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* AdultFear: When Dinobot II is trying to interrogate Rarity, he holds Sweetie Belle hostage. However, it doesn't scare Rarity... [[BigBrotherInstinct it makes her '''angry''']].
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* AdultFear: When Dinobot II is trying to interrogate Rarity, he holds Sweetie Belle hostage. However, it doesn't scare Rarity... [[BigBrotherInstinct it makes her '''angry''']].]]'''[[BigBrotherInstinct angry]].'''
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* GiantEnemyCrab: Rampage. Natch.
* GoodIsNotNice: Celestia, while going MamaBear on the Predacons for attacking her ponies, becomes savage and cruel, even getting pissy towards Luna who was trying to calm her down. Then there's [[KnightTemplar Depth Charge]] who really does ''not'' want to listen to Lyra's [[EarWorm Sea pony song]].
* GoodIsNotNice: Celestia, while going MamaBear on the Predacons for attacking her ponies, becomes savage and cruel, even getting pissy towards Luna who was trying to calm her down. Then there's [[KnightTemplar Depth Charge]] who really does ''not'' want to listen to Lyra's [[EarWorm Sea pony song]].
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* GiantEnemyCrab: Rampage. Natch.
Rampage, natch.
* GoodIsNotNice: Celestia, while going MamaBear on the Predacons for attacking her ponies, becomes savage and cruel, even getting pissy towards Luna who was trying to calm her down. Then there's [[KnightTemplar Depth Charge]] who really does ''not'' want to listen to Lyra's [[EarWormSea pony Seapony song]].
* GoodIsNotNice: Celestia, while going MamaBear on the Predacons for attacking her ponies, becomes savage and cruel, even getting pissy towards Luna who was trying to calm her down. Then there's [[KnightTemplar Depth Charge]] who really does ''not'' want to listen to Lyra's [[EarWorm
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* MindScrew: [[spoiler:It's one thing for Pinkie to attack Tarantulus with a baseball bat, a rolling pin, and start chucking bowling balls at the sucker, but how in the name of both Primus and Celestia did Pinkie manage to find a semi truck(that suspiciously looks an awful lot like Optimus Prime) let alone get it down into Derpy's Basement?]]
* MythologyGag: Lyra sings the Sea Pony song from the G1 series, much to the dislike of Depth Charge.
* MythologyGag: Lyra sings the Sea Pony song from the G1 series, much to the dislike of Depth Charge.
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* MindScrew: [[spoiler:It's one thing for Pinkie to attack Tarantulus with a baseball bat, a rolling pin, and start chucking bowling balls at the sucker, but how in the name of both Primus and Celestia did Pinkie manage to find a semi truck(that truck (that suspiciously looks an awful lot like Optimus Prime) Prime), let alone get it down into Derpy's Basement?]]
* MythologyGag: Lyra sings theSea Pony Seapony song from the G1 series, much to the dislike of Depth Charge.
* MythologyGag: Lyra sings the
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* MindScrew: [[spoiler:It's one thing for Pinkie to attack Tarantulus with a baseball bat, a rolling pin, and start chucking bowling balls at the sucker, but how in the name of both Primus and Celestia did Pinkie manage to find a semi truck(that suspiciously looks an awful lot like Optimus Prime) let alone get it down into Derpy's Basement?]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Both Dinobot and Tarantulas attempt to cause harm to Sweetie Belle and Dinky Hooves respectively. [[spoiler:It doesn't work out well for either of them.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: Both Dinobot and Tarantulas attempt to cause harm to Sweetie Belle and Dinky Hooves respectively. [[spoiler:It doesn't work out well for either of them.]]
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''Predator's Moon'' is a fan crossover between Hasbro properties''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' by [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/ Atomic-Chinchilla]]. The work can be found on his [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/gallery/36221011 DeviantArt profile]] or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42547/predators-moon Fimfiction]].
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''Predator's Moon'' is a fan crossover between Hasbro properties''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' properties ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' by [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/ Atomic-Chinchilla]]. The work can be found on his [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/gallery/36221011 DeviantArt profile]] or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42547/predators-moon Fimfiction]].
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* Cloudcuckoolander: {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Pinkie Pie, of course
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* AdultFear: When Dinobot II is trying to interrogate Rarity, he holds Sweetie Belle hostage. However, it doesn't scare Rarity... [[BigBrotherInstinct it makes her '''angry''']].
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* HeroKiller: [[Cowboy Quickstrike]] manages to [[spoiler: poison Big Macintosh]]. However [[spoiler: his]] fate is yet to be revealed.
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* MythologyGag: Lyra sings the Sea Pony song from the G1 series, much to the dislike of Depth Charge.
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* GoodIsNotNice: Celestia, while going MamaBear on the Predacons for attacking her ponies, becomes savage and cruel, even getting pissy towards Luna who was trying to calm her down. Then there's [[KnightTemplar Depth Charge]] who really does ''not'' want to listen to Lyra's [[EarWorm Sea pony song]].
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Depth Charge, as usual. Also Blackarachnia.
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* TheWoobie: Waspinator just wants a friend!
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''Predator's Moon'' is a fan crossover between Hasbro properties''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' by [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/ Atomic-Chinchilla]]. The work can be found on his deviantart or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42547/predators-moon Fimfiction]].
The Mare in the Moon has returned, and the dark power that created Nightmare Moon is awakening again with the aid of a magical Moonstone. The two princesses and the Mane Six must use the Elements of Harmony to banish the darkness once and for all. Meanwhile, on Prehistoric Earth an alien artifact identical to the Moonstone falls into Predacon hands. A skirmish between the Predacons and Maximals Blackarachnia and Depth Charge transports them to the world of Equestria. There, the Predacons terrorize the ponies.
The Mare in the Moon has returned, and the dark power that created Nightmare Moon is awakening again with the aid of a magical Moonstone. The two princesses and the Mane Six must use the Elements of Harmony to banish the darkness once and for all. Meanwhile, on Prehistoric Earth an alien artifact identical to the Moonstone falls into Predacon hands. A skirmish between the Predacons and Maximals Blackarachnia and Depth Charge transports them to the world of Equestria. There, the Predacons terrorize the ponies.
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''Predator's Moon'' is a fan crossover between Hasbro properties''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' by [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/ Atomic-Chinchilla]]. The work can be found on his deviantart [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/gallery/36221011 DeviantArt profile]] or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42547/predators-moon Fimfiction]].
The Mare in the Moon has returned, and the dark power that created Nightmare Moon is awakening again with the aid of a magical Moonstone. The two princesses and the Mane Six must use the Elements of Harmony to banish the darkness once and for all. Meanwhile, on Prehistoric Earth an alien artifact identical to the Moonstone falls into Predacon hands. A skirmish between the Predacons and Maximals Blackarachnia and Depth Charge transports them to the world of Equestria. There, the Predacons terrorize theponies.
ponies, who find new allies in the Maximals.
The Mare in the Moon has returned, and the dark power that created Nightmare Moon is awakening again with the aid of a magical Moonstone. The two princesses and the Mane Six must use the Elements of Harmony to banish the darkness once and for all. Meanwhile, on Prehistoric Earth an alien artifact identical to the Moonstone falls into Predacon hands. A skirmish between the Predacons and Maximals Blackarachnia and Depth Charge transports them to the world of Equestria. There, the Predacons terrorize the
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The Mare in the Moon has returned, and the dark power that created Nightmare Moon is awakening again with the aid of a magical Moonstone. The two princesses and the Mane Six must use the Elements of Harmony to banish the darkness once and for all. Meanwhile, on Prehistoric Earth an alien artifact identical to the Moonstone falls into Predacon hands. A skirmish between the Predacons and Maximals Blackarachnia and Depth Charge transports them to the world of Equestria. There,the Predacons terrorize the ponies.
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The Mare in the Moon has returned, and the dark power that created Nightmare Moon is awakening again with the aid of a magical Moonstone. The two princesses and the Mane Six must use the Elements of Harmony to banish the darkness once and for all. Meanwhile, on Prehistoric Earth an alien artifact identical to the Moonstone falls into Predacon hands. A skirmish between the Predacons and Maximals Blackarachnia and Depth Charge transports them to the world of Equestria. There,the There, the Predacons terrorize the ponies.
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* MadScientist: Tarantulas [[spoiler:makes the Hooves' family basement into a makeshift laboratory.]]
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* MadScientist: Tarantulas [[spoiler:makes the Hooves' family basement into a makeshift laboratory.laboratory and plans to experiment on Derpy and her family.]]
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''Predator's Moon'' is a fan crossover between Hasbro properties''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' by [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/ Atomic-Chinchilla]]. The work can be found on his deviantrt or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42547/predators-moon Fimfiction]].
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''Predator's Moon'' is a fan crossover between Hasbro properties''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' by [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/ Atomic-Chinchilla]]. The work can be found on his deviantrt deviantart or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42547/predators-moon Fimfiction]].
* MadScientist: Tarantulas [[spoiler:makes the Hooves' family basement into a makeshift laboratory.]]
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* DramaQueen: Rarity. [[spoiler:She's actually able to use this attribute to her advantage by using her swooning couch as a projectile weapon.]]
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* [[IAmAHumanitarian I Am A Ponytarian]]: Rampage [[spoiler:intends to ''eat'' Bon Bon when Lyra and Depth Charge first find them in her house. He's even cooking a [[TheSilenceOfTheLambs fava bean stew]].]]
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* CombinationAttack: The Resonance Wave Cannon Lyra-Bon! [[spoiler:Lyra uses her magic to create a construct of a giant tuning fork. Meanwhile, Bon Bon stands on Lyra's back and uses her uncanny vocal powers to sing a note higher than any pony's auditory range into the magical tuning fork. The resulting sound waves almost ''shatter Rampage's chassis.'']]
** The Elements of Harmony magical friendship rainbow beam is one of these as well.
** The Elements of Harmony magical friendship rainbow beam is one of these as well.
* EvilIsHammy: Megatron. ''Yeeeesssss...''
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* UnstoppableRage: Celestia when she fights the Predacons.Predacons.
* WouldHurtAChild: Both Dinobot and Tarantulas attempt to cause harm to Sweetie Belle and Dinky Hooves respectively. [[spoiler:It doesn't work out well for either of them.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Both Dinobot and Tarantulas attempt to cause harm to Sweetie Belle and Dinky Hooves respectively. [[spoiler:It doesn't work out well for either of them.]]
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* Cloudcuckoolander: Pinkie Pie, of course
* EldritchAbomination: The Nightmare.
* GiantEnemyCrab: Rampage. Natch.
* MakeMeWannaShout: Bon Bon uses this to great effect on Rampage
* MamaBear: Derpy [[spoiler:punches Tarantulas' head ''clean through a wall'' when she realized he was threatening Dinky.]]
* PlayingWithFire: Inferno. [[spoiler:The crazy firebug ''sets fire to a tornado'' and burns down Twilight's treehouse!]]
* UnstoppableRage: Celestia when she fights the Predacons.
* EldritchAbomination: The Nightmare.
* GiantEnemyCrab: Rampage. Natch.
* MakeMeWannaShout: Bon Bon uses this to great effect on Rampage
* MamaBear: Derpy [[spoiler:punches Tarantulas' head ''clean through a wall'' when she realized he was threatening Dinky.]]
* PlayingWithFire: Inferno. [[spoiler:The crazy firebug ''sets fire to a tornado'' and burns down Twilight's treehouse!]]
* UnstoppableRage: Celestia when she fights the Predacons.
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Predator's Moon is a fan crossover between Hasbro properties''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' by [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/Atomic-Chinchilla]].com/ Atomic-Chinchilla]]. The work can be found on his deviantrt or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42547/predators-moon Fimfiction]].
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Predator's Moon is a fan crossover between Hasbro properties''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' by [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/]].com/Atomic-Chinchilla]]. The work can be found on his deviantrt or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42547/predators-moon]].net/story/42547/predators-moon Fimfiction]].
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Predator's Moon is a fan crossover between Hasbro properties''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' by [[http://atomic-chinchilla.deviantart.com/]]. The work can be found on his deviantrt or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/42547/predators-moon]].
The Mare in the Moon has returned, and the dark power that created Nightmare Moon is awakening again with the aid of a magical Moonstone. The two princesses and the Mane Six must use the Elements of Harmony to banish the darkness once and for all. Meanwhile, on Prehistoric Earth an alien artifact identical to the Moonstone falls into Predacon hands. A skirmish between the Predacons and Maximals Blackarachnia and Depth Charge transports them to the world of Equestria. There,the Predacons terrorize the ponies.
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*AxeCrazy: The Predacons, as usual.
* BerserkButton: Celestia shows this towards the Predacons when they destroy Canterlot.
** Inferno refuses to acknowledge any royalty outside of Megatron.
*BewareTheNiceOnes: As the Predacons learned
* BreakingTheFourthWall: As usual, Pinkie, when mentioning "robots in disguise". She does this again with Tarantulas, confusing him.
* BigDamnHeroes
The Mare in the Moon has returned, and the dark power that created Nightmare Moon is awakening again with the aid of a magical Moonstone. The two princesses and the Mane Six must use the Elements of Harmony to banish the darkness once and for all. Meanwhile, on Prehistoric Earth an alien artifact identical to the Moonstone falls into Predacon hands. A skirmish between the Predacons and Maximals Blackarachnia and Depth Charge transports them to the world of Equestria. There,the Predacons terrorize the ponies.
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!! This fanfic provides examples of:
*AxeCrazy: The Predacons, as usual.
* BerserkButton: Celestia shows this towards the Predacons when they destroy Canterlot.
** Inferno refuses to acknowledge any royalty outside of Megatron.
*BewareTheNiceOnes: As the Predacons learned
* BreakingTheFourthWall: As usual, Pinkie, when mentioning "robots in disguise". She does this again with Tarantulas, confusing him.
* BigDamnHeroes
