, as she remarks to Kristoff in the sled after they leave Wandering Oaken's Trading Post & Sauna.

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** Anna sees Elsa going outside and always wearing her gloves, and assumes is led to assume that it's because Elsa's got a thing about dirt, as she remarks she'll remark to Kristoff in the sled after they leave Wandering Oaken's Trading Post & Sauna.
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** A whole new timeline is created to show what Elsa does between the end of "Let It Go" and when Anna shows up at the ice palace with Kristoff and Olaf. From the conclusion of "Let It Go," Elsa finds she's inadvertently created a replica of her bedroom from the castle in the ice palace. She also creates an ice statue of Anna to apologize to for hitting in the head thirteen years earlier. After that, she spends most of the day sleeping, though she does leave at one point to admire the place from outside at the bottom of the stairs. To acknowledge the fact that some wondered if Elsa ate anything during her period in isolation, she leaves the ice palace and venture down the mountain in an effort to forage for berries. However, Elsa is forced to hastily retreat when she sees some wolves nearby. Then, at the moment Anna shows up, Elsa is on the balcony staring off into space.

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** A whole new timeline is created to show what Elsa does between the end of "Let It Go" and when Anna shows up at the ice palace with Kristoff and Olaf. From the conclusion of "Let It Go," Elsa finds she's inadvertently created a replica of her bedroom from the castle in the ice palace. She also creates an ice statue of Anna to apologize to for hitting in the head thirteen years earlier. After that, she spends most of the day sleeping, though she does leave at one point to admire the place from outside at the bottom of the stairs. To acknowledge the fact that some wondered if Elsa ate anything during her period in isolation, she leaves the ice palace and venture down the mountain in an effort to forage for berries. However, Elsa is forced to hastily retreat when she sees some wolves nearby.nearby (implied to be the same wolves that Anna and Kristoff fought). Then, at the moment Anna shows up, Elsa is on the balcony staring off into space.
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** Anna sees Elsa going outside and always wearing her gloves, and assumes that it's because Elsa's got a thing about dirt, as she remarks to Kristoff in the sled after they leave Wandering Oaken's Trading Post & Sauna.
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* WorseWithContext: At the post-coronation ball in the movie, Anna looks nervous when Kai repositions her on the throne dais next to Elsa, explaining why she's babbling, "What, here? Are you sure? Because I don't think I'm supposed to--Oh, okay!" when Kai is moving her. In the movie, all that seems to be suggested is that Anna feels awkward being in Elsa's presence and also in front of a crowd. Here though, Anna's nervousness is because she and Elsa had a fight a few months prior and haven't been on the best of speaking terms until then. This explains why Anna seems surprised when Elsa starts to converse cordially with her.

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* WorseWithContext: At the post-coronation ball in the movie, Anna looks nervous when Kai repositions her on the throne dais next to Elsa, explaining why she's babbling, "What, here? Are you sure? Because I don't think I'm supposed to--Oh, okay!" when Kai is moving her. In the movie, all that seems to be suggested is that Anna feels awkward being in Elsa's presence and also in front of a crowd. Here though, Anna's nervousness is because she and Elsa had a fight a few months prior and haven't been on the best of speaking terms until then. This explains why Anna seems surprised when Elsa starts to converse cordially with her. Said fight also factors into Anna's choice of words in the later argument that leads to Elsa's powers becoming exposed.
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* NeatFreak: Elsa always keeps her room very nice and tidy, as imposed by her parents after an accidental loss of control of her powers led to her ruining a dress and several books. This contrasts with Anna, whose room is very much a mess.

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** When Elsa refuses to bless Anna's impromptu engagement to Hans, she says to Anna, "May I talk to you, please? ''Alone''?!" In the movie, one can tell from the look on her face and her tone of voice that Elsa is both nervous and alarmed by the news. The author thinks Elsa intends to take Anna aside and privately reveal her powers, but Anna's response of "No! Whatever you have to say, you can say to both of us!" forced her to abandon that idea, thus, hence that outburst that happened in the movie.

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** When Elsa refuses to bless Anna's impromptu engagement to Hans, she says to Anna, "May I talk to you, please? ''Alone''?!" In the movie, one can tell from the look on her face and her tone of voice that Elsa is both nervous and alarmed by the news. The author thinks Here, it's established that Elsa intends to take Anna aside and privately reveal her powers, but Anna's response of "No! Whatever you have to say, you can say to both of us!" forced forces her to abandon that idea, thus, hence that outburst that happened in the movie.movie.
*** Elsa's refusal to let Anna marry Hans is also because she is certain Hans is trying to take over Arendelle, and he'd made a pass at her earlier in the ball while Anna was dancing with the Duke of Weselton.



** Despite the focus on Elsa, we do cut briefly to Anna and Kristoff's journey to the North Mountain. For instance, there's some additional dialogue in the scene where they notice that Arendelle is frozen over.....

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** Despite the focus on Elsa, we do cut briefly to Anna and Kristoff's journey to the North Mountain. For instance, there's some additional dialogue in Mountain, including the scene where they notice that Arendelle is see the fjord frozen over.....over from a distance, and the following scene in the glade where they meet Olaf. There's a few more lines of dialogue where there was originally a fade to transition between the two scenes.



** ...and in the next scene, where Anna and Kristoff meet Olaf, Anna recognizes a nearby frozen pond as one she and Elsa swam in as kids.



* AltarDiplomacy: Anna is aware of the concept of marrying for political alliances, but Elsa is firmly against that because she feels there'd be an unfair power balance between Arendelle and whichever royal line she'd be marrying into. As a result, she insists that that sort of marriage will only be a last resort to be taken if Arendelle is in dire straits.



* GentleGiant: Marshmallow is recharacterized as one. While he only gets mad when provoked by Anna with her snowball, he's shown comforting Elsa and cradling her afterwards in the time between chasing Anna and Kristoff off, and later attacking Hans and his men.

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* GentleGiant: Marshmallow is recharacterized as one.Marshmallow. While he only gets mad when provoked by Anna with her snowball, he's shown comforting Elsa and cradling her afterwards in the time between chasing Anna and Kristoff off, and later attacking Hans and his men.



** Anna is aware of the concept of AltarDiplomacy and marrying for political reasons, though this ultimately doesn't factor into her falling for Hans.



**On her 16th birthday, Anna expresses frustration at Elsa shooting down her ideas of LoveAtFirstSight by arguing that Elsa can't possibly know anymore about love than she does since they've both been shut up in the castle for 11 years. They also have the same exchange after Elsa refuses to let Anna become engaged to Hans, but with more depth to the exchange on Elsa's end, because Hans has already made a pass at her:
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' Anna, what do you know about true love?
-->'''Princess Anna:''' More than you! All you know how to do is shut people out!



* MasterOfTheMixedMessage: Elsa in spades. She makes clear that she desperately wants to be around Anna, while simultaneously trying to shut her out so as to avoid hurting her with her powers. This leads to moments of severe whiplash such as when Anna finds Elsa in her ice palace: Elsa appears, smiling warmly because she's excited at the prospect of Anna seeing her new creation...and then insisting Anna leave just a few sentences later.



-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Why, no…I haven't]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker lost]]'' [[DeadpanSnarker any…]] ''[She let her voice trail off, implying that on the contrary, she had gained some. With a huff, the duke turned and stalked off]'' [[SarcasmMode Well, thank you to you, too!]]

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-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Why, no…I haven't]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker lost]]'' [[DeadpanSnarker any…]] ''[She let her voice trail off, implying that on the contrary, she had gained some. With a huff, the duke turned and stalked off]'' [[SarcasmMode [[DeadpanSnarker Well, thank you to you, too!]]too...]]



** Even though Elsa does her best to hide her powers around Anna, she's not 100% perfect at doing so and there are several occasions where Anna catches evidence of Elsa's powers (among others, catching Elsa walking around in snow barefoot, incidentally seeing a snowball grow in Elsa's hands by itself, the temperature in the room dropping when Elsa gets upset, puddles being left behind by her ice).

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** Even though Elsa does her best to hide her powers around Anna, she's not 100% perfect at doing so and there are several occasions where Anna catches evidence of Elsa's powers (among others, catching Elsa walking around in snow barefoot, incidentally seeing a snowball grow in Elsa's hands by itself, the temperature in the room dropping when Elsa gets upset, puddles being left behind by her ice).ice, etc.). This explains later why Anna is not too surprised when Elsa accidentally reveals her powers at the coronation, and is more like "So that explains all the strangeness", and is the reason she's more focused on bringing Elsa back to Arendelle and getting her to undo her eternal winter.



* {{Retcon}}: The story goes with the idea that Elsa's birthday is in the summer and Anna's birthday is in the winter, the opposite of actual continuity.

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* {{Retcon}}: The story goes with the idea that places Elsa's birthday is in the summer and Anna's birthday is in the winter, the opposite reverse of actual continuity.how they're normally depicted.



* SleazyPolitician: In chapter 15, there's a flashback (in the form of a dream that 17 year old Elsa is having) where Elsa, at age three, sneaks down to the throne room and finds her father in the midst of an argument with the Duke of Weselton. Before Elsa happens to interrupt, the Duke is trying to convince Agdar to raise taxes on goods being transferred between Arendelle and Weselton.

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* SleazyPolitician: In chapter 15, there's a flashback (in the form of a dream that 17 year old Elsa is having) where Elsa, at age three, sneaks down to the throne room and finds her father in the midst of an argument with the Duke of Weselton. Before Elsa happens to interrupt, the Duke is trying to convince Agdar to raise taxes on goods being transferred between Arendelle and Weselton. 18 years after said encounter, Elsa is quick to remind the Duke of Weselton of their earlier meeting.

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* LyingFingerCross: Anna does one to her father when he finds that Elsa has been secretly slipping notes to her.

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* LyingFingerCross: Anna does one to her father when he finds that Elsa has been secretly slipping notes to her. Later, when Elsa sneaks into her room and they're playing charades, Anna does a similar cross before lying to their parents about what they're hearing.


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* {{Retcon}}: The story goes with the idea that Elsa's birthday is in the summer and Anna's birthday is in the winter, the opposite of actual continuity.


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* {{Squee}}: Elsa's reaction when Anna shows up at her ice palace and is visibly impressed by her creation.

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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Elsa's reaction to getting sunburn on her face the first time she goes outside.

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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Elsa's reaction to first foray outside in years results in her getting sunburn sunburned on her face face. When she sees the first time results in a mirror, she goes outside.finds the results hilarious.



* {{Crossover}}: Minor one. Like many fanfics, this one takes the idea that, based on her cameo in "For the First Time In Forever", Rapunzel from ''Disney/{{Tangled}}'' is Anna and Elsa's cousin. However, since this story is about how Anna's and Elsa's lives were for the five years prior to the coronation, it's merely touched on.

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* {{Crossover}}: Minor one. Like many fanfics, this one takes the idea that, based on her cameo in "For the First Time In Forever", Rapunzel from ''Disney/{{Tangled}}'' is Anna and Elsa's cousin. However, since this story is about how Anna's and Elsa's lives were for the five years prior to the coronation, it's merely touched on. Rapunzel does acknowledge that she and Elsa have similar upbringings, on account of her being locked away in a tower until she was 18.
* CutHimselfShaving: When Elsa first sneaks outside, she ends up daydreaming in the sun long enough that she gets a bad case of sunburn. When Gerda brings her dinner that night, she mentions that Elsa's parents want to talk with her about potential courtships with prospective suitors. Elsa wonders if she can just pass her sunburn off as a bad case of blushing, only for Gerda to point out that Elsa barely ever blushes and blushing doesn't extend to one's forehead.


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* KingIncognito: Elsa decides to slip out incognito for Anna's 16th Christmas to get a Christmas tree for them to decorate. She has to use the least glamorous dress she can find because she almost got kidnapped the last time she slipped out into the woods.

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The fic itself is part {{Continuation}} fic and part {{Interquel}}, but is also an AdaptationExpansion, as the new story also includes the events of the movie, but it's told from Elsa's perspective instead of Anna's perspective, to fill in plot holes in the story.

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The fic itself is part {{Continuation}} prequel fic and part {{Interquel}}, but is also an and part AdaptationExpansion, as the new story also includes the events of the movie, but it's told from Elsa's perspective instead of Anna's perspective, to fill in plot holes in the story.



** Marriage proposal letters really set off Elsa. Getting three on her 19th birthday is enough to reduce her to angry ranting about how she doesn't need a suitor in order to run Arendelle.



** In chapter 12, Elsa loses control of her powers during a heated argument with Anna through the door and ends up covering the room with ice. The way her powers manifest themselves is very reminiscent of when she freezes Anna's heart in a similar outburst in "For the First Time In Forever (Reprise)".

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** In chapter 12, Elsa loses control of her powers during a heated argument with Anna through the door and ends up covering the room with ice. The way her powers manifest themselves is very reminiscent of when she freezes both the accidental revealing of her powers at her coronation, and later the burst of ice magic that will freeze Anna's heart in a similar outburst in "For the First Time In Forever (Reprise)".



* GentleGiant: Marshmallow is recharacterized as one. While he only gets mad when provoked by Anna with her snowball, he's shown comforting Elsa and cradling her afterwards.

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* GentleGiant: Marshmallow is recharacterized as one. While he only gets mad when provoked by Anna with her snowball, he's shown comforting Elsa and cradling her afterwards.afterwards in the time between chasing Anna and Kristoff off, and later attacking Hans and his men.



* InnerMonologue: Elsa has one for the duration of the story. Anna also has this during her scenes, though to a lesser extent.
* InnerMonologueConversation: After their parents leave, Anna suggests that Elsa switch out her lock so that she doesn't have to have someone let her out.

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* InnerMonologue: Elsa has one for the duration of the story. and Anna also has this during her scenes, though to a lesser extent.
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* InnerMonologueConversation: After their parents leave, Anna suggests that Elsa switch out her lock so that she doesn't have to have someone let her out. In this case it works since Anna's reading Elsa's facial expression.



* JustAFleshWound: Elsa goes out onto her windowsill in one scene. When Gerda tries to help her back in, Elsa inadvertently slips and falls, spraining her wrist. She tries her best to ignore it, with little success.

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* JustAFleshWound: Elsa goes out onto her windowsill in at one scene.point. When Gerda tries to help her back in, Elsa inadvertently slips and falls, spraining her wrist. She tries her best to ignore it and dismiss it, with little success.but her father and Gerda quickly insist she needs to bandage it up.



** When Anna first meets Kristoff, she mentions that she assumed Elsa always wore gloves because [[TerrifiedOfGerms she had a thing about dirt]]. This means that Anna would have had to have seen Elsa wearing gloves at some point. Here, it's shown that Anna came to this conclusion when she sees Elsa frolicking in the woods outside the castle (Elsa having sneaked out of the castle through the secret passages). Later, after Elsa attempts suicide following her parents' deaths, Anna thinks she continues to wear her gloves so as to hide the scars from slitting her wrist.

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** When Anna first meets Kristoff, she mentions that she assumed Elsa always wore gloves because [[TerrifiedOfGerms she had a thing about dirt]]. This means that As it turns out, Anna would have had to have seen Elsa wearing gloves at some point. Here, it's shown that Anna came comes to this conclusion when she sees Elsa frolicking in the woods outside the castle (Elsa having sneaked out of the castle through the secret passages). Later, after Elsa attempts suicide following her parents' deaths, Anna thinks she continues to wear her gloves so as to hide the scars from slitting her wrist.



** When Elsa is receiving the crown, Anna is clearly thinking about wanting to spend more time with Hans, which explains the little wave she gives to Hans.
** When Hans reveals his true colors to Anna, he mentions that the reason why he pretended to fall for her is because Elsa wasn't getting anywhere with any suitors. It's implied that even after bumping into Anna, Hans still thought he could make a pass at Elsa and found she wasn't exactly open to forming a relationship. So, during the coronation, after Elsa foists Anna onto the Duke of Weselton to avoid dancing with him, Hans approaches Elsa and tries to solicit a dance from her, and when that doesn't work, he tries to offer a courtship. However, Elsa doesn't like Hans and has a sneaking suspicion that he's up to something, so she quickly turns him down. It also explains Elsa's swift rejection of Hans' attempt to get hitched with Anna later. Further explanation for Hans's line is that, during the three years between the deaths of her parents and her coronation, Elsa is shown to receive and turn down multiple marriage proposals from other kingdoms, getting further incensed when a few that are meant for Anna are received.

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** When Elsa is receiving the crown, tiara, Anna is clearly thinking about wanting to spend more time with Hans, which explains the little wave she gives to Hans.
** When Hans reveals his true colors to Anna, he mentions that the reason why he pretended to fall for her is because Elsa wasn't getting anywhere with any suitors. It's implied that even after bumping into Anna, Hans still thought he could make a pass at Elsa and found she wasn't exactly open to forming a relationship. So, during Some new material is added to fill in the coronation, gap: after Elsa foists Anna onto the Duke of Weselton to avoid dancing with him, Hans approaches Elsa and tries to solicit a dance from her, and when that doesn't work, he tries to offer a courtship. However, Elsa doesn't like has a sixth sense about Hans and has a sneaking suspicion that he's up to something, so she quickly turns him down. It also explains Elsa's swift rejection of Hans' attempt to get hitched with Anna later. Further explanation for Hans's line is that, during the three years between the deaths of her parents and her coronation, Elsa is shown to receive and turn down multiple marriage proposals from other kingdoms, getting further incensed when a few that are meant for Anna are received.



** Furthermore, in the argument that leads to Elsa's powers being exposed, it's made clear that Anna was trying to get Elsa to rethink her decision about Anna's whirlwind courtship with Hans, and it's acknowledged that Anna was aware this wasn't the appropriate place to be lashing out at Elsa but her mouth got ahead of her thinking.

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** Furthermore, in In the resulting argument that leads to Elsa's powers being exposed, two things happen that get new context. First, Elsa's insistence on talking to Anna alone is because she wants to explain her powers to Anna, which Anna misinterprets as her wanting to set her straight about Hans. As things get heated, it's made clear that Anna was is just trying to get Elsa to rethink her decision about Anna's whirlwind courtship with Hans, and it's acknowledged that Anna was is aware this wasn't isn't the appropriate place to be lashing out at Elsa Elsa, but her mouth got gets ahead of her thinking.



* MundaneLuxury: Elsa is outright delighted when she gets to eat meals with Anna (as opposed to having Gerda bring them to her room). It takes Anna a moment to register that Elsa's sense of normalcy means she's going to get excited about simple things, like spending time with Anna.

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* MundaneLuxury: When their parents leave for their fateful voyage, Elsa is outright delighted when she gets to eat meals with Anna (as opposed to having Gerda bring them to her room). It takes Anna a moment to register that Elsa's sense of normalcy means she's going to get excited about simple things, like spending time with Anna.



* PerspectiveFlip: The story alternates between Anna's and Elsa's perspectives during the chapters covering the five years before the movie, though skewed more towards Elsa. The chapters covering the events of the movie are told entirely from Elsa's perspective. In the final chapter's author's notes, the author explained that the story originally started as an attempt to tell the main plot of the movie from Elsa's point of view, and explain what she did while confined in her room, since all that's obvious from the movie is that Elsa is scared and having a hard time controlling her powers, and the author also notes that in the movie, Elsa is never seen outside of either of her 'extreme' personas; "either she's declaring her freedom as the Snow Queen on the North Mountain or she's terrified".

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* PerspectiveFlip: The story alternates between Anna's and Elsa's perspectives during the chapters covering the five years before the movie, though skewed more towards Elsa. The chapters covering the events of the movie are told entirely from Elsa's perspective.perspective (although part of the scene where Anna and Kristoff meet Olaf is still included). In the final chapter's author's notes, the author explained that the story originally started as an attempt to tell the main plot of the movie from Elsa's point of view, and explain what she did while confined in her room, since all that's obvious from the movie is that Elsa is scared and having a hard time controlling her powers, and the author also notes that in the movie, Elsa is never seen outside of either of her 'extreme' personas; "either she's declaring her freedom as the Snow Queen on the North Mountain or she's terrified".



* PoorCommunicationKills: It's clear that Elsa's inability to explain her powers to Anna has caused some rifts.

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* PoorCommunicationKills: It's clear that Elsa's inability to explain her powers to Anna has caused some rifts.Anna, and their parents' refusal to talk about the topic, greatly frustrates Anna.



** After Elsa accidentally hurt Anna as a kid, their parents took the trolls' advice too far, separated the sisters, and reduced Elsa's contact with other people in the castle, Anna included. By eight years later, when the sisters are in their teens, they hate their parents this living situation, and they both rebel against their parents repeatedly.

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** After Elsa accidentally hurt Anna as a kid, their parents took the trolls' advice too far, separated the sisters, and reduced Elsa's contact with other people in the castle, Anna included. By eight years later, when the sisters are in their teens, they hate their parents this living situation, and they both rebel against their parents repeatedly.repeatedly by trying to sneak conversations behind one another's backs.

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* ChildMarriageVeto: As the sisters grow older, Elsa has to turn down several marriage betrothal offers from interested suitors. She's more incensed by two that are intended for Anna, even before her sixteenth birthday.

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* ChildMarriageVeto: As the sisters grow older, Elsa has to turn down several marriage betrothal offers from interested suitors. She's more incensed by two She even has to turn down a few that are intended for Anna, even before her sixteenth birthday.



* DumbassHasAPoint: In chapter 25, Elsa is launched in an angry rant to Anna upon receiving several marriage proposals on her 19th birthday. Despite being naive on the concept of marriage, Anna is right to point out that royalty are often already engaged, married, or betrothed by this age. This is TruthInTelevision, too, since it's common consensus that ''Frozen'' takes place in the early 19th century, when it wasn't uncommon for nobility to be married in their teenage years, with the intention of producing healthy heirs as early as possible.

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* DumbassHasAPoint: In chapter 25, Elsa is launched in an angry rant to Anna upon receiving several marriage proposals on her 19th birthday. Despite being naive on the concept of marriage, marriage and LoveAtFirstSight, Anna is right to point out that royalty are often already engaged, married, or betrothed by this age. This is TruthInTelevision, too, since it's common consensus that ''Frozen'' takes place Especially in the early 19th century, century when the movie takes place, when it wasn't uncommon for nobility to be married in their teenage years, with the intention of producing healthy heirs as early as possible.



-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[IronicEcho It would…give]] ''[[IronicEcho Weselton]]'' [[IronicEcho more income, yes]]. ''[The Duke stared at her as if she were an annoying bug]''
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' You haven't lost any of your three-year-old self's political savvy, have you? ''[Elsa was beginning to feel very annoyed, but she was determined not to ruin anything]''
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Why, no…I haven't]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker lost]]'' [[DeadpanSnarker any…]] ''[She let her voice trail off, implying that on the contrary, she had gained some. With a huff, the duke turned and stalked off]'' [[DeadpanSnarker Well, thank you to you, too.]]

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-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[IronicEcho It would…give]] ''[[IronicEcho Weselton]]'' [[IronicEcho more income, yes]]. ''[The Duke stared stares at her Elsa as if she were an annoying bug]''
she's got a bug on her head]''
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' You haven't lost any of your three-year-old self's political savvy, have you? ''[Elsa was beginning to feel very annoyed, but she was determined not to ruin anything]''
you?
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Why, no…I haven't]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker lost]]'' [[DeadpanSnarker any…]] ''[She let her voice trail off, implying that on the contrary, she had gained some. With a huff, the duke turned and stalked off]'' [[DeadpanSnarker [[SarcasmMode Well, thank you to you, too.]]too!]]



* TemptingFate: In a flashback in Chapter 14, Elsa recalls as a kid crashing a late night meeting between her father and the Duke of Weselton, and called the Duke out for being sleazy. Agdar quickly takes to Elsa's defense. The Duke replies, "I don't look forward to that little brat on the throne of Arendelle in the future." 18 years later, Elsa becomes Queen and when she runs into the Duke at the coronation ball, they both still very well remember this.
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' I am not [raising taxes in Arendelle].
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' [[MeaningfulEcho It would give Arendelle more income!]]
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[IronicEcho It would…give]] ''[[IronicEcho Weselton]]'' [[IronicEcho more income, yes]]. ''[The Duke stares at Elsa as if she's got a bug on her head]''
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' You haven't lost any of your three-year-old self's political savvy, have you?
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Why, no…I haven't]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker lost]]'' [[DeadpanSnarker any…]] ''[With a huff, the duke stalks off]'' [[SarcasmMode Well, thank you to you, too!]]

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* TemptingFate: In a flashback in Chapter 14, Elsa recalls as a kid crashing three year old that she once crashed a late night meeting between her father and the Duke of Weselton, and called the Duke out for being sleazy. Agdar quickly takes to Elsa's defense. The Duke replies, "I don't look forward to that little brat on the throne of Arendelle in the future." 18 years later, Elsa becomes Queen and when she runs into the Duke at the coronation ball, they both still very well remember this.
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' I am not [raising taxes in Arendelle].
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' [[MeaningfulEcho It would give Arendelle more income!]]
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[IronicEcho It would…give]] ''[[IronicEcho Weselton]]'' [[IronicEcho more income, yes]]. ''[The Duke stares at Elsa as if she's got a bug on her head]''
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' You haven't lost any of your three-year-old self's political savvy, have you?
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Why, no…I haven't]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker lost]]'' [[DeadpanSnarker any…]] ''[With a huff, the duke stalks off]'' [[SarcasmMode Well, thank you to you, too!]]
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* YouAreInCommandNow: Elsa is left in charge of Arendelle while her parents are away. When they die, Elsa finds herself saddled with running Arendelle from behind closed doors.
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-->'''Princess Anna:''' ''[biting her lip]'' [There's] Arendelle…

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-->'''Princess Anna:''' ''[biting her lip]'' [There's] Arendelle…



** What happens between when Elsa is knocked out by the chandelier and when she wakes up in the dungeon is also explained: after Elsa is knocked out, Hans momentarily is upset that the Duke of Weselton's men tried to shoot Elsa when she was clearly surrendering, thinking that killing Elsa won't undo the eternal winter she's created. It's also suggested that Elsa may have momentarily regained consciousness while Hans's team was taking her back into Arendelle.

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** What happens between when Elsa is knocked out by the chandelier and when she wakes up in the dungeon is also explained: after Elsa is knocked out, Hans momentarily is upset that angry at the Duke of Weselton's men tried bodyguards for trying to shoot Elsa when she was clearly surrendering, thinking that killing Elsa won't undo the eternal winter she's created. It's also suggested that Elsa may have momentarily regained consciousness while Hans's team was taking her back into Arendelle.



* ArtifactTitle: The secret passages in the castle don't exactly play as big a role in the plot as the title suggest, aside from providing Elsa an escape from her room on several occasions. The work is more of a character study for Anna and Elsa.

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* ArtifactTitle: The secret passages in the castle don't exactly play as big a role in the plot as the title suggest, aside from providing Elsa an escape from her room on several occasions. The work is more of a character study for Anna and Elsa.of the sisters' relationship in the five years leading up to the coronation.



--->'''Prince Hans:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'd like to see you just try that.]]

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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: In Anna's argument with Elsa in the castle cellars:

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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: In Anna's Anna and Elsa have an argument with Elsa in the castle cellars:cellars a few months before the coronation about how messed up their lives are, with each sister calling the other out for not understanding the other's problems.



* BottleEpisode: Almost the entire work, save for the parts that overlap with the movie timeline, takes place within the castle.
* CallBack: There's a nice callback during the coronation ball when the Duke of Weselton approaches Elsa and tries to ask her about raising taxes. Elsa immediately recalls an incident 18 years earlier where, as a child, she'd snuck down to the throne room while her father was arguing with this same Duke about taxes:
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' I am not [raising taxes in Arendelle].
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' [[MeaningfulEcho It would give Arendelle more income!]]
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[IronicEcho It would…give]] ''[[IronicEcho Weselton]]'' [[IronicEcho more income, yes]]. ''[The Duke stared at her as if she were an annoying bug]''
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' You haven't lost any of your three-year-old self's political savvy, have you? ''[Elsa was beginning to feel very annoyed, but she was determined not to ruin anything]''
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Why, no…I haven't]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker lost]]'' [[DeadpanSnarker any…]] ''[She let her voice trail off, implying that on the contrary, she had gained some. With a huff, the duke turned and stalked off]'' Well, thank you to you, too.

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* BottleEpisode: Almost the entire work, save for the parts that overlap with chapters covering the movie timeline, main events of the movie, takes place within the castle.
* CallBack: There's a nice callback during the coronation ball when the Duke of Weselton approaches Elsa and tries to ask her about raising taxes. Elsa immediately recalls an incident 18 years earlier where, as a child, she'd snuck down to the throne room while her father was arguing with this same Duke about taxes:
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' I am not [raising taxes in Arendelle].
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' [[MeaningfulEcho It would give Arendelle more income!]]
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[IronicEcho It would…give]] ''[[IronicEcho Weselton]]'' [[IronicEcho more income, yes]]. ''[The Duke stared at her as if she were an annoying bug]''
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' You haven't lost any of your three-year-old self's political savvy, have you? ''[Elsa was beginning to feel very annoyed, but she was determined not to ruin anything]''
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Why, no…I haven't]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker lost]]'' [[DeadpanSnarker any…]] ''[She let her voice trail off, implying that on the contrary, she had gained some. With a huff, the duke turned and stalked off]'' Well, thank you to you, too.
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** Anna does some jumping on furniture in the portrait gallery in Chapter 22, just like she'll do in "For the First Time in Forever".

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** Anna does some talks Elsa into jumping on furniture with her in the portrait gallery in Chapter 22, just like she'll do in "For the First Time in Forever".



* DarkerAndEdgier: While the material in the movie is pretty much the same, Hans can come off feeling a little bit creepier. Also, Elsa attempts suicide after her parents' deaths.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: While the material in the movie is pretty much the same, Hans can come off feeling a little bit creepier. Also, Elsa attempts to commit suicide after her parents' deaths.deaths.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Elsa's self-imposed exile. After creating her ice palace, she realizes she never considered the need to feed herself, and her attempt to forage for berries is unsuccessful.



* EyesNeverLie: Despite Elsa's attempts to act stoic, Anna can tell from her eyes when she's upset.
* FieryRedhead: Anna is noticeably more anger-prone than suggested by the movie

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* EyesNeverLie: Despite Elsa's attempts to act stoic, Anna can tell from always read her eyes when she's upset.
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* FieryRedhead: Anna is noticeably more anger-prone than suggested by the moviemovie, between being stuck in the castle, and wanting to help Elsa with her problems while being unable to do anything since Elsa nor their parents want to tell her about Elsa's powers.



* FullyClothedNudity: In chapter 12, Elsa receives a new sleeveless Christmas dress. As the author's notes point out, it's a hybrid of the sisters' coronation dresses from the movie: a recolored version of Anna's ballgown with the rosemaling design of Elsa's dress skirt. The first time Elsa puts it on, she feels a bit awkward since she's so used to wearing long-sleeve dresses. She doesn't wear it again until a few years later. This time, Elsa feels a little too exposed with her arms and shoulders, so she wears a cloak over it.
* GentleGiant: Marshmallow appears to be recharacterized as one. While he only gets mad when provoked (as Anna had done with her snowball), he's shown comforting Elsa and cradling her afterwards.

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* FullyClothedNudity: In chapter 12, Elsa receives a new sleeveless Christmas dress. As the author's notes point out, it's It's a hybrid of the sisters' coronation dresses from the movie: a recolored version of Anna's ballgown with the rosemaling design of Elsa's dress skirt. The first time Elsa puts it on, she feels a bit awkward rather naked since she's so used to wearing long-sleeve dresses. She doesn't wear it again until a few years later. This time, Elsa feels a little too exposed with her arms and shoulders, so she wears a cloak over it.
* GentleGiant: Marshmallow appears to be is recharacterized as one. While he only gets mad when provoked (as by Anna had done with her snowball), snowball, he's shown comforting Elsa and cradling her afterwards.



** It was clear in the movie that Elsa's a pretty complicated character with numerous internal conflicts. This story fleshes them out even further. For instance, a dream sequence in Chapter 2 depicts Elsa being confused about her powers, and has a sense of being trapped because of them - that no matter what she does, it's going to be the wrong thing. This is shown from the repetition of having the dream start the same way every time (when Elsa accidentally froze Anna's head), and then have a different effect on Anna, but then the same disapproval from her parents, meaning, Elsa can't please her parents, and on some level she knows that, and doesn't trust them because of it. They aren't really trying to help her, just keep her out of the way.

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** It was clear in the movie that Elsa's a pretty complicated character with numerous internal conflicts. This story fleshes them out even further. For instance, a dream sequence in Chapter 2 depicts Elsa being confused about her powers, and has a sense of being trapped because of them - that them. That no matter what she does, it's going to be the wrong thing. others will always see it as wrong. This is shown from the repetition of having the her dream start the same way every time (when Elsa accidentally froze Anna's head), and then have a different effect on Anna, but then the same disapproval from her parents, meaning, Elsa can't please her parents, and on some level she knows that, and doesn't trust them because of it. They aren't really trying to help her, just keep her out of the way.



* IgnoredEpiphany: Anna's belief in LoveAtFirstSight is prevalent throughout her teenage years. Elsa sits her down at one point to explain why this doesn't work. It's still not enough to stop Anna from throwing herself at Hans and trying to get engaged to him right away at the coronation.



* InnocentlyInsensitive: Due to her memories being wiped, Anna, at times, can be unknowingly insensitive towards Elsa. Such as trying to insist to Elsa that "you're not going to hurt me by touching me", not knowing that Elsa had hurt her as a child.

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* InnocentlyInsensitive: Due to her memories being wiped, Anna, at times, Anna can be unknowingly insensitive towards Elsa. Such as trying to insist to Elsa that "you're not going to hurt me by touching me", not knowing that that's what Elsa had hurt her as a child.is afraid of.



* LyingFingerCross: Anna does one to her father when he finds that Elsa has been secretly slipping notes to Anna.
* MadwomanInTheAttic: The way Adgar and Idun treat Elsa in this version seems to embody this trope.

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* LyingFingerCross: Anna does one to her father when he finds that Elsa has been secretly slipping notes to Anna.
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* MadwomanInTheAttic: The way Adgar and Idun treat Elsa in this version seems to embody this trope. trope.
* MeaningfulEcho: During the coronation ball, the Duke of Weselton approaches Elsa and tries to ask her about raising taxes. Elsa immediately recalls an incident 18 years earlier where, as a child, she'd snuck down to the throne room while her father was arguing with this same Duke about taxes, and doesn't hesitate to remind him of what he'd said to her father:
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' I am not [raising taxes in Arendelle].
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' [[MeaningfulEcho It would give Arendelle more income!]]
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[IronicEcho It would…give]] ''[[IronicEcho Weselton]]'' [[IronicEcho more income, yes]]. ''[The Duke stared at her as if she were an annoying bug]''
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' You haven't lost any of your three-year-old self's political savvy, have you? ''[Elsa was beginning to feel very annoyed, but she was determined not to ruin anything]''
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Why, no…I haven't]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker lost]]'' [[DeadpanSnarker any…]] ''[She let her voice trail off, implying that on the contrary, she had gained some. With a huff, the duke turned and stalked off]'' [[DeadpanSnarker Well, thank you to you, too.]]



* ObfuscatingDisability: Elsa fakes being ill in order to get some time with Anna

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* ObfuscatingDisability: When she's 16, Elsa fakes being ill in order to get some time with AnnaAnna. Her parents see through it, though, and this ends up being a one-time thing.



* PerspectiveFlip: The story is told from Elsa's perspective instead of Anna's. In the final chapter's author's notes, the author explained that the story originally started as an attempt to tell the main plot of the movie from Elsa's point of view, and explain what she did while confined in her room, since all that's obvious from the movie is that Elsa is scared and having a hard time controlling her powers, and the author also notes that in the movie, Elsa is never seen outside of either of her 'extreme' personas; "either she's declaring her freedom as the Snow Queen on the North Mountain or she's terrified".

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* PerspectiveFlip: The story is alternates between Anna's and Elsa's perspectives during the chapters covering the five years before the movie, though skewed more towards Elsa. The chapters covering the events of the movie are told entirely from Elsa's perspective instead of Anna's.perspective. In the final chapter's author's notes, the author explained that the story originally started as an attempt to tell the main plot of the movie from Elsa's point of view, and explain what she did while confined in her room, since all that's obvious from the movie is that Elsa is scared and having a hard time controlling her powers, and the author also notes that in the movie, Elsa is never seen outside of either of her 'extreme' personas; "either she's declaring her freedom as the Snow Queen on the North Mountain or she's terrified".



** After Elsa accidentally hurt Anna as a kid, their parents separated them and reduced her contact with other people in the castle, Anna included. By eight years later, when the sisters are in their teens, they both hate this living situation, and they both rebel against their parents repeatedly.
** As a teenage girl, Elsa comes to hate being confined to her room, and lectured for things that aren't her fault. One scene has her venting her rage by throwing icicles and breaking a window in her room. Even though Elsa's trying to bottle her emotions, she reacts like any other teenager would.
** Even though Elsa does her best to hide her powers around Anna, she's not 100% perfect at doing so and there are several occasions where Anna comes very close to finding out about Elsa's powers (such as the temperature in the room dropping when Elsa gets upset, or puddles left behind by her ice).

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** After Elsa accidentally hurt Anna as a kid, their parents took the trolls' advice too far, separated them the sisters, and reduced her Elsa's contact with other people in the castle, Anna included. By eight years later, when the sisters are in their teens, they both hate their parents this living situation, and they both rebel against their parents repeatedly.
** As a teenage girl, Elsa comes to resents hate being confined to her room, and lectured for things that aren't her fault. One scene has her venting her rage by throwing icicles and breaking a window in her room. Even though Elsa's trying to bottle her emotions, she reacts like any other teenager would.
** Even though Elsa does her best to hide her powers around Anna, she's not 100% perfect at doing so and there are several occasions where Anna comes very close to finding out about catches evidence of Elsa's powers (such as (among others, catching Elsa walking around in snow barefoot, incidentally seeing a snowball grow in Elsa's hands by itself, the temperature in the room dropping when Elsa gets upset, or puddles being left behind by her ice).



** Getting knocked out by the chandelier is shown to have done a little damage to Elsa's brain, as she develops a noticeable stutter after returning to Arendelle (though it noticeably disappears when she gets angry).

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** Getting knocked out by the chandelier is shown to have done left Elsa with a little damage to Elsa's brain, as concussion, and she develops a noticeable stutter after returning to Arendelle (though it noticeably disappears when she gets angry).



* TookALevelInJerkass: To some extent, Anna and Elsa's parents. Not only do they fail to realize how little control Elsa has of her powers, but there's a heavy suggestion that they've come to resent Elsa for having been born with such powers, based on their response whenever Anna comes close to discovering Elsa's powers. In fact, the story makes clear that most of Elsa's problems were the result of their parents.
* VerbalTic: Elsa develops a stutter after Hans drops the ice chandelier on her. Noticeably, it disappears whenever she gets angry.
* UnfamiliarCeiling: When Elsa is forced by Gerda to sleep in Anna's bedroom after her suicide attempt, the first thing she says when she wakes up is "Why am I in Anna's room? Oh...I remember now."
* WorseWithContext: At the post-coronation ball in the movie, Anna looks nervous when Kai repositions her on the throne dais next to Elsa, explaining why she's babbling, "What, here? Are you sure? Because I don't think I'm supposed to--Oh, okay!" when Kai is moving her. In the movie, all that seems to be suggested is that Anna feels awkward being in Elsa's presence and also in front of a crowd. In ''Secret Passages'' though, Anna's nervousness is because she and Elsa had an argument a few months prior and haven't been on the best of speaking terms until then. This explains why Anna seems so nervous to be standing so close to Elsa, and the reason she seems surprised when Elsa starts to converse cordially with her.

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* TookALevelInJerkass: To some extent, Anna and Elsa's parents. Not only do they fail to realize how little control Elsa has of her powers, but there's a heavy suggestion that they've come to resent Elsa for having been born with such powers, based on their response whenever Anna comes close to discovering Elsa's powers. In fact, the story makes clear that most of Elsa's problems were the result of their parents.
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* VerbalTic: Elsa develops a stutter after Hans drops the ice chandelier on her.her as a lingering effect of her concussion. Noticeably, it disappears whenever she gets angry.
* UnfamiliarCeiling: When Elsa is forced by Gerda to sleep in Anna's bedroom after her suicide attempt, the first thing she says when she wakes up is is, "Why am I in Anna's room? Oh...I remember now."
* WorseWithContext: At the post-coronation ball in the movie, Anna looks nervous when Kai repositions her on the throne dais next to Elsa, explaining why she's babbling, "What, here? Are you sure? Because I don't think I'm supposed to--Oh, okay!" when Kai is moving her. In the movie, all that seems to be suggested is that Anna feels awkward being in Elsa's presence and also in front of a crowd. In ''Secret Passages'' Here though, Anna's nervousness is because she and Elsa had an argument a fight a few months prior and haven't been on the best of speaking terms until then. This explains why Anna seems so nervous to be standing so close to Elsa, and the reason she seems surprised when Elsa starts to converse cordially with her.

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* EyesNeverLie: Despite Elsa's attempts to act stoic, Anna can tell from her eyes when she's upset.



** When Anna first meets Kristoff, she mentions that she assumed Elsa always wore gloves because [[TerrifiedOfGerms she had a thing about dirt]]. Now, this means that Anna would have had to have seen Elsa wearing gloves at some point. Here, it's shown that Anna came to this conclusion when she sees Elsa frolicking in the woods outside the castle (Elsa having sneaked out of the castle through the secret passages). Later, after Elsa attempts suicide following her parents' deaths, Anna thinks she continues to wear her gloves so as to hide the scars from slitting her wrist.

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** When Anna first meets Kristoff, she mentions that she assumed Elsa always wore gloves because [[TerrifiedOfGerms she had a thing about dirt]]. Now, this This means that Anna would have had to have seen Elsa wearing gloves at some point. Here, it's shown that Anna came to this conclusion when she sees Elsa frolicking in the woods outside the castle (Elsa having sneaked out of the castle through the secret passages). Later, after Elsa attempts suicide following her parents' deaths, Anna thinks she continues to wear her gloves so as to hide the scars from slitting her wrist.



* LyingFingerCross: Anna does one to her father when he finds Elsa has been secretly slipping notes to Anna.

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* LyingFingerCross: Anna does one to her father when he finds that Elsa has been secretly slipping notes to Anna.



* MundaneLuxury: In chapter 22, Elsa treats actually being able to eat meals with Anna (as opposed to having Gerda bring them to her room) like this. It takes Anna a moment to register that Elsa's sense of normalcy means she's going to get excited about simple things, like spending time with Anna.

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* MundaneLuxury: In chapter 22, Elsa treats actually being able is outright delighted when she gets to eat meals with Anna (as opposed to having Gerda bring them to her room) like this.room). It takes Anna a moment to register that Elsa's sense of normalcy means she's going to get excited about simple things, like spending time with Anna.



* ThePianoPlayer: Elsa is one.

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* ThePianoPlayer: Elsa is one. able to play Beethoven's ''Moonlight Sonata'' on the piano just fine.



* UnfamiliarCeiling: When Elsa has to sleep in Anna's room after her suicide attempt, the first thing she says when she wakes up is "Why am I in Anna's room? Oh...I remember now."

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* UnfamiliarCeiling: When Elsa has is forced by Gerda to sleep in Anna's room bedroom after her suicide attempt, the first thing she says when she wakes up is "Why am I in Anna's room? Oh...I remember now."
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* YouAreinCommandNow: Elsa is left in charge of Arendelle while her parents are away. When they die, Elsa finds herself saddled with running Arendelle from behind closed doors.

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** To get back to the castle after Anna punches out Hans, Elsa creates an ice path across the waters of the fjord (though not before first getting properly introduced to Kristoff).


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** To get back to the castle after Anna punches out Hans, Elsa creates an ice path across the waters of the fjord (though not before first getting properly introduced to Kristoff).

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-->'''Queen Elsa:''' It's not funny! I'm not accepting any ''arranged marriages'' for political reasons! I wouldn't do that even if I were normal and not messed up! "[[SarcasmMode Aw, the poor little girl has lost her parents and needs a shoulder to cry on and help governing her kingdom!]]" Well, I ''don't;'' I'm fine on my own and just because I'm a young single girl does not mean I can't take care of my country! If and when I need help, my sister can give me any assistance I need. So there.
-->'''Princess Anna:''' But Elsa…usually girls from a royal family your age ''are'' already betrothed or married. You're nineteen, not nine…And besides, maybe a romance would be good for you! ''[becoming more animated]'' Yeah, maybe that's a good idea, Elsa! Maybe you could fall in love and live happily ever after!

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-->'''Queen Elsa:''' It's not funny! I'm not accepting any ''arranged marriages'' for political reasons! I wouldn't do that even if I were normal and not messed up! "[[SarcasmMode Aw, the poor little girl has lost her parents and needs a shoulder to cry on and help governing her kingdom!]]" Well, I ''don't;'' ''don't''; I'm fine on my own and just because I'm a young single girl does not mean I can't take care of my country! If and when I need help, my sister can give me any assistance I need. So there.
-->'''Princess Anna:''' But Elsa…usually girls from a royal family your age ''are'' already betrothed or married. You're nineteen, not nine…And besides, maybe a romance would be good for you! ''[becoming more animated]'' Yeah, maybe that's a good idea, Elsa! Maybe you could fall in love and live happily ever after!


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The author later wrote a sequel called ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11241896/1/The-Coming-Storm The Coming Storm]]'', which is set after the movie. Elsa is still learning how to keep her powers in check when she discovers an assassination plot against both her and Anna within the castle walls. The sisters are baffled at who is trying to harm Elsa. As Elsa navigates her first issue as queen, she also realizes something else that could put all of Arendelle in danger.

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The author later wrote a sequel called ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11241896/1/The-Coming-Storm The Coming Storm]]'', which is set after the movie. Elsa is still learning how to keep her powers in check when she discovers an assassination plot against both her and Anna within the castle walls. The sisters are baffled at who is trying to harm Elsa. As Elsa navigates her first issue as queen, she also realizes something else that could put all of Arendelle in danger.



* InnocentlyInsensitive: Due to her memories being wiped, Anna, at times, can be unknowingly insensitive towards Elsa. Such as trying to insist to Elsa that "you're not going to hurt me by touching me", not knowing that Elsa had hurt her as a child.






* VerbalTic: The events of the movie cause Elsa to develop a stutter. The sequel ''The Coming Storm'' is about Elsa trying to get over her stutter. Noticeably, it disappears whenever she gets angry.

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* VerbalTic: The events of the movie cause Elsa to develop develops a stutter. The sequel ''The Coming Storm'' is about Elsa trying to get over her stutter.stutter after Hans drops the ice chandelier on her. Noticeably, it disappears whenever she gets angry.



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* ContinuityNod: It's established that this story is happening before ''FrozenFever'' due to a reference to Anna's upcoming birthday.
* VerbalTic: One of the subplots involves Elsa trying to get over the stutter she's developed as a result of the events of the movie.

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* ContinuityNod: It's established that this story is happening before ''FrozenFever'' due to a reference to Anna's upcoming birthday.
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** After Elsa accidentally hurt Anna as a kid, their parents separated them and reduced her contact with other people in the castle, Anna included. By eight years later, when the sisters are both teenagers, they both hate this living situation, and they both rebel against their parents repeatedly.
** As a teenage girl, Elsa comes to hate being confined to her room, and lectured for things that aren't her fault. One scene has her venting her rage by throwing icicles and breaking a window in her room. Even though Elsa's trying to bottle her emotions, that still doesn't stop her from occasionally getting angry.

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** After Elsa accidentally hurt Anna as a kid, their parents separated them and reduced her contact with other people in the castle, Anna included. By eight years later, when the sisters are both teenagers, in their teens, they both hate this living situation, and they both rebel against their parents repeatedly.
** As a teenage girl, Elsa comes to hate being confined to her room, and lectured for things that aren't her fault. One scene has her venting her rage by throwing icicles and breaking a window in her room. Even though Elsa's trying to bottle her emotions, that still doesn't stop her from occasionally getting angry. she reacts like any other teenager would.

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*LyingFingerCross: Anna does one to her father when he finds Elsa has been secretly slipping notes to Anna.



* RoundedCharacter: Elsa is a lot more fleshed out here than in the movie. For instance, her fear of hurting Anna is still present. However, she also has a habit of being [[RebelliousPrincess rebellious against her parents]] and even has her own sense of humor.
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** In chapter 8, Elsa loses control of her powers during a heated argument with Anna through the door and ends up covering the room with ice. The way her powers manifest themselves is very reminiscent of when she freezes Anna's heart in a similar outburst in "For the First Time In Forever (Reprise)".

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** In chapter 8, 12, Elsa loses control of her powers during a heated argument with Anna through the door and ends up covering the room with ice. The way her powers manifest themselves is very reminiscent of when she freezes Anna's heart in a similar outburst in "For the First Time In Forever (Reprise)".



* RageBreakingPoint: Elsa's confrontation with the Duke of Weselton's men gets this trope, but being shown in dialogue rather than on camera, it's clear that when they first shoot, Elsa doesn't want to fight back, but is quickly provoked when they refuse to back off and try to attack her after her ice shields block the first arrow.

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* RageBreakingPoint: Elsa's confrontation with the Duke of Weselton's men gets this trope, but being shown in dialogue rather than on camera, it's clear that when they first shoot, While Elsa doesn't want does a fairly good job trying to fight back, but is quickly provoked when they refuse to keep her emotions contained (out of fear of losing control of her powers), there's only so much she can hold back off and try to attack on her after her ice shields block the first arrow.anger.



** Between "Let It Go" and when Anna shows up, Elsa finds that in her flight from the castle, she didn't consider that she'd need food or liquid to survive on her own. While Elsa is able to solve the liquid problem by creating and eating icicles, food is another matter. At one point, she leaves her IcePalace and attempts to scour around for food. However, her attempt is a failure, as would be expected of someone who's got no hunting experience or knowledge of the area's ecology, and even though Elsa finds some berries, she doesn't pick them because she has no idea which ones are poisonous to people.

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** Between "Let It Go" and when Anna shows up, Elsa finds that in her flight from the castle, she didn't consider that she'd need food or liquid to survive on her own. While Elsa is able to solve the liquid problem by creating and eating icicles, food is another matter. At one point, she leaves her IcePalace and attempts to scour around for food. However, her attempt is a failure, as would be expected of someone who's got no hunting experience or knowledge of the area's ecology, plants, and even though Elsa finds some berries, she doesn't pick them because she has no idea which ones are poisonous to people.
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** Even after Elsa's epiphany that her sisterly love for Anna is something that controls her powers, she refuses to let Anna throw her gloves away, since she still fears losing control of her powers when she's upset.


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* AdaptationExpansion: Plotwise, the events of the movie are unchanged, but many new scenes are added either before or during the events of the movie that add new context.
** During the scene in the sled, Anna explains to Kristoff that she assumed Elsa always wore gloves because [[TerrifiedOfGerms she had a thing about dirt]]. Now, this means that Anna would have had to have seen Elsa wearing gloves at some point. Here, it's shown that Anna came to this conclusion when she sees Elsa frolicking in the woods outside the castle (Elsa having snuck out of the castle through the secret passages). And after Elsa attempts suicide following her parents' deaths, Anna thinks she continues to wear her gloves so as to hide the scars from slitting her wrist.
** A number of scenes happen where Anna comes very close to discovering Elsa's powers, typically in the form of the temperature in the room dropping rapidly when Elsa gets upset or frightened. And a scene shortly before the coronation has Anna discover melted water on the floor outside Elsa's bedroom, making her think Elsa has some sort of elemental magic. These scenes are meant to explain why, in the movie, Anna seems to be so quickly accepting that Elsa has ice powers when they are revealed.
** When Elsa is receiving the crown, Anna is clearly thinking about wanting to spend more time with Hans.
** When Hans reveals his true colors to Anna, he mentions that the reason why he pretended to fall for her is because Elsa wasn't getting anywhere with any suitors. It's implied that even after bumping into Anna, Hans still thought he could make a pass at Elsa and found she wasn't exactly open to forming a relationship. So, during the coronation, after Elsa foists Anna onto the Duke of Weselton to avoid dancing with him, Hans approaches Elsa and tries to solicit a dance from her, and when that doesn't work, he tries to offer a courtship. However, Elsa doesn't like Hans and has a sneaking suspicion that he's up to something, so she quickly turns him down. It also explains Elsa's swift rejection of Hans' attempt to get hitched with Anna later. Further explanation for Hans's line is that, during the three years between the deaths of her parents and her coronation, Elsa is shown to receive and turn down multiple marriage proposals from other kingdoms, getting further incensed when a few that are meant for Anna are received.
** While Anna is off singing "Love is an Open Door" with Hans, Elsa tries to mingle with the guests. This includes a conversation with [[Disney/{{Tangled}} Rapunzel]] (here, like in many fanfics, retconned to be Elsa and Anna's cousin) where Elsa realizes Rapunzel's upbringing (locked away in a tower by Mother Gothel until she was 18) is similar to her own. Before Anna returns with Hans, Elsa converses with a few other dignitaries, even getting Arendelle a few additional trade agreements. She is just finishing up one of these agreements when Anna returns with Hans in tow.

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* AdaptationExpansion: Plotwise, AdaptationalExpansion: Establishes what went on in the five years prior to Elsa's coronation, and also retells the events of the movie are unchanged, but many new scenes are added either before or during the events of the movie that add new context.
** During the scene in the sled, Anna explains to Kristoff that she assumed Elsa always wore gloves because [[TerrifiedOfGerms she had a thing about dirt]]. Now, this means that Anna would have had to have seen Elsa wearing gloves at some point. Here, it's shown that Anna came to this conclusion when she sees Elsa frolicking in the woods outside the castle (Elsa having snuck out of the castle through the secret passages). And after Elsa attempts suicide following her parents' deaths, Anna thinks she continues to wear her gloves so as to hide the scars
from slitting her wrist.
** A number of scenes happen where Anna comes very close to discovering
Elsa's powers, typically in the form of the temperature in the room dropping rapidly when Elsa gets upset or frightened. And a scene shortly before the coronation has Anna discover melted water on the floor outside Elsa's bedroom, making her think Elsa has some sort of elemental magic. These scenes are meant to explain why, in the movie, Anna seems to be so quickly accepting that Elsa has ice powers when they are revealed.
** When Elsa is receiving the crown, Anna is clearly thinking about wanting to spend more time with Hans.
** When Hans reveals his true colors to Anna, he mentions that the reason why he pretended to fall for her is because Elsa wasn't getting anywhere with any suitors. It's implied that even after bumping into Anna, Hans still thought he could make a pass at Elsa and found she wasn't exactly open to forming a relationship. So, during the coronation, after Elsa foists Anna onto the Duke of Weselton to avoid dancing with him, Hans approaches Elsa and tries to solicit a dance from her, and when that doesn't work, he tries to offer a courtship. However, Elsa doesn't like Hans and has a sneaking suspicion that he's up to something, so she quickly turns him down. It also explains Elsa's swift rejection of Hans' attempt to get hitched with Anna later. Further explanation for Hans's line is that, during the three years between the deaths of her parents and her coronation, Elsa is shown to receive and turn down multiple marriage proposals from other kingdoms, getting further incensed when a few that are meant for Anna are received.
perspective.
** While Anna is off singing "Love is an Open Door" with Hans, new scenes are added of Elsa tries to mingle mingling with the guests. This includes a conversation with [[Disney/{{Tangled}} Rapunzel]] (here, like in many fanfics, retconned to be Elsa and Anna's cousin) where Elsa realizes Rapunzel's upbringing (locked away in a tower by Mother Gothel until she was 18) is similar to her own. Before Anna returns with Hans, Elsa converses with a few other dignitaries, even getting Arendelle a few additional trade agreements. She is just finishing up one of these agreements when Anna returns with Hans in tow.



** Furthermore, in the argument that leads to Elsa's powers being exposed, it's made clear that Anna was trying to get Elsa to rethink her decision about Anna's whirlwind courtship with Hans, and it's acknowledged that Anna was aware this wasn't the appropriate place to be lashing out at Elsa but her mouth got ahead of her thinking.
** Elsa is shown to be replying to voices in her head while she's singing "Let it Go"



-->'''Princess Anna:''' ''[huffs]'' I ''said'' I was going to replace it! It's not my fault a bunch of wolves started chasing us! And ok, I don't have a super awesome sense of direction. Sor-ry.

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-->'''Princess Anna:''' ''[huffs]'' I ''said'' I was going to replace it! It's not my fault a bunch of wolves started chasing us! And ok, okay, I don't have a super awesome sense of direction. Sor-ry.Sorry.










* DumbassHasAPoint: In chapter 25, Elsa is launched in an angry rant to Anna upon receiving several marriage proposals on her 19th birthday. Despite being naive on the concept of marriage, Anna is right to point out that royalty are often already engaged, married, or betrothed by this age. This is TruthInTelevision, too, since it's common consensus that ''Frozen'' takes place in the early 19th century, when it wasn't uncommon for nobility to be married in their teenage years, with the intention of producing healthy heirs as early as possible.



** During a heated argument after Elsa snaps in response to receiving several marriage proposals, Anna points out that in other monarchies, girls of Elsa's age (19 at this point in the story) are very frequently already engaged, married, or betrothed, and, had it not been for their parents' deaths, it's likely that this would be the time when they would start looking for potential suitors for Elsa (in fact, earlier chapters make it clear that they started looking for potential suitors shortly after Elsa turned 16).

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** During a heated argument after Elsa snaps in response to receiving several marriage proposals, Anna points out that in other monarchies, girls of Elsa's age (19 at this point in the story) are very frequently already engaged, married, or betrothed, and, had it not been for their parents' deaths, it's likely that this would be the time when they would start looking for potential suitors for Elsa (in fact, earlier chapters make it clear that they started looking for potential suitors shortly after Elsa turned 16).



* ItMakesSenseInContext: While the events of the movie are unchanged, many scenes from the new plot add new context to the movie scenes.
** When Anna first meets Kristoff, she mentions that she assumed Elsa always wore gloves because [[TerrifiedOfGerms she had a thing about dirt]]. Now, this means that Anna would have had to have seen Elsa wearing gloves at some point. Here, it's shown that Anna came to this conclusion when she sees Elsa frolicking in the woods outside the castle (Elsa having sneaked out of the castle through the secret passages). Later, after Elsa attempts suicide following her parents' deaths, Anna thinks she continues to wear her gloves so as to hide the scars from slitting her wrist.
** A number of scenes happen where Anna comes very close to discovering Elsa's powers, typically in the form of the temperature in the room dropping rapidly when Elsa gets upset or frightened. And a scene shortly before the coronation has Anna discover melted water on the floor outside Elsa's bedroom, making her think Elsa has some sort of elemental magic. These scenes are meant to explain why, in the movie, Anna seems to be so quickly accepting that Elsa has ice powers when they are revealed.
** When Elsa is receiving the crown, Anna is clearly thinking about wanting to spend more time with Hans, which explains the little wave she gives to Hans.
** When Hans reveals his true colors to Anna, he mentions that the reason why he pretended to fall for her is because Elsa wasn't getting anywhere with any suitors. It's implied that even after bumping into Anna, Hans still thought he could make a pass at Elsa and found she wasn't exactly open to forming a relationship. So, during the coronation, after Elsa foists Anna onto the Duke of Weselton to avoid dancing with him, Hans approaches Elsa and tries to solicit a dance from her, and when that doesn't work, he tries to offer a courtship. However, Elsa doesn't like Hans and has a sneaking suspicion that he's up to something, so she quickly turns him down. It also explains Elsa's swift rejection of Hans' attempt to get hitched with Anna later. Further explanation for Hans's line is that, during the three years between the deaths of her parents and her coronation, Elsa is shown to receive and turn down multiple marriage proposals from other kingdoms, getting further incensed when a few that are meant for Anna are received.
** In the movie, Elsa refuses to let Anna get engaged to Hans, saying "You can't marry a man you just met!" Here, two other scenes exist where Elsa explains to Anna in more detail why her ideas of fairy tale romance don't work at all: the suitor may be bossy, disagreeable, abusive, and may want to do things that aren't good for the rest of Arendelle; likewise, letting Anna marry a prince from another kingdom would mean declaring Arendelle subordinate to that kingdom.
** Furthermore, in the argument that leads to Elsa's powers being exposed, it's made clear that Anna was trying to get Elsa to rethink her decision about Anna's whirlwind courtship with Hans, and it's acknowledged that Anna was aware this wasn't the appropriate place to be lashing out at Elsa but her mouth got ahead of her thinking.



* NotSoStoic: Elsa tends to lose her stoic façade whenever she gets angry.

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* NotSoStoic: Despite Elsa tends attempting to lose shut down her stoic façade whenever she gets angry.emotions (since her powers respond to her emotions), there are times where her attempts at staying emotionless and impassive fail.



** After Elsa accidentally hurt Anna as a kid, their parents separated them and reduced her contact with other people in the castle, Anna included. As the author's notes in one chapter mention, there is no way that Elsa or Anna would be putting up with this situation with no questions asked. By eight years later, when the sisters are both teenagers, they both resent this living situation, and they both rebel against their parents repeatedly.
** As a teenage girl, it's pretty natural that Elsa would come to hate being confined to her room, and lectured for things that aren't her fault. One scene has her venting her rage by throwing icicles and breaking a window in her room. Even though Elsa's trying to bottle her emotions, that still doesn't stop her from occasionally getting angry.

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** After Elsa accidentally hurt Anna as a kid, their parents separated them and reduced her contact with other people in the castle, Anna included. As the author's notes in one chapter mention, there is no way that Elsa or Anna would be putting up with this situation with no questions asked. By eight years later, when the sisters are both teenagers, they both resent hate this living situation, and they both rebel against their parents repeatedly.
** As **As a teenage girl, it's pretty natural that Elsa would come comes to hate being confined to her room, and lectured for things that aren't her fault. One scene has her venting her rage by throwing icicles and breaking a window in her room. Even though Elsa's trying to bottle her emotions, that still doesn't stop her from occasionally getting angry.



** In the movie, Elsa refuses to let Anna get engaged to Hans, saying "You can't marry a man you just met!" Here, two other scenes exist where Elsa explains to Anna in more detail why her ideas of fairy tale romance don't work at all: the suitor may be bossy, disagreeable, abusive, and may want to do things that aren't good for the rest of Arendelle; likewise, letting Anna marry a prince from another kingdom would mean declaring Arendelle subordinate to that kingdom.



** Getting knocked out by the chandelier is shown to have done a little damage to Elsa's brain, as she develops a noticeable stutter after returning to Arendelle (though it noticeably disappears when she gets angry).



-->'''The Duke of Weselton:''' It would gain Arendelle more income! You have no proof that I am trying to 'cheat on moneys', as your daughter so eloquently suggested! ''[under his breath]'' [[TemptingFate I don't look forward to that little brat on the throne of Arendelle in the future]].

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-->'''The Duke -->'''Duke of Weselton:''' It would gain Arendelle more income! You have no proof that I am trying to 'cheat on moneys', as your daughter so eloquently suggested! ''[under his breath]'' [[TemptingFate I don't look forward to that little brat on the throne of Arendelle in the future]].



-->'''The Duke of Weselton:''' [[BlatantLies No! No, of course not!]]

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-->'''The Duke -->'''Duke of Weselton:''' [[BlatantLies No! No, of course not!]]



* TemptingFate: In a flashback in Chapter 14, Elsa recalls as a kid crashing a meeting her father was having with the Duke of Weselton (shortly after Anna was born), and called the Duke out for being sleazy. The Duke says to Agdar, "I don't look forward to that little brat on the throne of Arendelle in the future." 18 years later, Elsa becomes Queen and still very well remembers this.

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* TemptingFate: In a flashback in Chapter 14, Elsa recalls as a kid crashing a late night meeting between her father was having with and the Duke of Weselton (shortly after Anna was born), Weselton, and called the Duke out for being sleazy. Agdar quickly takes to Elsa's defense. The Duke says to Agdar, replies, "I don't look forward to that little brat on the throne of Arendelle in the future." 18 years later, Elsa becomes Queen and when she runs into the Duke at the coronation ball, they both still very well remembers this.remember this.
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' I am not [raising taxes in Arendelle].
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' [[MeaningfulEcho It would give Arendelle more income!]]
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[IronicEcho It would…give]] ''[[IronicEcho Weselton]]'' [[IronicEcho more income, yes]]. ''[The Duke stares at Elsa as if she's got a bug on her head]''
-->'''Duke of Weselton:''' You haven't lost any of your three-year-old self's political savvy, have you?
-->'''Queen Elsa:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Why, no…I haven't]] ''[[DeadpanSnarker lost]]'' [[DeadpanSnarker any…]] ''[With a huff, the duke stalks off]'' [[SarcasmMode Well, thank you to you, too!]]

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