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* TookALevelInKindness: By her own admission, Bulma was a total brat and a diva when she started her journey. Come the World Martial Arts Tournament, she casually gifts Nam ten times the tournament's prize money along with a dyno-cap that can hold thousands of gallons of water to help his village.

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* TookALevelInKindness: By her own admission, Bulma was a total brat and a diva when she started her journey. Come After wishing to become a Saiyan and promising that Goku will never be alone again, she finds herself able to ride the Flying Nimbus. Later, at the World Martial Arts Tournament, she casually gifts Nam ten times the tournament's prize money along with a dyno-cap that can hold thousands of gallons of water to help his village.
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* TookALevelInKindness: By her own admission, Bulma was a total brat and a diva when she started her journey. Come the World Martial Arts Tournament, she casually gifts Nam ten times the tournament's prize money along with a dyno-cap that can hold thousands of gallons of water to help his village.
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** Yamcha and Puar likewise don't travel with them and stay in the desert where they're first encountered. This is not from lack of trying, as they gave Goku and Bulma the bugged car like in canon, if earlier than they originally did. See ProperlyParanoid below.

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** Yamcha and Puar likewise don't travel with them and stay in the desert where they're first encountered. This is not from lack of trying, as they gave Goku and Bulma the bugged car like in canon, if earlier than they originally did. See ProperlyParanoid below. Yamcha does make an appearance in the Tenkaichi Budokai but is defeated in the preliminaries and promptly leaves.

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* ButtMonkey: Yamcha, as of Chapter 3. He participates in the Tenkaichi Budokai in an attempt to meet and apologize to Goku and Bulma, or failing that at least prove his strength as a martial artist...but his first match in his bracket pits him against "Jackie Chun", [[CurbStompBattle who casually eliminates him.

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* ButtMonkey: Yamcha, as of Chapter 3. He participates in the Tenkaichi Budokai in an attempt to meet and apologize to Goku and Bulma, or failing that at least prove his strength as a martial artist...but his first match in his bracket pits him against "Jackie Chun", [[CurbStompBattle who casually eliminates him.him]].


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* TeleportSpam: Launch's signature move consists of attacking her opponent through countless portals.

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* ExactWords:
** Part of Mai's crude sense of humor. When Shu says he hasn't seen anywhere Goku and Bulma might be hiding "a ball" (meaning the last Dragon Ball), Mai suggests checking between Goku's legs.
** Goku warns Bulma that Shenron may grant very vague wishes in such a manner. [[spoiler:Turns out he's right, as when Bulma wishes she were more like Goku, no doubt meaning in personality, Shenron ends up making her a Sayian.]]

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ExactWords: Part of Mai's crude sense of humor. When Shu says he hasn't seen anywhere Goku and Bulma might be hiding "a ball" (meaning the last Dragon Ball), Mai suggests checking between Goku's legs.
** Goku warns Bulma that Shenron may grant very vague wishes in such a manner. [[spoiler:Turns out he's right, as when Bulma wishes she were more like Goku, no doubt meaning in personality, Shenron ends up making her a Sayian.]]
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* LiteralGenie: Goku warns Bulma that Shenron may grant very vague wishes in such a manner. [[spoiler:Turns out he's right, as when Bulma wishes she were more like Goku, no doubt meaning in personality, Shenron ends up making her a Sayian.]]
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* ButtMonkey: Yamcha, as of Chapter 3. He participates in the Tenkaichi Budokai in an attempt to meet and apologize to Goku and Bulma, or failing that at least prove his strength as a martial artist...but his first match in his bracket pits him against "Jackie Chun", [[CurbStompBattle who casually eliminates him.

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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Kefla makes an appearance roughly thirty years earlier than canon, though as an ordinary Universe 7 Saiyan rather than as a fusion of two Universe 6 Saiyans.



* MorphicResonance: No matter what he does, Goku can't change his tail when shapeshifting, resulting in things like a pterodactyl with a small monkey tail.



* WakeupMakeup: Since becoming a saiyan, Bulma has noticed that her hair always looks like she just got it professionally done at a salon.

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* WakeupMakeup: Since becoming a saiyan, Saiyan, Bulma has noticed that her hair always looks like she just got it professionally done at a salon.
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* ThinkingUpPortals: By the time of the World Martial Arts Tournament, Launch has a TeleportSpam technique she uses by having both personalities work together: one creates the portals while the other one attacks.
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The major plot point is that Goku knows his birth name of Kakarot due to the fact that his parents, specifically his mother Gine, rewrote the Planet Baby programming to avoid his destructive instincts from coming forth as well as give him basic ki skills, thus he never hit his head and forgot about his Saiyan heritage. This [[ForWantOfANail change]] snowballs that leads into several different changes on how characters interact with each other, especially Bulma.

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The major plot point is that Goku knows his birth name of Kakarot due to the fact that his parents, specifically his mother Gine, rewrote the Planet Baby programming to avoid prevent his destructive instincts from coming forth surfacing as well as give him basic ki skills, thus he never hit his head and forgot about his Saiyan heritage. This [[ForWantOfANail change]] snowballs that leads into several different changes on how characters interact with each other, especially Bulma.



* AdaptationalIntelligence: Since he never got brain damage, Goku is more ignorant than stupid and is quick to point out the flaws in Bulma's original wish.

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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Since he never got brain damage, Goku is more ignorant naive than stupid and is quick stupid. He's actually able to point out the flaws in Bulma's original wish.
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* GunsAreWorthless: Much to Blonde Launch's displeasure, her guns are ineffective against Roshi and Goku. Part of her training is her hoping to make her precious guns relevant again.
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* CanonWelding: The ColdOpen fuses the second half of the prologue of ''Anime/DragonBallSuperBroly'' and ''Anime/DragonBallEpisodeOfBardock'' by revealing that rather than only being suspicious of Freiza recalling all the Sayians, he also has the flashes of Vegeta's destructions given to him by the Kannassan Toolo.

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Something Goku explains to Bulma is that the Shenron may grant her wish using her ExactWords, thus while she may get the ideal boyfriend for her, she may not be ''his'' ideal girlfriend.

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Something Goku explains to Bulma is that the Shenron may grant her wish using her ExactWords, thus while she may get the ideal boyfriend for her, she may not be ''his'' ideal girlfriend. [[spoiler:This also turns out to be {{foreshadow}}ing for Bulma's transformation into a Sayian.]]



* ExactWords: Part of Mai's crude sense of humor. When Shu says he hasn't seen anywhere Goku and Bulma might be hiding "a ball" (meaning the last Dragon Ball), Mai suggests checking between Goku's legs.

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** Goku warns Bulma that Shenron may grant very vague wishes in such a manner. [[spoiler:Turns out he's right, as when Bulma wishes she were more like Goku, no doubt meaning in personality, Shenron ends up making her a Sayian.]]
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* AlmightyJanitor: Downplayed; but despite being a simple kitchen worker, Gine is shown here to be a prodigal engineer as she is able to disable the Attack Ball's Rocket Baby programming and install information about the Saiyan race as well as teach him Ki techniques through sleep learning as well as disabling the scouter's tracking and trasmission functions. Bardock lampshades this and asks why she does so and Gine gives him a snarky response:

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* AlmightyJanitor: Downplayed; but despite being a simple kitchen worker, Gine is shown here to be a prodigal engineer as she is able to disable the Attack Ball's Rocket Baby programming and install information about the Saiyan race as well as teach him Ki techniques through sleep learning as well as disabling the scouter's tracking and trasmission transmission functions. Bardock lampshades this and asks why she does so and Gine gives him a snarky response:
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* ArbitrarilyLargeBankAccount: When Baba insists on being paid 100 million zeni (about a million dollars) for each student she takes on, Bulma just casually pays it, noting the total price is about that of two yachts.
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* TrainingFromHell: Roshi's training, as per canon. Unlike canon, he has two untrained civilians doing it rather than just two genius martial artists. Just the first part of running the milk delivery has Blonde Launch slowly crawling up the steps by the halfway mark of the warm up.

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* TrainingFromHell: Roshi's training, as per canon. Unlike canon, he has two untrained civilians doing it rather than just two genius martial artists. Just the first part of running the milk delivery has Blonde Launch slowly crawling up the steps by the halfway mark of the warm ''warm up.''
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* TrainingFromHell: Roshi's training, as per canon. Unlike canon, he has two untrained civilians doing it rather than just two genius martial artists. Just the first part of running the milk delivery has Blonde Launch slowly crawling up the steps by the halfway mark of the 'warm up'.

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* TrainingFromHell: Roshi's training, as per canon. Unlike canon, he has two untrained civilians doing it rather than just two genius martial artists. Just the first part of running the milk delivery has Blonde Launch slowly crawling up the steps by the halfway mark of the 'warm up'.warm up.
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* TrainingFromHell: Roshi's training, as per canon. Unlike canon, he has two untrained civilians doing it rather than just two genius martial artists. Just the first part of running the milk delivery has Blonde Launch slowly crawling up the steps by the time she finishes.

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* TrainingFromHell: Roshi's training, as per canon. Unlike canon, he has two untrained civilians doing it rather than just two genius martial artists. Just the first part of running the milk delivery has Blonde Launch slowly crawling up the steps by the time she finishes.halfway mark of the 'warm up'.
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Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13487634/1/ here]].

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Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13487634/1/ here]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22446001/chapters/53632126 here]].
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* CuddleBug: Bulma tends to use Goku as a teddy bear when she sleeps, even making a point of only getting a Capsule House with one bed when the pair go to train under Master Roshi.


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* TheScrooge: Lampshaded. Bulma chose several cheaper options when buying capsules for her journey. When this comes back to bite her, she curiously wondered why she bothered considering how rich she is. Before going to train under Master Roshi, she makes a point of getting more expensive capsules.


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* ThereIsOnlyOneBed: Played with. Bulma fully intended to use Goku as a teddy bear while they trained under Master Roshi, something he had no problem with, and thus she brought a Capsule House that only had one bed. However, she forgot this fact when she offered to let Launch room with them. Blue Launch has no problem sharing a bed with them, but blonde Launch nearly shoots them.
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* AmazonianBeauty: After the beginning of her training with Goku, Bulma finds she has actual muscles now, including a six pack, but is even more beautiful than before.


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* WakeupMakeup: Since becoming a saiyan, Bulma has noticed that her hair always looks like she just got it professionally done at a salon.

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* AdaptationalBadass:
** Bulma is well on her way to becoming one; first she starts doing meditation to learn how to access her ki for the sole purpose of learning how to [[MundaneUtility fly without assistance.]] Despite her effort, she remains unable to access it because of how little Ki she has. She then shows some light {{Determinator}} tendencies and doesn't quit, even gritting her teeth and doing some physical training with Goku. She also forces Oolong to teach her (and Goku) the transformation technique and later has Puar help fix the problems that the pig's teaching created, including the time limit. Despite her favorite form being a Falcon and capable of flight, she still doesn't quit trying to access her Ki. Eventually, a moment of rage allows her to harness it for the first time in order to fire a ki blast. Doing so totally wears her out as she lacks the stamina for it, and yet she continues working on it with even more tenacity now. She takes out one of the Rabbit Mafia goons by herself with a [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Spirit Gun]] that does tire her, but not lay her out with exhaustion. By the end of the first chapter, she actually manages to fly for a little bit, accomplishing what had been her early goal.
** Goku is also one even compared to his canon counterpart. He is already capable of flight and ki blasts. He also learns the transformation technique but admits that Bulma is better than him.

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* AdaptationalBadass:
** Bulma is well on her way to becoming one; first she starts doing meditation to learn how to access her ki for the sole purpose of learning how to [[MundaneUtility fly without assistance.]] Despite her effort, she remains unable to access it because of how little Ki she has. She then shows some light {{Determinator}} tendencies and doesn't quit, even gritting her teeth and doing some physical training with Goku. She also forces Oolong to teach her (and Goku) the transformation technique and later has Puar help fix the problems that the pig's teaching created, including the time limit. Despite her favorite form being a Falcon and capable of flight, she still doesn't quit trying to access her Ki. Eventually, a moment of rage allows her to harness it for the first time in order to fire a ki blast. Doing so totally wears her out as she lacks the stamina for it, and yet she continues working on it with even more tenacity now. She takes out one of the Rabbit Mafia goons by herself with a [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Spirit Gun]] that does tire her, but not lay her out with exhaustion. By the end of the first chapter, she actually manages to fly for a little bit, accomplishing what had been her early goal.
** Goku is also one even compared to his canon counterpart. He is already capable of flight and ki blasts. He also learns the transformation technique but admits that Bulma is better than him.



* AdaptationalIntelligence: Since he never got brain damage, Goku is more ignorant than stupid and is quick to point out the flaws in Bulma's original wish.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Bulma is less of a SpoiledBrat than she was in early Dragonball canon. That in combination with some CharacterDevelopment and some inklings of self doubt over her wish means she happily agrees to help Turtle get back to the ocean rather than complaining about the detour.

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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Since he never got brain damage, Goku is AdaptationExpansion: Rather than just an odd quirk that's little more ignorant than stupid a RunningGag, Launch changing personality and appearance when she sneezes is quick to point out eventually explained by Baba who discovers the flaws woman has two souls living in Bulma's original wish.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Bulma is less of a SpoiledBrat than she was in early Dragonball canon. That in combination with some CharacterDevelopment and some inklings of self doubt over her wish means she happily agrees to help Turtle get back to
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* AdaptationalBadass:
** Bulma is well on her way to becoming one; first she starts doing meditation to learn how to access her ki for the sole purpose of learning how to [[MundaneUtility fly without assistance.]] Despite her effort, she remains unable to access it because of how little Ki she has. She then shows some light {{Determinator}} tendencies and doesn't quit, even gritting her teeth and doing some physical training with Goku. She also forces Oolong to teach her (and Goku) the transformation technique and later has Puar help fix the problems that the pig's teaching created, including the time limit. Despite her favorite form being a Falcon and capable of flight, she still doesn't quit trying to access her Ki. Eventually, a moment of rage allows her to harness it for the first time in order to fire a ki blast. Doing so totally wears her out as she lacks the stamina for it, and yet she continues working on it with even more tenacity now. She takes out one of the Rabbit Mafia goons by herself with a [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Spirit Gun]] that does tire her, but not lay her out with exhaustion. By the end of the first chapter, she actually manages to fly for a little bit, accomplishing what had been her early goal.
** Goku is also one even compared to his canon counterpart. He is already capable of flight and ki blasts. He also learns the transformation technique but admits that Bulma is better than him.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Since he never got brain damage, Goku is more ignorant than stupid and is quick to point out the flaws in Bulma's original wish.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Bulma is less of a SpoiledBrat than she was in early Dragonball canon. That in combination with some CharacterDevelopment and some inklings of self doubt over her wish means she happily agrees to help Turtle get back to the ocean rather than complaining about the detour.


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* {{Determinator}}: Despite both versions functionally being completely untrained civilians, Launch sticks through Roshi's training. Blue Launch is stated as outright refusing to give up while her blonde counterpart simply refuses to give up before her other self does.


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* GeniusBruiser: Bulma is able to duplicate the Saiyan space armor with only moderate trouble, despite the material being decades if not centuries ahead of earth's technology. At the same time, she also trains hard enough that she's stronger than even Krillin, though still weaker than Goku.


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* HiddenDepths: Both versions of Launch enjoy physics, something Bulma lampshades.


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* TookALevelInBadass:
** Bulma by becoming a saiyan then joining Goku for training under Master Roshi. By the end of their training, she's physically stronger than Krillin.
** Launch also undergoes training with Master Roshi. While she's the weakest of the quartet, she still completes Roshi's impossible challenge of moving a giant boulder.
* TrainingFromHell: Roshi's training, as per canon. Unlike canon, he has two untrained civilians doing it rather than just two genius martial artists. Just the first part of running the milk delivery has Blonde Launch slowly crawling up the steps by the time she finishes.
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** The Yamcha arc goes rather differently. During their first meeting, Goku wasn't hungry and as such was able to fight the bandit without any trouble and completely busts up his face. All the while, Bulma was doing meditative exercises. As such, her first encounter was actually when Yamcha was trying to sneak in their camper and accidentally peeked on her while she was showering. This in combination with his comically injured face - with her internally thinking he may actually have been handsome before Goku got though with him - obviously colored her thoughts about him. She considered him nothing more than a pervert and she blasted him through the window with her first ever Ki blast. Safe to say, she isn't considering a relationship with him any time soon.

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** The Yamcha arc goes rather differently. During their first meeting, Goku wasn't hungry and as such was able to fight the bandit without any trouble and completely busts up his face. All the while, Bulma was doing meditative exercises. As such, her first encounter was actually when Yamcha was trying to sneak in their camper and accidentally peeked on her while she was showering. This in combination with his comically injured face - with her internally thinking he may actually have been handsome before Goku got though through with him - obviously colored her thoughts about him. She considered him nothing more than a pervert and she blasted him through the window with her first ever Ki blast. Safe to say, she isn't considering a relationship with him any time soon.

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Like most of Primordial Vortex's recent fics, it is well known for being a {{Doorstopper}} right from the get go with the first chapter already having more than 40,000 words due to it encompassing the entirety of the Emperor Pilaf Saga.



* DoorStopper: Right from the first chapter the fic was 40,000+ words long as the author did the entire Pilaf saga. And due to the length of the franchise itself, there's no doubt that like ''{{Fanfic/Supernova|OnePiece}}'' it will be doing that same thing thus having a high word per chapter ratio.



* VoluntaryShapeShifting: Goku and Bulma both learn imperfect transformation magic from Oolong, then later fix the flaws in their transformations by studying under Puar.

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The major plot point is that Goku knows his birth name of Kakarot due to the fact that his parents, specifically his mother Gine, rewrote the Planet Baby programming to avoid his brainwashing, destructive instincts from coming forth as well as basic ki training, thus he never hit his head and forgot about his Saiyan heritage. This [[ForWantOfANail change]] snowballs that leads into several different changes on how characters interact with each other, especially Bulma.

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The major plot point is that Goku knows his birth name of Kakarot due to the fact that his parents, specifically his mother Gine, rewrote the Planet Baby programming to avoid his brainwashing, destructive instincts from coming forth as well as give him basic ki training, skills, thus he never hit his head and forgot about his Saiyan heritage. This [[ForWantOfANail change]] snowballs that leads into several different changes on how characters interact with each other, especially Bulma.
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* MythologyGag: As Goku is heavily based on [[Literature/JourneyToTheWest Sun Wukong]], he gains the ability to shapeshift relatively early in his adventure with Bulma.


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* SpottingTheThread: Except for Bulma, each shapeshifter has a quirk that gives away their transformation. Oolong can only transform for five minutes, Puar can't copy faces or hair, and Goku can't transform his tail or speak.


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* VoluntaryShapeShifting: Goku and Bulma both learn imperfect transformation magic from Oolong, then later fix the flaws in their transformations by studying under Puar.
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* ExactWords: Part of Mai's crude sense of humor. When Shu says he hasn't seen anywhere Goku and Bulma might be hiding "a ball" (meaning the last Dragon Ball), Mai suggests checking between Goku's legs.
* FingerGun: When facing the Rabbit Yakuza, Bulma points her finger like a gun and says "Bang" just before shooting a ki blast at them.
* FlippingTheBird: When Pilaf demands the last Dragon Ball, Bulma instead gives him the finger.


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* OlderThanTheyLook: Goku is fourteen but looks seven due to how Saiyans age.


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* TheTalk: Bulma has a woman from the village Oolong terrorized tell Goku about the birds and the bees. Though, because the woman doesn't realize Goku's a teenager, she only tells him of the physical differences between boys and girls and doesn't explain sex to him.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Bulma is less of a SpoiledBrat than she was in early Dragonball canon. That in combination with some CharacterDevelopment and some inklings of self doubt over her wish means she happily agrees help Turtle get back to the ocean rather than complaining about the detour.

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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Bulma is less of a SpoiledBrat than she was in early Dragonball canon. That in combination with some CharacterDevelopment and some inklings of self doubt over her wish means she happily agrees to help Turtle get back to the ocean rather than complaining about the detour.



** Due to Goku having somewhat better people skills than his canon counterpart he is able to gain a better rapport with Bulma, even giving a better reason as to why her wish for the ideal boyfriend is a wasteful. While it doesn't initially convince her, it does create a chink in her armor that eventually does grow into a minor HeelRealization as to how petty she is being with that kind of wish. Especially when Goku remarks how he would wish to know his birth family.

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** Due to Goku having somewhat better people skills than his canon counterpart he is able to gain a better rapport with Bulma, even giving a better reason as to why her wish for the ideal boyfriend is a wasteful. While it doesn't initially convince her, it does create a chink in her armor that eventually does grow into a minor HeelRealization as to how petty she is being with that kind of wish. Especially when Goku remarks how he would wish to know his birth family.



** The Yamcha arc goes rather differently, during their first meeting, Goku wasn't hungry and as such was able to fight the bandit without any trouble and completely busts up his face. All the while, Bulma was doing meditative exercises. As such, her first encounter was actually when Yamcha was trying to sneak in their camper and accidentally peeked on her while she was showering. This in combination with his comically injured face - with her internally thinking he may actually have been handsome before Goku got though with him - obviously colored her thoughts about him. She considered him nothing more than a pervert and she blasted him through the window with her first ever Ki blast. Safe to say, she isn't considering a relationship with him any time soon.

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** The Yamcha arc goes rather differently, during differently. During their first meeting, Goku wasn't hungry and as such was able to fight the bandit without any trouble and completely busts up his face. All the while, Bulma was doing meditative exercises. As such, her first encounter was actually when Yamcha was trying to sneak in their camper and accidentally peeked on her while she was showering. This in combination with his comically injured face - with her internally thinking he may actually have been handsome before Goku got though with him - obviously colored her thoughts about him. She considered him nothing more than a pervert and she blasted him through the window with her first ever Ki blast. Safe to say, she isn't considering a relationship with him any time soon.



* BlessedWithSuck: Subverted, initially, while trying to meditate, Bulma learns that her vast intelligence means that she can't fully empty her mind due to all the ideas she has in her head so instead, she works around it by instead focusing on one invention and using that focus to gain the same results.

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* BlessedWithSuck: Subverted, initially, Subverted. Initially, while trying to meditate, Bulma learns that her vast intelligence means that she can't fully empty her mind due to all the ideas she has in her head so instead, she works around it by instead focusing on one invention and using that focus to gain the same results.



* DoorStopper: right from the first chapter the fic was 40,000+ words long as the author did the entire Pilaf saga. And due to the length of the franchise itself, there's no doubt that like ''{{Fanfic/Supernova|OnePiece}}'' it will be doing that same thing thus having a high word per chapter ratio.

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* DoorStopper: right Right from the first chapter the fic was 40,000+ words long as the author did the entire Pilaf saga. And due to the length of the franchise itself, there's no doubt that like ''{{Fanfic/Supernova|OnePiece}}'' it will be doing that same thing thus having a high word per chapter ratio.



* HaremGenre: Explicitly stated in the story's summary that the fic will be have a harem.

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* HaremGenre: Explicitly stated in the story's summary that the fic will be have a harem.



* LonelyRichKid: (Along with IntelligenceEqualsIsolation and apparently being a DudeMagnet back in West City) has made Bulma rather separated from her peers. Most who befriend her are either after her money, body or both. Her female classmates also were petty and two-faced. This backstory does serve to somewhat justify her wish for the perfect boyfriend.

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* LonelyRichKid: (Along Along with IntelligenceEqualsIsolation and apparently being a DudeMagnet back in West City) City, has made Bulma rather separated from her peers. Most who befriend her are either after her money, body or both. Her female classmates also were petty and two-faced. This backstory does serve to somewhat justify her wish for the perfect boyfriend.



* ProperlyParanoid: After Yamcha gives Bulma and Goku a new car as an apology for seeing Bulma nude the previous night, Bulma inspects it and finds a hidden tracking device. She removes the device, has Goku fly them in completely the wrong direction, and leaves it for Yamcha to find with a very rude letter before they go towards the right direction.
* ShipSinking: Yamcha (accidentally) spying on Bulma naked then attempting to use his apology to track her down and (presumably) steal the dragonballs from her and Goku permanently kills any budding interest she may have had in the bandit.

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* ProperlyParanoid: After Yamcha gives Bulma and Goku a new car as an apology for seeing Bulma nude the previous night, Bulma inspects it and finds a hidden tracking device. She removes the device, has Goku fly them in a completely the wrong direction, and leaves it for Yamcha to find with a very rude letter before they go towards the right direction.
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* ShipSinking: Yamcha (accidentally) spying on Bulma naked then attempting to use his apology to track her down and (presumably) steal the dragonballs Dragon Balls from her and Goku permanently kills any budding interest she may have had in the bandit.



* WhamLine: After Bulma makes a wish on the Dragonballs to keep Pilaf from getting it, she passes out in pain and is brought to a cell to await her execution, when Shu notices something.

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* WhamLine: After Bulma makes a wish on the Dragonballs Dragon Balls to keep Pilaf from getting it, she passes out in pain and is brought to a cell to await her execution, when Shu notices something.



* WhatIsThisFeeling: After getting TheTalk, Goku begins to feel funny around Bulma, especially when he sees her in certain clothing indicating that he's starting to feel sexual attraction.

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* WhatIsThisFeeling: After getting TheTalk, Goku begins to feel funny around Bulma, especially when he sees her in certain clothing clothing, indicating that he's starting to feel a sexual attraction.attraction towards her.



* WorfHadTheFlu: Goku is considerably stronger than canon, including knowing how to fly and use ki attacks before meeting Bulma. However, when the Pilaf gang steal the dragon balls, they also steal almost all of Goku's and Bulma's supplies. By the time Goku and Bulma are captured in Pilaf's castle, Goku's only had a single sandwich to eat in the last day and a half, leaving him too weak to do anything after blasting a hole in their cell. As a result, Bulma has to save the day by stealing Pilaf's wish.

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* WorfHadTheFlu: Goku is considerably stronger than canon, including knowing how to fly and use ki attacks before meeting Bulma. However, when the Pilaf gang steal the dragon balls, Dragon Balls, they also steal almost all of Goku's and Bulma's supplies. By the time Goku and Bulma are captured in Pilaf's castle, Goku's only had a single sandwich to eat in the last day and a half, leaving him too weak to do anything after blasting a hole in their cell. As a result, Bulma has to save the day by stealing Pilaf's wish.

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