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* {{Lemon}}: As stated by the author, this is not a fic centered on lemons. But with Luffy’s eyes opened to women, this has happened a few times thus far:

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* {{Lemon}}: As stated by the author, this is not a fic centered on lemons. But with Luffy’s Luffy's eyes opened to women, this has happened a few times thus far:


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* MoneyFetish: So, you know how Nami provides the page image for this trope? She does it for real in this story. With everyone discovering it. Nojiko naturally ushers everyone out of the room immediately.
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* CasualDangerDialog:
** Chapter 24 features this when Luffy talks to Alvida after surviving execution.
** Chapter 71 features this when Luffy and Shuraiya are demolishing Gasparde's crew.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4986331/F-ckthesystem125 F-ckthesystem125]], writer of ''OnePunchManHerosHarem''.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4986331/F-ckthesystem125 F-ckthesystem125]], writer of ''OnePunchManHerosHarem''.''Fanfic/OnePunchManHerosHarem''.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10215988/1/Luffy-s-Renewed-Adventure Luffy’s Renewed Adventure]]'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' PeggySue[=/=]{{Harem}} FanFiction by F-ckthesystem125.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4986331/F-ckthesystem125 F-ckthesystem125]], writer of ''OnePunchManHerosHarem''.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In a CrowningMomentOfAwesome, Gin delivers one of these to Don Krieg after losing to Sanji. He realizes thanks to Luffy’s advice that the crew was weak, and when Krieg disowns him for daring to say as much, he turns against him.

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In a CrowningMomentOfAwesome, SugarWiki/CrowningMomentOfAwesome, Gin delivers one of these to Don Krieg after losing to Sanji. He realizes thanks to Luffy’s advice that the crew was weak, and when Krieg disowns him for daring to say as much, he turns against him.

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** Crosses over with Enemy Mine below; after a couple of brutally effective Curb-Stomp Battles, as well as learning that Baroque Works’ true intentions do not aspire towards an ideal nation, three of the officer agents join the crew: [[spoiler:Miss Valentine]] in Whiskey Peak and [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] and [[spoiler:Miss Goldenweek]] in Little Garden. At the end of the Alabasta arc, [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] reluctantly leaves the crew to seek his own dreams, but the other two become permanent members.

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** Crosses over with Enemy Mine below; after a couple of brutally effective Curb-Stomp Battles, CurbStompBattle[=s=], as well as learning that Baroque Works’ true intentions do not aspire towards an ideal nation, three of the officer agents join the crew: [[spoiler:Miss Valentine]] in Whiskey Peak and [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] and [[spoiler:Miss Goldenweek]] in Little Garden. At the end of the Alabasta arc, [[spoiler:Mr. 5]] reluctantly leaves the crew to seek his own dreams, but the other two become permanent members.



** DO NOT so much as ''remind'' Alvida of what she used to be, let alone insult her about it. Unlike in canon she's actually aware of how she used to look.

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** DO NOT so much as ''remind'' Alvida of what she used to be, let alone insult her about it. Unlike in canon canon, she's actually aware of how she used to look.look and is rather self-concious because of that.



** Vivi has an intense one towards unfair laws like the ones on Ruluka and Skypeia, or royals who abuse their status such as Wapol.

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** Vivi has an intense one towards unfair laws like the ones on Ruluka and Skypeia, Skypeia or royals who abuse their status such as Wapol.



** In Chapter 13, the Krieg Pirates have this reaction when Luffy breaks Pearl's shields without lifting a finger, through the Iron Body technique.

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** In Chapter 13, the Krieg Pirates have this reaction when Luffy breaks Pearl's shields without lifting a finger, finger through the Iron Body technique.



** Chapter 71 features this when Luffy and Shuraiya are [[strike:fighting]] Curb-Stomping Gasparde's crew.

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** Chapter 71 features this when Luffy and Shuraiya are [[strike:fighting]] Curb-Stomping demolishing Gasparde's crew.



** In the fourth movie, main antagonist Gasparde died when his ship blew up after losing to Luffy. In this adaptation, Luffy informs Shuraiya of Gasparde's weakness beforehand, allowing the vengeful bounty hunter to kill him.
** [[spoiler:Shura's loss to the Straw Hats leads to the Sky Sharks devouring him and Fuza. The clouds are stained with blood to remove all doubt he may have survived.]]

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** In the fourth movie, main antagonist Gasparde died when his ship blew up after losing to Luffy. In this adaptation, Luffy informs Shuraiya of Gasparde's weakness beforehand, allowing the vengeful bounty hunter to kill him.
** [[spoiler:Shura's
[[spoiler: Shura's loss to the Straw Hats leads to the Sky Sharks devouring him and Fuza. The clouds are stained with blood to remove all doubt he may have survived.]]



* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: In ''Dead End Adventure'', Gasparde died when his ship blew up after losing to Luffy. In this adaptation, Luffy informs Shuraiya of Gasparde's weakness beforehand, allowing the vengeful bounty hunter to kill him.



* FreakOut: Due to the events in the original timeline, Luffy often has nightmares and panic attacks related to the fates of his friends and being unable to save them, it's bad enough that his original hallucination of Crocodile is replaced by Sakazuki.

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* FreakOut: Due to the events in the original timeline, Luffy often has nightmares and panic attacks related to the fates of his friends and being unable to save them, it's them. It's bad enough that his original hallucination of Crocodile is replaced by Sakazuki.



** Valerie, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Miss Valentine of Baroque Works]]'s dream is to become a great chocolateer.

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** Valerie, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Miss Valentine of Baroque Works]]'s dream is to become a great chocolateer.chocolatier.



* ImprobableWeaponUser: As in [[strike:canon]] the original movie, bounty hunter Shuraiya Bascùd doesn’t have a default weapon; he uses anything he can get his hands on, from chairs to shovels.

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* ImprobableWeaponUser: As in [[strike:canon]] the original movie, bounty hunter ''Dead End Adventure'', Shuraiya Bascùd doesn’t have a default weapon; he uses anything he can get his hands on, from including chairs to shovels.



** Miss Valentine is smart enough to surrender to Luffy after he Curb-Stomps Mr. 5. Twice. That and showing off the Six Powers.

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** Miss Valentine is smart enough to surrender to Luffy after he Curb-Stomps Mr. 5. Twice. That That, and showing off the Six Powers.



** In the next chapter, Valerie, Nami, Alvida, and a drunken Vivi to get in on the action[[spoiler:With a little action from Vivi and her Candy-Candy Fruit powers.]]

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** In the next chapter, Valerie, Nami, Alvida, and a drunken Vivi to get in on the action[[spoiler:With action[[spoiler: with a little action help from Vivi and her Candy-Candy Fruit powers.]]



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Luffy says he’s not hungry at the end of Chapter 79, after his memories of Blackbeard come to the surface. The rest of the crew is thunderstruck (except Robin); ''nothing'' had made Luffy lose his appetite before, and he’d had some really bad nightmares already.

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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Luffy says he’s not hungry at the end of Chapter 79, 79 after his memories of Blackbeard come to the surface. The rest of the crew is thunderstruck (except Robin); ''nothing'' had made Luffy lose his appetite before, and he’d had some really bad nightmares already.



* RagsToRiches: After Alabasta, the author writes in the fourth movie, Dead End Adventure. Between winning the race, winning the bets they placed on themselves, and looting Gasparde's ship, the Straw Hats walk away with a grand total of 800,000,000 berries. Then the author writes in the Rainbow Mist filler arc, where the Straw Hats hoard all of the treasures that they can from Ape's Concert onto the ship, and successfully get away. With the Merry full to bursting, they now have 3 ''billion'' berries. And now they're in Skypiea, where the City of Gold is, and Nami is still eager to get more money…

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* RagsToRiches: After Alabasta, the author writes in the fourth movie, Dead End Adventure. Between winning the race, winning the bets they placed on themselves, and looting Gasparde's ship, the Straw Hats walk away with a grand total of 800,000,000 berries. Then the author writes in the Rainbow Mist filler arc, where the Straw Hats hoard all of the treasures that they can from Ape's Concert onto the ship, ship and successfully get away.away with it. With the Merry full to bursting, they now have 3 ''billion'' berries. And now they're in Skypiea, where the City of Gold is, and Nami is still eager to get more money…



* StationsOfTheCanon: Despite Luffy's New World grade strength, his numerous Curb-Stomps, and his extra crewmates, things don't change much; several notable differences, sure, but the overall story goes about the same. [[spoiler:Most notably in the fact that Crocodile does ''not'' just fold over in their first battle and still wins; it helps that Crocodile in canon was capable of standing against the New World level threats of the Marineford Arc with little difficulty and it was more luck and determination that let Luffy beat him the first time around]].

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* StationsOfTheCanon: Despite Luffy's New World grade World-grade strength, his numerous Curb-Stomps, asskickings, and his extra crewmates, things don't change much; several notable differences, sure, but the overall story goes about the same. [[spoiler:Most notably in the fact that Crocodile does ''not'' just fold over in their first battle and still wins; it helps that Crocodile in canon was capable of standing against the New World level threats of the Marineford Arc with little difficulty and it was more luck and determination that let Luffy beat him the first time around]].



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In a CMOA, Gin delivers one of these to Don Krieg after losing to Sanji. He realizes thanks to Luffy’s advice that the crew was weak, and when Krieg disowns him for daring to say as much, he turns against him.

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In a CMOA, CrowningMomentOfAwesome, Gin delivers one of these to Don Krieg after losing to Sanji. He realizes thanks to Luffy’s advice that the crew was weak, and when Krieg disowns him for daring to say as much, he turns against him.



** Due to being moved to a new floor on Impel Down, which essentially is a HellOnEarth, Luffy's body has adapted to some if not all the conditions of the first five floors. So far Luffy's only shown a resistance to the cold.

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** Due to being moved to a new floor on Impel Down, which essentially is a HellOnEarth, Luffy's body has adapted to some if not all the conditions of the first five floors. So far far, Luffy's only shown a resistance to the cold.



** Miss Valentine has this reaction when Luffy uses Moonwalk to follow her into the air, she floating with her Kilo-Kilo Fruit powers.

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** Miss Valentine has this reaction when Luffy uses Moonwalk to follow her into the air, she air while she's floating with her Kilo-Kilo Fruit powers.
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** Nojiko also decides to come along to see Nami see her dream through. Well, that and to make sure she’s safe after [[spoiler:catching Luffy and Nami in a Lemon]].

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** Nojiko also decides to come along to see Nami see her dream through. Well, that and to make sure she’s safe after [[spoiler:catching Luffy and Nami in a Lemon]].having sex]].
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per Trope Repair Shop, Jerkass Facade is being cut in favor of Hidden Heart Of Gold / Jerk With A Heart Of Gold.


* DefrostingIceQueen: Luffy gets Nami to defrost a lot faster in this fic, due to making her see early on that not all pirates are evil, and that he knew what it was like to lose someone he loved, to the point where he manages to convince her to tell him the truth about Arlong before they reach the Baratie. Doesn’t stop her from stealing the Merry when it comes to that, but the JerkassFacade she put up for the Straw Hats fails as soon as she lays eyes on Luffy.

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* DefrostingIceQueen: Luffy gets Nami to defrost a lot faster in this fic, due to making her see early on that not all pirates are evil, and that he knew what it was like to lose someone he loved, to the point where he manages to convince her to tell him the truth about Arlong before they reach the Baratie. Doesn’t stop her from stealing the Merry when it comes to that, but the JerkassFacade {{Jerkass}} facade she put up for the Straw Hats fails as soon as she lays eyes on Luffy.

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A cataclysmic event leaves Luffy as the sole survivor of the Straw Hat Pirates, and after enduring years in Impel Down, he’s rescued by an old man from the future with the power of the Open-Open Fruit. Using this power, Luffy is sent back to the past to try his adventures again, this time with more strength, more experience, more knowledge, more crewmates…and his eyes opened to women courtesy of the aforementioned power.

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A cataclysmic event leaves Luffy as the sole survivor of the Straw Hat Pirates, and after enduring years in Impel Down, he’s rescued by an old man from the future with the power of the Open-Open Fruit. Using this power, Luffy is sent back to the past to try his adventures again, this time with more strength, more experience, more knowledge, more crewmates…and crewmates… and his eyes opened to women courtesy of the aforementioned power.
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It was discontinued in November 2019, with a rewrite promised.
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Real names of Officer Agents were revealed in Vivre Card - One Piece Visual Dictionary, and Miss Doublefinger's was Zala. "Paula" was just a disguise.


** Rather simple names are also given to a few members of Baroque Works. As opposed to the canon names like Daz Bones, Bentham, and Galdino (Misters 1, 2, & 3, respectively), Mr. 5’s name is [[spoiler:Greg]], Miss Valentine’s name is [[spoiler:Valerie]], and Miss Goldenweek’s name is [[spoiler:Grace]]. Then again, Miss Doublefinger’s real name is Paula in canon, so it’s not that farfetched.

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** Rather simple names are also given to a few members of Baroque Works. As opposed to the canon names like Daz Bones, Bentham, and Galdino (Misters 1, 2, & 3, respectively), Mr. 5’s name is [[spoiler:Greg]], Miss Valentine’s name is [[spoiler:Valerie]], and Miss Goldenweek’s name is [[spoiler:Grace]]. Then again, Miss Doublefinger’s real name is Paula in canon, so it’s not that farfetched.

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