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** In Chapter 35, there's a Mawile who's name translates to 'Worrina', a reference to the author of Fanfic/ABackwardsGrin.
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** In Chapter 35, there's a Mawile who's name translates to 'Worrina', a clear reference to the author of of, and titular Mawile starring in, Fanfic/ABackwardsGrin.
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** In Chapter 35, there's a Mawile named Worrina that the author seems to note as a reference to ''A Backwards Grin''.
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** In Chapter 35, there's a Mawile named Worrina that the author seems who's name translates to note as 'Worrina', a reference to ''A Backwards Grin''.the author of Fanfic/ABackwardsGrin.
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* PartyScattering: A fierce argument between Astra and her friends results in a very protective Kadabra "helping" Astra by teleporting May and Brendan into a random part of Granite Cave. Astra attempts to Teleport to them, but instead ends up in said Kadabra's home.
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* PartyScattering: A fierce argument between Astra and her friends results in a very protective Kadabra "helping" Astra by teleporting May and Brendan into a random part of Granite Cave. The Kadabra, having mistaken Astra attempts to Teleport to them, but instead ends up in said Kadabra's home.for a lost Abra, then teleports them both into the Abra's home cavern.
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* BadassGrandma: Last Echo the Kadabra proves to be a formidable force as she effortlessly teleports May and Brendan deep into the cave and nearly takes out Astra after briefly mistaking her for a fellow human due to her disguise, and for a while Astra instinctually calls her “Grandma”.
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* BadassGrandma: Last Echo the Kadabra proves to be a formidable force as she effortlessly teleports May and Brendan deep into the cave and nearly takes out Astra after briefly mistaking her for a fellow human due to her disguise, and for a while disguise. Astra instinctually calls her “Grandma”.“Grandma” for a short time due to delirium.
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* CordonBleughChef: While Astra is staying with Last Echo the Kadabra, she is given a stew that is made with Makuhita meat, and when Astra comments on the taste, Echo laments that she couldn’t add any Zubat (part Poison-type) meat this time. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as it becomes clear that Granite Cave has few options for meals she can provide her "grandchildren".
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* CordonBleughChef: While Astra is staying with Last Echo the Kadabra, she is given a stew that is made with Makuhita meat, and when meat with a faint aftertaste of bitterness. When Astra comments on the taste, Echo laments reveals that she couldn’t add any her 'usual' fare consists mostly of Zubat (part Poison-type) meat this time. meat, which is explicitly poisonous and unsafe to eat. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as it becomes clear that Granite Cave has few options for meals she can provide the Abra, leaving her "grandchildren".little choice but to feed them the hazardous but otherwise abundant meat.
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* CordonBleughChef: While Astra is staying with Kadabra, Last Echo, she is given a stew that is made with Makuhita meat and when Astra comments on the taste, Echo laments that she couldn’t add any Zubat (part poison type) meat this time. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as it becomes clear that as far as food goes, Granite Cave hardly gives any options for meals she can provide her “grandchildren”.
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* CordonBleughChef: While Astra is staying with Last Echo the Kadabra, Last Echo, she is given a stew that is made with Makuhita meat meat, and when Astra comments on the taste, Echo laments that she couldn’t add any Zubat (part poison type) Poison-type) meat this time. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as it becomes clear that as far as food goes, Granite Cave hardly gives any has few options for meals she can provide her “grandchildren”."grandchildren".
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* PartyScattering: A fierce argument between Astra and her friends results in a very protective Kadabra “helping” Astra by teleporting May and Brendan into a random part of Granite Cave. Astra attempts to teleport to them, but instead ends up in said Kadabra’s home.
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* PartyScattering: A fierce argument between Astra and her friends results in a very protective Kadabra “helping” "helping" Astra by teleporting May and Brendan into a random part of Granite Cave. Astra attempts to teleport Teleport to them, but instead ends up in said Kadabra’s Kadabra's home.
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** In Chapter 35, there’s a Mawile that the author seems to note as a reference to the fanfic '''A Backwards Smile'''.
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** In Chapter 35, there’s there's a Mawile named Worrina that the author seems to note as a reference to the fanfic '''A ''A Backwards Smile'''.Grin''.
