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* MonsterSobStory: [[spoiler: Shukkaku's story.]]

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* NecessaryEvil: Naruto, in the end. [[spoiler:Orochimaru as well.]]

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* ~~NecessaryEvil:~~ NecessarilyEvil: Naruto, in the end. [[spoiler:Orochimaru as well.]]

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\nThis fic is now completed.

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** [[spoiler:By the end of the fic every named major character is dead with few exceptions like Naruto and Sakura.]]

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* TheBadGuyWins: [[spoiler:Orochimaru used Naruto in order to do it, but he got what he wanted in the end.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Peace has been brought about to do it nearly every named character died.]]

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* NecessaryEvil: Naruto, in the end.

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* NecessaryEvil: Naruto, in the end. [[spoiler:Orochimaru as well.]]

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* OutGambitted: [[spoiler: Orochimaru managed to get around all the precautions the Hokage and Danzo set into place by '''not''' attacking Konoha but its allies instead while Kabuto got Sasuke's eyes and samples. Kyuubi outsmarted the seal and Naruto outsmarted him.]]

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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Orochimaru and Naruto. [[spoiler:Both wanted peace in the end and both got it.]]

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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Hinata and Ayame and other minor characters who weren't featured in the final arc of the stories. The Author leaves it up to the readers to decide on their own.

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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: The author mentioned this outright and has so far killed off Teuchi, Ino, Tazuna, Gaara, Tenten (GuttedLikeAFish), Sakura's Parents, Hiruzen, Hidan, Yamato, Obito, Jiraya, Kabuto, and Aoba.]]

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* NecessaryEvil: Naruto, in the end.

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** Naruto versus everyone at the Peace Talks.

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** [[spoiler: Sakura has to do this a lot. It has only made her sanity worse.]]

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* ThroughTheEyesOfMadness: Mostly with Naruto[[spoiler:, but Sakura in chapter 29 is disturbing.]]

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* ThroughTheEyesOfMadness: Mostly with Naruto[[spoiler:, but Sakura in chapter 29 is disturbing. Even more so later on.]]

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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler: Naruto kills every child, down to a newborn, personally in chapter 44.]]

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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler: Naruto kills every child, down to a newborn, personally in chapter 44.]]
** [[spoiler: Sakura in 57.]]

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* FamousLastWords: "''I'd wager my life on it.''" [[spoiler: Aoba, just before taking the mission that would kill him.]]

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* BodyHorror: What Orochimaru does to his experiments.

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* SecretTestOfCharacter: [[spoiler: The mining village mission of chapter 44.]]

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* SecretTestOfCharacter: [[spoiler: The mining village mission of chapter 44. MoralEventHorizon for Naruto.]]

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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Ami and the Kusa and Leaf Genin "Killed" during the first test. Naruto faked his own and became a missing-nin.]]

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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Ami and the Kusa and Leaf Genin "Killed" during the first test. Danzo faked his own in the front lines to infiltrate the Land of the Sky. Naruto faked his own and became a missing-nin.]]
* FalseCrucible: [[spoiler: The Chuunin First Exam for ''some'' Genin.]]

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* SecretTestOfCharacter: [[spoiler: The mining village mission of chapter 44.]]

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* EveryManHasHisPrice: [[spoiler: Naruto managed to buy off Kakuzu for Fuu by giving him the Rasengan, outright betraying the village.]]

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* EveryManHasHisPrice: [[spoiler: Naruto managed to buy off Kakuzu for Fuu by giving him the Rasengan, outright betraying the ~~village.~~village, which bit him in the ass.]]

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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Ami and the Kusa and Leaf Genin "Killed" during the first test.]]

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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Ami and the Kusa and Leaf Genin "Killed" during the first test. Naruto faked his own and became a missing-nin.]]

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* LeaveNoWitnesses: [[spoiler: Naruto kills an entire village after being forced to use his Shadow Clones to save them in the first place.]]

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** Orochimaru too.

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* NeverMyFault: Naruto has, sadly, developed a case of this.

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** [[spoiler: Chapter 52 has Naruto a missing-nin after having been called out on betraying the village and had his death faked.]]

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* BreakThemByTalking: The Kyuubi does this. A lot.

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* AdaptationDyeJob: Naruto has black hair here.
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: The author mentioned this outright and has so far killed off Teuchi, Ino, Tazuna, Gaara, Tenten (GuttedLikeAFish), Sakura's Parents, Hiruzen, Hidan, Yamato, and possibly Ayame and Aoba.]]

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* AdaptationDyeJob: Naruto has black hair ~~here.~~
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* AfterTheEnd
* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: The author mentioned this outright and has so far killed off Teuchi, Ino, Tazuna, Gaara, Tenten (GuttedLikeAFish), Sakura's Parents, Hiruzen, Hidan, Yamato, Obito and possibly Ayame and Aoba.]]

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* ImAHumanitarian: When ever the Kyuubi takes over, he has a tendency to turn Naruto into a cannibal. Also, as part of his contract with the Carron Crows he must feast with them.

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* ImAHumanitarian: When ever the Kyuubi takes over, he has a tendency to turn Naruto into a cannibal. Also, as part of his contract with the ~~Carron~~ Carrion Crows he must feast with them.

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* SympathyForTheHero: [[spoiler: Kakuzu has a surprising amount of this for Naruto. Won't stop him from collecting him in a few years, but still.]]

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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: The author mentioned this outright and has so far killed off Teuchi, Ino, Tazuna, Gaara, Tenten (GuttedLikeAFish), Sakura's Parents, Hiruzen, and possibly Ayame and Aoba.]]

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* EveryManHasHisPrice: [[spoiler: Naruto managed to buy off Kakuzu for Fuu by giving him the Rasengan, outright betraying the village.]]

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* ImAHumanitarian: [[spoiler: When ever the Kyuubi takes over, he has a tendency to turn Naruto into a cannibal.]]

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* ImAHumanitarian: ~~[[spoiler:~~ When ever the Kyuubi takes over, he has a tendency to turn Naruto into a ~~cannibal.]]~~cannibal. Also, as part of his contract with the Carron Crows he must feast with them.

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* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler: Chapter 46 has Hidan killed and Naruto betraying the village by giving a member of Akatsuki the Rasengan after he killed Yamato in exchange for Fuu, marking the end of his innocence after everything. At the same time, Sakura quits Anbu and awaits him to answer if he loved her or not.]]

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* WorthyOpponent: [[spoiler: Kakuzu is expecting this of Naruto when he returns for him.]]

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** [[spoiler: ILied: Turns out that was a lie and he tells many others to benefit himself.]]

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** [[spoiler: ILied: Turns out that was a lie and he tells many others to benefit himself.]]
* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler: Naruto kills every child, down to a newborn, personally in chapter 44.]]

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* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler: Kushina.]]

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* BackToBackBadasses: Team Thirteen's general group tactic involves much back-to-back.

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* InTheBack: Karin launches senbon needles to Naruto in Chapter 39 to prevent him from running away.

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* FireForgedFriends: Team Thirteen.

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* DuelToTheDeath: [[spoiler: Naruto Versus Gaara. Naruto wins.]]

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* AttackPatternAlpha: Aoba's ''Contingency'' book.

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* CombatSadomasochist: Karin, apparently.

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* TooKinkyToTorture: Karin finds pain synonymous with love.

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Orochimaru spares Hebi, an orphan girl who reminds him of Anko. [[spoiler: then again, considering what we gleam of Anko's own training, maybe it wasn't a good thing at all. He ends up killing her and doesn't even seem aware he did so in the end.]]

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Orochimaru spares Hebi, an orphan girl who reminds him of Anko. [[spoiler: then again, considering what we gleam of Anko's own training, maybe it wasn't a good thing at all. He ~~ends up killing her and doesn't even seem aware he did so in the end.~~also shows genuine remorse for Sarutobi's death.]]

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Orochimaru spares Hebi, an orphan girl who reminds him of Anko. [[spoiler: then again, considering what we gleam of Anko's own training, maybe it wasn't a good thing at all.]]

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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: The author mentioned this outright and has so far killed off Teuchi, Ino, Tazuna, Gaara, Tenten (GuttedLikeAFish), Sakura's Parents and possibly Ayame and Aoba.]]

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* AnyoneCanDie: [[spoiler: The author mentioned this outright and has so far killed off Teuchi, Ino, Tazuna, Gaara, Tenten (GuttedLikeAFish), Sakura's ~~Parents~~ Parents, Hiruzen, and possibly Ayame and Aoba.]]

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** [[spoiler: Kabuto ripped out Sasuke's eyes in Chapter 31. In the following chapter Hiruzen rips out Danzo's Sharingan and crushes it.]]

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** [[spoiler: Kabuto ripped out Sasuke's eyes in Chapter 31. In the following chapter Hiruzen rips out Danzo's Sharingan and crushes it. In chapter 37 Anko takes the one in his arm.]]

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* GreenEyedMonster: Sakura gets this bad in Chapter 23.
* HarmfulHealing : While this is already presented in canon, the drawback Naruto's healing factor does greater damage because [[spoiler: he has been using more of Kyuubi's chakra than in canon. According to the Kyuubi, he's already lost about 90 years of his life.]]

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* GreenEyedMonster: Sakura gets this bad in after Chapter ~~23.~~
23. Extends towards just about any woman showing a remote interest in Naruto, including their Sensei.
* HarmfulHealing : While this is already presented in canon, the drawback Naruto's healing factor does greater damage because [[spoiler: he has been using more of Kyuubi's chakra than in canon. According to the Kyuubi, he's already lost about 90 years of his life. But that was a lie.]]

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** [[spoiler: Turns out that was a lie.]]

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** [[spoiler: ILied: Turns out that was a ~~lie.~~lie and he tells many others to benefit himself.]]

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* BeneathTheMask: Who doesn't have one in the shinobi world?

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* HarmfulHealing : While this is already presented in canon, the drawback Naruto's healing factor does greater damamge because [[spoiler: he has been using more of Kyuubi's chakra than in canon. According to Kyubi, he's already lost about 90 years of his life.]]

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* HarmfulHealing : While this is already presented in canon, the drawback Naruto's healing factor does greater ~~damamge~~ damage because [[spoiler: he has been using more of Kyuubi's chakra than in canon. According to ~~Kyubi,~~ the Kyuubi, he's already lost about 90 years of his life.]]

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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Kabuto ripped out Sasuke's eyes in Chapter 31. In the following chapter Hiruzen rips out Danzo's Sharingan and crushes it.]]

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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: When Sakura is tricked into torturing Naruto, she stabs and rips out his eye with a kunai.]]
**[[spoiler: Kabuto ripped out Sasuke's eyes in Chapter 31. In the following chapter Hiruzen rips out Danzo's Sharingan and crushes it.]]

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* FromBadtoWorse

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** [[spoiler: Turns out that was a lie.]]

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** [[spoiler: Turns out that was a lie.]]

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