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* ForWantOfANail: Keitaro happens to run into Haruka before reaching the Inn. He also patched up some issues with his parents beforehand, meaning that he doesn't have to "jump into this pit that Granny dug out for me."
* PointOfDivergence: Keitaro happens to run into Haruka before reaching the Inn. He also patched up some issues with his parents beforehand, meaning that he doesn't have to "jump into this pit that Granny dug out for me."
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* VocalMinority: InUniverse -- Naru and Motoko are the only two who immediately, angrily protest Keitaro's presence. However, Haruka points out that none of the others tried to speak up or do anything, watching them drive him away. As far as she's concerned, that makes them all equally guilty.
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* VocalMinority: InUniverse -- Naru and Motoko are the only two who immediately, angrily protest Keitaro's presence. However, Haruka points out that none of the others tried to speak up or do anything, watching them drive him away. As far as she's concerned, that makes them all equally guilty.guilty.
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* RationalFic: To an extent. The story's plot is basically "What if everyone in ''Love Hina'' actually thought a little bit instead of leaping blindly to the first conclusion they think of?"
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* PantyShot: Keitaro grabs the hem of Naru's dress to prevent this and nearly gets {{Megaton Punch}}ed for his troubles.
** Worse than that as Naru was (accidentally) GoingCommando.
** Worse than that as Naru was (accidentally) GoingCommando.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7856098/1/Love-Hina-Like-It-Could-Have-Been Love Hina: Like It Could Have Been]]'' explores the consequences of this. Their initial sense of triumph when Keitaro walks out soon gives way to shock as they find themselves having to take up the duties he would have assumed. RealityEnsues.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7856098/1/Love-Hina-Like-It-Could-Have-Been Love Hina: Like It Could Have Been]]'' explores the consequences of this. Their initial sense of triumph when Keitaro walks out soon gives way to shock as they find themselves having to take up the duties he would have assumed. RealityEnsues.
Reality bites back.
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* RealityEnsues: After Keitaro leaves, Haruka informs her tenants that they're going to be taking over all of the duties ''he'' would have handled. She also informs Kitsune that she's going to have to pay her rent or get evicted.
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Keitaro Urashima didn't exactly get the warmest welcome from the girls staying at the Hinata House. Then again, his grandmother hadn't exactly had the foresight to warn him beforehand that it'd been converted into an all-girls' dormitory. So what if he happened to run into Haruka beforehand, found out what was being set up and made a deal with her: if the girls don't want him there, then he'll leave.
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[[Manga/LoveHina Keitaro Urashima Urashima]] didn't exactly get the warmest welcome from the girls staying at the Hinata House. Then again, his grandmother hadn't exactly had the foresight to warn him beforehand that it'd been converted into an all-girls' dormitory. So what if he happened to run into Haruka beforehand, found out what was being set up and made a deal with her: if the girls don't want him there, then he'll leave.
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* RationalFic: To an extent. The story's plot is basically "What if everyone in ''Love Hina'' actually thought a little bit instead of leaping blindly to the first conclusion they think of?"
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** In another Kitsune example related to the money, Haruka isn't happy that Kitsune is still going to the dog races and drinking. She does understand that Kitsune both isn't doing either of those things nearly as much as she did, and needs some way to blow off steam, so she goes easy on her condemnation of those things (as long as Kitsune gets all the remaining money paid by next month).
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Despite saying that she'd kick Kitsune out if she didn't have the money, Haruka sees that Kitsune has ''almost'' all the money needed to pay back what she owes. Taking into account how hard Kitsune has been working to make that money, she gives her another month to get the rest of it.
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* ExactWords: Twice in Keitaro's spar with Motoko. First she said "first touch wins" so he touches he with his hand and second he tells her he did not like his bokken training, when he wins the spar, she tells him that she thought he did not like it. He replies, "I didn't like it. I didn't say I was bad at it."
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* ExactWords: Twice in Keitaro's spar with Motoko. First she said "first touch wins" so he touches he with his hand and second he tells her he did not like his bokken training, when [[spoiler:when he wins the spar, she tells him that she thought he did not like it. He replies, "I didn't like it. I didn't say I was bad at it.""]]
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* ExactWords: Twice in Keitaro's spar with Motoko. First she said "first touch wins" so he touches he with his hand and second he tells her he did not like his bokken training, when he wins the spar, she tells him that she thought he did not like it. He replies, "I didn't like it. I didn't say I was bad at it."
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* {{Squee}}: Kanako lets out one when Keitaro calls her and mentions [[spoiler:he's considering taking up kendo again]].
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* {{Squee}}: Kanako lets out one when Keitaro calls her and mentions [[spoiler:he's [[spoiler:he is considering taking up kendo again]].
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* AllMenArePerverts: Naru justifies her refusal to control her temper around guys with this claim.
* BreakTheHaughty: Or rather, 'Force the Haughty to go through CharacterDevelopment by making them face up to what they've done'.
* BreakTheHaughty: Or rather, 'Force the Haughty to go through CharacterDevelopment by making them face up to what they've done'.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Naru justifies tries to justify her refusal to control her temper around guys with this claim.
* BreakTheHaughty: Or rather, 'Force the Haughty to go through CharacterDevelopment by making them faceup to what they've done'.actual consequences for their actions'.
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* CigaretteOfAnxiety: Haruka lights up after updating Granny Hina on the implosion of her plot.
* ForWantOfANail: This verse's Keitaro happens to run into Haruka before reaching the Inn. He also patched up some issues with his parents beforehand, meaning that he doesn't have to "jump into this pit that Granny dug out for me."
* ForWantOfANail: This verse's Keitaro happens to run into Haruka before reaching the Inn. He also patched up some issues with his parents beforehand, meaning that he doesn't have to "jump into this pit that Granny dug out for me."
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* CigaretteOfAnxiety: Haruka lights up after updating Granny Hina on the implosion of her plot.
plot and Granny rants her out.
* DeadFic: Hasn't been updated since 2012.
* ForWantOfANail:This verse's Keitaro happens to run into Haruka before reaching the Inn. He also patched up some issues with his parents beforehand, meaning that he doesn't have to "jump into this pit that Granny dug out for me."
* DeadFic: Hasn't been updated since 2012.
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* IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure: If one of the girls damages the Inn, such as Naru throwing a fit or one of Su's inventions going awry, while the one responsible will have to pay for the bulk of the repairs, everyone is required to chip in.
* [[AccidentalPervert Mistaken For Pervert]]: Kitsune reminds Naru of an incident where an older man got shoved aside on the train, stumbled, and put his hand on Naru's shoulder while trying to steady himself. She nearly broke his jaw. When she brings it up, Naru doggedly insists he deserved it.
* [[AccidentalPervert Mistaken For Pervert]]: Kitsune reminds Naru of an incident where an older man got shoved aside on the train, stumbled, and put his hand on Naru's shoulder while trying to steady himself. She nearly broke his jaw. When she brings it up, Naru doggedly insists he deserved it.
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* IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure: If one of the girls damages the Inn, such as Naru throwing a fit or one of Su's inventions going awry, while awry, the one responsible will have to pay for the bulk of the repairs, repairs but everyone is required to chip in.
* [[AccidentalPervert Mistaken For Pervert]]: Kitsune reminds Naru of an incident where an older man got shoved aside on the train, stumbled, and put his hand on Naru's shoulder while trying to steady himself. She nearly broke his jaw. When she brings it up, Naru doggedly insists he deserved it.in.
* [[AccidentalPervert Mistaken For Pervert]]: Kitsune reminds Naru of an incident where an older man got shoved aside on the train, stumbled, and put his hand on Naru's shoulder while trying to steady himself. She nearly broke his jaw. When she brings it up, Naru doggedly insists he deserved it.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Yay, you drove away the guy who was going to be the manager! Your reward is splitting up all of the chores and responsibilities he had among yourselves, and a very pissed-off matron who's no longer willing to cut you any slack.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Yay, you drove away the guy who was going to be the manager! manager of your living quarters! Your reward is splitting up all of the chores and responsibilities he had among yourselves, and a very pissed-off matron who's no longer willing to cut you any slack.
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** The story's plot is basically "What if everyone in Love Hina actually thought a little bit instead of leaping blindly to the first conclusion they think of?"
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* UnprovokedPervertPayback: Deconstructed. Kitsune reminds Naru of an incident where an older man got shoved aside on the train, stumbled, and put his hand on Naru's shoulder while trying to steady himself. She nearly broke his jaw. When she brings it up, Naru doggedly insists he deserved it. No one really buys it.
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* GoingCommando: At one point, Naru forgets to put on panties under her dress.
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* TemptingFate: After he leaves, Haruka asks the girls if they're satisfied. Naru smiles and Makoto declares "We have no need for a male here."
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* TemptingFate: After he leaves, Haruka asks the girls if they're satisfied. Naru smiles and Makoto Motoko declares "We have no need for a male here."
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** The story's plot is basically "What if everyone in Love Hina actually thought a little bit instead of leaping blindly to the first conclusion they think of?"
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** Worse than that as Naru was (accidentally) GoingCommando.
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* CatapultNightmare: Mptoko suffers one in the second chapter.
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* CatapultNightmare: Mptoko Motoko suffers one in the second chapter.
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* RuleOfThree: Haruka establishes a Three Strike system. If a tenant recieves three warnings, then the third serves as her eviction notice.
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* RuleOfThree: Haruka establishes a Three Strike system. If a tenant recieves receives three warnings, then the third serves as her eviction notice.
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* CatapultNightmare: Matoko suffers one in the second chapter.
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* CatapultNightmare: Matoko Mptoko suffers one in the second chapter.
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* [[AccidentalPervert Mistaken For Pervert]]: Mitsune reminds Naru of an incident where an older man got shoved aside on the train, stumbled, and put his hand on Naru's shoulder while trying to steady himself. She nearly broke his jaw. When she brings it up, Naru doggedly insists he deserved it.
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* [[AccidentalPervert Mistaken For Pervert]]: Mitsune Kitsune reminds Naru of an incident where an older man got shoved aside on the train, stumbled, and put his hand on Naru's shoulder while trying to steady himself. She nearly broke his jaw. When she brings it up, Naru doggedly insists he deserved it.
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* VocalMinority: InUniverse -- Naru and Makoto are the only two who immediately, angrily protest Keitaro's presence. However, Haruka points out that none of the others tried to speak up or do anything, watching them drive him away. As far as she's concerned, that makes them all equally guilty.
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* VocalMinority: InUniverse -- Naru and Makoto Motoko are the only two who immediately, angrily protest Keitaro's presence. However, Haruka points out that none of the others tried to speak up or do anything, watching them drive him away. As far as she's concerned, that makes them all equally guilty.
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* AllMenArePerverts: Naru justifies her refusal to control her temper around guys with this claim.
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* CatapultNightmare: Matoko suffers one in the second chapter.
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* PantyShot: Keitaro grabs the hem of Naru's dress to prevent this and nearly gets {{Megaton Punch}}ed for his troubles.
* PoorCommunicationKills: So far, everyone's working hard to avert this whenever a NotWhatItLooksLike situation comes up.
* PoorCommunicationKills: So far, everyone's working hard to avert this whenever a NotWhatItLooksLike situation comes up.
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* {{Squee}}: Kanako lets out one when Keitaro calls her and mentions [[spoiler:he's considering taking up kendo again]].
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* BreakTheHaughty: Or rather, 'Force the Haughty to go through CharacterDevelopment by making them face up to what they've done'.
* [[CallingTheOldManOut Calling The Old Woman Out]]: When Hina learns how things are going from Haruka, she's not happy with how her plans went OffTheRails. Haruka responds by calling her out and giving her an earful right back.
* CigaretteOfAnxiety: Haruka lights up after updating Granny Hina on the implosion of her plot.
* [[CallingTheOldManOut Calling The Old Woman Out]]: When Hina learns how things are going from Haruka, she's not happy with how her plans went OffTheRails. Haruka responds by calling her out and giving her an earful right back.
* CigaretteOfAnxiety: Haruka lights up after updating Granny Hina on the implosion of her plot.
* IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure: If one of the girls damages the Inn, such as Naru throwing a fit or one of Su's inventions going awry, while the one responsible will have to pay for the bulk of the repairs, everyone is required to chip in.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: As soon as he reads the letter and realizes that Granny Hina was setting him up, Keitaro's ready to turn right around and leave. Haruka convinces him to at least meet the girls, but he's hardly heartbroken when they won't give him a chance.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: RefusalOfTheCall: As soon as he reads the letter and realizes that Granny Hina was setting him up, Keitaro's ready to turn right around and leave. Haruka convinces him to at least meet the girls, but he's hardly heartbroken when they won't give him a chance. This isn't the end of his interactions with them, however, as he works a part-time job in construction.
* RuleOfThree: Haruka establishes a Three Strike system. If a tenant recieves three warnings, then the third serves as her eviction notice.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The girls successfully drive Keitaro away, and Haruka slaps them with the consequences afterwards.
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* MortonsFork: Haruka presents the girls with one: either they'll do all the chores that their manager was supposed to handle themselves, or she'll raise their rent so that she can afford to hire workers to perform those tasks. Most of said workers, she adds, will be male.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero:The girls successfully drive Keitaro away, Yay, you drove away the guy who was going to be the manager! Your reward is splitting up all of the chores and responsibilities he had among yourselves, and a very pissed-off matron who's no longer willing to cut you any slack.
* PrettyFreeloader: When the story begins, Kitsune's two months behind on her rent. Harukaslaps them with states that if she's not paid up by the consequences afterwards.end of the month, she's out.
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* PrettyFreeloader: When the story begins, Kitsune's two months behind on her rent. Haruka
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: As soon as he reads the letter and realizes that Granny Hina was setting him up, Keitaro's ready to turn right around and leave. Haruka convinces him to at least meet the girls, but he's hardly heartbroken when they won't give him a chance.
* TemptingFate: After he leaves, Haruka asks the girls if they're satisfied. Naru smiles and Makoto declares "We have no need for a male here."
* VocalMinority: InUniverse -- Naru and Makoto are the only two who immediately, angrily protest Keitaro's presence. However, Haruka points out that none of the others tried to speak up or do anything, watching them drive him away. As far as she's concerned, that makes them all equally guilty.
* TemptingFate: After he leaves, Haruka asks the girls if they're satisfied. Naru smiles and Makoto declares "We have no need for a male here."
* VocalMinority: InUniverse -- Naru and Makoto are the only two who immediately, angrily protest Keitaro's presence. However, Haruka points out that none of the others tried to speak up or do anything, watching them drive him away. As far as she's concerned, that makes them all equally guilty.
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Keitaro Urashima didn't exactly get the warmest welcome from the girls staying at the Hinata House. Then again, his grandmother hadn't exactly had the foresight to warn him beforehand that it'd been converted into an all-girls' dormitory. So what if he happened to run into Haruka beforehand, found out what was being set up and made a deal with her: if the girls don't want him there, then he'll leave.
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7856098/1/Love-Hina-Like-It-Could-Have-Been Love Hina: Like It Could Have Been]]'' explores the consequences of this. Their initial sense of triumph when Keitaro walks out soon gives way to shock as they find themselves having to take up the duties he would have assumed. RealityEnsues.
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* ForWantOfANail: This verse's Keitaro happens to run into Haruka before reaching the Inn. He also patched up some issues with his parents beforehand, meaning that he doesn't have to "jump into this pit that Granny dug out for me."
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The girls successfully drive Keitaro away, and Haruka slaps them with the consequences afterwards.
* RealityEnsues: After Keitaro leaves, Haruka informs her tenants that they're going to be taking over all of the duties ''he'' would have handled. She also informs Kitsune that she's going to have to pay her rent or get evicted.
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7856098/1/Love-Hina-Like-It-Could-Have-Been Love Hina: Like It Could Have Been]]'' explores the consequences of this. Their initial sense of triumph when Keitaro walks out soon gives way to shock as they find themselves having to take up the duties he would have assumed. RealityEnsues.
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This ''Manga/LoveHina'' FanFic contains examples of:
* ForWantOfANail: This verse's Keitaro happens to run into Haruka before reaching the Inn. He also patched up some issues with his parents beforehand, meaning that he doesn't have to "jump into this pit that Granny dug out for me."
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The girls successfully drive Keitaro away, and Haruka slaps them with the consequences afterwards.
* RealityEnsues: After Keitaro leaves, Haruka informs her tenants that they're going to be taking over all of the duties ''he'' would have handled. She also informs Kitsune that she's going to have to pay her rent or get evicted.