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* BizarreTasteInFood: Remmy, a prey mammal who eats "bugburgas", a predator food. Come "Chum", he adds fish to his diet as well.
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* BizarreTasteInFood: Remmy, a prey mammal who eats "bugburgas", a predator food. Come "Chum", he adds fish to his diet as well. Doubles as AscendedToCarnivorism.
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** "Hoofer" -- an ungulate. Chris the tiger is deeply scandalized when he actually says this in front of Remmy, but Remmy himself doesn't consider it to be a slur; it's far too factual in nature & feel (ungulates ''do'' have hooves, after all), and it rolls off the tongue more easily than "ungulate" does.
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** "Hoofer" -- an ungulate. Chris the tiger is deeply scandalized when he actually says this in front of Remmy, but Remmy himself doesn't consider it to be a slur; it's far too factual in nature & feel (ungulates ''do'' have hooves, after all), all; it's their defining trait), it doesn't really sound offensive, and it rolls off the tongue more easily than "ungulate" does.does.
** "Chomper" -- a old-fashioned and very politically incorrect nickname for predators as a whole, referencing their teeth.
** "Chomper" -- a old-fashioned and very politically incorrect nickname for predators as a whole, referencing their teeth.
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* OhCrap: Remmy has this reaction when [[spoiler: watching the news of Bellwether's arrest.]]
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* OhCrap: Remmy has this reaction in the original comic when [[spoiler: watching the news of Bellwether's arrest.]]
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* RecursiveFanfiction: The series is popular enough that it's spawned knock-off fanfictions, most commonly on the fiction website "An Archive Of Our Own".
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* AnimatedActors: In a very strange and presumably non-canon example, one comic shows a vixen claiming to play Charlie on the TV series ''Pack Street'' doing a celebrity endorsement, only for [[MindScrew the real Charlie to show up]] [[HypocriticalHumor and wonder how they got into her room]].
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** A lot of animal facts pop up in "Field Day" and "#Sheepfacts", like the fact that hoofed animals like Remmy need special help gripping things due to the particular shape of their fingers, sheep have a 300 degree field of vision, aardwolves are technically felines, and hyenas can digest bones.
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** A lot of animal facts pop up in "Field Day" and "#Sheepfacts", "Sheepfacts", like the fact that hoofed animals like Remmy need special help gripping things due to the particular shape of their fingers, sheep have a 300 degree field of vision, aardwolves are technically felines, and hyenas can digest bones.
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* FantasticSlur: As Pack Street is fairly rough territory by Zootopia standards, more than a few of these pop up during the course of the series.
** "Wannabite" -- a coarse, but not necessarily unfriendly, nickname for a prey animal who enjoys eating meat. Remmy's status as such is established in the first story, which is even named after it.
** "Predophile" -- a mocking nickname for a prey animal who is sexually interested in predators. The female preds of the apartment enjoy teasing Remmy that he is into them, and although he denies it, the narration makes it pretty obvious that they're on-track with the claim.
** "Hoofer" -- an ungulate. Chris the tiger is deeply scandalized when he actually says this in front of Remmy, but Remmy himself doesn't consider it to be a slur; it's far too factual in nature & feel (ungulates ''do'' have hooves, after all), and it rolls off the tongue more easily than "ungulate" does.
** "Wannabite" -- a coarse, but not necessarily unfriendly, nickname for a prey animal who enjoys eating meat. Remmy's status as such is established in the first story, which is even named after it.
** "Predophile" -- a mocking nickname for a prey animal who is sexually interested in predators. The female preds of the apartment enjoy teasing Remmy that he is into them, and although he denies it, the narration makes it pretty obvious that they're on-track with the claim.
** "Hoofer" -- an ungulate. Chris the tiger is deeply scandalized when he actually says this in front of Remmy, but Remmy himself doesn't consider it to be a slur; it's far too factual in nature & feel (ungulates ''do'' have hooves, after all), and it rolls off the tongue more easily than "ungulate" does.
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* TrueCompanions/VitriolicBestBuds: The pack can be best described as a combination of these tropes. They give each other grief constantly, but when push comes to shove, they've got each other's backs.
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* {{Tuckerization}}: [[http://tgweaver.tumblr.com/post/148182873357/ Byron's Manifesto]], a shout-out to ''Zootopia'' director/writer Byron Howard.
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* FurryReminder: A lot of little titbits about real animal traits and behaviors pop up during the stories, much like the series' inspiration.
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* DefrostingIceQueen: A two-way example with Remmy and the rest of Pack Street's residents. Over time, he gradually looks at them in a less negative light, and they in turn start treating him more like one of the group.
* FurryReminder: A lot of littletitbits tidbits about real animal traits and behaviors pop up during the stories, much like the series' inspiration.
* FurryReminder: A lot of little
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* LovableJock: Cliff and Neil, a tiger and lion duo that Remmy befriends at the gym.
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* WhamEpisode: "Savages" [[spoiler:Pandora goes savage, Charlie thinks that [[SurvivorGuilt it should have been her]], Anekke is too shaken to enjoy a night on the town, and a graffiti mural that Remmy admired gets vandalized.]]
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Ozzy, who has periodic appointments with a social worker.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Ozzy, who has periodic appointments with a social worker.worker, and Charlie, who seems to be totally oblivious to social mores.
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* BizarreTasteInFood: Remmy, a prey mammal who eats "bugburgas", a predator food.
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* BizarreTasteInFood: Remmy, a prey mammal who eats "bugburgas", a predator food. Come "Chum", he adds fish to his diet as well.
* FurryReminder: A lot of little titbits about real animal traits and behaviors pop up during the stories, much like the series' inspiration.
** "Power Forward" reminds us that even as a short, hornless ram, Remmy is literally built for butting things with his head when he manages to ram a punching bag twice his size with such force that Avo, who's holding it on the other side, staggers away and falls to the ground gasping for breath like she just got one hell of a gut-punch.
** A lot of animal facts pop up in "Field Day" and "#Sheepfacts", like the fact that hoofed animals like Remmy need special help gripping things due to the particular shape of their fingers, sheep have a 300 degree field of vision, aardwolves are technically felines, and hyenas can digest bones.
** "Power Forward" reminds us that even as a short, hornless ram, Remmy is literally built for butting things with his head when he manages to ram a punching bag twice his size with such force that Avo, who's holding it on the other side, staggers away and falls to the ground gasping for breath like she just got one hell of a gut-punch.
** A lot of animal facts pop up in "Field Day" and "#Sheepfacts", like the fact that hoofed animals like Remmy need special help gripping things due to the particular shape of their fingers, sheep have a 300 degree field of vision, aardwolves are technically felines, and hyenas can digest bones.
* MoralMyopia: Zigzagged. None of the predators ever really openly acknowledge their own faults in making Remmy feel an outcast, other than a few token comments in a backhanded way. However, once Remmy does apologize for the legitimately wrong things he said to Al, they do open up to him a lot more.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: A huge part of the problem between Remmy and his neighbors is that neither side is really open to communicating with each other. In particular, the predators make a lot of assumptions about Remmy understanding their pack culture and deliberately refusing to play along. This comes to a boil in "Fall Back", where Remmy finally gets sick of his neighbors just assuming he understands everything they say or do and letting them having for this attitude. Unfortunately for everyone, he gets a little ''too'' heated in his complaints.
* SeldomSeenSpecies: Some less-common species of "common" animals are seen here: Corsac fox, Kalahari lion, aardwolves, Egyptian wolves ''and'' goldenjackals...jackals...
* ShoutOut: The story "B.R.E" revolves around Marty's knowledge of the old chant [[Film/{{Babe}} "Baa, Ram, Ewe..."]]
* SeldomSeenSpecies: Some less-common species of "common" animals are seen here: Corsac fox, Kalahari lion, aardwolves, Egyptian wolves ''and'' golden
* ShoutOut: The story "B.R.E" revolves around Marty's knowledge of the old chant [[Film/{{Babe}} "Baa, Ram, Ewe..."]]
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: Some less-common species of "common" animals are seen here: Corsac fox, Kalahari lion, roe deer...Egyptian wolves ''and'' golden jackals...
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* UnwantedHarem: Yes, Remmy somehow manages to get the affections in some way of every female in Pack Street except Pandora and Velvet.
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* BaitAndSwitch: [[spoiler:When Velvet, a government worker is waiting for Ozzy and Remmy at the apartment building and expressing severe disappointment in them, you might think she's found out about their participation in the recent crime. Nope! She's actually upset that Remmy (unintentionally) made Ozzy late for his appointment.]]
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* BookWorm: Marty. He works at a library, and his apartment is filled with them.
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* BookWorm: Marty. He works at a library, and his apartment is filled with them.books.
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* OhCrap: Remmy has this reaction when [[spoiler: watching the news of Bellwether's arrest]]arrest.]]
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* TheCaper: In the chapter aptly titled, "The Heist", Charlie ropes Remmy and Wolter into helping her "liberate" a batch of medical-grade drugs/pheromones.
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* TheCaper: In the chapter aptly titled, "The Heist", Charlie ropes Remmy and Wolter into helping her "liberate" a batch of medical-grade drugs/pheromones.tiger pheromones.
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* HowWeGotHere: The story opens with Remmy, already moved in, watching the announcement of the Bellwether scandal on TV. The rest of the story shows the events leading up to that point.
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* HowWeGotHere: The story opens with Remmy, already moved in, watching the announcement of the Bellwether scandal on TV. The rest of the story shows is about the events leading up to that point.
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* BizarreTasteInFood: Remmy, a prey mammal who eats "bugburgas", a predator food.
* BookWorm: Marty. He works at a library, and his apartment is filled with them.
* BookWorm: Marty. He works at a library, and his apartment is filled with them.
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[[http://pastebin.com/u/packstreet Read it here]]
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[[http://imgur.com/a/0qa7h The comic Wannabite can be read here]]
[[http://pastebin.com/u/packstreetRead The written stories can be read it here]]
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* HowWeGotHere: The story opens with Remmy, already moved in, watching the announcement of the Bellwether scandal on TV. The rest of the story shows the events leading up to that point.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Some of the Pack Street crew relaxing.[[labelnote:note]]Left to right: Marty, Ozzy, Charlie, Al, Wolter, Anneke, Avo[[/labelnote]]]]
[[caption-width-right:350:Some of the Pack Street crew relaxing.[[labelnote:note]]Left to right: Marty, Ozzy, Charlie, Al, Wolter, Anneke, Avo[[/labelnote]]]]
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* NakedFirstImpression: Remmy walks in on Charlie stepping out of the shower. She doesn't mind; he does.
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* LoveableSexManiac: While most of the crew has their moments, Anneke and Wolter qualify the most. Their only standard seems to be that they won't sleep with the underage.
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* LoveableSexManiac: While most of the crew has their moments, Anneke and Wolter qualify the most. Their only standard seems to be that they won't sleep with the underage.underage.
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->''Sheep don't eat meat.''
-->'''Remmy'''
''Pack Street'' is a series of ''Disney/{{Zootopia}}'' fan comics and stories by Creator/TheWeaver.
You know Zootopia? A ShiningCity of interspecies cooperation in a WorldOfFunnyAnimals, where "anyone can be anything"? Well, there's a WrongSideOfTheTracks there, too, and if you didn't already know there were [[FantasticRacism predator/prey tensions]], that's where you'll find out.
Enter Remmy Cormo, our protagonist, a mostly mild-mannered sheep with an open mind but his own preconceived notions and ignorance about other species. After renting in the only affordable area he could, he has to adjust to the cast of eccentric and varied characters that call the area home, and vice versa. Maybe he can learn something along the way, assuming he doesn't put his hoof in his mouth too badly before then...
The setting is ongoing, and has attracted some attention from artists such as Adam Bryce Thomas, best known for ''ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog''.
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* AccidentalPervert: This happens to Remmy more than once, and sometimes it's not quite so innocent.
* TheCaper: In the chapter aptly titled, "The Heist", Charlie ropes Remmy and Wolter into helping her "liberate" a batch of medical-grade drugs/pheromones.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Remmy tends to come across as this more often than not, often without even realizing he's being a jerk. To his credit, he always attempts to make amends.
* LoveableSexManiac: While most of the crew has their moments, Anneke and Wolter qualify the most. Their only standard seems to be that they won't sleep with the underage.
-->'''Remmy'''
''Pack Street'' is a series of ''Disney/{{Zootopia}}'' fan comics and stories by Creator/TheWeaver.
You know Zootopia? A ShiningCity of interspecies cooperation in a WorldOfFunnyAnimals, where "anyone can be anything"? Well, there's a WrongSideOfTheTracks there, too, and if you didn't already know there were [[FantasticRacism predator/prey tensions]], that's where you'll find out.
Enter Remmy Cormo, our protagonist, a mostly mild-mannered sheep with an open mind but his own preconceived notions and ignorance about other species. After renting in the only affordable area he could, he has to adjust to the cast of eccentric and varied characters that call the area home, and vice versa. Maybe he can learn something along the way, assuming he doesn't put his hoof in his mouth too badly before then...
The setting is ongoing, and has attracted some attention from artists such as Adam Bryce Thomas, best known for ''ComicBook/ArchieComicsSonicTheHedgehog''.
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!!Examples:
* AccidentalPervert: This happens to Remmy more than once, and sometimes it's not quite so innocent.
* TheCaper: In the chapter aptly titled, "The Heist", Charlie ropes Remmy and Wolter into helping her "liberate" a batch of medical-grade drugs/pheromones.
* InnocentlyInsensitive: Remmy tends to come across as this more often than not, often without even realizing he's being a jerk. To his credit, he always attempts to make amends.
* LoveableSexManiac: While most of the crew has their moments, Anneke and Wolter qualify the most. Their only standard seems to be that they won't sleep with the underage.
