History for Fanfic/ParadiseThwarted

* SuddenSequelDeathSyndrom: Adam Young, who is dead by the second chapter. This is what allows humanity to get their memories of both Apocalypses back. Pepper, Brian, and Wendsleydale aren't actually dead, but just helping Adam run things in his part of Hell.

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* ~~SuddenSequelDeathSyndrom:~~ SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome: Adam Young, who is dead by the second chapter. This is what allows humanity to get their memories of both Apocalypses back. Pepper, Brian, and Wendsleydale aren't actually dead, but just helping Adam run things in his part of Hell.

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* AnimeHair: Belial does it to make himself look taller.

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* DistractedByTheSexy: As can be expected, just about everyone when Belial is around. Even [[ObliviousToLove Uriel]].
-->'''Uriel''': I like it when you talk.

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* FantasticArousal: Involving halos, apparently.

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* ActionGirl: Pepper, whose main job it is to beat up demons from Adam in hell. Also, War.
** And the woman who shot Crowley.

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* BigBad: In the end, the main foe is the new AntiChrist, Evilosoth, whom humanity rallied behind because they think he's on their side (he's really on no one's and just finds angels and demons more fun to kill).

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* BloodKnight: Evilosoth has no empathy and is only killing angels and demons instead of humans because he finds it more satisfying.

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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Do they ever have to!

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** It ends up going how God hoped it would, at the very least. [[spoiler: Lucifer back as an archangel and all.]]

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* FaceHeelTurn: subverted with Crowley, while he Falls again, everyone knows he's on Heaven's side and Lucifer doesn't even tally him among the forces of Hell. He doesn't even count as "the traitor" thanks to [[spoiler: Belial]] recently getting that place.
* [[FanGirl Fangirls]]: get their own layer in hell
* FootnoteFever: but of course.

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* TheEvilPrince: Subverted. Adam may have taken the open position of Prince of Hell after death, but he's no worse than in canon or ManchesterLost.
* FaceHeelTurn: ~~subverted~~ Subverted with Crowley, while he Falls again, everyone knows he's on Heaven's side and Lucifer doesn't even tally him among the forces of Hell. He doesn't even count as "the traitor" thanks to [[spoiler: Belial]] recently getting that place.
* [[FanGirl Fangirls]]: ~~get~~ Get their own layer in hell
* FootnoteFever: ~~but~~ But of course.

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* LampShading: lots and lots of it, sometimes with the trope names quoted.

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* LampShading: ~~lots~~ Lots and lots of it, sometimes with the trope names ~~quoted.~~ quoted.
* TheMessiah: Jesus, natch. [[spoiler: Still a girl, ''and'' Lady Gaga.]] Adam also helps by [[spoiler: taking his portion of AntiChrist powers from Evilosoth, leaving him vulnerable.]]

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* OfficialCouple: Played with, as [[SamusIsAGirl] Jesus]] and Pepper both admit they didn't take Adam because they were sure the other would ask him any day, and decide to work something out. Adam wonders why no one asked him.

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* OfficialCouple: Played with, as ~~[[SamusIsAGirl]~~ [[SamusIsAGirl Jesus]] and Pepper both admit they didn't take Adam because they were sure the other would ask him any day, and decide to work something out. Adam wonders why no one asked him.

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* [[RecapEpisode Recap Chapter]]: The introduction is this, with Crowley and Aziraphale telling the somewhat nerfed events of Fanfic/ManchesterLost to their godchildren.

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* [[RecapEpisode Recap Chapter]]: The introduction is this, with Crowley and Aziraphale telling the somewhat nerfed events of Fanfic/ManchesterLost to their godchildren. [[spoiler: This turns out to be a ChekhovsGun leading to ID'ing the BigBad]]

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** The head of the human's Manifest Destiny movement, who turns out to be [[Aziraphale and Crowley's goddaughter, Azriaphale Pulsifier, and Agnes Nutter reincarnate to boot.]]

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** The head of the human's Manifest Destiny movement, who turns out to be ~~[[Aziraphale~~ [[spoiler: Aziraphale and Crowley's goddaughter, Azriaphale Pulsifier, and Agnes Nutter reincarnate to boot.]]

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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Some members of the Forces of Hell just ''cannot'' get their acts together. Lucifer's army check before the climax is more of a "who's still alive" check, and a few more die in the climax because there's just certain angels they ''really'' want to kill.

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* BigBad: In the end, the main foe is the new AntiChrist, Evilosoth, whom humanity rallied behind because they think he's on their side (he's on no one's and just finds angels and demons more fun to kill).
** The head of the human's Manifest Destiny movement, who turns out to be [[Aziraphale and Crowley's goddaughter, Azriaphale Pulsifier, and Agnes Nutter reincarnate to boot.]]

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** Also one involving the main running gag from the previous story shows up after the climax.

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* DudeWheresMyRespect: The Metaron is annoyed about how dismissive the archangels are of him. [[HeelFaceTurn With really bad consequences.]]
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: Humanity is worried about this, leading them to fight Heaven and Hell. [[spoiler: And it happens, though it's not too bad when it does.]]

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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Technically, Lucifer, though Uriel didn't give him too much choice and God made the deal too good to refuse. He's still a jerk, though.]]

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* [[StatusQuoIsGod God Planned the Status Quo]]: Crowley does eventually become a demon again, and it comes in handy. Crowley even lampshades with with a dry "Ineffable".

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** Subverted in the fact that they end up helping Heaven and Hell, played straight in that it's still against humanity.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5694906/1/bParadise_b_bThwarted_b Paradise Thwarted]] is the Sequel to Fanfic/ManchesterLost. It picks up several years after the events of Fanfic/ManchesterLost when humans regain memories of the two apocalypses almost happening to them. This leads to humanity declaring war on both Heaven and Hell. As a result, Above and Below have to join forces against mankind.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5694906/1/bParadise_b_bThwarted_b Paradise Thwarted]] by JA{{Tropers/Moczo}} is the Sequel to Fanfic/ManchesterLost. It picks up several years ~~after the events of Fanfic/ManchesterLost~~ afterwards, when humans regain memories of the two apocalypses almost happening to them. This leads to humanity declaring war on both Heaven and Hell. As a result, Above and Below have to join forces against mankind.

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The story is as big in the LampshadeHanging and SelfParody department as the previous installment and very much worth a read if you enjoyed Fanfic/ManchesterLost.

Warning: Spoilers for Fanfic/ManchesterLost will be unmarked, since this a sequel.

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The story is as big in the LampshadeHanging and SelfParody department as the previous installment and very much worth a read if you enjoyed ~~Fanfic/ManchesterLost.~~

its prequel.

Warning: Spoilers for ~~Fanfic/ManchesterLost~~ the prequel will be unmarked, since this a sequel.

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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Evilosoth the Destroyer, Conqueror of Worlds, [[GoneHorriblyRight Adam's replacement Antichrist.]]

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!!This Fanfic contains examples off

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!!This Fanfic contains examples ~~off~~
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* TakeThat: {{Spice Girls}}, {{Twilight}}, and anything else that can be caught in the crossfire.

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* TakeThat: ~~{{Spice~~ Music/{{Spice Girls}}, {{Twilight}}, and anything else that can be caught in the crossfire.

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* ZombieApocalypse: Thank you, Pestilence

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* ZombieApocalypse: Thank you, ~~Pestilence~~Pestilence
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* BadassLongcoat: What else could Pestilence be wearing?

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* ~~BadassLongcoat:~~ BadassLabcoat: What else could Pestilence be wearing?

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Badass Labcoat has been merged with Badass Longcoat.

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* BadassLabcoat: What else could Pestilence be wearing?

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* ~~BadassLabcoat:~~ BadassLongcoat: What else could Pestilence be wearing?

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---> '''Michael:''' ''[[VideoGame/MischiefMakers A hero in shining armor has been called upon!]] [[Series/XenaWarriorPrincess A land in turmoil has cried out for a hero!]] [[WesternAnimation/HeManAndTheMastersOfTheUniverse I have the power,]] to engage in [[VideoGame/BaldursGate butt-kicking for goodness!]] [[Main/DirtyHarry So go ahead, make my day!]] [[WesternAnimation/CaptainPlanetAndThePlaneteers By your powers combined, I am]] [[Main/ArchangelMichael Field Commander of the Army of God, One of the Chief Princes, Advocate of Israel, One Who is Like God, Angel of the Presence, Chief of the Virtues and Archangels, Angel of Truth, the Warrior, Defender of Christians, Patron Saint of Chivalry, Patron Saint of Warriors, Captain of the Host of the Lord, Prince of Light, Viceroy of Heaven, Prince of Israel, First of the Seven Who Stand Before the Lord, Archistratege of God, Prince of Primordial Fire, the Expeller, Supreme Commander of the Heavenly Host, Prince of the Seraphim, the Right Hand of the Lord, Conqueror of Satan, Saint Michael Mikha'el the Archangel!]] [[Manga/SailorMoon In the name of the Lord, I shall punish you!]]''

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* [[RecapEpisode Recap Chapter]]: The introduction is this, with Crowley and Azriraphale telling the somewhat nerfed events of Fanfic/ManchesterLost to their godchildren.

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* [[RecapEpisode Recap Chapter]]: The introduction is this, with Crowley and ~~Azriraphale~~ Aziraphale telling the somewhat nerfed events of Fanfic/ManchesterLost to their godchildren.

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* ThePornomancer: Asmodeus, though it should be expected for the arch demon of lust and sloth. Crosses into StupidSexyFlanders territory at times.

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* ThePornomancer: ~~Asmodeus,~~ Belial, though it should be expected for the arch demon of lust and sloth. Crosses into StupidSexyFlanders territory at times.

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* BadassLabcoat: What else could Pestilence be wearing?

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* PapaWolf: Raphael. Also a heavy case of BewareTheNiceOnes

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* ThePornomancer: Asmodeus, though it should be expected for the arch demon of lust and sloth. Crosses into StupidSexyFladers territory at times.

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* ThePornomancer: Asmodeus, though it should be expected for the arch demon of lust and sloth. Crosses into ~~StupidSexyFladers~~ StupidSexyFlanders territory at times.

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* ThePornomancer: Asmodeus, though it should be expected for the arch demon of lust and sloth. Crosses into StupidSexFladers territory at times.

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* ThePornomancer: Asmodeus, though it should be expected for the arch demon of lust and sloth. Crosses into ~~StupidSexFladers~~ StupidSexyFladers territory at times.

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* ObliviousToLove: Uriel. Or at least oblivious to seduction.

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* ThePornomancer: Asmodeus, though it should be expected for the arch demon of lust and sloth. Crosses into StupidSexFladers territory at times.

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