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* LivingShadow: From a certain viewpoint, [[CaptainObvious the Shadows themselves]] are this, being sentient even when being cast by their Light Halves.
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* LivingShadow: From a certain viewpoint, [[CaptainObvious the Shadows themselves]] themselves are this, being sentient even when being cast by their Light Halves.
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''Ojamajo Doremi: Rise of the Shadows'' is an ''Anime/OjamajoDoremi'' FanFic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1812940/PrettiWitchiMegChanChi PrettiWitchiMegChanChi]] over on Fanfiction.net.
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''Ojamajo Doremi: Rise of the Shadows'' is an ''Anime/OjamajoDoremi'' FanFic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1812940/PrettiWitchiMegChanChi PrettiWitchiMegChanChi]] ([[http://web.archive.org/web/20120418073037/http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1812940/PrettiWitchiMegChanChi Archive]]) over on Fanfiction.net.
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As of 9/6/2015, the author has been banned from Fanfiction.net, and she has not uploaded anything to her [=DeviantArt=]. Thus, this fic and its sequel ''Ojamajo Doremi: Witches at World's End'' in their original forms are lost for good.
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As of 9/6/2015, the author has been banned from Fanfiction.net, and she has not uploaded anything to her [=DeviantArt=]. Thus, had it not been for the archives, this fic and its sequel ''Ojamajo Doremi: Witches at World's End'' in their original forms are would have been lost for good.
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Archives of all chapters of ''[[http://web.archive.org/web/20120418073037/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5150214/1/Ojamajo_Doremi_Rise_of_the_Shadows Rise of the Shadows]]'' and the three first chapters of ''[[http://web.archive.org/web/20120418073037/http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8020686/1/Ojamajo_Doremi_Witches_At_Worlds_End Ojamajo Doremi: Witches at World's End]]'' are also available.
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Lost Forever was being misused. That's not the meaning of the trope. It's for when content inside a videogame can be gotten by Save Scumming or starting over your game.
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* PowerGivesYouWings: The Queen's SuperMode explicitly has angelic wings.
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* OutsideContextVillain: Black Queen, and by extension the Shadows as a whole. Sure, they're supernatural entities that wouldn't be out of place in a MagicalGirl anime, but here's the thing: Their violence and sadism is ''far'' greater than the canon villains, which is shown when they outright kill the protagonists.
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* OutsideContextVillain: OutsideContextProblem: Black Queen, and by extension the Shadows as a whole. Sure, they're supernatural entities that wouldn't be out of place in a MagicalGirl anime, but here's the thing: Their violence and sadism is ''far'' greater than the canon villains, which is shown when they outright kill the protagonists.
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* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Black Queen and her minions; the former is a scheming and ruthless villain who wouldn't hesitate to order the deaths of innocents, including children, while the latter are collectively her sociopathic soldiers who gleefully follow orders to kill. The show the fic is derived from, and even the fic itself, are quite lighthearted and and give a generous number of lampshade hangings; the former even demonstrates WhiteAndGrayMorality.
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* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Black Queen and her minions; the former is a scheming and ruthless villain who wouldn't hesitate to order the deaths of innocents, including children, while the latter are collectively her sociopathic soldiers who gleefully follow orders to kill. The show the fic is derived from, and even the fic itself, are quite lighthearted and rated K+ and and give a generous number of lampshade hangings; the former even demonstrates WhiteAndGrayMorality.
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* OutOfCharacter: The Queen. In canon, she is wise, benevolent if strict, is competent enough to keep a MagicalLand from going under for over 100 years and then some, and is more than willing to put her life and/or magical power on the line if it means saving the Ojamajos from the BigBad, the power of whom putting hers to shame. Here, she is portrayed as being a rather helpless DamselInDistress who is used as a hostage by the BigBad and makes a decidedly [[TooDumbToLive unwise decision that got Majorin killed]].
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Evil Rin uses this along with her BreakingSpeech to drive Majorin into a HeroicBSOD.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Evil Rin uses this along with her BreakingSpeech to drive Majorin into a HeroicBSOD.
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* OutOfCharacter: The Queen. In canon, she is wise, benevolent if strict, is competent enough to keep a MagicalLand from going under for over 100 years and then some, and is more than willing to put her life and/or magical power on the line if it means saving the Ojamajos from the BigBad, the power of whom putting hers to shame. Here, she is portrayed as being a rather helpless DamselInDistress who is used as a hostage by the BigBad and [[spoiler:and makes a decidedly [[TooDumbToLive unwise decision that got gets Majorin killed]].
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Evil Rinuses combines this along with her BreakingSpeech to drive BreakingSpeech. She outright tells Majorin how meaningless she is and that she can always be replaced when compared to the Queen. It works, and Majorin is driven into a an HeroicBSOD.
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* ShutUpHannibal: Majorin does this when she snaps out of her HeroicBSOD and starts fighting back against her Shadow. The Queen does this herself in the climax, and it lets her swipe the Seven Seals and defeat the Shadows.
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* ShutUpHannibal: ShutUpHannibal:
** Majorindoes this tells Evil Rin how factually wrong her BreakingSpeech was when she snaps out of her HeroicBSOD and starts fighting back against her Shadow. Shadow.
** The Queendoes this herself rebuffs Black Queen's insistence on their victory in the climax, and it lets her swipe the Seven Seals and defeat the Shadows.
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* YouMonster: The Queen of the Witch World outright states that the Shadows "don't deserve to exist" after they murder the Ojamajos in cold blood, and it is clear that scene is supposed to be their moral event horizon.
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The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5150214/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Rise-of-the-Shadows here]]. ''"Ojamajo Doremi: Witches At World's End"'', an unfinished sequel also written by [=PrettiWitchiMegChanChi=], can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8020686/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Witches-At-World-s-End here]], but the author's lack of activity probably means it's become a DeadFic by now...
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:The Queen of the Witch World, in her [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]], uses her new powers to bring back Majorin and the fallen Ojamajos when Black Queen has them killed. Her not dying as a result is handwaved away as being another new power granted by the Seven Seals.]]
** [[spoiler: Black Queen later uses her magic to indirectly bring back Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos. This spell was described in the narrative as being a Shadow's means of getting around the SacrificialRevivalSpell rules present in canon.]]
** [[spoiler: Black Queen later uses her magic to indirectly bring back Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos. This spell was described in the narrative as being a Shadow's means of getting around the SacrificialRevivalSpell rules present in canon.]]
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:The BackFromTheDead:
** The Queen of the Witch World,in [[spoiler:in her [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]], uses her new powers to bring back Majorin and the fallen Ojamajos when Black Queen has them killed. Her not dying as a result is handwaved away as being another new power granted by the Seven Seals.]]
**[[spoiler: Black Queen later uses her magic to [[spoiler:to indirectly bring back Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos. This spell was described in the narrative as being a Shadow's means of getting around the SacrificialRevivalSpell rules present in canon.]]
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* ImplausibleHairColor: Black Queen's hair is described as being a black as night...or maybe even blacker.
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* PsychoticSmirk: Evil Rin's default expression is this. She wears it whenever possible except when she's angry or fearful.
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:The Queen of the Witch World gains this when her feelings of hope and motivation to stop Black Queen let her take the Seven Seals and turn into a Super Witch Form. WordOfGod confirms that Majorin will get one of her own in ''Witches at World's End in addition to the Queen getting an upgrade to her SuperMode.]]
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:The Queen of the Witch World gains this her Super Witch For when her feelings of hope and motivation to stop Black Queen let her take the Seven Seals and turn into a Super Witch Form.Seals. WordOfGod confirms that Majorin will get one of her own in ''Witches at World's End in addition to the Queen getting an upgrade to her SuperMode.]]
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* VillainousCrush: Evil Rin has one toward the Queen. She doesn't reciprocate.
* WeaponOfChoice: Evil Rin prefers to use her diamond-infused dagger in fights as opposed to magic.
* WeaponOfChoice: Evil Rin prefers to use her diamond-infused dagger in fights as opposed to magic.
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* VileVillainSaccharineShow: Black Queen and her minions; the former is a scheming and ruthless villain who wouldn't hesitate to order the deaths of innocents, including children, while the latter are collectively her sociopathic soldiers who gleefully follow orders to kill. The show the fic is derived from, and even the fic itself, are quite lighthearted and and give a generous number of lampshade hangings; the former even demonstrates WhiteAndGrayMorality.
* VillainousCrush: Evil Rin hasone expressed a lust toward the Queen. She Queen, if her nickname for her is anything to go by. The Queen doesn't reciprocate.
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* EleventhHourSuperPower: The Queen gaining her SuperMode at the "climax". [[spoiler:Her strong positive emotions are enough to attract the Seven Seals over to herself and temporarily absorb with their power, thereby making her more than strong enough to curbstomp the Shadows and save the world.]]
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* EleventhHourSuperPower: The Queen gaining her SuperMode at the "climax". [[spoiler:Her strong positive emotions are enough to attract the Seven Seals over to herself and temporarily absorb with them to gain their power, thereby making her more than strong enough to curbstomp the Shadows and save the world.]]
* GrewASpine: During the second brawl against the Shadow Ojamajos, Hazuki is seen landing a strong hit on Shadow Hazuki AND Shadow Onpu when earlier she is running (or flying) away, screaming. Shadow Hazuki lampshades it.
--->'''Shadow Hazuki''': ''[[DeadpanSnarker Oh sure. NOW she decides to get a backbone!]]''
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Evil Rin uses this along with her BreakingSpeech to drive Majorin into a HeroicBSOD. See BreakingSpeech.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: The Shadow Ojamajos, in spades. They act like complete jerks and show no qualms over outright ''killing'' their light halves in cold blood.
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* DeathIsCheap: The Shadows are established to have a loophole in the [[MagicAIsMagicA rules of magic]] to cheat death. A powerful Shadow such as Black Queen takes the shadow of an inanimate object and shapes it into a Shadow that has already been killed. Thus, as long as there is a powerful-enough Shadow, the Shadows can never be truly put down.
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* DeathIsCheap: The Shadows are established to have a loophole in the [[MagicAIsMagicA rules of magic]] to cheat death. A [[spoiler:A powerful Shadow such as Black Queen takes the shadow of an inanimate object and shapes it into a Shadow that has already been killed. Thus, as long as there is a powerful-enough Shadow, the Shadows can never be truly put down.]]
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The overall plot goes as follows: A powerful clan of Witches called the [[ShadowArchetype Shadows]], who are led by [[BigBad Black Queen]], are planning to destroy their light halves and take over said light halves' home. Namely, the Human, Witch, and Wizard Worlds. They must be stopped. [[RomanticPlotTumor Also, the Queen and Majorin become a couple and completely overshadow or derail the plot.]]
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The overall plot goes as follows: A powerful clan of Witches called the [[ShadowArchetype Shadows]], who are led by [[BigBad Black Queen]], are planning to destroy their light halves and take over said light halves' home. Namely, the Human, Witch, and Wizard Worlds. They must be stopped. [[RomanticPlotTumor Also, the Queen and Majorin become a couple and completely overshadow or derail the plot.]]
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* AntiClimax: For all the hype of her being the most powerful of the Shadows, Black Queen goes down far too easily in the final battle and does little other than give orders for her minions to follow throughout the fic. There is some justification for the former since the Queen was in a DeusExMachina SuperMode when the "fight" occurred.
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* MeaningfulName: Evil Rin. She is an evil version of Majorin and literally has "Evil" in her name.
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* MeaningfulName: Evil Rin. She is an evil version of Majorin and literally has "Evil" in her name.
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* ShadowArchetype: The villains and their minions are literally the shadows of the protagonists. All of them have several traits in common with their respective Light Half, but they still tend toward being mischievous and evil. They also express traits that their counterparts either conceal or have no idea about.
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* ShadowArchetype: The villains and their minions are literally ''are'' the shadows of the protagonists. All of them have several traits in common with their respective Light Half, but they still tend toward being mischievous and evil. They also express traits that their counterparts either conceal or have no idea about.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Hana and Hazuki. Both are, in canon, the least likely to engage in fighting. However, given the circumstances in this story, they literally have no choice but to fight. Hana rushes in to defend Doremi when Shadow Doremi strikes her while Shadow Hazuki quips at Hazuki "finally growing a backbone" when the latter launches an attack.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Hana and Hazuki. Both are, in canon, the least likely to engage in fighting. However, given the circumstances in this story, they literally have no choice but to fight. Hana rushes in to defend Doremi when Shadow Doremi strikes her while Shadow Hazuki quips at Hazuki "finally growing a backbone" when the latter launches an attack.
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* ExcusePlot: This story basically boils down to "Evil villains are threatening to take over the world. The heroes must stop them with a [[SuperMode new power]] and then [[RomanticPlotTumor confirm a love interest]]."
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* ExcusePlot: This story basically boils down to "Evil villains are threatening to take over the world. The heroes must stop them with a [[SuperMode new power]] and then [[RomanticPlotTumor confirm a love interest]]."
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* FlatCharacter: Just about every OriginalCharacter presented had little CharacterDevelopment and thus little as far as personality. The only exception would have to be Evil Rin, and even she doesn't have too much else going for her.
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* FlatCharacter: Just about every Every OriginalCharacter presented had little CharacterDevelopment and thus little as far as personality. The only exception would have to be personality and CharacterDevelopment. Evil Rin, and even Rin had some additional quirks about her, but she doesn't have too much else going for her.is as flat as the others.
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* TransformationIsAFreeAction: The Ojamajos literally transform right in front of the Shadow Ojamajos despite the fact that it takes some time in canon. Later, the queen gains a lengthy TransformationSequence as she enters her SuperMode. On both occasions, the villains do absolutely nothing to interrupt it.
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* TransformationIsAFreeAction: The Ojamajos literally transform right in front of the Shadow Ojamajos despite the fact that it takes some time in canon. Later, the queen Queen gains a lengthy TransformationSequence as she enters her SuperMode. On both occasions, the villains do absolutely nothing to interrupt it.
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: The Queen and Majorin. Even though the title says "''Ojamajo'' '''''Doremi''''': ''Rise of the'' '''''Shadows'''''", the Queen and Majorin are arguably the true heroes of the story. They get even more screen time and development than the titular villains and even the canonical main characters. The Queen even gets a SuperMode. [[TropesAreNotbad However]], the Queen and Majorin (more so the latter) don't get a lot of screen time in canon either, but the story could've done more with them instead.
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: The Queen and Majorin. Even though the title says "''Ojamajo'' '''''Doremi''''': ''Rise of the'' '''''Shadows'''''", the Queen and Majorin are arguably can be considered the true heroes of the story. They get even more screen time and development than the titular villains and even the canonical main characters. The Queen even gets a SuperMode. [[TropesAreNotbad However]], the Queen and Majorin (more so the latter) don't get a lot of screen time in canon either, but the story could've done more with them instead.
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* DisneyDeath: Majorin and the Ojamajos are all killed in the final battle. However, the Queen's new SuperMode allows them to be brought back to life without anyone else dying.
* DisproportionateRetribution: The Shadow Ojamajos despise their Light Halves for their various quirks that they find annoying. How do they deal with it? By gleefully attacking them when given permission from Black Queen, insulting and belittling them, and finally killing them in cold blood.
* EleventhHourSuperPower: The Queen gaining her SuperMode at the "climax". [[Her strong positive emotions are enough to attract the Seven Seals over to herself and temporarily absorb with their power, thereby making her more than strong enough to curbstomp the Shadows and save the world.]]
* DisproportionateRetribution: The Shadow Ojamajos despise their Light Halves for their various quirks that they find annoying. How do they deal with it? By gleefully attacking them when given permission from Black Queen, insulting and belittling them, and finally killing them in cold blood.
* EleventhHourSuperPower: The Queen gaining her SuperMode at the "climax". [[Her strong positive emotions are enough to attract the Seven Seals over to herself and temporarily absorb with their power, thereby making her more than strong enough to curbstomp the Shadows and save the world.]]
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* DisneyDeath: Majorin and the Ojamajos are [[spoiler:are all killed in the final battle. However, the Queen's new SuperMode allows them to be brought back to life without anyone else dying.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Shadow Ojamajos despise their Light Halves for their various quirks that they find annoying. How do they deal with it? By gleefully attacking them when given permission from Black Queen, insulting and belittling them,and [[spoiler:and finally killing them in cold blood.
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* EleventhHourSuperPower: The Queen gaining her SuperMode at the "climax".[[Her [[spoiler:Her strong positive emotions are enough to attract the Seven Seals over to herself and temporarily absorb with their power, thereby making her more than strong enough to curbstomp the Shadows and save the world.]]
* DisproportionateRetribution: The Shadow Ojamajos despise their Light Halves for their various quirks that they find annoying. How do they deal with it? By gleefully attacking them when given permission from Black Queen, insulting and belittling them,
* EleventhHourSuperPower: The Queen gaining her SuperMode at the "climax".
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* HeroicSacrifice: Majorin intercepts Evil Rin's attempts to kill the Queen at the last moment. She ends up with Evil Rin's dagger lodged in her heart for her troubles. [[spoiler:[[DisneyDeath It doesn't stick.]]]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Majorin intercepts Evil Rin's attempts to kill the Queen at the last moment. She [[spoiler:She ends up with Evil Rin's dagger lodged in her heart for her troubles. [[spoiler:[[DisneyDeath [[DisneyDeath It doesn't stick.]]]]
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** The Queen gains one of her own in the form of her new "keyblade".
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** The Queen gains one of her own in the form of her new "keyblade". Like Evil Rin, she opts to use it over her powerful magic, even when it's not the most effective thing to use.
* WhyDontYaJustShootHim: Two examples, one per fic:
** Black Queen had her Light Half at her mercy and could easily have killed her then and there, thus stopping the biggest threat to her plans and preventing the Queen from turning the tables. She lampshades this in ''Witches At World's End'' after her flashback.
** Black Queen again could simply kill the Queen after curbstomping her at the start of the sequel, but she opts not to because "it's not the time, yet."
** Black Queen had her Light Half at her mercy and could easily have killed her then and there, thus stopping the biggest threat to her plans and preventing the Queen from turning the tables. She lampshades this in ''Witches At World's End'' after her flashback.
** Black Queen again could simply kill the Queen after curbstomping her at the start of the sequel, but she opts not to because "it's not the time, yet."
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* WhyDontYaJustShootHim: Black Queen had her Light Half at her mercy and could easily have killed her then and there, thus stopping the biggest threat to her plans and preventing the Queen from turning the tables. She lampshades this in ''Witches At World's End'' after her flashback.
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* [[KidFromTheFuture Kids From the Future]]: Shamaya, Konomi, and Haru, the Queen and Majorin's future daughters, arrive from the future to warn of Black Queen's return.
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* [[KidFromTheFuture Kids From HonorBeforeReason: Black Queen states that she can kill the Future]]: Queen right now if she pleased. However, for reasons known only to her (and the author), she has decided that the time to fight will be much later at the titular World's End.
* KidFromTheFuture: Three of them. Shamaya, Konomi, and Haru, the Queen and Majorin's future daughters, arrive from the future to warn of Black Queen's return.
* KidFromTheFuture: Three of them. Shamaya, Konomi, and Haru, the Queen and Majorin's future daughters, arrive from the future to warn of Black Queen's return.
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* CastingAShadow: The Shadows' primary elemental power centers around shadow-based versions of the protagonists' magic used in canon.
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* EleventhHourSuperPower: The Queen gaining her SuperMode at the "climax". [[Her strong positive emotions are enough to attract the Seven Seals over to herself and temporarily absorb with their power, thereby making her more than strong enough to curbstomp the Shadows and save the world.]]
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* HeroicSecondWind: The Queen after Majorin and the Ojamajos are slain. The spirits of the fallen characters gather near her and give her a pep talk, giving her the strength needed to overcome her injuries and make a WorldOfCardboardSpeech. Once that was done, the Seven Seals resonated with her and granted her a SuperMode.
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* HeroicSecondWind: The Queen after Majorin and the Ojamajos are slain. [[spoiler: The spirits of the fallen characters gather near her and give her a pep talk, giving her the strength needed to overcome her injuries and make a WorldOfCardboardSpeech. Once that was done, the Seven Seals resonated with her and granted her a SuperMode.]]
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* TheEndOrIsIt: The end of Chapter 8 [[spoiler:shows a pair of [[GlowingEyesOfDoom glowing]] [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and [[EvilLaugh sinister laughter]] right where the Queen defeated the Shadows.]]
* ThisCannotBe: Black Queen gets this when her plans fall apart and [[TheDragon Evil Rin]] and the Shadow Ojamajos are slain. She regains her composure right after she is run through by the Queen's finisher, though.
* TooDumbToLive: The Queen has one instance, but it is quite egregious. After freeing herself, she loudly announces her intentions to stop Black Queen, who is more than capable of stopping her attacks, and decides to launch an attack of her own. Black Queen parries the attack and Evil Rin prevents another by attempting to take the Queen's life. Only a HeroicSacrifice on Majorin's part keeps the Queen from dying, but this instance of stupidity did end up getting a precious ''someone'' killed.
* ThisCannotBe: Black Queen gets this when her plans fall apart and [[TheDragon Evil Rin]] and the Shadow Ojamajos are slain. She regains her composure right after she is run through by the Queen's finisher, though.
* TooDumbToLive: The Queen has one instance, but it is quite egregious. After freeing herself, she loudly announces her intentions to stop Black Queen, who is more than capable of stopping her attacks, and decides to launch an attack of her own. Black Queen parries the attack and Evil Rin prevents another by attempting to take the Queen's life. Only a HeroicSacrifice on Majorin's part keeps the Queen from dying, but this instance of stupidity did end up getting a precious ''someone'' killed.
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* TheEndOrIsIt: The end of Chapter 8 [[spoiler:shows a pair of [[GlowingEyesOfDoom glowing]] [[RedEyesTakeWarning glowing red eyes]] eyes and [[EvilLaugh sinister laughter]] laughter right where the Queen defeated the Shadows.]]
* ThisCannotBe: Black Queen gets this when her plans fall apart and [[TheDragon Evil Rin]] and the Shadow Ojamajos are slain. She regains her composure right after she is run through by the Queen's finisher,though.
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* TooDumbToLive: The Queen has one instance, but it is quite egregious.After [[spoiler:After freeing herself, she loudly announces her intentions to stop Black Queen, who is more than capable of stopping her attacks, and decides to launch an attack of her own. Black Queen parries the attack and Evil Rin prevents another by attempting to take the Queen's life. Only a HeroicSacrifice on Majorin's part keeps the Queen from dying, but this instance of stupidity did end up getting a precious ''someone'' killed.]]
* ThisCannotBe: Black Queen gets this when her plans fall apart and [[TheDragon Evil Rin]] and the Shadow Ojamajos are slain. She regains her composure right after she is run through by the Queen's finisher,
* TooDumbToLive: The Queen has one instance, but it is quite egregious.
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** The fic implies that another work by the author, ''"Jou-sama's and Majorin's Big Adventure"'', would have the same explanation on Elemental Witches as the one here. The narrative even lampshades it.
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''Ojamajo Doremi: Rise of the Shadows'' is an ''Anime/OjamajoDoremi'' FanFic written by [=PrettiWitchiMegChanChi=] over on Fanfiction.net.
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''Ojamajo Doremi: Rise of the Shadows'' is an ''Anime/OjamajoDoremi'' FanFic written by [=PrettiWitchiMegChanChi=] [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1812940/PrettiWitchiMegChanChi PrettiWitchiMegChanChi]] over on Fanfiction.net.
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* DeusExMachina: The Queen's [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]] due to the lack of foreshadowing.
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* DeusExMachina: The Queen's [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]] due to the lack of foreshadowing. Without it, the Queen would have had no chance whatsoever at stopping the Shadows from realizing their goals.
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* DeusExMachina: The Queen's [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]] due to the lack of foreshadowing.
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* DisneyDeath: Majorin and the Ojamajos are all killed in the final battle. However, an AssPull on the Queen's part allows them to be brought back to life without anyone else dying.
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* DisneyDeath: Majorin and the Ojamajos are all killed in the final battle. However, an AssPull on the Queen's part new SuperMode allows them to be brought back to life without anyone else dying.
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* HeroicBSOD: Majorin suffers one after getting hit by Evil Rin's BreakingSpeech. It was severe enough that she barely seemed to care that Evil Rin was about to simply kill her. The Queen gets one of her own [[spoiler:after Majorin sacrifices herself to stop Evil Rin from killing her.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Majorin suffers one after getting hit by Evil Rin's BreakingSpeech. It was severe enough that she barely seemed to care that Evil Rin was about to simply kill her. The Queen gets one of her own [[spoiler:after Majorin sacrifices herself to stop Evil Rin from killing her. It deepens after the Ojamajos are murdered.]]
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* IdiotBall: The Queen, after breaking free from her bonds, announces her plan to stop the Shadows in their tracks. This nearly gets her killed when Black Queen effortlessly parries her attack.
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* HeroicSecondWind: The Queen after Majorin and the Ojamajos are slain. The spirits of the fallen characters gather near her and give her a pep talk, giving her the strength needed to overcome her injuries and make a WorldOfCardboardSpeech. Once that was done, the Seven Seals resonated with her and granted her a SuperMode.
* IdiotBall: The Queen, after breaking free from her bonds, announces her plan to stop the Shadows in theirtracks.tracks instead of doing something more practical. This nearly gets her killed when Black Queen effortlessly parries her attack.
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* MoralDissonance: Black Queen allows her minions, [[TheDragon Evil Rin]] and [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior the Shadow Ojamajos]], to kill Majorin and the Ojamajos (who happen to be little girls) right in front of the Queen, and the event is treated as a horrible atrocity. When the Queen gets her SuperMode, she swiftly kills Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos, the latter of whom are little girls themselves, and it's treated as being perfectly okay.
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* MoralDissonance: Black Queen allows her minions, [[TheDragon Evil Rin]] and [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior the Shadow Ojamajos]], to kill Majorin and the Ojamajos (who happen to be (the latter of whom being little girls) right in front of the Queen, and the event is treated as a horrible atrocity. When the Queen gets her SuperMode, she swiftly kills Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos, the latter of whom are little girls themselves, and it's treated as being perfectly okay.
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* DeathIsCheap: The Shadows are established to have a loophole in the [[MagicAIsMagicA rules of magic]] to cheat death. A powerful Shadow such as Black Queen takes the shadow of an inanimate object and shapes it into a Shadow that has already been killed. Thus, as long as there is a powerful-enough Shadow, the Shadows can never be truly put down.
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* {{Flashback}}: Black Queen has one when she mentally kicks herself for not killing the Queen when she had the chance.
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* {{Flashback}}: Black Queen has one when she back to chapter 6 of ''Rise of the Shadows'' followed by her mentally kicks kicking herself for not killing the Queen when she had the chance.
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* WhyDontYaJustShootHim: Black Queen had her Light Half at her mercy and could easily have killed her then and there, thus stopping the biggest threat to her plans and preventing the Queen from turning the tables. She lampshades in ''Witches At World's End'' after her flashback.
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* WhyDontYaJustShootHim: Black Queen had her Light Half at her mercy and could easily have killed her then and there, thus stopping the biggest threat to her plans and preventing the Queen from turning the tables. She lampshades this in ''Witches At World's End'' after her flashback.
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* ThePowerOfLove: Going by [[AllThereInTheManual external sources]], Majorin truly confesses to the Queen and the result earns her her own SuperMode.
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* TooDumbToLive: The Queen has one instance, but it is quite egregious. After freeing herself, she loudly announces her intentions to stop Black Queen, who is more than capable of stopping her attacks, and decides to launch an attack of her own. Black Queen parries the attack and Evil Rin prevents another by taking the Queen's life. Only a HeroicSacrifice on Majorin's part keeps the Queen from dying, but this instance of stupidity did end up getting a precious ''someone'' killed.
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* TooDumbToLive: The Queen has one instance, but it is quite egregious. After freeing herself, she loudly announces her intentions to stop Black Queen, who is more than capable of stopping her attacks, and decides to launch an attack of her own. Black Queen parries the attack and Evil Rin prevents another by taking attempting to take the Queen's life. Only a HeroicSacrifice on Majorin's part keeps the Queen from dying, but this instance of stupidity did end up getting a precious ''someone'' killed.
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* CallBack: Onpu mentions that the Shadows tried and ''succeeded'' in killing them all aside from the Queen once before.
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* CallBack: Two of them so far:
** Onpu mentions that the Shadows tried and ''succeeded'' in killing them all aside from the Queen oncebefore.before.
** Black Queen mentally kicks herself for not killing the Queen when she had the chance.
** Onpu mentions that the Shadows tried and ''succeeded'' in killing them all aside from the Queen once
** Black Queen mentally kicks herself for not killing the Queen when she had the chance.
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* OutsideContextVillain: Black Queen, and by extension the Shadows as a whole. Sure, they're supernatural entities that wouldn't be out of place in a MagicalGirl anime, but here's the thing: Their violence and sadism is ''far'' greater than the canon villains, which is shown when they outright kill the protagonists.
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* CurbstompBattle: Two examples.
** During the climax of ''Rise of the Shadows'', the Queen gains a SuperMode that makes her powerful enough to deflect all of the Shadows' attacks and vaporize them in one attack of her own.
** Black Queen personally assaults the Witch World to draw the Queen out. By now, she has learned how to use her "''Keyblade''" when not in SuperMode and tries to take a crack at defeating Black Queen again. Black Queen catches the blade and throws the Queen back with little effort.
** During the climax of ''Rise of the Shadows'', the Queen gains a SuperMode that makes her powerful enough to deflect all of the Shadows' attacks and vaporize them in one attack of her own.
** Black Queen personally assaults the Witch World to draw the Queen out. By now, she has learned how to use her "''Keyblade''" when not in SuperMode and tries to take a crack at defeating Black Queen again. Black Queen catches the blade and throws the Queen back with little effort.
* InformedAttribute: Black Queen is described as being the most powerful of the Shadows and [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking their ruler.]] However, we never once see her power at all and she is killed without any effort on the Queen's part.
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* CurbstompBattle: Black Queen personally assaults the Witch World to draw the Queen out. By now, she has learned how to use her "''Keyblade''" when not in SuperMode and tries to take a crack at defeating Black Queen again. Black Queen catches the blade and throws the Queen back with little effort.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: The Queen in the prologue of ''Witches at World's End'' has a nightmare that supposedly foreshadows events later in the story. She had been having these nightmares for some time now. It's lampshaded when she begins to suspect that they're not dreams but "visions" of the future.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: The During the prologue, the Queen in the prologue of ''Witches at World's End'' has a nightmare that supposedly foreshadows events later in the story. She had been having these nightmares for some time now. It's lampshaded when she begins to suspect that they're not dreams but "visions" of the future.
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* HasTwoMommies: Shamaya, Konomi, and Haru have the Queen and Majorin. The latter two were born when the Queen and Majorin got together, and even they weren't sure how. The former was adopted but is considered part of the family..
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* [[ForgotAboutHisPowers Forgot About Her Powers]]: The Queen does this. At this point, she has practiced with her SuperMode enough that is isn't draining anymore and she is fully aware of how powerful Black Queen is. She opts not to use it and promptly gets curbstomped for not using it.
* HasTwoMommies: Shamaya, Konomi, and Haru have the Queen and Majorin. The latter two were born when the Queen and Majorin got together, and even they weren't sure how. The former was adopted but is considered part of thefamily..family.
* HasTwoMommies: Shamaya, Konomi, and Haru have the Queen and Majorin. The latter two were born when the Queen and Majorin got together, and even they weren't sure how. The former was adopted but is considered part of the
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* {{Yandere}}: Evil Rin clearly has a lust for the Queen and feels that she should be in love with her back; Evil Rin even refers to the Queen as "[her] precious snowflake". She shows no qualms over killing her though and will gleefully follow Black Queen's orders, even if they would lead to the Queen's demise.
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* {{Yandere}}: ViewersAreGoldfish: The author seems to feel the need to remind readers of things that were established in the previous chapter and continue doing so for another chapter or two, such as the Shadows' telepathy and even which chapters the flashbacks take scenes from.
* VillainousCrush: Evil Rinclearly has a lust for one toward the Queen and feels that she should be in love with her back; Evil Rin even refers to the Queen as "[her] precious snowflake". Queen. She shows no qualms over killing her though and will gleefully follow Black Queen's orders, even if they would lead to the Queen's demise.doesn't reciprocate.
* VillainousCrush: Evil Rin
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* ViewersAreGoldfish: The author seems to feel the need to remind readers of things that were established in the previous chapter and continue doing so for another chapter or two, such as the Shadows' telepathy and even which chapters the flashbacks take scenes from.
* VillainousCrush: Evil Rin has one toward the Queen. She doesn't reciprocate.
* VillainousCrush: Evil Rin has one toward the Queen. She doesn't reciprocate.
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* ViewersAreGoldfish: The author seems to feel the need to remind readers of things that were established in the previous chapter and continue doing so for another chapter or two, such as the Shadows' telepathy and even which chapters the flashbacks take scenes from.
* VillainousCrush:{{Yandere}}: Evil Rin clearly has one toward a lust for the Queen. Queen and feels that she should be in love with her back; Evil Rin even refers to the Queen as "[her] precious snowflake". She doesn't reciprocate.shows no qualms over killing her though and will gleefully follow Black Queen's orders, even if they would lead to the Queen's demise.
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* CoolSword: The Queen gains one when she transforms for the first time. It's a [[VideoGame/KingdomHearts "keyblade"]].
* WeaponOfChoice: Evil Rin prefers to use her diamond-infused dagger in fights as opposed to magic.
** The Queen gains one of her own in the form of her new "keyblade".
* WingedHumanoid: The Queen in her Super Witch Form (normal and upgraded) sports a pair of angelic wings. Majorin gets these too when she gains her own Super Witch Form. A drawing of them made by the author can be seen [[http://fav.me/d56mjj4 here]].
** The Queen gains one of her own in the form of her new "keyblade".
* WingedHumanoid: The Queen in her Super Witch Form (normal and upgraded) sports a pair of angelic wings. Majorin gets these too when she gains her own Super Witch Form. A drawing of them made by the author can be seen [[http://fav.me/d56mjj4 here]].
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* VillainousCrush: Evil Rin has one toward the Queen.
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* VillainousCrush: Evil Rin has one toward the Queen. She doesn't reciprocate.
