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* TricksterMentor: Deconstructed. Twilight is so sick and tired of being a pawn in Celestia's games that she renounces her place as Celestia's student.
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* TricksterMentor: Deconstructed.[[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Twilight is so sick and tired of being a pawn in Celestia's games that she renounces her place as Celestia's student.
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* NoodleImplements: Celestia briefly mentioned a 300-year plan of hers that was foiled by a tenpenny nail, five scrolls and a misplaced banana.
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-->Applejack had probably seen plenty of signs that Applebloom was being bullied, but she had a farm to run. So she had convinced herself they weren't that important, just 'one of those things foals go through.' Their teacher had probably seen it too, but she had classes to teach, and so she'd convinced herself that posting a few rules on the blackboard about name-calling or fighting fixed it, or that it was too much trouble to tell the victim and the bully apart in a fight, and that punishing everyone--- or ignoring it entirely-- were much easier.
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* LivingForeverIsAwesome: Celestia and Luna are tired of outliving everypony else, but otherwise they seem to hold this opinion. Thus, they ask the mane six to assist them in their quest to make everypony immortal.
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* RageAgainstTheMentor: This fic diverges from canon when Twilight rages against about Celestia manipulating her and endangering six civilians by giving them dangerous missions.
* [[spoiler: RebuiltPedestal: Celestia explains why she kept Nightmare Moon's return a secret from Twilight, the real reason she sent Twilight to Ponyvile, and why she sent the Element Bearers on such dangerous mission. She admits her mistake, apologizes, and the two reconcile.]]
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* TimeForPlanB: What we see in the canon pilot was ''not'' Celestia' main plan; it was a 'contingency''. [[spoiler: She did not expect Twilight to redeemm Nightmare Moon immediately. Indeed, she sent Twilight to Ponyvile hoping she would escape Nightmare Moon's wrath as she wiped out Celestia herself and took over. What we see in the canon pilot was one hundred percent Twilight's own initiative.]]
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* RageAgainstTheMentor: This fic diverges from TimeForPlanB: What we see in the canon when Twilight rages against about Celestia manipulating her and endangering six civilians by giving them dangerous missions.
*pilot was ''not'' Celestia' main plan; it was a 'contingency''. [[spoiler: RebuiltPedestal: Celestia explains why She did not expect Twilight to redeem Nightmare Moon immediately. Indeed, she kept sent Twilight to Ponyvile hoping she would escape Nightmare Moon's return a secret from Twilight, wrath as she wiped out Celestia herself and took over. What we see in the real reason she sent Twilight to Ponyvile, and why she sent the Element Bearers on such dangerous mission. She admits her mistake, apologizes, and the two reconcile.canon pilot was one hundred percent Twilight's own initiative.]]
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*GambitRoulette: DiscussedTrope. Celestia is well aware of how much her plan to redeem her sister depended on the precise interlocking of farflung events, and she hated it. [[spoiler: If she had her way, she would have found all the Element Bearers years before Nightmare Moon returned, mentored them in the use of the Elements, fostered a friendship between them, and directed them to blast Nightmare Moon the instant she returned. Alas, it didn't happen that way.]]
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone: After Twilight chews her out, Celestia realizes she destroyed one of her two most cherished relationships.
*MyGreatestFailure: If anything can match 'banishing my beloved little sister for a thousand years' in Celestia book of bad decisions it's 'manipulate my beloved student so much she severs ties with me'.
*MyGreatestFailure: If anything can match 'banishing my beloved little sister for a thousand years' in Celestia book of bad decisions it's 'manipulate my beloved student so much she severs ties with me'.
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*[[spoiler: SoProudOfYou: Part of Celestia and Twilight's reconcilation is Celestia admitting that she was impressed beyond words when Twilight and her friends defeated Nightmare Moon and became more and more proud of Twilight which each passing adventure.]]
*TimeForPlanB: What we see in the canon pilot was ''not'' Celestia' main plan; it was a 'contingency''. [[spoiler: She did not expect Twilight to redeemm Nightmare Moon immediately. Indeed, she sent Twilight to Ponyvile hoping she would escape Nightmare Moon's wrath as she wiped out Celestia herself and took over. What we see in the canon pilot was one hundred percent Twilight's own initiative.]]
*[[spoiler: SoProudOfYou: Part of Celestia and Twilight's reconcilation is Celestia admitting that she was impressed beyond words when Twilight and her friends defeated Nightmare Moon and became more and more proud of Twilight which each passing adventure.]]
*TimeForPlanB: What we see in the canon pilot was ''not'' Celestia' main plan; it was a 'contingency''. [[spoiler: She did not expect Twilight to redeemm Nightmare Moon immediately. Indeed, she sent Twilight to Ponyvile hoping she would escape Nightmare Moon's wrath as she wiped out Celestia herself and took over. What we see in the canon pilot was one hundred percent Twilight's own initiative.]]
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*UndyingLoyalty: Even after the ''vicious'' RageAgainstTheMentor, half of Twilight's friends bet money that she would be back in 'Most Faithful Student' mode in short order. [[spoiler: It is ultimately a DownplayedTrope; while Twilight is no longer the same adoring fangirl she is still willing to carry out Celestia's assignments and eventually reconciles with her.]]
*[[spoiler: WartsAndAll: Celestia is not an all knowning chessmaster with a farlung master plan; rather she's fallible like everypony else and prepares for the future as best she can. She admits as much to Twilight during their reconcilation.]]
*[[spoiler: RebuiltPedestal: Celestia explains why she kept Nightmare Moon's return a secret from Twilight, the real reason she sent Twilight to Ponyvile, and why she sent the Element Bearers on such dangerous mission. She admits her mistake, apologizes, and the two reconcile.]]
*UndyingLoyalty: Even after the ''vicious'' RageAgainstTheMentor, half of Twilight's friends bet money that she would be back in 'Most Faithful Student' mode in short order. [[spoiler: It is ultimately a DownplayedTrope; while Twilight is no longer the same adoring fangirl she is still willing to carry out Celestia's assignments and eventually reconciles with her.]]
*[[spoiler: WartsAndAll: Celestia is not an all knowning chessmaster with a farlung master plan; rather she's fallible like everypony else and prepares for the future as best she can. She admits as much to Twilight during their reconcilation.]]
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* AdultsAreUseless: The Cutie Mark Crusaders point out the many times Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon have bullied them and how they have never received any help.
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A alternate opening to Season 3 of [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic]] By [[creator/RealityCheck]], [[Creator/RealityCheck]], can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60523/parting-words here]]
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A alternate opening to Season 3 of [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic]] By [[Author/RealityCheck]], [[creator/RealityCheck]], can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60523/parting-words here]]
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A alternate opening to Season 3 of [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic]] By RealityCheck, [[Author/RealityCheck]], can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60523/parting-words here]]
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Princess Celestia is sending Twilight Sparkle off to save the Crystal Kingdom. But before she goes she has a few things to say....
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Now has a Sequel, the Great Alicorn Hunt, found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/92077/the-great-alicorn-hunt here]]
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Princess Celestia is sending Twilight Sparkle off to save the Crystal Kingdom. But before she goes she has a few things to say....
Based off the season 3 opener.
Now has a Sequel, the Great Alicorn Hunt, found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/92077/the-great-alicorn-hunt here]]
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