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* VaguenessIsComing: [[spoiler: See TitleDrop above.]]
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* [[spoiler: AWolfInSheepsClothing: Martin Samuels.]]
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* TitleDrop: [[spoiler: TitleDrop: ''"They are returning. When the first house of Slytherin burns, they will find the weapon they seek."'']]
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* MismatchedEyes: Professor Kirtle has these, of the heterochromia variety. They are noted for giving her a slightly manic look.
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* MixedAncestry: Elin, the daughter of a British Indian Muggle father and a Scottish Chinese witch. Sisters Genevieve and Aimée are French-English. Fred Lee Weasley is half black, half white.
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* MixedAncestry: Elin, the daughter of a British Indian Muggle father and a Scottish Chinese witch. Sisters Genevieve and Aimée are French-English. Fred Lee Weasley is half black, half white.the son of Angelina (Black British) and George (White British). In magical terms, Bill and Fleur's children are all part Veela, while Slytherin Orpheus Lloyd has siren blood.
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* BigBrotherBully: Downplayed with James Sirius. He’s not above teasing Al and telling tales to frighten him, but they seem to genuinely care about each other overall.
* BlackAndNerdy: Ravenclaw prefect Katherine Tredwell.
* BlackAndNerdy: Ravenclaw prefect Katherine Tredwell.
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* AcademicAlphaBitch: Isobel and Rose [[spoiler: at first]]. Edgar Young seems to be a male version of this.
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* AcademicAlphaBitch: Isobel and Rose [[spoiler: at first]].Rose. Edgar Young seems to be a male version of this.
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** To LordOfTheRings — there's a student with the surname Mirkwood, and TheHobbit book is mentioned.
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** To LordOfTheRings ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'' — there's a student with the surname Mirkwood, and TheHobbit ''Literature/TheHobbit'' book is mentioned.
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Sidefic ''Off To Hogwarts, Dear?'' can be found [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/9840800/chapters/22086659 here]].
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** To TheFlash — The red-haired Ravenclaw prefect is called Jay West, a combination of Jay Garrick and Wally West, and plays Seeker, a position requiring quick reflexes and speed.
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** To TheFlash ComicBook/TheFlash — The red-haired Ravenclaw prefect is called Jay West, a combination of Jay Garrick and Wally West, and plays Seeker, a position requiring quick reflexes and speed.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: [[spoiler: Scorpius is deeply aviophobic, to the point where he passes out from fear in midair. He’s also at a school where Flying Lessons are mandatory.]]
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: [[spoiler: Scorpius is deeply aviophobic, acrophobic, to the point where he passes out from fear in midair. He’s also at a school where Flying Lessons are mandatory.]]
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Played with, but mostly averted. Several characters are described as having brown skin without a specific ethnicity, but their surnames or relatives usually give clues. Professor Shafiq is implied by his surname to be of Middle Eastern origin, though he's also Very British. Elin Haksar can be assumed to be of Indian origin from her surname, although the early reveal that she is [[spoiler:Cho Chang's daughter]] clarifies that she's half-Indian, half-Chinese.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Played with, but mostly averted. Several characters are described as having brown skin without a specific ethnicity, but their surnames or relatives usually give clues. Professor Shafiq is implied by his surname to be of Middle Eastern origin, though he's also Very British. Elin Haksar can be assumed to be of Indian origin from her surname, although the early reveal that she is [[spoiler:Cho Chang's daughter]] clarifies that she's half-Indian, half-Chinese.Indian-Chinese.
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* DoubleMeaningTitle: References the Weasley-Potter clan's return to Hogwarts, [[spoiler:the return of the Resurrection Stone, the resulting temporary return of several dead characters from the afterlife, and the prophecy quoted below under TitleDrop.]]
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* HappilyMarried: Draco and Astoria Malfoy, in an OddCouple sort of way.
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** To {{QI}} — Gryffindor Davy Andrews and Ravenclaw Steve Fry are described similarly to younger versions of Alan Davies and Stephen Fry, respectively.
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** To {{QI}} ''Series/{{QI}}'' — Gryffindor Davy Andrews and Ravenclaw Steve Fry are described similarly to younger versions of Alan Davies and Stephen Fry, respectively.
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** To PotterPuppetPals — the contents of Scorpius's pockets are "nine Sickles and a Dungbomb."
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** To PotterPuppetPals WebVideo/PotterPuppetPals — the contents of Scorpius's pockets are "nine Sickles and a Dungbomb."
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* MaliciousSlander: Side-fic ''Off To Hogwarts, Dear?'' suggests Rita Skeeter is still at it, claiming that Susan Bones's daughter Eleanor is Harry's secret love child, among others.
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-->'''Lyra:''' ''[to Rose]'' Yeah, Scorpius's family is pureblood. But you know who gives me a hard time about being Muggleborn? About not knowing how magical things work? Isobel and Rupert and ''you!''..."So don't you dare go throwing 'he's a pureblood' around like it makes you better than him! He's not a Death Eater and ''you're not a hero!"''
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-->'''Lyra:''' ''[to Rose]'' Yeah, Scorpius's family is pureblood. But you know who gives me a hard time about being Muggleborn? About not knowing how magical things work? Isobel and Rupert and ''you!''..."So So don't you dare go throwing 'he's a pureblood' around like it makes you better than him! He's not a Death Eater and ''you're not a hero!"''hero!''
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-->'''Lyra:''' ''[to Rose]'' Yeah, Scorpius's family is pureblood. But you know who gives me a hard time about being Muggleborn? About not knowing how magical things work? Isobel and Rupert and ''you!''''you!''..."So don't you dare go throwing 'he's a pureblood' around like it makes you better than him! He's not a Death Eater and ''you're not a hero!"''
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''Returning'' is an in-progress Harry Potter Next Gen Fic by troper [=GlassCatOwl=]. It starts pretty much the moment the Epilogue left off, only from the perspectives of Scorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasley. An incident with Rose’s cat gets the two of them off to a bad start, only made worse by the fact they’re sorted into the same house. The fic covers their first year at Hogwarts, which turns out to be rather eventful — much to their headmistress’s displeasure.
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''Returning'' is an in-progress a Harry Potter Next Gen Fic by troper [=GlassCatOwl=]. It starts pretty much the moment the Epilogue left off, only from the perspectives of Scorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasley. An incident with Rose’s cat gets the two of them off to a bad start, only made worse by the fact they’re sorted into the same house. The fic covers their first year at Hogwarts, which turns out to be rather eventful — much to their headmistress’s displeasure.
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* TheClan: The Weasleys.
* ConsummateLiar: [[spoiler: Merva and co.; Martin Samuels. Also Lyra, with regards to her dad’s death, but she’s partly in denial.]]
* DeepCoverAgent: [[spoiler: Martin Samuels.]]
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* GoodParents: Scorpius, Rose, and Lyra all have them. [[spoiler: One of Lyra’s is dead, though, and the surviving one is grieving.]]
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler: Katherine’s speciality. She can actually remove a memory from someone’s mind, as opposed to suppressing it.]]
* LiesToChildren: Apprentice Healer Samuels [[spoiler: in many ways.]]
* LiesToChildren: Apprentice Healer Samuels [[spoiler: in many ways.]]
* [[spoiler: PlotTriggeringDeath: Unbeknownst to the main cast, the death of Merva and Cassian’s mother.]]
* PluckyGirl: Depending on your interpretation, Lyra. [[spoiler: The other interpretation is that she's a StepfordSmiler in the wake of her father's death.]]
* [[spoiler: PosthumousCharacter: Lyra’s dad.]]
* PluckyGirl: Depending on your interpretation, Lyra. [[spoiler: The other interpretation is that she's a StepfordSmiler in the wake of her father's death.]]
* [[spoiler: PosthumousCharacter: Lyra’s dad.]]
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* TheClan: The Weasleys.TamperingWithFoodAndDrink: [[spoiler: How Merva convinced others to go along with her plan: she mixed the butterbeer she brought to meetings with a potion that made them more susceptible to persuasion.]]
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* [[spoiler: AWolfInSheepsClothing: Martin Samuels.]]
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* MultilayerFaçade: [[spoiler: Martin Samuels: Initial façade - kindly healer-in-training; underneath - sadistic healer-in-training who skipped the Hippocratic Oath; reality - Deep Cover Agent manipulating a vulnerable student.]]
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* MultilayerFaçade: MultilayerFacade: [[spoiler: Martin Samuels: Initial façade - kindly healer-in-training; underneath - sadistic healer-in-training who skipped the Hippocratic Oath; reality - Deep Cover Agent manipulating a vulnerable student.]]
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* MoreThanMindControl: [[spoiler:The Obsession Elixir. It feeds on existing feelings of ambition, dread, and loss and makes people lose perspective about their lives, leaving them open to manipulation.]]
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* NotBrainwashed: [[spoiler: Merva.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler: George’s run in with Dementors.]]
** [[spoiler:Chekhov’s Tense: Savvy readers will notice that whenever Lyra refers to her dad specifically rather than her parents in general, she uses the past tense.]]
** [[spoiler:Chekhov’s Tense: Savvy readers will notice that whenever Lyra refers to her dad specifically rather than her parents in general, she uses the past tense.]]
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* {{Necromancer}}: Rose suspects one is on the loose after the incident at Hallowe'en.
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* {{Necromancer}}: Rose suspects one is on the loose after the incident at Hallowe'en. [[spoiler: They're using the Resurrection Stone.]]
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* DeadGuyJunior: As in canon, Albus Severus Potter and his older brother James Sirius Potter, along with George's son Fred. Their cousin Molly is named after their grandmother, but her namesake is still alive.
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* DeadGuyJunior: As in canon, Albus Severus Potter and his older brother James Sirius Potter, along with George's son Fred. Their cousin Molly is named after their grandmother, but her namesake is still alive. Neville and Hannah name their twin daughters after their mothers, Alice Longbottom (tortured to insanity) and Abigail Abbott (killed by Death Eaters).
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* CovertGroup: [[spoiler: Working to unravel the mysteries of the Resurrection Stone.]]
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* Forged Message: Isobel sends an insulting one pretending to be Scorpius. [[spoiler: Rose doesn’t believe it for a minute.]]
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* Forged Message: ForgedMessage: Isobel sends an insulting one pretending to be Scorpius. [[spoiler: Rose doesn’t believe it for a minute.]]
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* AcademicAlphaBitch: Isobel and Rose [[spoiler: at first]]. Edgar Young seems to be a male version of this.
* DeadPersonImpersonation: Astoria mentions one of her workmates’ son was receiving letters from a family friend who’d been dead for several years.
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* [[FormerFriendOfAlphaBitch Former Friend of the Academic Alpha Bitch]]: Albus starts to feel like this after Rose is sorted into Ravenclaw.
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* Forged Message: Isobel sends an insulting one pretending to be Scorpius. [[spoiler: Rose doesn’t believe it for a minute.]]
* [[FormerFriendOfAlphaBitch Former Friend of the Academic Alpha Bitch]]: Albus starts to feel like this after Rose is sorted into Ravenclaw. [[spoiler: Rose herself ends up being this to Isobel, who does not take kindly to her befriending underachiever Lyra and Death Eater descendent Scorpius.]]
* [[FormerFriendOfAlphaBitch Former Friend of the Academic Alpha Bitch]]: Albus starts to feel like this after Rose is sorted into Ravenclaw. [[spoiler: Rose herself ends up being this to Isobel, who does not take kindly to her befriending underachiever Lyra and Death Eater descendent Scorpius.]]
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Scorpius, partially due to his mother Astoria being deeply interested in Magizoology, is very fond and protective of magical creatures.
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Scorpius, partially due to his mother Astoria being deeply interested in Magizoology, is very fond and protective of magical creatures. [[spoiler:His soft spot for ordinary animals shows up when he rescues a rabbit from an Acromantula web, which proves to be a very bad idea.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite the fic being written and partially posted before the release of ''Cursed Child'' and the different houses of the characters, this Rose’s behaviour is mirrors her canon self’s in that she rejects Scorpius because of his family and becomes estranged from Albus after they are Sorted into different houses.
** ForWantOfANail: However, being placed in the same house as Scorpius leads Rose to become less prejudiced and eventually repair her friendship with Albus.
** ForWantOfANail: However, being placed in the same house as Scorpius leads Rose to become less prejudiced and eventually repair her friendship with Albus.
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* MixedAncestry: Elin, the daughter of a British Indian Muggle father and a Scottish Chinese witch. Sisters Genevieve and Aimée are French-English. Fred Lee Weasley is half black, half white.
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* ParentalAbandonment: The Smith twins were left at a children’s home by their dad after their mum’s death.
* ParentalNeglect: Implied to be the case with Millie Tirnblüd. She’s worried that they won’t show up at King’s Cross, and her sister Jai seems to have been PromotedToParent when it comes to her sister’s emotional wellbeing.
* ParentalNeglect: Implied to be the case with Millie Tirnblüd. She’s worried that they won’t show up at King’s Cross, and her sister Jai seems to have been PromotedToParent when it comes to her sister’s emotional wellbeing.
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* SchoolBullyingIsHarmless: Strongly averted — Lyra is clearly a wreck after less than two months at Hogwarts being sneered at, excluded, and locked out of her own dormitory. In particular the fic targets the assumption that it’s the stupid kids who bully the academic achievers — the Ravenclaws have a serious bullying problem when it comes to smarter students harassing their less successful peers for ‘letting their house down’.
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''Returning'' is an in-progress Harry Potter Next Gen Fic by troper [=GlassCatOwl=]. It starts pretty much the moment the Epilogue left off, only from the perspectives of Scorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasley. An incident with Rose’s cat gets the two of them off to a bad start, only made worse by the fact they’re sorted into the same house. The fic covers their first year at Hogwarts, which turns out to be rather eventful — much to their headmistress’sdispleasure.
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''Returning'' is an in-progress Harry Potter Next Gen Fic by troper [=GlassCatOwl=]. It starts pretty much the moment the Epilogue left off, only from the perspectives of Scorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasley. An incident with Rose’s cat gets the two of them off to a bad start, only made worse by the fact they’re sorted into the same house. The fic covers their first year at Hogwarts, which turns out to be rather eventful — much to their headmistress’s
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* FrenchJerk: Genevieve. Genevieve, according to Elin. Her younger sister Aimée can be unkind but is usually fairly nice.unkind, particularly under the influence of Isobel.