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* BadassGrandma: Echo the Kadabra proves to be a formidable force as she effortlessly teleports May and Brendan deep into the cave and nearly takes out Astra after briefly mistaking her for a fellow human due to her disguise, and for a while Astra instinctually calls her “Grandma”.

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* BadassGrandma: Last Echo the Kadabra proves to be a formidable force as she effortlessly teleports May and Brendan deep into the cave and nearly takes out Astra after briefly mistaking her for a fellow human due to her disguise, and for a while Astra instinctually calls her “Grandma”.



* CordonBleughChef: While Astra is staying with Kadabra, Echo, she is given a stew that is made with Makuhita meat and when Astra comments on the taste, Echo laments that she couldn’t add any Zubat (part poison type) meat this time. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as it becomes clear that as far as food goes, Granite Cave hardly gives any options for meals she can provide her “grandchildren”.

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* CordonBleughChef: While Astra is staying with Kadabra, Last Echo, she is given a stew that is made with Makuhita meat and when Astra comments on the taste, Echo laments that she couldn’t add any Zubat (part poison type) meat this time. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as it becomes clear that as far as food goes, Granite Cave hardly gives any options for meals she can provide her “grandchildren”.
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** In Chapter 35, there’s a Mawile that the author seems to note as a reference to the fanfic [[Fanfic//ABackwardsSmile]].

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** In Chapter 35, there’s a Mawile that the author seems to note as a reference to the fanfic [[Fanfic//ABackwardsSmile]].'''A Backwards Smile'''.

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* BadassGrandma: A Kadabra from Granite Cave proves to be a formidable force as she effortlessly teleports May and Brendan deep into the cave and nearly takes out Astra after briefly mistaking her for a fellow human due to her disguise, and for a while Astra instinctually calls her “Grandma”.

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* BadassGrandma: A Echo the Kadabra from Granite Cave proves to be a formidable force as she effortlessly teleports May and Brendan deep into the cave and nearly takes out Astra after briefly mistaking her for a fellow human due to her disguise, and for a while Astra instinctually calls her “Grandma”.


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* CordonBleughChef: While Astra is staying with Kadabra, Echo, she is given a stew that is made with Makuhita meat and when Astra comments on the taste, Echo laments that she couldn’t add any Zubat (part poison type) meat this time. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as it becomes clear that as far as food goes, Granite Cave hardly gives any options for meals she can provide her “grandchildren”.


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** In Chapter 35, there’s a Mawile that the author seems to note as a reference to the fanfic [[Fanfic//ABackwardsSmile]].
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* BadassGrandma: A Kadabra from Granite Cave proves to be a formidable force as she effortlessly teleports May and Brendan deep into the cave and nearly takes out Astra after briefly mistaking her for a fellow human due to her disguise.

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* BadassGrandma: A Kadabra from Granite Cave proves to be a formidable force as she effortlessly teleports May and Brendan deep into the cave and nearly takes out Astra after briefly mistaking her for a fellow human due to her disguise.disguise, and for a while Astra instinctually calls her “Grandma”.
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* BadassGrandma: A Kadabra from Granite Cave proves to be a formidable force as she effortlessly teleports May and Brendan deep into the cave and nearly takes out Astra after briefly mistaking her for a fellow human due to her disguise.


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* PartyScattering: A fierce argument between Astra and her friends results in a very protective Kadabra “helping” Astra by teleporting May and Brendan into a random part of Granite Cave. Astra attempts to teleport to them, but instead ends up in said Kadabra’s home.
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* {{Wingdinglish}}: The Kadabra in Chapter 35 uses this a bit, seemingly when she's referring to names; hers translates to Last Echo, and she melancholically refers to another individual whose name was Depth Memory.

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* {{Wingdinglish}}: The Kadabra in Chapter 35 uses this a bit, seemingly when she's referring to names; hers translates to Last Echo, and she melancholically refers to another individual other individuals whose name was names were Depth Memory.Memory, Boulder Fist and Untold Intrigue.

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The work can be found on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 here]]), Website/RoyalRoad ([[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald here]]), Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ here]]), and Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ here]]), though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.

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The work can be found on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 here]]), Website/RoyalRoad ([[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald here]]), Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ here]]), and Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ here]]), though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.
respectively.[[note]]The story can also be found on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen here]], but updates have ceased as of Chapter 35 due to the site's restrictions.[[/note]]



** May's upbeat, determined, and food-loving personality from the games and anime is still present. But due to Norman being a selfish workaholic in this story, she's also belligerent, foul-mouthed, and both resistant to make new friends due to losing so many in the past and, at the same time, borderline obsessed with the ones she does have.
** Norman in the games was shown to be busy at his Gym to the point that he rarely came home, but nevertheless still had a close and loving relationship with his wife and child. In this story, he is and has always been a selfish workaholic who didn't slow his pace for his wife or daughter, repeatedly and uncaringly uprooting the family to face the League in other regions. And when he finally retired from traveling and they settled in Hoenn, he moved into the Petalburg Gym two towns over from his family's house. His relationship with his wife is unknown, but the one time he interacts with his daughter in this story, all he does is push the chore of helping Wally on her and then tell her to come back when she has four badges, when all she wanted was to talk to him.

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** May's upbeat, determined, and food-loving personality from the games and anime is still present. But due to Norman being a selfish workaholic in this story, she's also belligerent, foul-mouthed, and both resistant to make new friends due to losing so many in the past and, at the same time, simultaneously, borderline obsessed with the ones she does have.
** In the games, Norman in the games was shown to be busy at his Gym to the point that he rarely came home, home but nevertheless still had a close and loving relationship with his wife and child. In this story, he is and has always been a selfish workaholic who didn't slow his pace for his wife or daughter, repeatedly and uncaringly uprooting the family to face the League in other regions. And when he finally retired from traveling traveling, and they settled in Hoenn, he moved into the Petalburg Gym two towns over from his family's house. His relationship with his wife is unknown, but the one time he interacts with his daughter in this story, all he does is push the chore of helping Wally on her and then tell her to come back when she has four badges, when all she wanted was to talk to him.



** Norman in the games was a dedicated trainer and a loving husband and father. In this story, he's only a dedicated trainer, neglectful of his family bordering on abuse. His daughter May's opinion of him is poor, to put it lightly.
** While Max in the Anime is May's younger brother and the son of Norman, here he replaces the unnamed younger child of Professor Birch, making him Brendan's younger brother.
* AncestralWeapon: Astra's father was a guard of their village, a master with the spear. The day before Astra leaves on her journey, she brings the rusty spearhead to the smith, who reforges it into a knife for Astra to take with her.

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** Norman Norman, in the games games, was a dedicated trainer and a loving husband and father. In this story, he's only a dedicated trainer, neglectful of his family bordering on abuse. His To put it lightly, his daughter May's opinion of him is poor, to put it lightly.
poor.
** While Max in the Anime anime is May's younger brother and the son of Norman, Norman's son, here he replaces the unnamed younger child of Professor Birch, making him Brendan's younger brother.
* AncestralWeapon: Astra's father was a guard of their village, a master with the a spear. The day before Astra leaves on her journey, she brings the rusty spearhead to the smith, who reforges it into a knife for Astra to take with her.


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* ForcedSleep: Last Echo the Kadabra puts Astra to sleep in Chapter 35 when she sees that the Kirlia is absolutely exhausted. By way of psychic powers, she only sleeps for two hours, but is well-rested as though she were out for eight.
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The work can be found on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 here]]), Website/RoyalRoad ([[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald here]]), Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen here]]), Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ here]]), and Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ here]]), though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.

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The work can be found on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 here]]), Website/RoyalRoad ([[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald here]]), Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen here]]), Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ here]]), and Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ here]]), though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.
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The work can be found on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 here]]), Website/RoyalRoad ([[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald here]]), Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ here]]), and Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ here]]), though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.

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The work can be found on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 here]]), Website/RoyalRoad ([[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald here]]), Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ here]]), and Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ here]]), though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.
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The work can be found on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO]][[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 3]], [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald Royal Road]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen Fanfiction.net]], [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ Sufficient Velocity]], and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ Spacebattles]], though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.

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The work can be found on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO]][[http://archiveofourown.Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 3]], [[https://www.here]]), Website/RoyalRoad ([[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/32897/hyphen-pokemon-emerald Royal Road]], [[https://www.here]]), Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12210295/1/Hyphen Fanfiction.net]], [[https://forums.here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.9539/ Sufficient Velocity]], here]]), and [[https://forums.Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-r-s-e.312731/ Spacebattles]], here]]), though the author recommends [=AO3=] or Sufficient Velocity for proper formatting and discussion respectively.

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* ChekhovsGun: Astra's knife, reforged from her father's spearhead. She's had no reason to use it yet...



* CoverBlowingSuperpower: Astra's PsychicPowers, including telekinesis and telepathy, are potentially this. She avoids using most of her powers in public, only using telepathy to speak and disguising it as ventriloquism for normal conversation and musical direction for battling. Unfortunately, the ruse doesn't last: Pokémon experts like Professor Birch and Roxanne figure out her telepathy not long after meeting her, and Steven Stone sees through it the first time he hears her talk. Nobody has called her out on it yet, though, and Roxanne comes under the belief that Astra hides her abilities due to stigma associated with Psychic Humans.

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* CoverBlowingSuperpower: Astra's PsychicPowers, including telekinesis and telepathy, are potentially this. She avoids using most of her powers in public, only using telepathy to speak and disguising it as ventriloquism for normal conversation and musical direction for battling. Unfortunately, the ruse doesn't last: Pokémon experts like Professor Birch and Roxanne figure out her telepathy not long after meeting her, and Steven Stone sees through it the first time he hears her talk. Nobody has called her out on it yet, though, and Roxanne comes under the belief that Astra hides her abilities due to the stigma associated with Psychic Humans.
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* {{Wingdinglish}}: The Kadabra in Chapter 35 uses this a bit, seemingly when she's referring to names; hers translates to Last Echo, and melancholically refers to another individual whose name was Depth Memory.

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* {{Wingdinglish}}: The Kadabra in Chapter 35 uses this a bit, seemingly when she's referring to names; hers translates to Last Echo, and she melancholically refers to another individual whose name was Depth Memory.
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* {{Wingdinglish}}: The Kadabra in Chapter 35 uses this a bit, seemingly when she's referring to names; hers translates to Last Echo, and she seems to have lost a child in the past whose name was Depth Memory.

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* {{Wingdinglish}}: The Kadabra in Chapter 35 uses this a bit, seemingly when she's referring to names; hers translates to Last Echo, and she seems melancholically refers to have lost a child in the past another individual whose name was Depth Memory.
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* {{Wingdinglish}}: The Kadabra in Chapter 35 uses this a bit, seemingly when she's referring to names; hers translates to Last Echo, and she seems to have lost a child in the past whose name was Depth Memory.
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%%* ForWantOfANail: The actual "nail" hasn't been identified yet, although it has been hinted at.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 Hyphen]]'' is a {{Franchise/Pokemon}} fanfiction created by Dermonster.

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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3881578/chapters/8677237 Hyphen]]'' is a {{Franchise/Pokemon}} fanfiction FanFiction created by Dermonster.



Astra co-stars in another [[FanFic fanfic]], ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-emerald.312731/post-68679730 Backslash]]'', a crossover between ''Hyphen'' and ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-backwards-grin-pokemon-mawile-si.847723/ A Backwards Grin]]'' by Flairina. ''Backslash'' can also be found on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/a-backwards-grin-pokemon-mawile-si.66235/page-45#post-16278988 Sufficient Velocity]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27170635/chapters/66359743 AO3]].

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Astra co-stars in another [[FanFic fanfic]], fanfic, ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/hyphen-pokemon-emerald.312731/post-68679730 Backslash]]'', a crossover between ''Hyphen'' and ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-backwards-grin-pokemon-mawile-si.847723/ A Backwards Grin]]'' ''Fanfic/ABackwardsGrin'' by Flairina. ''Backslash'' can also be found on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/a-backwards-grin-pokemon-mawile-si.66235/page-45#post-16278988 Sufficient Velocity]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27170635/chapters/66359743 AO3]].



* InexplicablyIdenticalIndividuals: Subverted with Nurse Joys, as Astra finds out that it’s more of a title and one “Joy” is actually wearing a wig.

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* InexplicablyIdenticalIndividuals: Subverted with Nurse Joys, as Astra finds out that it’s it's more of a title and one “Joy” "Joy" is actually wearing a wig.
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* InexplicablyIdenticalIndividuals: Subverted with Nurse Joys, as Astra finds out that it’s more of a title and one “Joy” is actually wearing a wig.

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* RageBreakingPoint: Astra hits this after her loss against Brawly and being told by him, Brendan and May that she should get some rest. The result is a screaming fit aimed at her friends as she insists on just getting the letter delivered to Steven over going to the hotel to rest.

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* RacistGrandma: PlayedForDrama with an old man on Dewford Island who accuses [[spoiler:the accidental destruction of the forest near Rustboro caused by Astra]] on the people of Kanto. He even starts to make a suggestion of dumping Kantonians into Mt. Chimney.
* RageBreakingPoint: Astra hits this after her loss against Brawly and being told by him, Brendan and May that she should get some rest. The result is a screaming fit aimed at her friends as she insists on just getting the letter delivered to Steven over going to the hotel to rest.
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* TheEmpath: Astra, obviously. [[spoiler: This sadly proves to be a detriment when she ends up in a room where a hate-filled argument breaks out.]]
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* HarderThanHard: Played with for Astra, as her declaration that she would become the next champion results in both Roxanne (in retrospect) and Brawly making her gym challenges more difficult to determine if she is truly worthy of becoming the next champion.
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* NiceGuy: Brendan is the first human that Astra becomes friends with and is one of the friendliest and most supportive members of the cast.

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* NiceGuy: Brendan is the first human that Astra becomes friends with and is one of the friendliest and most supportive members of the cast. [[spoiler:This is later played with as while he’s quite friendly, both to his friends and his Pokémon, Astra, during a bad moment, remembers his interactions with Pokémon being somewhat [[CondescendingCompassion condescending and clinical]]. Whether this is real or if her memories are being recontextualized in a negative light, however, is not certain.]]
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** Astra’s fight against Brawly ends up being a pretty bad loss for Astra, but she manages to do well enough to knock out one of Brawly’s team of three and get a few hits in on his second despite being extremely unfocused and strained both physically and mentally. Brawly even praises her attempt, but insists she take some time to rest so she’s in a better place the next time they fight.


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* OutOfCharacterIsSeriousBusiness: While May at first harshly criticizes her for her loss against Brawly, she backs down and even insists that she should get some rest after noticing how worn out and stressed she is.


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* RageBreakingPoint: Astra hits this after her loss against Brawly and being told by him, Brendan and May that she should get some rest. The result is a screaming fit aimed at her friends as she insists on just getting the letter delivered to Steven over going to the hotel to rest.
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* SurferSpeak: Brawly, to general bewilderment. One sample spoken to Brendan:

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* ProperlyParanoid: Astra is scared to death of sharing her secret with anyone, rightfully worried by everything she's seen and heard that if her friends found out she was a Pokémon, they would see her as less than human and undeserving of the courtesy of one.


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* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism: Astra faces this throughout everything that she sees. Humans are capable of so much creation and growth. But they're also capable of war.
** The cynicism is strongest in Chapter 34, where in the midst of exhaustion, her mind keeps flashing back to memories of the worst that can happen, practically poisoning her against Brendan and May with the knowledge that their friendship is built on lies and the fact that people seem to see Pokémon as less than human. Accompanying the memories is a voice [[spoiler:implied to be the shade of the Ancestor Gardevoir]] quietly insisting that trusting humans will only get her hurt:
-->''Remember. And never forget. What they have done to you. ...And what they would do again. And again. ...And again.


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* StepfordSmiler: The receptionist at Dewford Gym. Clearly unenthusiastic about her job, Astra noticing the fake quality of her smile taints every word the receptionist says.


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* SurferSpeak: Brawly, to general bewilderment. One sample spoken to Brendan:
-->'''Brawly''': Don't mind the sketch your lady friend was laying into ya', you’re dressed up rad, little man.
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* HeroicRROD: Astra has one in Chapter 34, with all the pressure of everything that's happened since they set off for Dewford weighing on her. Despite her absolute exhaustion, she's adamant that she needs to keep going, both before and after that exhaustion leads to her [[spoiler:losing 3-0 to Brawly]].

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* HeroicRROD: Astra has one in Chapter 34, with all the pressure of everything that's happened since they set off for Dewford weighing on her. Despite her absolute exhaustion, she's adamant that she needs to keep going, both before and after that exhaustion leads to her [[spoiler:losing 3-0 3-1 to Brawly]].
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* HeroicRROD: Astra has one in Chapter 34, with all the pressure of everything that's happened since they set off for Dewford weighing on her. Despite her absolute exhaustion, she's adamant that she needs to keep going, both before and after that exhaustion leads to her [[spoiler:losing 3-0 to Brawly]].
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* InstantExpert: Astra doesn't ''master'' the violin immediately, but she shows the expertise of a couple of months after practicing for only a couple of hours. Partially explained as Astra skipping part of the learning process by manipulating the strings with her powers rather than holding them down with her fingers—which are entirely unsuited for pressing down on the neck of the instrument like a human would.

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* InstantExpert: Astra doesn't ''master'' master the violin immediately, but she shows the expertise of a couple of months after practicing for only a couple of hours. Partially explained as Astra skipping part of the learning process by manipulating the strings with her powers rather than holding them down with her fingers—which are entirely unsuited for pressing down on the neck of the instrument like a human would.



* LetsYouAndHimFight: The unnamed Team Aqua grunt that stole from Devon at the start of the game manages to outsmart Astra, May, and Brendan by provoking [[spoiler:the Exploud patriarch of Rusturf Tunnel]] into fighting them while he escapees.

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* LetsYouAndHimFight: The unnamed Team Aqua grunt that stole from Devon at the start of the game manages to outsmart Astra, May, and Brendan by provoking [[spoiler:the Exploud patriarch of Rusturf Tunnel]] into fighting them while he escapees.escapes.
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** Norman in the games was shown to be busy at his Gym to the point that he rarely came home, but nevertheless still had a close and loving relationship with his wife and child. In this story, he is and has always been a selfish workaholic who didn't slow his pace for his wife or daughter, repeatedly and uncaring my uprooting the family to face the League in other regions. And when he finally retired from traveling and they settled in Hoenn, he moved into the Petalburg Gym two towns over from his family's house. His relationship with his wife is unknown, but the one time he interacts with his daughter in this story, all he does is push the chore of helping Wally on her and then tell her to come back when she has four badges, when all she wanted was to talk to him.

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** Norman in the games was shown to be busy at his Gym to the point that he rarely came home, but nevertheless still had a close and loving relationship with his wife and child. In this story, he is and has always been a selfish workaholic who didn't slow his pace for his wife or daughter, repeatedly and uncaring my uncaringly uprooting the family to face the League in other regions. And when he finally retired from traveling and they settled in Hoenn, he moved into the Petalburg Gym two towns over from his family's house. His relationship with his wife is unknown, but the one time he interacts with his daughter in this story, all he does is push the chore of helping Wally on her and then tell her to come back when she has four badges, when all she wanted was to talk to him.
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: May's upbeat, determined, and food-loving personality from the games and anime is still present. But due to Norman being a selfish workaholic in this story, she's also belligerent, foul-mouthed, and both resistant to make new friends due to losing so many in the past and, at the same time, borderline obsessed with the ones she does have.

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May's upbeat, determined, and food-loving personality from the games and anime is still present. But due to Norman being a selfish workaholic in this story, she's also belligerent, foul-mouthed, and both resistant to make new friends due to losing so many in the past and, at the same time, borderline obsessed with the ones she does have.have.
** Norman in the games was shown to be busy at his Gym to the point that he rarely came home, but nevertheless still had a close and loving relationship with his wife and child. In this story, he is and has always been a selfish workaholic who didn't slow his pace for his wife or daughter, repeatedly and uncaring my uprooting the family to face the League in other regions. And when he finally retired from traveling and they settled in Hoenn, he moved into the Petalburg Gym two towns over from his family's house. His relationship with his wife is unknown, but the one time he interacts with his daughter in this story, all he does is push the chore of helping Wally on her and then tell her to come back when she has four badges, when all she wanted was to talk to him.



** Norman seems to care far more about battling than about his family: he didn't stop moving between regions every other year when he married or when he had a daughter. When he finally retires from traveling, he moves one last time to Hoenn and, while his family settles in Littleroot Town, he basically lives in his new Gym in Petalburg. He also has no patience for green trainers, waving away anyone who doesn't have four badges already. His daughter May's opinion of him is, to put it lightly, not great.

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** Norman seems to care far more about battling than about his family: he didn't stop moving between regions every other year when he married or when he had in the games was a daughter. When he finally retires from traveling, he moves one last time to Hoenn and, while dedicated trainer and a loving husband and father. In this story, he's only a dedicated trainer, neglectful of his family settles in Littleroot Town, he basically lives in his new Gym in Petalburg. He also has no patience for green trainers, waving away anyone who doesn't have four badges already. bordering on abuse. His daughter May's opinion of him is, is poor, to put it lightly, not great.lightly.

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