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* OurZombiesAreDifferent: Closer to the ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''-style [[VoodooZombie undead automatons]] than any of the [[Film/NightOfTheLivingDead Romero]]-derived versions.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5106353/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-The-Magic-Touch Superwomen of Eva 2: The Magic Touch]]'' is an entry in the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' fanfic series penned by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]], in which [[BridgeBunnies Maya]] [[AscendedExtra Ibuki]] learns some disturbing things about Nerv, embraces her [[SuperpowerfulGenetics magical heritage]], and takes the name {{Zatanna}} in order to save the world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5106353/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-The-Magic-Touch Superwomen of Eva 2: The Magic Touch]]'' is an entry in the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' fanfic series penned by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]], in which [[BridgeBunnies Maya]] [[AscendedExtra Ibuki]] learns some disturbing things about Nerv, embraces her [[SuperpowerfulGenetics magical heritage]], and takes the name {{Zatanna}} ComicBook/{{Zatanna}} in order to save the world.
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* [[spoiler: IdentityImpersonator: In one chapter, in order to throw off suspicion from Maya, her sister dons the Zatanna outfit and fakes a battle with a dragon over the skies of Tokyo-3.]] [[ACupAngst Much to Maya's chargin]], she later says that she needed to bind her breasts to fit the suit.
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* [[spoiler: IdentityImpersonator: In one chapter, in order to throw off suspicion from Maya, her sister dons the Zatanna outfit and fakes a battle with a dragon over the skies of Tokyo-3.]] [[ACupAngst Much to Maya's chargin]], chagrin]], she later says that she needed to bind her breasts to fit the suit.
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* [[spoiler: IdentityImpersonator: In one chapter, in order to throw off suspicion from Maya, her sister dons the Zatanna outfit and fakes a battle with a dragon over the skies of Tokyo-3.]] [[ACupAngst Much to Maya's charging]], chargin]], she later says that she needed to bind her breasts to fit the suit.
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* [[spoiler: IdentityImpersonator]]IdentityImpersonator: In one chapter, in order to throw off suspicion from Maya, her sister dons the Zatanna outfit and fakes a battle with a dragon over the skies of Tokyo-3.]] [[ACupAngst Much to Maya's charging]], she later says that she needed to bind her breasts to fit the suit.
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* [[spoiler: BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood: Maya uses a MindWipe on Gendo, intending to make it at least ''possible'' for he and Shinji to patch up their relationship. On the other hand, Gendo's also forgotten everything about his ''job'' and needs Fuyutsuki to counsel him. It's also notable in that Maya doesn't make this decision at ''all'' lightly, as she essentially erased Gendo's entire identity in the hopes that he'd create a better one, and it's treated almost like crossing the GodzillaThreshold.]]
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* [[spoiler: BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood: Maya uses a MindWipe on Gendo, gives Gendo some LaserGuidedAmnesia, intending to make it at least ''possible'' for he and Shinji to patch up their relationship. On the other hand, Gendo's also forgotten everything about his ''job'' and needs Fuyutsuki to counsel him. It's also notable in that Maya doesn't make this decision at ''all'' lightly, as she essentially erased Gendo's entire identity in the hopes that he'd create a better one, and it's treated almost like crossing the GodzillaThreshold.]]
** [[spoiler: AmnesiacResonance comes into play when Gendo stumbles across a picture of Yui.]]
** [[spoiler: AmnesiacResonance comes into play when Gendo stumbles across a picture of Yui.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: Well, [[MeaningfulName Faust]] has a deal with ''someone''; we're just not quite sure who yet.
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* HeelFaceTurn[[spoiler:/HeelFaceBrainwashing: Gendo.]]
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* [[spoiler:ThrowingTheFight]]: Faust fully intends to do this when he first confronts Zatanna.
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* OurZombiesAreDifferent: Closer to the ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' style [[VoodooZombie undead automatons]] than any of the [[Film/NightOfTheLivingDead Romero]]-derived versions.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Western-style, intelligent, [[spoiler:and the one that appears is friendly.]]
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* OurZombiesAreDifferent: Closer to the ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' style [[VoodooZombie undead automatons]] than any of the [[Film/NightOfTheLivingDead Romero]]-derived versions.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5106353/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-The-Magic-Touch Superwomen of Eva 2: The Magic Touch]]'' is an entry in the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' fanfic series penned by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]], in which [[BridgeBunnies Maya]] [[AscendedExtra Ibuki]] learns some disturbing things about NERV, embraces her [[SuperpowerfulGenetics magical heritage]], and takes the name {{Zatanna}} in order to save the world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5106353/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-The-Magic-Touch Superwomen of Eva 2: The Magic Touch]]'' is an entry in the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' fanfic series penned by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]], in which [[BridgeBunnies Maya]] [[AscendedExtra Ibuki]] learns some disturbing things about NERV, Nerv, embraces her [[SuperpowerfulGenetics magical heritage]], and takes the name {{Zatanna}} in order to save the world.
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* IWasYoungAndNeededTheMoney: The entire reason Maya ''ever'' consented to being a stage magician in her backstory was so that she could get the funding to pay for college to learn the skills that later landed her at NERV.
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* IWasYoungAndNeededTheMoney: The entire reason Maya ''ever'' consented to being a stage magician in her backstory was so that she could get the funding to pay for college to learn the skills that later landed her at NERV.Nerv.
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Maya Ibuki was born to and of magic, but she never liked it. She was only too happy to leave it behind and become a computer technician. But unforeseen circumstances will force her to pick up her wand once more.
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* AlmightyJanitor: Gendo's secretary is able to stonewall '''[[EvilSorcerer Felix Faust]]''', even though he is also "a Special Inspector to NERV from the Marduke Institute, duly appointed by the Human Instrumentality Committee, an agency of the United Nations" in addition to being, well, an EvilSorcerer. She is, however, happy to schedule him for an appointment with Gendo at one-o'-clock... in two weeks.
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* AlmightyJanitor: Gendo's secretary is able to stonewall '''[[EvilSorcerer Felix Faust]]''', even though ''even though'' he is also "a Special Inspector to NERV from the Marduke Institute, duly appointed by the Human Instrumentality Committee, an agency of the United Nations" in addition to being, well, an EvilSorcerer. She is, however, happy to schedule him for an appointment with Gendo at one-o'-clock... in two weeks.
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* AlmightyJanitor: Gendo's secretary is able to stonewall ''[[EvilSorcerer '''[[EvilSorcerer Felix Faust]]'', Faust]]''', even though he is also "a Special Inspector to NERV from the Marduke Institute, duly appointed by the Human Instrumentality Committee, an agency of the United Nations" in addition to being, well, an EvilSorcerer. She is, however, happey happy to schedule him for an appointment with Gendo at one-o'-clock... in two weeks.
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* SeenItAll: After Angels [[spoiler:and a dragon]] attacking the city and [[spoiler:pixies and zombies]] showing up, the people at Nerv are starting to get a little blase:
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--> '''Aoba''': "Demons."
--> '''Makoto''': "Sure, why not? We have Angels, now we have demons, too."
--> '''Aoba''': "Demons."
--> '''Makoto''': "Sure, why not? We have Angels, now we have demons, too."
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* AlmightyJanitor: Gendo's secretary is able to stonewall ''[[EvilSorcerer Felix Faust]]'', even though he is also "a Special Inspector to NERV from the Marduke Institute, duly appointed by the Human Instrumentality Committee, an agency of the United Nations" in addition to being, well, an EvilSorcerer. She is, however, happey to schedule him for an appointment with Gendo at one-o'-clock... in two weeks.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5106353/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-The-Magic-Touch Superwomen of Eva 2: The Magic Touch]]'' is an entry in the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' fanfic series penned by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]], in which [[BridgeBunnies Maya]] [[AscendedExtra Ibuki]] learns some disturbing things about NERV and embraces her [[SuperpowerfulGenetics magical heritage]] and takes the name {{Zatanna}} in order to save the world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5106353/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-The-Magic-Touch Superwomen of Eva 2: The Magic Touch]]'' is an entry in the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' fanfic series penned by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]], in which [[BridgeBunnies Maya]] [[AscendedExtra Ibuki]] learns some disturbing things about NERV and NERV, embraces her [[SuperpowerfulGenetics magical heritage]] heritage]], and takes the name {{Zatanna}} in order to save the world.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5106353/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-The-Magic-Touch Superwomen of Eva 2: The Magic Touch]]'' is an entry in the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' fanfic series penned by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]], starring [[BridgeBunnies Maya]] [[AscendedExtra Ibuki]] as {{Zatanna}}.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5106353/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-The-Magic-Touch Superwomen of Eva 2: The Magic Touch]]'' is an entry in the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' fanfic series penned by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]], starring in which [[BridgeBunnies Maya]] [[AscendedExtra Ibuki]] as {{Zatanna}}.
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* GambitRoulette: According to the files that spurred Maya to action, everything that happens in canon through ''End of Evangelion'' is part of Gendo's plan. [[spoiler:Including the part where Rei betrays him for Shinji. Somehow.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5106353/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-The-Magic-Touch Superwomen of Eva 2: The Magic Touch]]'' is an entry in the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' fanfic series penned by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]], starring [[BridgeBunnies Maya]] [[AscendedExtra Maya Ibuki]] as {{Zatanna}}.
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** ''In'' the {{omake}}s, however, this story crosses over with ''Fanfic/SOE2HandOfFate'' and, of all things, ''Series/MythBusters''.
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** ''In'' the {{omake}}s, however, this story crosses over with ''Fanfic/SOE2HandOfFate'' ''Fanfic/SOE2TheHandOfFate'' and, of all things, ''Series/MythBusters''.
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** ''In'' the {{omake}}s, however, this story crosses over with ''Hand of Fate'' and, of all things, ''Series/MythBusters''.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5106353/1/ net/s/5106353/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-The-Magic-Touch Superwomen of Eva 2: The Magic Touch]]'' is an entry in the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' fanfic series penned by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1615106/Mike313 Mike313]], starring [[AscendedExtra Maya Ibuki]] as {{Zatanna}}.
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* WhenHeSmiles: And it gets Maya like you wouldn’t believe.
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* WhenHeSmiles: [[WhenSheSmiles When He Smiles]]: And it gets Maya like you wouldn’t believe.