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* DeterminedWidow: Sweetie Finemare pursues her scientific career and raises two little fillies alone after the death of her first husband.
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I Love Nuclear Power is dewicked
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* ILoveNuclearPower: Horribly [[AvertedTrope averted]] -- Sweetie's under-shielded radium-based quantum-mechanical experiment that she and her OneTrueLove Rich Greentree perform in 1936 leads to his developing cancer by 1938 and dying at age 25 in 1940.
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->Oppenhorser: "Now I am become Death ... the Destroyer of Worlds"
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** Because many Ponies thus lived whose Human analogues would have perished in those wars, [[DieselPunk technology is somewhat more advanced]]: for instance, the atomic bomb is developed by 1938 and nuclear fusion reactors by the 1960's. As discussed in FanFic/AMeetingByMoonlight, only their relative lack of initiative stops the Ponies from colonizing the Solar System in the late 20th century YOM.
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** Because many Ponies thus lived whose Human analogues would have perished in those wars, [[DieselPunk technology is somewhat more advanced]]: for instance, the atomic bomb is developed by 1938 and nuclear fusion reactors by the 1960's.1960s. As discussed in FanFic/AMeetingByMoonlight, only their relative lack of initiative stops the Ponies from colonizing the Solar System in the late 20th century YOM.
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* [[HeroOfAnotherStory Heroine Of Another Story]]: After her death, Nurse Raindew's soul is gathered in by the Cosmic Concept of which it had been a facet ... [[spoiler:Kindness]]. In other words, [[spoiler:Nurse Raindew was an earlier Incarnation of the same being who would later manifest as ''Fluttershy'']].
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* [[HeroOfAnotherStory Heroine Of Another Story]]: After her death, Nurse Raindew's soul is gathered in by the Cosmic Concept of which it had been a facet ... [[spoiler:Kindness]]. facet... [[spoiler:Kindness.]] In other words, [[spoiler:Nurse Raindew was an earlier Incarnation of the same being who would later manifest as ''Fluttershy'']].
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-->You may call me – D. The Voice almost purred with amusement, like some sort of large and dangerous cat. And yes, to both your questions as to my nature. I am what you ponies would once have called a “demon” – and I’m certainly not from around here, so I’m also an “alien.” Does that put your mind at ease?
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-->You may call me – D. The Voice almost purred with amusement, like some sort of large and dangerous cat. And yes, to both your questions as to my nature. I am what you ponies would once have called a “demon” "demon" – and I’m certainly not from around here, so I’m I'm also an “alien.” "alien". Does that put your mind at ease?
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* WrongGenreSavvy: The teenaged Sweetie imagines she's the heroine of a 1930's pulp ScienceFiction adventure story. While the genre she's in ''is'' ScienceFantasy, it's also a DarkerAndEdgier story than she imagines, and when she tries to cut corners on radiation shielding, the consequences are tragic.
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Dewicked trope
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* WrongGenreSavvy: The teenaged Sweetie imagines she's the heroine of a 1930's pulp ScienceFiction adventure story. While the genre she's in ''is'' ScienceFantasy, it's also a DarkerAndEdgier story than she imagines, and when she tries to cut corners on radiation shielding, [[RealityEnsues the consequences are tragic]].
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* WrongGenreSavvy: The teenaged Sweetie imagines she's the heroine of a 1930's pulp ScienceFiction adventure story. While the genre she's in ''is'' ScienceFantasy, it's also a DarkerAndEdgier story than she imagines, and when she tries to cut corners on radiation shielding, [[RealityEnsues the consequences are tragic]].tragic.
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* SuperweaponSurprise: Amareica averts the outbreak of war by inviting representatives of the aggressor states to their equivalent of the Trinity Test in 1938. The [[UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler Leader of Lippanzer]] is assassinated by his own generals, and the [[UsefulNote/ImperialJapan Mikkado of Neigh-Pon]] carries out a coup from above against the military junta.
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* SuperweaponSurprise: Amareica averts the outbreak of war by inviting representatives of the aggressor states to their equivalent of the Trinity Test in 1938. The [[UsefulNotes/AdolfHitler Leader of Lippanzer]] is assassinated by his own generals, and the [[UsefulNote/ImperialJapan [[UsefulNotes/ImperialJapan Mikkado of Neigh-Pon]] carries out a coup from above against the military junta.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: The teenaged Sweetie imagines she's the heroine of a 1930's pulp ScienceFiction adventure story. While the genre she's in ''is'' ScienceFantasy, it's also a DarkerAndEdgier story than she imagines, and when she tries to cut corners on radiation shielding, [[RealityEnsues the consequences are tragic]].
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* WrongGenreSavvy: The teenaged Sweetie imagines she's the heroine of a 1930's pulp ScienceFiction adventure story. While the genre she's in ''is'' ScienceFantasy, it's also a DarkerAndEdgier story than she imagines, and when she tries to cut corners on radiation shielding, [[RealityEnsues the consequences are tragic]].
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* HeelRealization: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. D feels bad when Nurse Raindew kills herself, but he decides that this is because he is being [[HumanityIsContagious corrupted by Schwarzwalder Fuchs' equinity]]
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* HeelRealization: [[AvertedTrope Averted]]. D feels bad when Nurse Raindew kills herself, but he decides that this is because he is being [[HumanityIsContagious [[HumanityIsInfectious corrupted by Schwarzwalder Fuchs' equinity]]
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* [[HeroOfAnotherStory Heroine Of Another Story]]: After her death, Nurse Raindew's soul is gathered in by the Cosmic Concept of which it had been a facet ... [[spoiler:Kindness]]. In other words, [[Spoiler:Nurse Raindew was an earlier Incarnation of the same being who would later manifest as ''Fluttershy'']].
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* [[HeroOfAnotherStory Heroine Of Another Story]]: After her death, Nurse Raindew's soul is gathered in by the Cosmic Concept of which it had been a facet ... [[spoiler:Kindness]]. In other words, [[Spoiler:Nurse [[spoiler:Nurse Raindew was an earlier Incarnation of the same being who would later manifest as ''Fluttershy'']].
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* [[HeroOfAnotherStory Heroine Of Another Story]]: After her death, Nurse Raindew's soul is gathered in by the Cosmic Concept of which it had been a facet ... [[spoiler:Kindness]]. In other words, [[Spoiler:Nurse Raindew was an earlier Incarnation of the same being who would later manifest as ''Fluttershy'']].