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** All the Ants who aligned themselves with Meruem get to either live with humanity and have a new island home to themselves.
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** All the Ants who aligned themselves with Meruem get to either live co-exist with humanity and have a new island home to themselves.
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* UndyingLoyalty: The surviving Ants trust Youpi with their lives thanks to Youpi choosing to make sure that they remained safe during the battle of Peijing even though he could have simply left them for dead. Youpi being Youpi, he's quite oblivious to how they also regard him as their new King.
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 39 has plenty of tidbits
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 39 has plenty of tidbits
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* UndyingLoyalty: The surviving Ants trust Youpi with their lives thanks to Youpi the Royal Guard choosing to make sure that they remained safe during the battle of Peijing even though he could have simply left them for dead. Youpi being Youpi, he's quite oblivious to how they also regard him as their new King.
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 39 has plenty of tidbits pertaining to what the cast is up to after the story's conclusion.
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 39 has plenty of tidbits pertaining to what the cast is up to after the story's conclusion.
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** Clara Megallane is still looking for the Shinju even after Hinata defeated her and is implied that she will steal knowledge pertaining to the portal between the worlds of ''Naruto'' and ''Hunter x Hunter'' for the sake of her goal, to disastrous results.
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** Clara Megallane is still looking for the Shinju even after Hinata defeated her her, and is it's implied that she will steal knowledge pertaining to the portal between the worlds of ''Naruto'' and ''Hunter x Hunter'' for the sake of her goal, to goal with disastrous results.
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** Gon, Kilua, Alluka, and Netero are entering the ''Naruto'' universe purely to enjoy a new adventure.
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** Gon, Kilua, Alluka, and Netero are entering the ''Naruto'' universe purely to enjoy a new for fun and adventure.
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* AxCrazy: Shaiapouf's always had a few screws loose under his facade of sophistication, but this fic brings that side of him up to the forefront with his mad devotion to the King, even if the image he has of his boss is drastically different from reality.
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* AxCrazy: Shaiapouf's always had a few screws loose under his facade of sophistication, but this fic brings that side of him up to the forefront with his mad devotion to the King, even if the image he has of King and how that skews his boss is drastically different from perception of reality.
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** Rather than die from Miniature Rose poisoning, Shaiapouf here gets most of his body obliterated by Neferpitou’s imitation of Hinata's Gentle Fist before Palm incinerates him with a flamethrower.
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** Rather than die from Miniature Rose poisoning, Shaiapouf here gets most of his body obliterated by Neferpitou’s imitation of Hinata's Gentle Fist before Palm incinerates him the last of his fragments with a flamethrower.
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* CruelMercy: Gon, sensing that Neferpitou has become a DeathSeeker after Meruem's surrender, decides to let her live when he and Killua run into her again just so that she can suffer some more for killing Kite.
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* CruelMercy: Gon, sensing that Neferpitou has become a DeathSeeker after Meruem's surrender, decides to let her live when he and Killua run into her again just so that she can suffer some more for since killing Kite.her would be giving the former Royal Guard exactly what she wants, and for him, the best form of revenge for Kite's death is to make sure that Pitou suffers for her actions.
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* CruelMercy: Gon decides to let Neferpitou live after Meruem's surrender just so that she can suffer for killing Kite.
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* CruelMercy: Gon decides to let Gon, sensing that Neferpitou live has become a DeathSeeker after Meruem's surrender surrender, decides to let her live when he and Killua run into her again just so that she can suffer some more for killing Kite.
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** Neferpitou is WanderingTheEarth as part of her JourneyOfSelfDiscovery.
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** Neferpitou is WanderingTheEarth as part of her JourneyOfSelfDiscovery.journey of atonement and self-discovery.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Shaiapouf, who was a pretty nasty individual in canon, decides that it would be a great idea to murder his fellow Royal Guards (specifically Pitou) [[InsaneTrollLogic in the insane hope that Meruem will favor him for his loyalty]].
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Shaiapouf, who already was a pretty nasty individual piece of work in canon, decides that it would be a great idea to murder his fellow Royal Guards (specifically Pitou) [[InsaneTrollLogic in the insane hope that Meruem will favor him for his loyalty]].
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* UndyingLoyalty: The surviving Ants regard Youpi as their new King thanks to Youpi choosing to make sure that they remained safe during the battle of Peijing even though he could have simply left them for dead.
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* UndyingLoyalty: The surviving Ants regard trust Youpi as with their new King lives thanks to Youpi choosing to make sure that they remained safe during the battle of Peijing even though he could have simply left them for dead.dead. Youpi being Youpi, he's quite oblivious to how they also regard him as their new King.
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 39 has plenty of tidbits
** Neferpitou is WanderingTheEarth as part of her JourneyOfSelfDiscovery.
** Menthuthuyoupi is currently leading the surviving Chimera Ants as their de facto King.
** Clara Megallane is still looking for the Shinju even after Hinata defeated her and is implied that she will steal knowledge pertaining to the portal between the worlds of ''Naruto'' and ''Hunter x Hunter'' for the sake of her goal, to disastrous results.
** Sasuke and Meruem are exploring the Dark Continent together as part of their investigation into the Shinju trees there.
** Gon, Kilua, Alluka, and Netero are entering the ''Naruto'' universe purely to enjoy a new adventure.
* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 39 has plenty of tidbits
** Neferpitou is WanderingTheEarth as part of her JourneyOfSelfDiscovery.
** Menthuthuyoupi is currently leading the surviving Chimera Ants as their de facto King.
** Clara Megallane is still looking for the Shinju even after Hinata defeated her and is implied that she will steal knowledge pertaining to the portal between the worlds of ''Naruto'' and ''Hunter x Hunter'' for the sake of her goal, to disastrous results.
** Sasuke and Meruem are exploring the Dark Continent together as part of their investigation into the Shinju trees there.
** Gon, Kilua, Alluka, and Netero are entering the ''Naruto'' universe purely to enjoy a new adventure.
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* UndyingLoyalty: The surviving Ants regard Youpi as their new King thanks to Youpi choosing to make sure that they remained safe during the battle of Peijing even though he could have simply left them for dead.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Rather than die from Miniature Rose poisoning, Shaiapouf here gets most of his body obliterated by Neferpitou’s imitation of Hinata's Gentle Fist before Palm incinerates him with a flamethrower.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation:
** Cheetu is melted by Meruem's overwhelming chakra rather than crushed in an aerial attack by Silva.
** Rather than die from Miniature Rose poisoning, Shaiapouf here gets most of his body obliterated by Neferpitou’s imitation of Hinata's Gentle Fist before Palm incinerates him with a flamethrower.
** Cheetu is melted by Meruem's overwhelming chakra rather than crushed in an aerial attack by Silva.
** Rather than die from Miniature Rose poisoning, Shaiapouf here gets most of his body obliterated by Neferpitou’s imitation of Hinata's Gentle Fist before Palm incinerates him with a flamethrower.
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** All the Ants who aligned themselves with Meruem get to either live with humanity and have a new island home to themselves.
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** Netero never has to use the Poor Man's Rose implanted in him and gets to resign from his position as Chairman of the Hunter Association on his own terms.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Naruto inflicts this on Meruem in ''spectacular'' fashion during their fight.
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* BreakTheHaughty: Naruto inflicts and Kurama inflict this on Meruem in ''spectacular'' fashion during their fight.fight by forcing the Ant King to acknowledge that he isn't all that significant in the grand scheme of things.
* CruelMercy: Gon decides to let Neferpitou live after Meruem's surrender just so that she can suffer for killing Kite.
* CruelMercy: Gon decides to let Neferpitou live after Meruem's surrender just so that she can suffer for killing Kite.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Rather than die from Miniature Rose poisoning, Shaiapouf here is obliterated by Neferpitou’s imitation of Hinata's Gentle Fist.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Rather than die from Miniature Rose poisoning, Shaiapouf here is gets most of his body obliterated by Neferpitou’s imitation of Hinata's Gentle Fist.Fist before Palm incinerates him with a flamethrower.
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** Kite being revealed to be DeadAllAlong after his battle with Neferpitou causes Gon to jump straight to swearing revenge on Pitou, which then leads to Gon settling for landing a good hit on Neferpitou rather than killing her.
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** Kite being revealed to be DeadAllAlong after his battle with Neferpitou causes Gon to jump straight to swearing revenge on Pitou, which then leads to Pitou.
*** Since Gonsettling already knows that Kite is dead, he just settles for landing a good solid hit on Neferpitou during his and Kilua's fight against her rather than killing her. sacrifice everything to make himself strong enough to kill her and later decides to let her live so she can suffer even more.
*** Since Gon
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* BreakTheHaughty: Naruto inflicts this on Meruem in ''spectacular'' fashion during their fight.
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* AxCrazy: Shaiapouf's always had a few screws loose under his facade of sophistication, but this fic brings that side of him up to the forefront with his mad devotion to the King, even if the image he has of his boss is drastically different from reality.
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* TheCavalry: [[spoiler:Shino is this to Hinata when she's ambushed by Neferpitou]].
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Rather than die from Miniature Rose toxin, Shaiapouf here is obliterated by Neferpitou’s imitation Gentle Fist.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Rather than die from Miniature Rose toxin, poisoning, Shaiapouf here is obliterated by Neferpitou’s imitation of Hinata's Gentle Fist.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: [[spoiler:Practically Mereum’s slogan,]] though he later grows out of it.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: [[spoiler:Practically Mereum’s slogan,]] though he later grows out of it.it thanks to Naruto.
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* MindRape: Dear '''''GOD''''' does Meruem inflict this on Hinata during their conversation at the palace thanks to the Ninshu link they share, with the Ant King simply invading Hinata's mind with impunity.
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* MindRape: Dear '''''GOD''''' does Meruem inflict this on Hinata during their conversation at the palace thanks to the Ninshu link they share, with the Ant King simply invading Hinata's mind with impunity.impunity and forcing her to feel the taste of her own daughter's flesh.
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* TakingTheBullet: [[spoiler: Shino shoves Hinata aside after she is ambushed by Neferpitou so he can take the Royal Guard's attack in Hinata's place]].
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* BerserkButton: Naruto and Hinata do ''not'' take kindly to those who would dare threaten their family, which Meruem learns after he attempts to rile up Naruto through the Ninshu link they have during their battle.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation:
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: Rather than die from Miniature Rose toxin, Shaiapouf here is obliterated by Neferpitou’s imitation Gentle Fist.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Shaiapouf, who was a pretty nasty individual in canon, decides that it would be a great idea to murder his fellow Royal Guards (specifically Pitou) [[InsaneTrollLogic in the insane hope that Meruem will favor him for his loyalty]].
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* AnArmAndALeg: Shino gets his right leg and arm torn off by Neferpitou after he jumps in to [[TakingTheBullet protect Hinata from Pitou's attack]]. While he gets to reattach his leg via his kikaichu, his arm is taken by Pitou for further study.
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* AnArmAndALeg: Shino gets his right leg and arm torn off by Neferpitou after he jumps in to [[TakingTheBullet protect Hinata from Pitou's attack]]. While he gets to reattach his leg via his kikaichu, his arm is taken by Pitou for further study.as food to nourish the King with.
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** Kite being revealed to be DeadAllAlong after his battle with Neferpitou causes Gon to jump straight to swearing revenge on Pitou.
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** Kite being revealed to be DeadAllAlong after his battle with Neferpitou causes Gon to jump straight to swearing revenge on Pitou.Pitou, which then leads to Gon settling for landing a good hit on Neferpitou rather than killing her.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: [[spoiler:Practically Mereum’s slogan,]] though he later grows out of it thanks to Naruto.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: [[spoiler:Practically Mereum’s slogan,]] though he later grows out of it thanks to Naruto.it.
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* MindRape: Dear '''''GOD''''' does Meruem inflict this on Hinata during their conversation at the palace thanks to the chakra link they had with each other, traumatizing Hinata by threatening to kill and devour her daughter Himawari.
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* MindRape: Dear '''''GOD''''' does Meruem inflict this on Hinata during their conversation at the palace thanks to the chakra Ninshu link they had share, with each other, traumatizing Hinata by threatening to kill and devour her daughter Himawari.the Ant King simply invading Hinata's mind with impunity.
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* MindRape: Oh dear freaking '''''GOD''''' does Meruem inflict this on Hinata during their conversation at the palace by exploiting the memories of her husband and kids to terrify her.
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* MindRape: Oh dear freaking Dear '''''GOD''''' does Meruem inflict this on Hinata during their conversation at the palace by exploiting thanks to the memories of chakra link they had with each other, traumatizing Hinata by threatening to kill and devour her husband and kids to terrify her.daughter Himawari.
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* MindRape: Oh dear freaking '''''GOD''''' does Meruem inflict this on Hinata during their conversation at the palace by exploiting the memories of her husband and kids to terrify her.
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** Meruem and his Royal Guard decide to leave the palace after they pick up on how Hinata is watching them.
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** Meruem and his Royal Guard decide to leave the palace after they pick up on how Hinata is watching them.them, forcing the shinobi and hunters to fight them much earlier.
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** Meruem and his Royal Guard decide to leave the palace in attacking the shinobi and Hunters since they know that they're being watched.
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** Meruem and his Royal Guard decide to leave the palace in attacking the shinobi and Hunters since after they know that they're being watched.pick up on how Hinata is watching them.
