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* DisproportionateRetribution: Harry's manner of dealing with Malfoy's bullying is...''excessive'' to say the least.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Harry's manner of dealing with Malfoy's bullying is... ''excessive'' to say the least.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Stella isn't out to kill her husband in this version, and actually [[spoiler:comes around to the idea of having Blitzo as part of their marriage.]][[spoiler: Still divorces Stolas once he starts making his relationship public.]]
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Stella isn't out to kill her husband in this version, and actually [[spoiler:comes around to the idea of having Blitzo as part of their marriage.]][[spoiler: Still ]] [[spoiler:Still divorces Stolas once he starts making his relationship public.]]
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Stella isn't out to kill her husband in this version, and actually [[spoiler:comes around to the idea of having Blitzo as part of their marriage.]][[spoiler: Still divorces Stolas once he starts making his relationship public]]
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Stella isn't out to kill her husband in this version, and actually [[spoiler:comes around to the idea of having Blitzo as part of their marriage.]][[spoiler: Still divorces Stolas once he starts making his relationship public]]public.]]
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If that's the case then I think this is more applicable
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Sallie May is confirmed to be a transgender woman in canon, but she's referred to as a {{Hermaphrodite}} during her scene with Striker in this fic. Subverted, however, in that this is [[JerkAss Striker's]] POV: WordOfGod is that she is still transgender in reality.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Striker, if him calling Sallie May (who is a trans woman) a "hermaphrodite" is any indication.
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Right. Adaptational Nice Guy.
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* PetTheDog: Stolas mentions in Chapter 26 that Stella bakes pastries for him on special occasions. Pretty remarkable for a bitch like her.
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I was shocked.
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* PetTheDog: Stolas mentions in Chapter 26 that Stella bakes pastries for him on special occasions. Pretty remarkable for a bitch like her.
