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* BigGood: [[Literature/TheSilmarillion Eru Iluvatar]], heavily implied to be behind the events of the plot and mentioned by Annatar in dialogue.



* GoodIsNotSoft: As convincing Dragon that trying to take over would be an appallingly bad idea, Annatar warns her Family is in charge of reinforcing Justice, and ticking them off results in sunken continents.

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* GoodIsNotSoft: As convincing Dragon that trying to take over would be an appallingly bad idea, Annatar warns that her Family (ie. [[spoiler: Eru and the Valar]]) is in charge of reinforcing Justice, and ticking them off results in sunken continents.
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* MythologyGag:
** Taylor's reaction to seeing [[spoiler: Hookwolf]] is ''"[[Literature/TheSilmarillion I could show him what a real werewolf is capable of]]"''.
** Maglor makes a cameo in an Omake, having jumped to intervene when hearing of Annatar.
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* IHaveManyNames: Taylor goes through several-
** She starts out as Taylor Hebert.
** She adopts the Cape Name of Annatar, [[spoiler: briefly adopting it as a full-time identity after Second-Triggering]].
** After [[spoiler: her Second Trigger]], she realizes she is a [[spoiler: Maia]] and her past life was [[spoiler: Sauron]].
** After [[spoiler: her HeelRealization]], she starts going by the full-time identity of [[spoiler: Mairë]].
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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: ''Narrowly'' Averted. After [[spoiler: Noelle's RedemptionEqualDeath, Taylor worries that pursuing her own redemption will result in the same; if her options are limited to dying for her atonement, or becoming a Dark Lord again, than she ''will'' choose the latter]]. Thankfully, [[spoiler: Sophia]] is on hand to talk [[spoiler: her]] down by promising that [[spoiler: they can find redemption ''together'']].

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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: ''Narrowly'' Averted. After [[spoiler: Noelle's RedemptionEqualDeath, RedemptionEqualsDeath, Taylor worries that pursuing her own redemption will result in the same; if her options are limited to dying for her atonement, or becoming a Dark Lord again, than she ''will'' choose the latter]]. Thankfully, [[spoiler: Sophia]] is on hand to talk [[spoiler: her]] down by promising that [[spoiler: they can find redemption ''together'']].

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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: [[spoiler: Shaper, the Echidna clone of Panacea's shard, outright states that the Entities are descendants of Ungoliant]].



**[[spoiler: the trope is also Zig-Zagged because Maiar could be the 'Cthulhu' in relation to the Shard]].



* EldritchAbomination: The Entities, as per ''Worm'' canon, but here [[spoiler: they're implied to be the spawn of ''Ungoliant'']].

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* EldritchAbomination: The Entities, as per ''Worm'' canon, but here [[spoiler: they're implied stated by Shaper to be the spawn of ''Ungoliant'']].


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* EmptyShell: [[spoiler: Heartbreaker's fate after provoking Annatar]].


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* MuggingTheMonster: [[spoiler: One does not simply antagonize the reincarnation of Sauron]].

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%%* {{Mithril}}: It's a fanfic of the TropeNamer after all.%%ZCE

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%%* * MindRape: [[spoiler: Heartbreaker]] learns the hard way that [[spoiler: pissing off Sauron]] is a ''really'' bad idea, by being on the receiving end of this.
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* PokeInTheThirdEye: Attempting to use Thinker powers on [[spoiler: Taylor/Sauron]] results in this; when [[spoiler: Emma/Oracle]] attempts to get a Thinker reading on [[spoiler: Annatar]], what she sees is [[spoiler: an image of Mordor and Barad-Dur]], which [[spoiler: frightens her into [[EnemyMine allying with Empire88]] against Annatar]].
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* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler: When Annatar starts becoming more ruthless, Sophia and Armsmaster leave, the latter looking for the former]].

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* DefectorFromDecadence: [[spoiler: When Annatar starts becoming more ruthless, Sophia [[spoiler:Sophia and Armsmaster leave, the latter looking for the former]].



* {{Mithril}}: It's a fanfic of the TropeNamer after all.

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* AppealToObscurity: [[spoiler: Annatar asks Bakuda who Grendel is, and when she can't answer, says that while no one really remembers him, everybody remembers Beowulf, the hero that slew him, and like what happened with Grendel, Annatar would reduce Bakuda to a mere footnote in ''her'' legend]].

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* AppealToObscurity: [[spoiler: Annatar asks Bakuda who Grendel is, and when she can't answer, says that while no one really remembers him, everybody remembers Beowulf, the hero that slew him, and like what happened with Grendel, Annatar would reduce Bakuda to a mere footnote in ''her'' legend]].legend, [[spoiler:right before killing her]].



* AuraVision: [[spoiler: The Rings allow one to see Leviathan's Core]].
* BewareTheNiceOnes: [[spoiler: As Bakuda found out, you shouldn't push Annatar too far]].

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* AuraVision: [[spoiler: The Rings allow one to see Leviathan's [[spoiler: an Endbringer's Core]].
* BewareTheNiceOnes: [[spoiler: As Bakuda found out, you shouldn't push Annatar too far]].far. [[spoiler:The lesson was a fatal one]].



* CloneDegeneration: [[spoiler: A staple with Noelle's clones, but her attempts to clone Annatar are dead on arrival, and in the form of her previous incarnation's different personas]].

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* CloneDegeneration: [[spoiler: A staple with Noelle's clones, but her [[spoiler:her attempts to clone Annatar are dead on arrival, and in the form of her previous incarnation's different personas]].



* ExactWords: [[spoiler: Taylor saying that she can't Master the wearers of the Rings comes across as this to Armsmaster's lie detector]].

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* ExactWords: [[spoiler: Taylor saying that she can't Master the wearers of the Rings comes across as this to Armsmaster's lie detector]].detector.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Early on, Taylor's speech and body language suddenly became hammiest or even disturbing, freaking out everybody and hinting at her true nature.
-->'''Taylor:''' "And then Emma seemed to have a weak spot for me. So you cauterized it. And she learned to love the hot iron. Like a slave begging for the whip."\\
'''Sophia:''' (blanching) "The '''fuck'''? Where did you come up with that shit?"\\
'''Taylor:''' "Oh, don't mind me."
* ProperlyParanoid: Taylor gives Narya to Armsmaster because he'll not trust her unreservedly, and she need someone who will keep watch her over. Armsmaster accepts the Ring but he doesn't want to wear it unless he has to, proving Taylor chose well.
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* EvilIsNotAToy: Before handing out her trinkets, Taylor warns Power Rings are dangerous and additive and the bearer's fate is bound to theirs.
-->"The Rings of Power are dangerous and powerful. They will give you strength, but they will also bind you to them. If you accept the burden of their bearing, your fates will be forever tied to theirs. These are not mere trinkets, tools and weapons like other tinkertech; these will tie themselves to your very soul, and their essence will become inextricable from yours, save by death."


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* GoodIsNotSoft: As convincing Dragon that trying to take over would be an appallingly bad idea, Annatar warns her Family is in charge of reinforcing Justice, and ticking them off results in sunken continents.
-->"Dragon…" I swooped downward, looking up at her from just below her feet. The wind rustled around us, and the sea sparkled below. "I… I have been here before. The last time I tried to rule through fear and control my enemies, I was destroyed just in the moment of my victory. The same thing the time before. It doesn't work, Dragon—and it leaves you with nothing, not even yourself."\\
"How?" Dragon yelled. "Who would have been left to fight against us?"\\
"That's what I thought," I said, my voice closer than ever to Ancalagon's low rumble. I rose once more, my eyes level with hers. "But there is justice in this world, and… and there are beings greater than us, too. My family. My… my Father. And even if you cannot see them, cannot know them… they are here. And they will act." I imagined the earth crumbling beneath the Bay, the sea rushing up to reclaim the tainted earth. The image made me shudder. Leviathan could not compare to the wrath of the One.


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* ItsPersonal: When Danny almost gets killed during Bakuda's bombing spree, Taylor decides Bakuda is living on borrowed time.
-->'''Sophia:''' (coldly) "Bitch. Hasn’t she caused enough trouble for one night?"\\
'''Taylor:''' She's caused enough trouble for one lifetime. Hers."
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* AttackItsWeakPoint: Auxiliary's Tinker power lets him make Tinkertech modifications to existing devices and machines, allow them to basically do whatever he can think of. However all he makes is centralised, meaning that anything he's tinkered with has a single central core that, if taken out, makes the device inoperable. And this can have lethal results.

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* AttackItsWeakPoint: Auxiliary's Tinker power lets him make Tinkertech modifications to existing devices and machines, allow them to basically do whatever he can think of. However However, all he makes is centralised, meaning that anything he's tinkered with has a single central core that, if taken out, makes the device inoperable. And this can have lethal results.

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* AttackItsWeakPoint: Auxiliary's Tinker power lets him make Tinkertech modifications to existing devices and machines, allow them to basically do whatever he can think of. However all he makes is centralised, meaning that anything he's tinkered with has a single central core that, if taken out, makes the device inoperable. And this can have lethal results.



* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: The new Empire Tinker Auxilary is described as a villainous version of Armsmaster]].

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* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: The new Empire Tinker Auxilary is described as a villainous version of Armsmaster]].Armsmaster.
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* SuperEmpowering: The Rings Taylor gives the Wards enhance their existing powers, Clockblocker can now slow down time around him, but his allies still think at the normal rate, Vista can affect direction; allowing her to say that "down" is say, a spot 5 feet in the air, Aegis gets a HealingFactor, Gallant's EmotionBomb powers get stronger and he has better control that lets him do more than simple blasts, Browbeat gets increased self-control (leading him to be banned from poker with the others), Kid Win's Tinkering and focus are boosted, and Sophia can teleport through shadows.

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* SuperEmpowering: The Rings Taylor gives the Wards enhance their existing powers, Clockblocker can now slow down time around him, but his allies still think at the normal rate, Vista can affect direction; direction, allowing her to say that "down" is is, say, a spot 5 feet in the air, air and cause things in an affected area to fall up and remain floating in that spot, Aegis gets a HealingFactor, Gallant's EmotionBomb powers get stronger and he has better control that lets him do more than simple blasts, Browbeat gets increased self-control (leading him to be banned from poker with the others), Kid Win's Tinkering and focus are boosted, and Sophia can teleport through shadows.

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->"Three Rings for the Sentinels, honest and true.\\
Seven for the Wards, in their city of sin.\\
Nine for the Penitent, forged anew.\\
One for the Ring-Maker, to find light within,\\
On the shores where the rising Sun shines through.\\
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One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to guide them;\\
One Ring to bring them all from out the Dark which hides them\\
On the shores where the rising Sun shines through."



* {{Crossover}}: See top of page.

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* {{Crossover}}: See top Between ''Worm'' and ''The Lord of page.the Rings''.



* DeathSeeker: Little by little, [[spoiler:Emma]] develops suicidal tendencies due to hating herself but feeling unable to change for the better. By the thirteenth arc she wants nothing more than to [[spoiler:betray the Empire]] and then kill herself, but Taylor and Sophia talk her into seeking atonement instead.



** [[spoiler: Echidna creating an Eidolon clone]].

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** [[spoiler: Echidna [[spoiler:Echidna creating an Eidolon clone]].



** [[spoiler: Shaper, Amy's Shard]] becomes one after [[spoiler: Noelle's cloning ability gives it a body]].
** [[spoiler: Taylor/Annatar/Mairon]] could be considered this after [[spoiler: getting in touch with her Maia-nature]].

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** [[spoiler: Shaper, [[spoiler:Shaper, Amy's Shard]] becomes one after [[spoiler: Noelle's cloning ability gives it a body]].
** [[spoiler: Taylor/Annatar/Mairon]] could be considered this after [[spoiler: getting in touch with her Maia-nature]].[[spoiler:Taylor/Annatar/Mairon]] is really an older-than-time-itself fallen angel reincarnated as an human girl.



* MadeOfIndestructium: Mithril is nearly indestructible when properly forged.



** MadeOfIndestructium: Mithril is nearly indestructible when properly forged.



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Emma gets one in "Twinkle 2.3" when she tries to bully Taylor after the latter's trigger event.
-->'''Taylor:''' "Tread carefully, little Icarus. You're flying a little too close to the sun."\\
'''Emma:''' "You think I--"\\
'''Taylor:''' (coldly) "I knew a little girl who loved her friends, and valued the truth, and knew right from wrong. That girl suffered, as we all do. You want to know the difference between her and me?" (brief pause) "I survived my trial. She broke."



* {{Seer}}: Taylor, of course.

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* AuraVision: [[spoiler: The Rings allow one to see Leviathan’s Core]].
* BecomingTheMask: [[spoiler: Emma]] initially only joined the Empire to [[spoiler: gain allies against Annatar]], but it's implied later the Nazism is rubbing off on [[spoiler: her]].

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* AuraVision: [[spoiler: The Rings allow one to see Leviathan’s Core]].
* BecomingTheMask: [[spoiler: Emma]] initially only joined the Empire to [[spoiler: gain allies against Annatar]], but it's implied later the Nazism is rubbing off on [[spoiler: her]].
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* CelebrityParadox: The author has remained deliberately ambiguous on whether Tolkien, [=LotR=], or his other works exist on Bet at all or in some manner on Aleph.

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* CelebrityParadox: The author has remained deliberately ambiguous on whether Tolkien, Creator/JRRTolkien, [=LotR=], or his other works exist on Bet at all or in some manner on Aleph.
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* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: The new Empire Tinker Auxilary is described as a villainous version of Armsmaster]].
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* CrowningMomentOFAwesome: Annataylor's battle with one of the Entities, which are implied to be the same kind of thing as [[spoiler:''[[EldritchAbomination Ungoliant]]''. No Shard for her.]] See also DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu below.
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** [[spoiler: Burzashdurb is deliberately destroyed by Taylor to symbolize her moving past her darkness]].

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** [[spoiler: Burzashdurb is deliberately destroyed by Taylor to symbolize her moving past her darkness]].darkness. She later reforges it, but with a mithril finish, and renames it "Sunrise"]].
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* AmplifierArtifact: The Seven draw their abilities from their Bearer's own uniqueness, hence why they boost the abilities of the Wards instead of granting entirely separate abilities like the Three.

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* AmplifierArtifact: The Seven draw their abilities from their Bearer's own uniqueness, hence why they boost the abilities of the Wards instead of granting entirely separate abilities like the Three.Three do.
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* OurAngelsAreDifferent: [[spoiler: Danny explicitly calls Taylor/Annatar an angel when she explains her origins to him]].
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* CloneDegeneration: [[spoiler: A staple with Noelle's clones, but her attempts to clone Annatar are dead on arrival, and in the form of her previous incarnation's personas]].

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* CloneDegeneration: [[spoiler: A staple with Noelle's clones, but her attempts to clone Annatar are dead on arrival, and in the form of her previous incarnation's different personas]].



* DeathByIrony: [[spoiler: Bakuda wanted to become immortalized through the memories of others, Taylor killed her in a way that would reduce her to a footnote the legend of Annatar]].

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* DeathByIrony: [[spoiler: Bakuda wanted to become immortalized through the memories of others, Taylor killed her in a way that would reduce her to a footnote in the legend of Annatar]].



* LoyalPhlebotinum: The Rings work for Taylor because she made them, even if she can’t complement them like a true bearer chosen by the ring could.
* MagicallyBindingContract: If a Ring-Bearer swears on oath on their Ring, they ''have'' to follow it.

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* LoyalPhlebotinum: The Rings work for Taylor because she made them, even if she can’t complement compliment them like a true bearer chosen by the ring could.
* MagicallyBindingContract: If a Ring-Bearer swears on an oath on their Ring, they ''have'' to follow it.
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* FailedASpotCheck: [[spoiler: Emma, even with her powers, missed that her sister was a cape]].
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** [[spoiler: Burzashdurb is deliberately destroyed by Taylor to symbolize her moving past her darkness]].
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* ReforgedBlade: Taylor reforged [[spoiler: the shards of Narsil]] into [[spoiler: Amauril, "The Flame Of The East" as a gift for Sophia]].
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* LegendFadesToMyth: Nearly said word-for-word by Taylor when she [[spoiler: explains her true nature to Sophia]].
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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: ''Narrowly'' Averted. After [[spoiler: Noelle's RedemptionEqualDeath, Taylor worries that pursuing her own redemption will result in the same; if her options are limited to dying for her atonement, or becoming a Dark Lord again, than she ''will'' choose the latter]]. Thankfully, [[spoiler: Sophia]] is on hand to talk [[spoiler: her]] down by promising that [[spoiler: they can find redemption ''together'']].
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Noelle. In this version, she stops her RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and allows Taylor to sever her Shard. The trauma is lethal, but she's glad she gets to [[DyingAsYourself Die As Herself]].

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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Noelle. In this version, she stops her RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and allows Taylor to sever her Shard. The trauma is lethal, but she's glad she gets to [[DyingAsYourself Die As Herself]].Herself]]]].

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* DyingAsYourself: [[spoiler: Noelle. Even though severing her Shard killed her, she was glad to die as a ''human'', not a monster]].



* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: Noelle. In this version, she stops her RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and allows Taylor to sever her Shard. The trauma is lethal, but she's glad she gets to [[DyingAsYourself Die As Herself]].



** [[spoiler: Emma]] has seer-like powers and takes the name Oracle after triggering.

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** [[spoiler: Emma]] has seer-like powers and takes the name Oracle after triggering.[[spoiler: Oracle]]. Specifically, she can see a person's real motivations when she looks at their face. [[spoiler: When she looks at Annatar, all she sees is Sauron]].


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* TogetherInDeath: Taylor tells [[spoiler: a dying Noelle]] that she'll see [[spoiler: Krouse again in the Halls of Mandos]]. [[spoiler: Noelle]] says it's a nice thought, but she doesn't believe it.

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** [[spoiler: Annatar, after becoming more of a KnightTemplar, switchers her previous weapons for the mace Burzashdurb, and her armor turns completely black (it's just soot, but it apparently remains for several weeks, and has basically the same effect)]].

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** [[spoiler: Trickster and Noelle]].

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