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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] but was later continued singularly by Sherbet Mayhem, which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''Literature/TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and Orochimaru replaces UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] but was later continued singularly by Sherbet Mayhem, which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''Literature/TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and Orochimaru replaces UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
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* TheReveal: Followers of ''{{Naruto}}'' may wonder why the Fourth Hokage is ordering such evil things, until chapter 5 when his name is first used by Sakura: ''[[spoiler:"Lord Orochimaru"]]''.
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* TheReveal: Followers of ''{{Naruto}}'' ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' may wonder why the Fourth Hokage is ordering such evil things, until chapter 5 when his name is first used by Sakura: ''[[spoiler:"Lord Orochimaru"]]''.
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** Chapter 22 is called 'Heroes Come Back'. While it's referring to [[spoiler:Naruto and Shikamaru returning alive from the Cloud front]], it's also a reference to the first opening theme of ''{{Naruto}} Shippuden'' (although that was the singular "''Hero's'' Come Back").
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** Chapter 22 is called 'Heroes Come Back'. While it's referring to [[spoiler:Naruto and Shikamaru returning alive from the Cloud front]], it's also a reference to the first opening theme of ''{{Naruto}} ''Manga/{{Naruto}}: Shippuden'' (although that was the singular "''Hero's'' Come Back").
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] but seems to have been continued singularly by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]], which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''Literature/TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and Orochimaru replaces UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] but seems to have been was later continued singularly by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]], Mayhem, which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''Literature/TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and Orochimaru replaces UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
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* StarCrossedLovers: Sakura and Sasuke. [[spoiler:The do end up [[EarnYourHappyEnding finally coming back together.]]
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* StarCrossedLovers: Sakura and Sasuke. [[spoiler:The do end up [[EarnYourHappyEnding finally coming back together.together]] at the end.]]
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* ShoutOut: In the chapter 4, '[[TitleDrop Howl]]', the book Sakura finds herself reading [[spoiler:and eventually has no choice but to burn]] at the book burning is Jewish poet Allen Ginsberg's famous poetic work Literature/{{Howl}}.
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* ShoutOut: In the chapter 4, '[[TitleDrop Howl]]', the book Sakura finds herself reading [[spoiler:and eventually has no choice but to burn]] at the book burning is Jewish poet Allen Ginsberg's famous poetic work Literature/{{Howl}}.''Literature/{{Howl}}.''
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* ShoutOut: In the chapter 4, '[[TitleDrop Howl]]', the book Sakura finds herself reading [[spoiler:and eventually has no choice but to burn]] at the book burning is Jewish poet Allen Ginsberg's famous poetic work 'Howl'.Literature/{{Howl}}.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] but seems to have been continued singularly by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]], which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and Orochimaru replaces UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] but seems to have been continued singularly by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]], which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''.''Literature/TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and Orochimaru replaces UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] but seems to have been continued singularly by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]], which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] but seems to have been continued singularly by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]], which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru Orochimaru replaces UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler]].UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
* GlowingEyes: While their physical appearances vary from Red to Red, Sasuke and Itachi have such strong racial traits that their red eyes literally glow in the dark. [[spoiler:After Itachi is killed in front of him, Sasuke's eyes fade to a dull grey.]]
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** GlowingEyes: While their physical appearances vary from Red to Red, Sasuke and Itachi have such strong racial traits that their red eyes literally glow in the dark. [[spoiler:After Itachi is killed in front of him, Sasuke's eyes fade to a dull grey.]]
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* RedOniBlueOni: Naruto and Sasuke, as in canon. Also to an extent, Sakura and Hinata; in chapter 12 Naruto explicitly describes Sakura as a woman of the daylight and Hinata as being one who would flourish in the night.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Naruto and Sasuke, as in canon. Also to an extent, RedOniBlueOni:
** Sakura and Hinata; in chapter 12 Naruto explicitly describes Sakura as a woman of the daylight and Hinata as being one who would flourish in thenight.night.
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* FourthWallObserver: The narrator, an attribute shared with the vulture when it gets a guest spot in the position. It even acknowledges that the reader will be reading this fanfiction on a computer screen, not a printed page.
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* FourthWallObserver: The narrator, an attribute shared with the vulture when it gets a guest spot in the position. It even acknowledges that [[MediumAwareness the reader will be reading this fanfiction on a computer screen, not a printed page.page]].
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* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler:Yahiko]], possibly intentionally mirroring his fate in ''Naruto'' canon.
** [[spoiler:Eventually, even after everything he's been through, Itachi.]]
** [[spoiler:Chapter 22 sees the deaths of Kakashi and Anko when their house is bombed, the same way Hans and Rosa died in ''The Book Thief''.]]
** [[spoiler:Nagato dies in chapter 23.]]
** [[spoiler:Eventually, even after everything he's been through, Itachi.]]
** [[spoiler:Chapter 22 sees the deaths of Kakashi and Anko when their house is bombed, the same way Hans and Rosa died in ''The Book Thief''.]]
** [[spoiler:Nagato dies in chapter 23.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Yahiko]], possibly intentionally mirroring his fate in ''Naruto'' canon.
** [[spoiler:Eventually, even after everything he's been through, Itachi.]]
** [[spoiler:Chapter 22 sees the deaths of Kakashi and Anko when their house is bombed, the same way Hans and Rosa died in ''The Book Thief''.]]
** [[spoiler:Nagato dies in chapter 23.]]
** [[spoiler:Eventually, even after everything he's been through, Itachi.]]
** [[spoiler:Chapter 22 sees the deaths of Kakashi and Anko when their house is bombed, the same way Hans and Rosa died in ''The Book Thief''.]]
** [[spoiler:Nagato dies in chapter 23.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Naruto]], unlike [[spoiler:Rudy]] from ''The Book Thief'', survives the story.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] but seems to have been continued singularly by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]], which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5328489/1/RED RED]]'' is a ''{{Naruto}}'' fanfiction which began as a collaboration between authors [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/368692/Oil_Pastel Oil Pastel]] but seems to have been continued singularly by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/429815/Sherbet_Mayhem Sherbet Mayhem]], which crosses over with/is based on/is inspired by Markus Zusak's ''TheBookThief''. Set in an alternate setting to BOTH stories, it features the cast of Naruto and mimics the writing style and follows the the rough plot outline of ''The Book Thief''. Konoha, no longer a village of ninja, replaces Germany, "Leaves" replace the Germans, the titular "Reds" replace the Jews and [[spoiler:Orochimaru replaces AdolfHitler]].UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler]]. The story follows Sakura (who loosely takes the place of Liesel Meminger, the protagonist of ''The Book Thief''), as she grows up in Konoha under the looming shadow of war, trying to come to terms with the increasing oppression of the Reds- most especially one Red who takes shelter in her family home, a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.
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* AllLovingHero: Hinata is an infinite well of compassion; chapter 10 revolves around her and is called 'The Dark-Haired Angel'.
-->Naruto knew that Hinata, with a soul so desperate to give, would forgive him every iniquity if she was given the chance to save a single person.
-->Naruto knew that Hinata, with a soul so desperate to give, would forgive him every iniquity if she was given the chance to save a single person.
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* TheMessiah: Hinata; chapter 10 revolves around her and is called 'The Dark-Haired Angel'.
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* AnyoneCanDie: So far, [[spoiler:Yahiko, Itachi, Kakashi, Anko, Shikaku and Nagato]] have all been claimed by the vulture- and it's not over yet...
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* AnyoneCanDie: So far, By the time it ends, [[spoiler:Yahiko, Itachi, Kakashi, Anko, Shikaku and Nagato]] have all been claimed by the vulture- and it's not over yet...vulture.
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* MismatchedEyes: In one of the more obvious [[ContinuityNod nods]] to ''{{Naruto}}'' canon, [[spoiler:Kakashi has the red left eye he received from Obito]]. Unlike in the manga, though, it doesn't have any special powers; although the narration ''claims'' it allows him to see the future, this seems to be a metaphor.
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* DistantFinale: [[spoiler:Sasuke and Konan returning to the site of Camp 002 to visit the memorial they made for Itachi, Yahiko and Nagato.]]
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* BlackMarket: One of these is being run in Camp 002 by [[spoiler:Nagato, Yahiko and Konan; they bring Sasuke in on it too after he saves Nagato from a summary execution, from a sadistic guard, later revealed to be Yakushi Kabuto.]]
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* BlackMarket: One of these is being run in Camp 002 by [[spoiler:Nagato, Yahiko and Konan; they bring Sasuke in on it too after he saves Nagato from a summary execution, from execution by a sadistic guard, later revealed to be Yakushi Kabuto.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: The narrator repeatedly assures us that things will not end well and [[spoiler:despite Sasuke finding Itachi's hat in the camp, the last time we saw Itachi he was [[CliffHanger staring down the barrel of the same gun that had just murdered his lover with no apparent possibility of escape]]. Also, Chapter 18 ended with Yahiko being shot dead by a camp guard.]]
** [[spoiler:Averted; Itachi ''is'' alive. Yahiko is [[KilledOffForReal still dead]], though.]]
** [[spoiler:Finally played straight at the end of chapter 21 when Itachi is executed.]]
** [[spoiler:Kakashi and Anko at least are killed in chapter 22 and it's implied that Shikamaru, Naruto and possibly Hinata are dead as well.]]
** [[spoiler:Shikamaru, Naruto and Hinata survived just fine, but Shikaku didn't. Nagato also finally died in chapter 23.]] There's not that many characters left by now...
** [[spoiler:Averted; Itachi ''is'' alive. Yahiko is [[KilledOffForReal still dead]], though.]]
** [[spoiler:Finally played straight at the end of chapter 21 when Itachi is executed.]]
** [[spoiler:Kakashi and Anko at least are killed in chapter 22 and it's implied that Shikamaru, Naruto and possibly Hinata are dead as well.]]
** [[spoiler:Shikamaru, Naruto and Hinata survived just fine, but Shikaku didn't. Nagato also finally died in chapter 23.]] There's not that many characters left by now...
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* AnyoneCanDie: The narrator repeatedly assures us that things will not end well So far, [[spoiler:Yahiko, Itachi, Kakashi, Anko, Shikaku and [[spoiler:despite Sasuke finding Itachi's hat in Nagato]] have all been claimed by the camp, the last time we saw Itachi he was [[CliffHanger staring down the barrel of the same gun that had just murdered his lover with no apparent possibility of escape]]. Also, Chapter 18 ended with Yahiko being shot dead by a camp guard.]]
** [[spoiler:Averted; Itachi ''is'' alive. Yahiko is [[KilledOffForReal still dead]], though.]]
** [[spoiler:Finally played straight at the end of chapter 21 when Itachi is executed.]]
** [[spoiler:Kakashi and Anko at least are killed in chapter 22vulture- and it's implied that Shikamaru, Naruto and possibly Hinata are dead as well.]]
** [[spoiler:Shikamaru, Naruto and Hinata survived just fine, but Shikaku didn't. Nagato also finally died in chapter 23.]] There'snot that many characters left by now...over yet...
** [[spoiler:Averted; Itachi ''is'' alive. Yahiko is [[KilledOffForReal still dead]], though.]]
** [[spoiler:Finally played straight at the end of chapter 21 when Itachi is executed.]]
** [[spoiler:Kakashi and Anko at least are killed in chapter 22
** [[spoiler:Shikamaru, Naruto and Hinata survived just fine, but Shikaku didn't. Nagato also finally died in chapter 23.]] There's
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** [[spoiler:Chapter 22 sees the deaths of Kakashi and Anko when their house is bombed, the same way Hans and Rosa died in ''The Book Thief''. It's implied that Shikamaru, Naruto and possibly Hinata are killed at the same time by other bombs, but not yet confirmed.]]
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** [[spoiler:Chapter 22 sees the deaths of Kakashi and Anko when their house is bombed, the same way Hans and Rosa died in ''The Book Thief''. It's implied that Shikamaru, Naruto and possibly Hinata are killed at the same time by other bombs, but not yet confirmed.]]
** [[spoiler:Nagato dies in chapter 23.]]
** [[spoiler:Nagato dies in chapter 23.]]
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** The trope is used again in chapter 23, merging the seperate scenes of [[spoiler:Hinata finding Sasuke and Konan and Naruto finding the two FANG guards who had killed Nagato a few days ago]].
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** [[spoiler:Shikamaru, Naruto and Hinata survived just fine, but Shikaku didn't. Nagato also finally died in chapter 23.]] There's not that many characters left by now...
** Konan as well; when pushed she goes into her "Survival Mode".
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** GlowingEyes: While their physical appearances vary from Red to Red, Sasuke and Itachi have such strong racial traits that their red eyes literally glow in the dark.
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** GlowingEyes: While their physical appearances vary from Red to Red, Sasuke and Itachi have such strong racial traits that their red eyes literally glow in the dark. [[spoiler:After Itachi is killed in front of him, Sasuke's eyes fade to a dull grey.]]
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** Chapter 22 is called 'Heroes Come Back'. While it's referring to [[spoiler:Naruto and Shikamaru returning alive from the Cloud front]], it's also a reference to the first opening theme of ''{{Naruto}} Shippuden'' (although that was the singular "''Hero's'' Come Back").
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* AnyoneCanDie: Not that any of the major characters HAVE yet, but the narrator repeatedly assures us that things will not end well and [[spoiler:despite Sasuke finding Itachi's hat in the camp, the last time we saw Itachi he was [[CliffHanger staring down the barrel of the same gun that had just murdered his lover with no apparent possibility of escape]]. Also, Chapter 18 ended with Yahiko being shot dead by a camp guard.]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Not that any of the major characters HAVE yet, but the The narrator repeatedly assures us that things will not end well and [[spoiler:despite Sasuke finding Itachi's hat in the camp, the last time we saw Itachi he was [[CliffHanger staring down the barrel of the same gun that had just murdered his lover with no apparent possibility of escape]]. Also, Chapter 18 ended with Yahiko being shot dead by a camp guard.]]
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** [[spoiler:Finally played straight at the end of chapter 23 21 when Itachi is executed.]]
** [[spoiler:Kakashi and Anko at least are killed in chapter 22 and it's implied that Shikamaru, Naruto and possibly Hinata are dead as well.]]
** [[spoiler:Kakashi and Anko at least are killed in chapter 22 and it's implied that Shikamaru, Naruto and possibly Hinata are dead as well.]]
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** [[spoiler:Chapter 23 sees the deaths of Kakashi and Anko when their house is bombed, the same way Hans and Rosa died in ''The Book Thief''. It's implied that Shikamaru, Naruto and possibly Hinata are killed at the same time by other bombs, but not yet confirmed.]]
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** [[spoiler:Chapter 23 22 sees the deaths of Kakashi and Anko when their house is bombed, the same way Hans and Rosa died in ''The Book Thief''. It's implied that Shikamaru, Naruto and possibly Hinata are killed at the same time by other bombs, but not yet confirmed.]]
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** [[spoiler:Chapter 23 sees the deaths of Kakashi and Anko when their house is bombed, the same way Hans and Rosa died in ''The Book Thief''. It's implied that Shikamaru, Naruto and possibly Hinata are killed at the same time by other bombs, but not yet confirmed.]]
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** [[spoiler:Eventually, after eveything, Itachi.]]
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** [[spoiler:Eventually, even after eveything, everything he's been through, Itachi.]]
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** Chapter 21, 'Brother Gaiden III'. [[spoiler:The Holocaust is wrapping up and Fang are trying to cover their tracks; and Itachi is singled out and murdered in front of Sasuke by Kabuto as part of a mass execution of a work detaik.]]
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** Chapter 21, 'Brother Gaiden III'. [[spoiler:The Holocaust is wrapping up and Fang are trying to cover their tracks; and Itachi is singled out and murdered in front of Sasuke by Kabuto as part of a mass execution of a work detaik.detail.]]
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slight edit: \'Holocaust\' began long ago, it\'s ending now and Fang are covering tracks.
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** Chapter 21, 'Brother Gaiden III'. [[spoiler:The Holocaust apparently begins and Itachi is singled out and murdered in front of Sasuke by Kabuto.]]
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** Chapter 21, 'Brother Gaiden III'. [[spoiler:The Holocaust apparently begins is wrapping up and Fang are trying to cover their tracks; and Itachi is singled out and murdered in front of Sasuke by Kabuto.Kabuto as part of a mass execution of a work detaik.]]
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* BlackMarket: One of these is being run in Camp 002 by [[spoiler:Nagato, Yahiko and Konan; they bring Sasuke in on it too after he saves Nagato from a beating, or possibly even summary execution, from a sadistic guard.]]
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** [[spoiler:Finally played straight at the end of chapter 23 when Itachi is executed.]]
* BlackMarket: One of these is being run in Camp 002 by [[spoiler:Nagato, Yahiko and Konan; they bring Sasuke in on it too after he saves Nagato from abeating, or possibly even summary execution, from a sadistic guard.guard, later revealed to be Yakushi Kabuto.]]
* BlackMarket: One of these is being run in Camp 002 by [[spoiler:Nagato, Yahiko and Konan; they bring Sasuke in on it too after he saves Nagato from a
* DepravedHomosexual: [[spoiler:Yakushi Kabuto.]]
** [[spoiler:Eventually, after eveything, Itachi.]]
* VillainousRescue: After [[spoiler:Shiro is killed]] Itachi is saved from death by [[spoiler:Yakushi Kabuto, for [[DepravedHomosexual personal use]].]]
** Chapter 21, 'Brother Gaiden III'. [[spoiler:The Holocaust apparently begins and Itachi is singled out and murdered in front of Sasuke by Kabuto.]]
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** The opening of [[spoiler:Chapter 20]] briefly lets you think that [[spoiler:Naruto [[AllJustADream is only dreaming of his hellish experience on the war front]]]] before revealing that [[spoiler:no, he really is there and everything is as bad as he described]]. He's not even allowed to [[spoiler:finish drawing his picture of Hinata for his letter to her]].
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** The opening of [[spoiler:Chapter 20]] briefly lets you think that [[spoiler:Naruto [[AllJustADream is only dreaming of his hellish experience on the war front]]]] before revealing that [[spoiler:no, he really is there and everything is as bad as he described]]. He's not even allowed to [[spoiler:finish drawing his picture of Hinata for his letter to her]].her]].
** Chapter 21 is the worst of all. [[spoiler:Sasuke is just able to be happy because Itachi is alive and with him again- only for Itachi to be killed in front of him. He even counts the order of the killing (only every second man is being shot) and it looks like Itachi will be spared, but then he's killed anyway.]]
* YouBastard: The vulture puts the blame for [[spoiler:Sasuke's suffering in chapter 21]] on the reader, for continuing to read the story knowing that things will only get worse.
-->Leave him here! Stop! He is so happy; how can you, knowing what is coming, continue? If you stay here with him the rest will never happen; you can share in his perpetual joy and even make up your own ending.\\
But you won't.\\
Of course you won't.\\
Who's really the one with the feathers here? Who is really the one driving Time into the scene?\\
It certainly isn't my eyes you're reading with.
** Chapter 21 is the worst of all. [[spoiler:Sasuke is just able to be happy because Itachi is alive and with him again- only for Itachi to be killed in front of him. He even counts the order of the killing (only every second man is being shot) and it looks like Itachi will be spared, but then he's killed anyway.]]
* YouBastard: The vulture puts the blame for [[spoiler:Sasuke's suffering in chapter 21]] on the reader, for continuing to read the story knowing that things will only get worse.
-->Leave him here! Stop! He is so happy; how can you, knowing what is coming, continue? If you stay here with him the rest will never happen; you can share in his perpetual joy and even make up your own ending.\\
But you won't.\\
Of course you won't.\\
Who's really the one with the feathers here? Who is really the one driving Time into the scene?\\
It certainly isn't my eyes you're reading with.
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* AllJustADream: Subverted. ''This is my reality.''
** [[spoiler:When they're finally reunited in chapter 20]] Itachi calls Sasuke "foolish little brother"- although unlike in canon, he's using it as a term of affection.
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* {{Foreshadowing}} The [[LemonyNarrator narrator]] regularly gives blatant warnings about how things are going to turn tragic for several characters (most notably [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata]], although the Sword of Damocles has not fallen yet).
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* {{Foreshadowing}} The [[LemonyNarrator narrator]] regularly gives blatant warnings about how things are going to turn tragic for several characters (most notably [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata]], although the Sword of Damocles has not fallen yet).Hinata]]).
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* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler:Chapter 18]] is basically this and the narrator even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it.
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* YankTheDogsChain: [[spoiler:Chapter 18]] is basically this and the narrator even [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] it.it.
** The opening of [[spoiler:Chapter 20]] briefly lets you think that [[spoiler:Naruto [[AllJustADream is only dreaming of his hellish experience on the war front]]]] before revealing that [[spoiler:no, he really is there and everything is as bad as he described]]. He's not even allowed to [[spoiler:finish drawing his picture of Hinata for his letter to her]].
** The opening of [[spoiler:Chapter 20]] briefly lets you think that [[spoiler:Naruto [[AllJustADream is only dreaming of his hellish experience on the war front]]]] before revealing that [[spoiler:no, he really is there and everything is as bad as he described]]. He's not even allowed to [[spoiler:finish drawing his picture of Hinata for his letter to her]].
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* TheReveal: Followers of ''{{Naruto}}'' may wonder why the Fourth Hokage is ordering such evil things, until chapter 6 when his name is first used by Sakura: ''[[spoiler:"Lord Orochimaru"]]''.
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* TheReveal: Followers of ''{{Naruto}}'' may wonder why the Fourth Hokage is ordering such evil things, until chapter 6 5 when his name is first used by Sakura: ''[[spoiler:"Lord Orochimaru"]]''.
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** GlowingEyes: While their physical appearances vary from Red to Red, Sasuke and Itachi have such strong racial traits that their red eyes literally glow in the dark.
