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But who stole the crystals, and why? What secrets does Elina hide? And what is Chiaki's true role in all of this?
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But who stole the crystals, and why? What secrets does Elina the mysterious Elgyem hide? And what is Chiaki's true role in all of this?
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* ThrowItIn: Kala the Abra was originally just going to be the character who teleported the other characters where they needed to go, but was chosen to be the one who would [[spoiler: teach Elina to communicate through telepathy]] once the author realized just how perfect Kala would be for the part.
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* ThrowItIn: Kala the Abra was originally just going to be the character who teleported the other characters where they needed to go, but was chosen to be the one who would [[spoiler: teach Elina to communicate through telepathy]] once when the author realized just how perfect Kala would be for the part.
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''Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Reflecting Balance'' is a Pokemon Mystery Dungeon fanfic by {{@/DarkerShining}}.
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''Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Reflecting Balance'' is a Pokemon Mystery Dungeon PokemonMysteryDungeon fanfic by {{@/DarkerShining}}.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 16 is this for Azure.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 16 is this for Azure.Azure, being told mostly from her point of view.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 16 is this for Azure.
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* GameplayAndStorySegregation: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. Gameplay mechanics are acknowledged in-universe, even if the source of them remains mysterious.
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It can be read [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?568115-Pokémon-Mystery-Dungeon-Reflecting-Balance here]].
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It can be read [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?568115-Pokémon-Mystery-Dungeon-Reflecting-Balance here]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9240158/1/Pok%C3%A9mon-Mystery-Dungeon-Reflecting-Balance here]].
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* CoolBigSis: Sera considers her oldest sister Amethyst to be this.
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* ForgetfulJones: Bow is quite forgetful, and often tends to forget to tell others about her visions until after they have already happened.
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* TemptingFate: When nearly at the end of the mystery dungeon in the Sand-Veiled Sanctuary, Sera wonders what could possibly go wrong when they had gotten this far. Only a few moments later, [[spoiler: she and Chiaki end up walking right into a Monster House.]]
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It focuses on a Shinx and an Eevee that have recently started a rescue team together. One day, the two come across an unconscious Mienfoo while exploring a dungeon. They soon discover that the Mienfoo has no memory of who he is, or how he got there. Little do they know, that is just the first mystery they'll come across...
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It focuses on a young Shinx and named Blitz, an Eevee that have recently started named Sera and an amnesiac Mienfoo given the name Chiaki when Blitz and Sera found him passed out in a forest. After joining the rescue team together. One day, Sera and Blitz recently started, Chiaki learns about the two come across an unconscious Mienfoo while exploring basics of being part of a dungeon. They soon discover rescue team. However, when they learn that the Mienfoo has no memory eight crystals of who he is, or how he got there. Little do Axis Tower, which are needed to maintain the balance, have been stolen, they know, that is just and the first mystery they'll come across...
other rescue teams must do what they can to retrieve them.
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* ShoutOut: There are several nods to Roleplay/WeAreAllPokemonTrainers.
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* OhCrap: Blitz's reaction in chapter 14 when he realizes that Sera and Chiaki [[spoiler: have just walked right into a Monster House.]]
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The supporting cast just keeps getting bigger.
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* ShoutOut: There have been a few references to the Pokémon RP ''WeAreAllPokemonTrainers'' throughout the fic so far, which the writer is a former member of.
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* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Sera has five older siblings.
* PlotCoupon: The eight Axis Tower crystals.
* PlotCoupon: The eight Axis Tower crystals.
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* {{Seers}}: Stella the town oracle and her daughter Bow.
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* TongueOnTheFlagpole: Nurse Giselle's dialogue while treating a Lickitung alludes to something similar to this [[NoodleIncident happening off-screen.]]
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* TongueOnTheFlagpole: Nurse Giselle's dialogue while treating a Lickitung alludes to something similar to this [[NoodleIncident happening having happened to the Lickitung off-screen.]]
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''Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Reflecting Balance'' is a Pokemon Mystery Dungeon fanfic by DarkerShining.
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''Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Reflecting Balance'' is a Pokemon Mystery Dungeon fanfic by DarkerShining.
{{@/DarkerShining}}.
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''Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Reflecting Balance'' is a Pokemon Mystery Dungeon fanfic by DarkerShining.
It focuses on a Shinx and an Eevee that have recently started a rescue team together. One day, the two come across an unconscious Mienfoo while exploring a dungeon. They soon discover that the Mienfoo has no memory of who he is, or how he got there. Little do they know, that is just the first mystery they'll come across...
It can be read [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?568115-Pokémon-Mystery-Dungeon-Reflecting-Balance here]].
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* AmnesiacHero: Chiaki.
* CharacterTics: Blitz tends to rub the yellow rings on his forelegs together when nervous.
* ItWasADarkAndStormyNight: The story begins on this line, and lampshades it.
It focuses on a Shinx and an Eevee that have recently started a rescue team together. One day, the two come across an unconscious Mienfoo while exploring a dungeon. They soon discover that the Mienfoo has no memory of who he is, or how he got there. Little do they know, that is just the first mystery they'll come across...
It can be read [[http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?568115-Pokémon-Mystery-Dungeon-Reflecting-Balance here]].
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* AmnesiacHero: Chiaki.
* CharacterTics: Blitz tends to rub the yellow rings on his forelegs together when nervous.
* ItWasADarkAndStormyNight: The story begins on this line, and lampshades it.
