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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. It is the longest and third most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the third most popular story overall.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. It is the longest and third most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the third most popular story overall.



In canon progression among the fandom's Peggy Sue fics, it takes third place, with ''Fanfic/OnceAgain'' in second and ''Fanfic/SecondWind'' in first.
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** In the next chapter, Valerie, Nami, Alvida, and a drunken Vivi to get in on the action[[spoiler:With a little action from Vivi and her Candy-Candy Fruit powers.]]
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** In Chapter 112, Gin becomes this after learning of Luffy's "escapades" with the women in the crew.
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* DueToTheDead: Grace honours the Enforcer she had under her Friendship paint that was killed by Enel when he protected her, and is driven to tears because she doesn't understand why that affects her after all she did in Baroque works.
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*** Meanwhile, [[Spoiler:Valerie convinces Nami, Alvida, and a drunken Vivi to get in on the action simultaneously.]]

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*** Meanwhile, [[Spoiler:Valerie [[spoiler:Valerie convinces Nami, Alvida, and a drunken Vivi to get in on the action simultaneously.]]
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** [[spoiler:Upon being overpowered by Luffy, Enel is finished off by Wiper with a Reject Dial.]]


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** [[spoiler:With some "prompting" from Su, Conis]] gives in to Luffy during Chapter 111.
*** Meanwhile, [[Spoiler:Valerie convinces Nami, Alvida, and a drunken Vivi to get in on the action simultaneously.]]
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** If one were two read ''Fanfic/AGemInTheRough'', a story that features a different version of the character Phil (but not the same one that appears in this story proper), it is revealed that the two bosses in question were [[spoiler: Crocodile (where he was the Mr. 6 of Baroque Works) and Foxy.]]

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** If one were two to read ''Fanfic/AGemInTheRough'', a story that features a different version of the character Phil (but not the same one that appears in this story proper), it is revealed that the two bosses in question were [[spoiler: Crocodile (where he was the Mr. 6 of Baroque Works) and Foxy.]]
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** If one were two read ''Fanfic/AGemInTheRough'', a story that features a different version of the character Phil (but not the same one that appears in this story proper), it is revealed that the two bosses in question were [[spoiler: Crocodile (where he was the Mr. 6 of Baroque Works) and Foxy.]]

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** In Alabasta, [[spoiler:''{{averted}}'' during the battle with Crocodile, who still defeats Luffy the first time around, if not with the ease that he did in canon]].



* StationsOfTheCanon: Despite Luffy's New World grade strength, his numerous Curb-Stomps, and his extra crewmates, things don't change much; several notable differences, sure, but the overall story goes about the same.

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* StationsOfTheCanon: Despite Luffy's New World grade strength, his numerous Curb-Stomps, and his extra crewmates, things don't change much; several notable differences, sure, but the overall story goes about the same. [[spoiler:Most notably in the fact that Crocodile does ''not'' just fold over in their first battle and still wins; it helps that Crocodile in canon was capable of standing against the New World level threats of the Marineford Arc with little difficulty and it was more luck and determination that let Luffy beat him the first time around]].



* WhamEpisode: Chapter 52. With almost every advantage imaginable, it comes as a shock when Luffy [[spoiler:loses to Crocodile outside of Rainbase, impaled and buried alive just as in canon]].

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 52. With almost every advantage imaginable, it comes as a shock when Luffy [[spoiler:loses to Crocodile outside of Rainbase, impaled and buried alive just as in canon]].canon. It helps that Crocodile took him much more seriously than before, and even during their final battle still manages to fight him to a standstill before being overcomed]].

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* GoodCostumeSwitch: [[spoiler: Not a person, but the costume/powers itself - the Candy-Candy Fruit lets the user generate, control and turn into candy syrup, which was [[GreenAndMean green in General Gasperade's possession]], but changes to [[BlueIsHeroic blue]] after Vivi eats it.]]



* SparedByAdaptation: Minor example. Thanks to Greg and Grace, Pell gets a lot more time to take Crocodile’s bomb away to a safe distance, meaning he doesn’t even have to attempt the HeroicSacrifice that he somehow survives in canon.

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* SparedByAdaptation: SparedByTheAdaptation: Minor example. Thanks to Greg and Grace, Pell gets a lot more time to take Crocodile’s bomb away to a safe distance, meaning he doesn’t even have to attempt the HeroicSacrifice that he somehow survives in canon.


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* SuperEmpowering: Once they find out [[spoiler:the Candy-Candy Fruit]] is aboard their ship, it's debated what to do with it. Finally, it's offered to any of the group who wants it, with the choices narrowed down to Nojiko and Vivi (five of the group already have Devil Fruit powers, the six men without them refuse it because of the associated [[spoiler:"Candy-Man"]] epithet; Carue and Grace both turn it down, and Nami, who wasn't around for the discussion, would just sell it). The choice is settled via coin flip, and [[spoiler:Vivi]] is the one to eat it.
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* AscendedExtra: In an effort to avoid having his crew overpowered by Marines again in the future, Luffy has actively tried to make his crew bigger this time.

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* AscendedExtra: In an effort to avoid having his crew overpowered by Marines again in the future, Luffy has actively tried to make his crew bigger this time. [[spoiler:As of the Skypeia arc, excluding Franky and Brook who've yet to rejoin, the Straw Hats currently have a crew of 16.]]



** Crosses over with Enemy Mine above; after a couple of brutally effective Curb-Stomp Battles, as well as learning that Baroque Works’ true intentions do not aspire towards an ideal nation, three of the officer agents join the crew: [[spoiler:Miss Valentine]] in Whiskey Peak and [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] and [[spoiler:Miss Goldenweek]] in Little Garden. At the end of the Alabasta arc, [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] reluctantly leaves the crew to seek his own dreams, but the other two become permanent members.

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** Crosses over with Enemy Mine above; below; after a couple of brutally effective Curb-Stomp Battles, as well as learning that Baroque Works’ true intentions do not aspire towards an ideal nation, three of the officer agents join the crew: [[spoiler:Miss Valentine]] in Whiskey Peak and [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] and [[spoiler:Miss Goldenweek]] in Little Garden. At the end of the Alabasta arc, [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] reluctantly leaves the crew to seek his own dreams, but the other two become permanent members.

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* AscendedExtra: In an effort to avoid having his crew overpowered by Marines again in the future, Luffy has actively tried to make his crew bigger this time.
** Gin is the first new addition, after Luffy thrashes Krieg. He gave implications beforehand that his captain wasn’t all he claimed to be, and made no secret of his lack of fear towards the Krieg Pirates. Gin realizes the truth in his words after he loses to Sanji, and at the end, when his resolve to return to the Grand Line is finalized, Luffy extends the invitation. He accepts.
** Nojiko also decides to come along to see Nami see her dream through. Well, that and to make sure she’s safe after [[spoiler:catching Luffy and Nami in a Lemon]].
** Yosaku and Johnny are given an invitation when the crew is en route to Arlong Park. They accept in the end.
** Alvida joins when Luffy asks her mere moments after Buggy's failed attempt to execute him. Of course, she didn't actually plan on accepting the invitation at first; she told Luffy she'd join if he could touch her, knowing that he couldn't due to her Smooth-Smooth Fruit powers. She gets past her shock at him successfully taking her hand (due to Haki) quickly, silently reflecting on his miraculous survival:
-->'''Alvida''': ''(smiling)'' Well, a deal's a deal. If he can survive that, it might just be worth it to go with him.
** Crosses over with Enemy Mine above; after a couple of brutally effective Curb-Stomp Battles, as well as learning that Baroque Works’ true intentions do not aspire towards an ideal nation, three of the officer agents join the crew: [[spoiler:Miss Valentine]] in Whiskey Peak and [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] and [[spoiler:Miss Goldenweek]] in Little Garden. At the end of the Alabasta arc, [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] reluctantly leaves the crew to seek his own dreams, but the other two become permanent members.
** Vivi also elects to remain with the crew after hearing about Luffy’s past and the World Government’s atrocities towards everywhere that he had visited, understanding that her country is still in danger and she can’t do anything about it by staying behind. And naturally, Carue comes with her.



* TrueCompanions: As in canon, we have Zoro, Nami, Usopp, Sanji, Chopper, and Robin thus far, but in an effort to avoid having his crew overpowered by Marines again in the future, Luffy has actively tried to make his crew bigger this time.
** Gin is the first new addition, after Luffy thrashes Krieg. He gave implications beforehand that his captain wasn’t all he claimed to be, and made no secret of his lack of fear towards the Krieg Pirates. Gin realizes the truth in his words after he loses to Sanji, and at the end, when his resolve to return to the Grand Line is finalized, Luffy extends the invitation. He accepts.
** Nojiko also decides to come along to see Nami see her dream through. Well, that and to make sure she’s safe after [[spoiler:catching Luffy and Nami in a Lemon]].
** Yosaku and Johnny are given an invitation when the crew is en route to Arlong Park. They accept in the end.
** Alvida joins when Luffy asks her mere moments after Buggy's failed attempt to execute him. Of course, she didn't actually plan on accepting the invitation at first; she told Luffy she'd join if he could touch her, knowing that he couldn't due to her Smooth-Smooth Fruit powers. She gets past her shock at him successfully taking her hand (due to Haki) quickly, silently reflecting on his miraculous survival:
-->'''Alvida''': ''(smiling)'' Well, a deal's a deal. If he can survive that, it might just be worth it to go with him.
** Crosses over with Enemy Mine above; after a couple of brutally effective Curb-Stomp Battles, as well as learning that Baroque Works’ true intentions do not aspire towards an ideal nation, three of the officer agents join the crew: [[spoiler:Miss Valentine]] in Whiskey Peak and [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] and [[spoiler:Miss Goldenweek]] in Little Garden. At the end of the Alabasta arc, [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] reluctantly leaves the crew to seek his own dreams, but the other two become permanent members.
** Vivi also elects to remain with the crew after hearing about Luffy’s past and the World Government’s atrocities towards everywhere that he had visited, understanding that her country is still in danger and she can’t do anything about it by staying behind. And naturally, Carue comes with her.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. It is the longest and second most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the second most popular story overall.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. It is the longest and second third most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the second third most popular story overall.
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* BadFuture: The story begins where Straw Hats (and possibly their allies) are completely decimated (and killed), with Luffy as the SoleSurvivor, and the Marines getting even more ruthless in pursuit of their justice. And oh yes, Luffy was an Impel Down prisoner for 50 years in a possible portal.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. It is the longest and most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the most popular story overall.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. It is the longest and second most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the second most popular story overall.
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In canon progression among the fandom's Peggy Sue fics, it takes third place, with ''Fanfic/SecondWind'' in second and ''Fanfic/OnceAgain'' in first.

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In canon progression among the fandom's Peggy Sue fics, it takes third place, with ''Fanfic/OnceAgain'' in second and ''Fanfic/SecondWind'' in second and ''Fanfic/OnceAgain'' in first.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. It is currently the longest and most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the most popular story overall.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. It is currently the longest and most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the most popular story overall.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. A cataclysmic event leaves Luffy as the sole survivor of the Straw Hat Pirates, and after enduring years in Impel Down, he’s rescued by an old man from the future with the power of the Open-Open Fruit. Using this power, Luffy is sent back to the past to try his adventures again, this time with more strength, more experience, more knowledge, more crewmates…and his eyes opened to women courtesy of the aforementioned power.

By far the most popular ''One Piece'' fan fiction in the entire fandom, the longest Peggy Sue fic in the fandom in regards to word count, and in canon progression, it takes third place, with ''Fanfic/SecondWind'' in second and ''Fanfic/OnceAgain'' in first.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125. It is currently the longest and most popular Peggy Sue story in the ''One Piece'' fandom, as well as the most popular story overall.

A cataclysmic event leaves Luffy as the sole survivor of the Straw Hat Pirates, and after enduring years in Impel Down, he’s rescued by an old man from the future with the power of the Open-Open Fruit. Using this power, Luffy is sent back to the past to try his adventures again, this time with more strength, more experience, more knowledge, more crewmates…and his eyes opened to women courtesy of the aforementioned power.

By far In canon progression among the most popular ''One Piece'' fan fiction in the entire fandom, the longest fandom's Peggy Sue fic in the fandom in regards to word count, and in canon progression, fics, it takes third place, with ''Fanfic/SecondWind'' in second and ''Fanfic/OnceAgain'' in first.
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* StationsOfTheCanon: Despite Luffy's New World grade strength, his numerous Curb-Stomps, and his extra crewmates, things don't change much; several notable differences, sure, but the overall story goes about the same.
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PeggySue: Whole premise of the story.

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* PeggySue: Whole premise of the story.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: * YoungerThanTheyLook:



** Many present have this reaction when Vivi accidentally says Crocodile’s name, either because of her carelessness or the fact that they’re up against a Warlord.

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** Many present have this reaction when Vivi accidentally says Crocodile’s name, either because of her carelessness or the fact that they’re up against a Warlord.Warlord.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: Despite looking like a young girl, Grace says she's almost 14.

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* OlderThanTheyLook: * YoungerThanTheyLook:



** Many present have this reaction when Vivi accidentally says Crocodile’s name, either because of her carelessness or the fact that they’re up against a Warlord.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: Despite looking like a young girl, Grace says she's 14.

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** Many present have this reaction when Vivi accidentally says Crocodile’s name, either because of her carelessness or the fact that they’re up against a Warlord.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: Despite looking like a young girl, Grace says she's 14.
Warlord.
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By far the most popular ''One Piece'' fan fiction in the entire fandom, the longest Peggy Sue fic in the fandom in regards to word count, and in canon progression, it takes third place, barely behind ''Fanfic/SecondWind'' for second with ''Fanfic/OnceAgain'' in first.

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By far the most popular ''One Piece'' fan fiction in the entire fandom, the longest Peggy Sue fic in the fandom in regards to word count, and in canon progression, it takes third place, barely behind with ''Fanfic/SecondWind'' for in second with and ''Fanfic/OnceAgain'' in first.

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** Johnny and Yosaku, near perpetually.

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** Johnny and Yosaku, near perpetually.perpetually, when they're both in the same area.



* {{Lemon}}: As stated by the author, this is not a fic centered on lemons. But with Luffy’s eyes opened to women, this has happened a few times thus far:

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* {{Lemon}}: As stated by the author, this is not a fic centered on lemons. But with Luffy’s Luffy’s eyes opened to women, this has happened a few times thus far:


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** Due to being moved to a new floor on Impel Down, which essentially is a HellOnEarth, Luffy's body has adapted to some if not all the conditions of the first five floors. So far Luffy's only shown a resistance to the cold.
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* FreakOut: Due to the events in the original timeline, Luffy often has nightmares and panic attacks related to the fates of his friends and being unable to save them, it's bad enough that his original hallucination of Crocodile is replaced by Sakazuki.
** Gin suffers from some at a lesser degree when he re-experiences some of the more terrifying parts of the Grand Line.


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* GoalInLife: As usual for the Straw Hats, each member of the crew has a dream they want to see come true.
** Gin's dream is to never run from the Grand Line again.
** Nojiko's dream is to see Nami's come true.
** Johnny and Yosaku share a dream of becoming the best swordsman duo ever.
** Alvida's dream is to stun the world with her beauty.
** Valerie, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Miss Valentine of Baroque Works]]'s dream is to become a great chocolateer.
** Grace, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Miss Goldenweek]]'s is to become a famous painter.
** Vivi's dream is to [[spoiler:change the future and save her kingdom from its horrible fate in the story's bad future.]]
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** The Haki and Six power training that he puts his crew through is rather painful as well.

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** Vivi has this when Wetton figures out she's not a hostage.



** It can slip his mind sometimes however, notable examples being forgetting the Black Cat Pirates would show on the opposite side of the island and that Dorry's booze was contaminated by Mr. 5.

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** It However, it can slip his mind sometimes however, notable sometimes. Notable examples being forgetting where the Black Cat Pirates would actually show on up and the opposite side of the island and that Dorry's booze was contaminated by Mr. 5.booze.



** The Haki training that he puts his crew through is rather painful as well.

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** Similar to the canon Straw Hats, all of the new members in the story so far have their own painful pasts. For some like Gin, Nojiko, Johnny, Yosaku and Vivi, their stories can be learned through the canon, other members' pasts are unique to the story.

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** Similar to the canon Straw Hats, all of the new members in the story so far have their own painful pasts. For some like Gin, Nojiko, Johnny, Yosaku and Vivi, their stories can be learned through the canon, other members' pasts are unique to the story.


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* TaughtByExperience: Luffy usually remembers what he did during his journey before and tends to avoid certain problems the crew had before.
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* GenerationXerox: Grace says that the technique to hypnotize people using paint was developed by her parents.

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