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* BittersweetEnding: Ultimately, [[spoiler:Shikinori isn't approved to participate in the study. He tells his father otherwise, and after being dissuaded from giving him One For All to 'fix it', Izuku breaks down in his mentor's arms... but the next day, goes back to smiling for the cameras while his son continues searching for a job, and Inko remains alone]].
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* BittersweetEnding: Ultimately, [[spoiler:Shikinori isn't approved to participate in the study. He tells ArmorPiercingQuestion: Toshinori asks one of Izuku, who [[spoiler:convinced that Shiki had his father otherwise, and after being dissuaded from Quirk removed, considers giving him One For All to 'fix it', Izuku breaks down All.]]
-->“Why do you think that [[spoiler:giving Shikinori One for All]] would fix this in the first place? Do you really believe that hismentor's arms... but quirk is the next day, goes back to smiling for root of the cameras while his son continues searching for a job, and Inko remains alone]].problem? Do you?”
-->“Why do you think that [[spoiler:giving Shikinori One for All]] would fix this in the first place? Do you really believe that his
* BrokenRecord: As Toshinori tells Izuku about how it's impossible to be the Symbol of Peace and a family man, Izuku can only repeatedly say, "I know."
* DownerEnding: Ultimately, [[spoiler:Shikinori isn't approved to participate in the study. He tells his father otherwise, and after being dissuaded from giving him One For All to 'fix it', Izuku breaks down in his mentor's arms... but the next day, goes back to smiling for the cameras while his son continues searching for a job, and Inko remains alone.]] In the end, no one solves their personal problems.
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* FamilyVersusCareer: Toshinori warned Izuku that he couldn't serve as the Symbol of Peace while also raising a family. Izuku and Ochaco attempted to prove him wrong. [[spoiler:They fail. Izuku's {{workaholic}} tendencies leave Ochaco alone at nights with only Shiki there to comfort her. They end up divorcing before Shiki is even a teenager, and while they try to remain AmicableExes, Izuku is so wrapped up in hero duties they still barely interact anymore. What's worse, because he's one of the most popular heroes out there, Ochaco is slammed with bad publicity for "breaking his heart".]] Surprisingly, Shoto "Ice Razer" Todoroki remains close to his parents, while Bakugo and Kirishima are GoodParents to their adopted son.
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* FamilyVersusCareer: Toshinori warned Izuku that he couldn't serve as the Symbol of Peace while also raising a family. Izuku and Ochaco attempted to prove him wrong. [[spoiler:They fail. Izuku's {{workaholic}} tendencies leave Ochaco alone at nights with only Shiki there to comfort her. They end up divorcing before Shiki is even a teenager, and while they try to remain AmicableExes, Izuku is so wrapped up in hero duties they still barely interact anymore. What's worse, because he's one of the most popular heroes out there, Ochaco is slammed with bad publicity for "breaking his heart".]] Surprisingly, Shoto "Ice Razer" Todoroki remains close to his parents, parents and daughter, while Bakugo and Kirishima are GoodParents to their adopted son.
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* ProneToTears: Decades after starting at U.A., Izuku still cries when he gets emotional, but this time, it's PlayedForDrama.
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* {{Workaholic}}: Izuku works 120-hour weeks- over 17 hours per day- in order to surpass All Might, who worked 119-hour weeks in his prime.
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* FamilyVersusCareer: Toshinori warned Izuku that he couldn't serve as the Symbol of Peace while also raising a family. Izuku and Ochaco attempted to prove him wrong. [[spoiler:They fail. Izuku's {{workaholic}} tendencies leave Ochaco alone at nights with only Shiki there to comfort her. They end up divorcing before Shiki is even a teenager, and while they try to remain AmicableExes, Izuku is so wrapped up in hero duties they still barely interact anymore. What's worse, because he's one of the most popular heroes out there, Ochaco is slammed with bad publicity for "breaking his heart".]]
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* FamilyVersusCareer: Toshinori warned Izuku that he couldn't serve as the Symbol of Peace while also raising a family. Izuku and Ochaco attempted to prove him wrong. [[spoiler:They fail. Izuku's {{workaholic}} tendencies leave Ochaco alone at nights with only Shiki there to comfort her. They end up divorcing before Shiki is even a teenager, and while they try to remain AmicableExes, Izuku is so wrapped up in hero duties they still barely interact anymore. What's worse, because he's one of the most popular heroes out there, Ochaco is slammed with bad publicity for "breaking his heart".]]]] Surprisingly, Shoto "Ice Razer" Todoroki remains close to his parents, while Bakugo and Kirishima are GoodParents to their adopted son.
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* HappilyAdopted: Red Riot and Ground Zero Zero(Bakugo) have adopted a son together, and have turned out to be GoodParents. Shikinori cops to being a bit jealous of their relationship.
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* BluntYes: Toshinori gives one to Izuku when he asks whether he failed his son.
-->“…Yes. I’m sorry. I’m to blame for this too. I pulled you down this path. But… yes. You failed him.”
-->“…Yes. I’m sorry. I’m to blame for this too. I pulled you down this path. But… yes. You failed him.”
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* IWarnedYou: When Izuku turns to his old mentor for comfort after learning that [[spoiler:Shiki supposedly got his Quirk removed]], Toshinori somberly reminds him of how he warned him that there was no way he could balance having a family with being the Symbol of Peace.
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* ParentsAsPeople: For all his complaints, Shikinori doesn't lack sympathy or understanding as to ''why'' his parents prioritize their jobs over him. Especially after they got counseling together, and he was able to see that his father legitimately regretted how he'd hurt him.
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* ParentsAsPeople: For all his complaints, Shikinori doesn't lack sympathy or understanding as to ''why'' his parents prioritize their jobs over him. Especially after they got counseling together, and he was is able to see that his father legitimately regretted how he'd hurt him.
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* IWarnedYou: When Izuku turns to his old mentor for comfort after learning that [[spoiler:Shiki supposedly got his Quirk removed]], Toshinori somberly reminds him of how he warned him that there was no way he could balance having a family with being the Symbol of Peace.
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That's the DrivingQuestion behind ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23504542 Origin of a Non-Hero]]'', a one-shot by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/PitViperOfDoom/pseuds/PitViperOfDoom PitViperOfDoom]]. If he wants any chance to be considered for the study, Shikinori will have to pull back the layers of his complicated relationship with his father and explain just ''why'' he wants it removed.
For longer examples of this author's works, look at ''FanFic/YesterdayUponTheStair'', ''FanFic/PowderedGoldAndPottery'', ''FanFic/ItsOverIsntItItsOnlyJustBegun'', and ''FanFic/WitnessGoodNeighbors''.
For longer examples of this author's works, look at ''FanFic/YesterdayUponTheStair'', ''FanFic/PowderedGoldAndPottery'', ''FanFic/ItsOverIsntItItsOnlyJustBegun'', and ''FanFic/WitnessGoodNeighbors''.
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That's the DrivingQuestion behind ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23504542 Origin of a Non-Hero]]'', a one-shot by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/PitViperOfDoom/pseuds/PitViperOfDoom PitViperOfDoom]].org/users/Phantomrose96/pseuds/Phantomrose96 Phantomrose96]]. If he wants any chance to be considered for the study, Shikinori will have to pull back the layers of his complicated relationship with his father and explain just ''why'' he wants it removed.
For longer examples of this author's works, look at ''FanFic/YesterdayUponTheStair'', ''FanFic/PowderedGoldAndPottery'', ''FanFic/ItsOverIsntItItsOnlyJustBegun'', and ''FanFic/WitnessGoodNeighbors''.
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* BittersweetEnding: Ultimately, [[spoiler:Shikinori isn't approved to participate in the study. He tells his father otherwise, and Izuku breaks down in his mentor's arms... but the next day, goes back to smiling for the cameras while his son continues searching for a job, and Inko remains alone]].
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* AllForNothing: [[spoiler:Shiki pours out his heart and soul to the evaluators, only to get rejected from participating in the study. When he tells his father otherwise, claiming that he already went through with it, Izuku's reaction makes clear that he ''STILL'' doesn't understand his son, as his plan to 'set things right' would only make things significantly WORSE if he went through with it.]]
* BittersweetEnding: Ultimately, [[spoiler:Shikinori isn't approved to participate in the study. He tells his father otherwise, and after being dissuaded from giving him One For All to 'fix it', Izuku breaks down in his mentor's arms... but the next day, goes back to smiling for the cameras while his son continues searching for a job, and Inko remains alone]].
* BittersweetEnding: Ultimately, [[spoiler:Shikinori isn't approved to participate in the study. He tells his father otherwise, and after being dissuaded from giving him One For All to 'fix it', Izuku breaks down in his mentor's arms... but the next day, goes back to smiling for the cameras while his son continues searching for a job, and Inko remains alone]].
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* BrutalHonesty: Toshinori employs this when Izuku seeks his opinion, bluntly informing him that no, he doesn't approve of his plan, and questioning why he thinks it will fix anything in the first place.
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* DeconstructionFic: Provides a bleak look at a potential future for our heroes.
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* DeconstructionFic: Provides a bleak look at a potential future for our heroes.heroes, wherein Izuku's determination to uphold Toshinori's legacy while also trying to build a family doesn't work out.
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* HappilyAdopted: Red Riot and Ground Zero have adopted a son together, and have turned out to be GoodParents. Shikinori cops to being a bit jealous of their relationship.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Izuku has a breakdown when he learns through therapy just how much he's unintentionally hurt his family. Followed by another one years later when he thinks that [[spoiler:Shiki got his Quirk removed]].
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* ParentsAsPeople: For all his complaints, Shikinori doesn't lack sympathy or understanding as to ''why'' his parents prioritize their jobs over him. Especially after they got counseling together, and he was able to see that his father legitimately regretted how he'd hurt him.
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* SecretlySelfish: Deep down, Shikinori fears that his desire for a healthier, stronger relationship with his parents is this.
-->'''Shikinori:''' "Is that too much, Grandma? Is it selfish of me to want that... and to want Mom and Dad to still love me, too? Is it too selfish to just want them to be proud of me?"
* IWarnedYou: When Izuku turns to his old mentor for comfort after learning that [[spoiler:Shiki supposedly got his Quirk removed]], Toshinori somberly reminds him of how he warned him that there was no way he could balance having a family with being the Symbol of Peace.
-->'''Shikinori:''' "Is that too much, Grandma? Is it selfish of me to want that... and to want Mom and Dad to still love me, too? Is it too selfish to just want them to be proud of me?"
* IWarnedYou: When Izuku turns to his old mentor for comfort after learning that [[spoiler:Shiki supposedly got his Quirk removed]], Toshinori somberly reminds him of how he warned him that there was no way he could balance having a family with being the Symbol of Peace.
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* AesopAmnesia: Despite Shiki making it quite clear that he doesn't want to become a Pro Hero, and Izuku appearing to accept that at the time, he appears to forget himself after [[spoiler:Shiki returns from college]]. And if not then, then ''definitely'' when [[spoiler:he thinks Shiki got rid of his Quirk]].
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: After Shikinori informs him that [[spoiler:he had his Quirk removed]], Izuku's first instinct is to try and fix it by [[spoiler:planning to give him One For All instead... despite how Shiki wants nothing to do with Pro Heroism]].
* DramaticIrony: After how hard he fought to help Shouto break away from his father's stifling expectations, Izuku unintentionally foists his own unhealthy assumptions onto ''his'' son, assuming that he'll want to join him in Pro Heroism because really, why ''wouldn't'' he?
* DramaticIrony: After how hard he fought to help Shouto break away from his father's stifling expectations, Izuku unintentionally foists his own unhealthy assumptions onto ''his'' son, assuming that he'll want to join him in Pro Heroism because really, why ''wouldn't'' he?
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: After Shikinori informs him that [[spoiler:he had his Quirk removed]], Izuku's first instinct is to try and fix it by [[spoiler:planning to give him One For All instead... despite knowing how Shiki wants nothing to do with Pro Heroism]].
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** Izuku longed to be a hero, but was convinced that he'd never be able to make it without a Quirk -- good thing he had somebody willing and able to pass theirs on to him! His son, on the other hand, wants absolutely nothing to do with that world, and feels that the only way to convince his parents to stop pressuring him to follow their lead is to get his Quirk stripped away.
** After how hard he fought to help Shouto break away from his father's stifling expectations, Izuku unintentionally foists his own unhealthy assumptions onto ''his'' son, assuming that he'll want to join him in Pro Heroism because really, why ''wouldn't'' he?
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** Izuku longed to be a hero, but was convinced that he'd never be able to make it without a Quirk -- good thing he had somebody willing and able to pass theirs on to him! His son, on the other hand, wants absolutely nothing to do with that world, and feels that the only way to convince his parents to stop pressuring him to follow their lead is to get his Quirk stripped away.
** After how hard he fought to help Shouto break away from his father's stifling expectations, Izuku unintentionally foists his own unhealthy assumptions onto ''his'' son, assuming that he'll want to join him in Pro Heroism because really, why ''wouldn't'' he?
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* HowWeGotHere: The FramingDevice for the bulk of the story is Shikinori explaining to the evaluators just ''why'' he wants to have his Quirk removed.
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* NoSuchThingAsBadPublicity: When Ochaco returns to active service, she gets absolutely ''reamed'' by the tabloids, while Deku's 'fans' slammed her with filthy labels. She endures this because it helps get her name out there, even in such an ugly fashion.
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* NoSuchThingAsBadPublicity: InUniverse: When Ochaco returns to active service, she gets absolutely ''reamed'' by the tabloids, while Deku's 'fans' slammed her with filthy labels. She endures this because it helps get her name out there, even in such an ugly fashion.
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A young man sits on a bench with eleven others. Unlike his companions, he isn't handcuffed or restrained in any fashion. But then again, why would he be? Shikinori isn't a criminal. Far from it: he's the son of Japan's Number One Pro Hero, Deku.
So then why is he applying to a research study that aims to permanently remove the Quirks of its participants?
That's the DrivingQuestion behind ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23504542 Origin of a Non-Hero]]'', a one-shot by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/PitViperOfDoom/pseuds/PitViperOfDoom PitViperOfDoom]]. If he wants any chance to be considered for the study, Shikinori will have to pull back the layers of his complicated relationship with his father and explain just ''why'' he wants it removed.
For longer examples of this author's works, look at ''FanFic/YesterdayUponTheStair'', ''FanFic/PowderedGoldAndPottery'', ''FanFic/ItsOverIsntItItsOnlyJustBegun'', and ''FanFic/WitnessGoodNeighbors''.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* BittersweetEnding: Ultimately, [[spoiler:Shikinori isn't approved to participate in the study. He tells his father otherwise, and Izuku breaks down in his mentor's arms... but the next day, goes back to smiling for the cameras while his son continues searching for a job, and Inko remains alone]].
* {{Claustrophobia}}: A [[RuleOfSymbolism largely symbolic case]]; Shiki fears being trapped by the weight of everyone's expectations, and he frequently compares it to being like a fly in a jar.
-->''Being unyielding to gravity is no help when the walls close on every side.''
* DeconstructionFic: Provides a bleak look at a potential future for our heroes.
* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: After Shikinori informs him that [[spoiler:he had his Quirk removed]], Izuku's first instinct is to try and fix it by [[spoiler:planning to give him One For All instead... despite how Shiki wants nothing to do with Pro Heroism]].
* DramaticIrony: After how hard he fought to help Shouto break away from his father's stifling expectations, Izuku unintentionally foists his own unhealthy assumptions onto ''his'' son, assuming that he'll want to join him in Pro Heroism because really, why ''wouldn't'' he?
* FamilyVersusCareer: Toshinori warned Izuku that he couldn't serve as the Symbol of Peace while also raising a family. Izuku and Ochaco attempted to prove him wrong.
* FollowInMyFootsteps: Izuku naturally expects that Shikinori will want to follow his parents into the field of Pro Heroics.
* HopeSpot:
** When Shiki is fourteen, the Midoriyas get family counseling, and make real progress towards understanding each other and spending more time together... until [[spoiler:Deku slips down to #8, dropping in rank for the first time]].
** College is a good time for Shikinori, right up until [[spoiler:he graduates. Unable to find a job despite all his efforts, he's forced to move back home]].
* IJustWantToBeNormal: Shikinori's ultimate goal: to have a normal life ''despite'' being the son of two Pro Heroes.
* NoSuchThingAsBadPublicity: When Ochaco returns to active service, she gets absolutely ''reamed'' by the tabloids, while Deku's 'fans' slammed her with filthy labels. She endures this because it helps get her name out there, even in such an ugly fashion.
* PoorCommunicationKills: A running theme. The Midoriyas' relationships with each other dramatically improve when their therapist encourages them to open up and share their feelings with each other, and Shikinori's relationship with his father takes its biggest blow when Izuku jokes about how easily he could become a receptionist at his agency if he doesn't want to crunch numbers... despite Mathematics being his son's favorite subject.
* WhenYouComingHomeDad: Shiki's relationship with his father... and later with ''both'' of his parents.
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So then why is he applying to a research study that aims to permanently remove the Quirks of its participants?
That's the DrivingQuestion behind ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23504542 Origin of a Non-Hero]]'', a one-shot by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/PitViperOfDoom/pseuds/PitViperOfDoom PitViperOfDoom]]. If he wants any chance to be considered for the study, Shikinori will have to pull back the layers of his complicated relationship with his father and explain just ''why'' he wants it removed.
For longer examples of this author's works, look at ''FanFic/YesterdayUponTheStair'', ''FanFic/PowderedGoldAndPottery'', ''FanFic/ItsOverIsntItItsOnlyJustBegun'', and ''FanFic/WitnessGoodNeighbors''.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* BittersweetEnding: Ultimately, [[spoiler:Shikinori isn't approved to participate in the study. He tells his father otherwise, and Izuku breaks down in his mentor's arms... but the next day, goes back to smiling for the cameras while his son continues searching for a job, and Inko remains alone]].
* {{Claustrophobia}}: A [[RuleOfSymbolism largely symbolic case]]; Shiki fears being trapped by the weight of everyone's expectations, and he frequently compares it to being like a fly in a jar.
-->''Being unyielding to gravity is no help when the walls close on every side.''
* DeconstructionFic: Provides a bleak look at a potential future for our heroes.
* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: After Shikinori informs him that [[spoiler:he had his Quirk removed]], Izuku's first instinct is to try and fix it by [[spoiler:planning to give him One For All instead... despite how Shiki wants nothing to do with Pro Heroism]].
* DramaticIrony: After how hard he fought to help Shouto break away from his father's stifling expectations, Izuku unintentionally foists his own unhealthy assumptions onto ''his'' son, assuming that he'll want to join him in Pro Heroism because really, why ''wouldn't'' he?
* FamilyVersusCareer: Toshinori warned Izuku that he couldn't serve as the Symbol of Peace while also raising a family. Izuku and Ochaco attempted to prove him wrong.
* FollowInMyFootsteps: Izuku naturally expects that Shikinori will want to follow his parents into the field of Pro Heroics.
* HopeSpot:
** When Shiki is fourteen, the Midoriyas get family counseling, and make real progress towards understanding each other and spending more time together... until [[spoiler:Deku slips down to #8, dropping in rank for the first time]].
** College is a good time for Shikinori, right up until [[spoiler:he graduates. Unable to find a job despite all his efforts, he's forced to move back home]].
* IJustWantToBeNormal: Shikinori's ultimate goal: to have a normal life ''despite'' being the son of two Pro Heroes.
* NoSuchThingAsBadPublicity: When Ochaco returns to active service, she gets absolutely ''reamed'' by the tabloids, while Deku's 'fans' slammed her with filthy labels. She endures this because it helps get her name out there, even in such an ugly fashion.
* PoorCommunicationKills: A running theme. The Midoriyas' relationships with each other dramatically improve when their therapist encourages them to open up and share their feelings with each other, and Shikinori's relationship with his father takes its biggest blow when Izuku jokes about how easily he could become a receptionist at his agency if he doesn't want to crunch numbers... despite Mathematics being his son's favorite subject.
* WhenYouComingHomeDad: Shiki's relationship with his father... and later with ''both'' of his parents.
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