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* BreakingSpeech: Fate makes an [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome awesome]] one toward [[spoiler:Precia]] when she try to intercept her. [[spoiler:[[TropesAreTools In a way,]] [[LikeMotherLikeDaughter she still her daughter,]] after all.]]
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* BreakingSpeech: Fate makes an [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome awesome]] one toward [[spoiler:Precia]] when she try to intercept her. [[spoiler:[[TropesAreTools [[spoiler:[[Administrivia/TropesAreTools In a way,]] [[LikeMotherLikeDaughter she still her daughter,]] after all.]]
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* OneNightStandPregnancy: Megane states that her daughter was born from a one night stand with a coworker. The implied father ([[spoiler:Zest]]) is unaware that Lutecia is his child, and presumably never learns the truth given the fact that [[spoiler:the fic takes place less than a year before his canon death.]]
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** In the spinoff, there's a one-sided variant between Susanoo and Teana; he likes her just fine, but she hates his guts.
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* BreakingSpeech: Fate makes an [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome awesome]] one toward [[spoiler:Precia]] when she try to intercept her. [[spoiler:[[TropesAreTools In a way,]] [[LikeMotherLikeDaughter she still her daughter,]] after all.]]
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* BreakingSpeech: Fate makes an [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome awesome]] one toward [[spoiler:Precia]] when she try to intercept her. [[spoiler:[[TropesAreTools In a way,]] [[LikeMotherLikeDaughter she still her daughter,]] after all.]]
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* [[IsThisWhatAngerFeelsLike Is This What Hatred Feels Like?]]: Yuuno Scrya discovers true hatred for the first time in his young life when confronted with a pirate who broke into an ancient ruin and, upon discovering wondrous artifacts of a culture older than recorded history, attempted to SELL them on the black market. It's only afterwards, with introspection [[PlayedForLaughs and an amusing bout of ranting]], [[CrowningMomentOfFunny that this feeling fully crystallizes]].
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* [[IsThisWhatAngerFeelsLike Is This What Hatred Feels Like?]]: Yuuno Scrya discovers true hatred for the first time in his young life when confronted with a pirate who broke into an ancient ruin and, upon discovering wondrous artifacts of a culture older than recorded history, attempted to SELL them on the black market. It's only afterwards, with introspection [[PlayedForLaughs and an amusing bout of ranting]], [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments that this feeling fully crystallizes]].
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: [[spoiler: ''Lunatique''. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome It didn't work.]]]]
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: [[spoiler: ''Lunatique''. [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome It didn't work.]]]]
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---> Signum seemed a little puzzled by her expression. "Is something wrong? [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Is this about the sheathe? Because I'm informed Miss Atenza has the parts needed to replace it,]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny and the order should be done within the week, so it isn't too great a concern]]."
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---> Signum seemed a little puzzled by her expression. "Is something wrong? [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Is this about the sheathe? Because I'm informed Miss Atenza has the parts needed to replace it,]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments and the order should be done within the week, so it isn't too great a concern]]."
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* VolleyingInsults: Susanoo and Vita get into a good one in Chapter 24, culminating in the former [[CrowningMomentOfFunny dubbing the latter]] [[BuffySpeak 'Smally McSmall']].
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* VolleyingInsults: Susanoo and Vita get into a good one in Chapter 24, culminating in the former [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments dubbing the latter]] [[BuffySpeak 'Smally McSmall']].
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*** In chapter 37: "''[[SpottingTheThread Know how]] [[FightingFingerprint a man fights,]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome and you will know that man.]]''"
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*** In chapter 37: "''[[SpottingTheThread Know how]] [[FightingFingerprint a man fights,]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome and you will know that man.]]''"
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** Of course, in the case of Nanoha, it's ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny accidental]]'' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny snark]].
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** Of course, in the case of Nanoha, it's ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny ''[[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments accidental]]'' [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments snark]].
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* SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:Using a spell that [[LetsYouAndHimFight messes up the target's perception]] [[FriendOrFoe to make friends look like enemies]] on... ''[[{{Pantheon/Friendship}} Nanoha]]''?]] Yeah, [[SarcasmMode good luck with that.]]
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* SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:Using a spell that [[LetsYouAndHimFight messes up the target's perception]] [[FriendOrFoe to make friends look like enemies]] on... ''[[{{Pantheon/Friendship}} Nanoha]]''?]] ''Nanoha''? Yeah, [[SarcasmMode good luck with that.]]
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* PossessingADeadBody: Chapter 29 reveals that [[spoiler:Enlil is actually inhabiting Alicia's corpse. It also crosses over with IHaveYourWife, since she's basically using Alicia's body as collateral to ensure Precia's loyalty.]]
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** [[spoiler:Susanoo, despite his combat experience, totally sucks at KingdomHearts3D. Though to be fair, it ''was'' the [[ThatOneBoss Wargoyle.]]]]
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** [[spoiler:Susanoo, despite his combat experience, totally sucks at KingdomHearts3D.''VideoGame/KingdomHearts3D''. Though to be fair, it ''was'' the [[ThatOneBoss Wargoyle.]]]]
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-->"Shhhhhhhhh! [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong If she explains the plan,]] [[InvokedTrope it takes all the magic out of it,]]" Amy said cheerfully. "Trust me, [[GenreSavvy I've worked out the process]] [[TaughtByExperience by this point.]]"
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-->"Shhhhhhhhh! [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong If she explains the plan,]] [[InvokedTrope it takes all the magic out of it,]]" Amy said cheerfully. "Trust me, [[GenreSavvy I've worked out the process]] process [[TaughtByExperience by this point.]]"
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* ShoutOut: One of Tsukuyomi's more powerful and intelligent summons is a serpentine humanoid named [[MaiHIME Kiyohime]], with an attack called [[Manga/SoulEater Vector Arrow]]. Granted, Kiyohime is a PublicDomainCharacter, but the other one is unmistakable.
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* ShoutOut: One of Tsukuyomi's more powerful and intelligent summons is a serpentine humanoid named [[MaiHIME [[Anime/MaiHIME Kiyohime]], with an attack called [[Manga/SoulEater Vector Arrow]]. Granted, Kiyohime is a PublicDomainCharacter, but the other one is unmistakable.
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* LotsaPeopleTryToDunIt: PlayedForLaughs in the spin-off ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9485532/1/Fate-T-Harlaown-and-the-Case-of-the-Murderous-Murder Fate T. Harlaown and the Case of the Murderous Murder]]''. [[spoiler: Every single suspect thinks that they succeeded in killing the governor, but he actually choked to death on a nut.]]
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* UnspokenPlanGuarantee: Lindy seems to be DangerouslyGenreSavvy enough about this. Lampshaded more than once:
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* UnspokenPlanGuarantee: Lindy seems to be DangerouslyGenreSavvy smart enough about this. Lampshaded more than once:
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There is also a spin-off fic taking place in the same 'verse. "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9485532/1/Fate-T-Harlaown-and-the-Case-of-the-Murderous-Murder Fate T. Harlaown and the Case of the Murderous Murder]]" takes place some point after ''[=StrikerS=]'', and involves Fate and Teana being sent to investigate the mysterious death of a planetary governor. However, Susanoo decides to join in and 'help' with the investigation in his own special way. Soon, the trio get embroiled in a complex plot of intrigue, numerous suspects, and names (such as kindly old Dr. von-Murder and his wildly successful line of household robotic servants called [=KillBots=]) that apparently "[[RunningGag mean something different in the local language]]". [[spoiler: Though considering the ending of Infinity, it seems that the spin-off is an alternate universe.]]
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There is also a spin-off fic taking place in the same 'verse. "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9485532/1/Fate-T-Harlaown-and-the-Case-of-the-Murderous-Murder Fate T. Harlaown and the Case of the Murderous Murder]]" takes place some point after ''[=StrikerS=]'', and involves Fate and Teana being sent to investigate the mysterious death of a planetary governor. However, Susanoo decides to join in and 'help' with the investigation in his own special way. Soon, the trio get embroiled in a complex plot of intrigue, numerous suspects, and names (such as kindly old Dr. von-Murder and his wildly successful line of household robotic servants called [=KillBots=]) that apparently "[[RunningGag mean something different in the local language]]". [[spoiler: Though considering the ending of Infinity, it seems that the spin-off is an alternate universe.]]
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* MeleeATrois: Between [[TheFederation TSAB proper]] and [[TheRemnant Infinity Empire]] [[spoiler:and the cover TSAB operation [[OutsideContextVillain Section]] [[RightHandVersusLeftHand Black]].]]
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* MeleeATrois: Between [[TheFederation TSAB proper]] and [[TheRemnant Infinity Empire]] [[spoiler:and the cover TSAB operation [[OutsideContextVillain [[OutsideContextProblem Section]] [[RightHandVersusLeftHand Black]].]]
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* AntiVillain: In the grand tradition of Nanoha, every antagonist is one. Some more than others. [[spoiler: Except for the last three guardian gods... at least for now.]]
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* AntiVillain: In the grand tradition of Nanoha, every antagonist is one. Some more than others. [[spoiler: Except for the last three guardian gods... at least for now.gods.]]
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* {{Expy}}: Tsukuyomi bears more then a passing resemblance to another [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion blue haired girl]]. And [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Who The Hell Do You Think Susanoo Is Like!]] Also, Amaterasu exhibits some similarity to [[MahouSenseiNegima a certain other Tsukuyomi]]...
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* {{Expy}}: Tsukuyomi bears more then a passing resemblance to another [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion blue haired girl]]. And [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Who The Hell Do You Think Susanoo Is Like!]] Also, Amaterasu exhibits some similarity to [[MahouSenseiNegima [[Manga/MahouSenseiNegima a certain other Tsukuyomi]]...
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* {{Expy}}: Tsukuyomi bears more then a passing resemblance to another [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion blue haired girl]]. And [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann Who The Hell Do You Think Susanoo Is Like!]] Also, Amaterasu exhibits some similarity to [[MahouSenseiNegima a certain other Tsukuyomi]]...
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* {{Expy}}: Tsukuyomi bears more then a passing resemblance to another [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion blue haired girl]]. And [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann [[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Who The Hell Do You Think Susanoo Is Like!]] Also, Amaterasu exhibits some similarity to [[MahouSenseiNegima a certain other Tsukuyomi]]...
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: Discussed by Fate, Suzuka and Arisa:
--> '''Arisa:''' We could sell tickets. Combat therapy. Nanoha will smack you around for five minutes, and then all your problems will just solve themselves.
--> '''Fate:''' It's not that simple, Arisa. She also asks what you're trying to do, and then she offers to be your friend.
--> '''Arisa:''' We could sell tickets. Combat therapy. Nanoha will smack you around for five minutes, and then all your problems will just solve themselves.
--> '''Fate:''' It's not that simple, Arisa. She also asks what you're trying to do, and then she offers to be your friend.
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* DefeatMeansFriendship: DefeatMeansFriendship:
** Discussed by Fate, Suzuka and Arisa:
--> '''Arisa:''' --->'''Arisa:''' We could sell tickets. Combat therapy. Nanoha will smack you around for five minutes, and then all your problems will just solve themselves. \n--> \\
'''Fate:''' It's not that simple, Arisa. She also asks what you're trying to do, and then she offers to be your friend.
** Discussed by Fate, Suzuka and Arisa:
'''Fate:''' It's not that simple, Arisa. She also asks what you're trying to do, and then she offers to be your friend.
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A ''LyricalNanoha'' fanfic written by [[Tropers/{{Moczo}} Andy Moczo]] (author of the pure crack that is ''FanFic/UninvitedGuests'') taking a shot at writing an action story. Set between the second and third seasons of the ''Nanoha'' anime, ''Infinity'' is a story that, in the author's own words, [[AlternateUniverseFic 'plays fast and loose with canon']] by inserting an entire new major case into a time when canonically nothing happened, yet still makes a fair effort to remain OriginalFlavor.
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A ''LyricalNanoha'' ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' fanfic written by [[Tropers/{{Moczo}} Andy Moczo]] (author of the pure crack that is ''FanFic/UninvitedGuests'') taking a shot at writing an action story. Set between the second and third seasons of the ''Nanoha'' anime, ''Infinity'' is a story that, in the author's own words, [[AlternateUniverseFic 'plays fast and loose with canon']] by inserting an entire new major case into a time when canonically nothing happened, yet still makes a fair effort to remain OriginalFlavor.