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* OhCrap: [[spoiler:Lex Luthor]] gives a subdued version of this after [[spoiler:Tarble shows up where all the humans have been hiding alongside an injured Superman]].
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** Control Freak reacts this way when the Teen Titans tell him that Tarble is real and on Earth, which is why they need whatever info he has on the Saiyan.
---> "I thought that stuff was all made up. You know, alien dramatization and whatever. But if Prince Tarble is real… then I don't want him on Earth. I don't want him anywhere near Earth. And by the end of this, you won't want him here either."
** [[spoiler:Lex Luthor]] gives a subdued version of this after [[spoiler:Tarble shows up where all the humans have been hiding alongside an injured Superman]].
** Control Freak reacts this way when the Teen Titans tell him that Tarble is real and on Earth, which is why they need whatever info he has on the Saiyan.
---> "I thought that stuff was all made up. You know, alien dramatization and whatever. But if Prince Tarble is real… then I don't want him on Earth. I don't want him anywhere near Earth. And by the end of this, you won't want him here either."
** [[spoiler:Lex Luthor]] gives a subdued version of this after [[spoiler:Tarble shows up where all the humans have been hiding alongside an injured Superman]].
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--> '''Teach:''' Meh, s’not like there was anything worth ruling here anyway. All I see are a bunch of scared women hiding behind divine protection because they’re too scared of the wider world.\\
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--> '''Teach:''' Meh, s’not s'not like there was anything worth ruling here anyway. All I see are a bunch of scared women hiding behind divine protection because they’re they're too scared of the wider world.\\
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'''Teach:''' I don’t. Don’t really care to, either. I’m just calling it how I see it -- an island full of cowards whining that something bad happened to ‘em, what, thousands of years ago? Sheesh. How pathetic can you be?
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'''Teach:''' I don’t. Don’t don't. Don't really care to, either. I’m I'm just calling it how I see it -- an island full of cowards whining that something bad happened to ‘em, 'em, what, thousands of years ago? Sheesh. How pathetic can you be?
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--> The Trade Organization would seize their machine worlds, their centers of production, and use them. Only tanks and guns wouldn’t be the only thing that they used them for. The Trade Organization would use their worlds to become the single greatest producer for all kinds of merchandise! Ships, tvs, toys, weapons, kitchen appliances! If it could be sold, then the Trade Organization would create it with a great big logo slapped on it.\\
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And when he became the economy in this galaxy, when every spec of wealth was his, even if it was in the pocket of another, he would set his sights to the galaxies beyond…\\
Ahh...was a lovely dream that it was...but that day was some time away.
Ahh...was a lovely dream that it was...but that day was some time away.
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And when he became the economy in this galaxy, when every spec of wealth was his, even if it was in the pocket of another, he would set his sights to the galaxies beyond…\\
beyond...\\
Ahh... was a lovely dream that itwas...was... but that day was some time away.''
Ahh... was a lovely dream that it
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* ShamingTheMob: After the Justice League were [[spoiler:defeated in battle against Tarble]], some of Earth's people start to [[MisplacedRetribution blame them as their fault]] for allowing [[spoiler:Tarble to conquer Earth]]. Tarble is quick to come to the League's defense by publicly shaming them for [[UngratefulTownsfolk ungratefully]] turning their backs on the Justice League, who had selflessly saved and protected them.
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* ShamingTheMob: After the Justice League were [[spoiler:defeated in battle against Tarble]], [[spoiler:Tarble made his declaration of Earth annexed to his empire]] some of Earth's people start to [[MisplacedRetribution blame them the Justice League as their fault]] for allowing [[spoiler:Tarble to conquer Earth]].not stopping him. Tarble is quick to come to the League's defense by publicly shaming them for [[UngratefulTownsfolk ungratefully]] turning their backs on the Justice League, who had selflessly saved and protected them.
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* ShamingTheMob: After the Justice League were [[spoiler:defeated in battle against Tarble]], some of Earth's people start to [[MisplacedRetribution blame them as their fault]] for allowing [[spoiler:Tarble to conquer Earth]]. Tarble is quick to come to the League's defense by publicly shaming them for [[UngratefulTownsfolk ungratefully]] turning their backs on the Justice League, who had selflessly saved and protected them.
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* ItAmusedMe: Basically the entire reason why Frieza does anything, with the author outright comparing him with a fat, lazy cat. He showers Tarble with favors because he finds Tarble interesting, allows King Vegeta to plan rebellion against the Trade Organization and Bardock's own rebellion against King Vegeta because he thinks it's funny and keep stoking Vegeta's jealousy and resentment to Tarble while continually giving them more power and influence within the Trade Organization just for the purpose of making their clash grander.
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* ItAmusedMe: Basically the entire reason why Frieza does anything, with the author outright comparing him with a fat, lazy cat. He showers Tarble with favors because he finds Tarble interesting, allows King Vegeta to plan rebellion against the Trade Organization and Bardock's own rebellion against King Vegeta because he thinks it's funny and keep stoking Vegeta's jealousy and resentment to Tarble while continually continuously giving them more power and influence within the Trade Organization just for the purpose of making their clash grander.
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Tarble can't even remember the Red Lantern who challenges him to a fight, even though he invaded Planet Vegeta once and Vegeta himself subsequently genocided his entire species.
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Tarble can't even remember recognize the Red Lantern who challenges him to a fight, even though he invaded Planet Vegeta once and Vegeta himself subsequently genocided his entire species.
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Tarble can't even remember the Red Lantern who challenges him to a fight, even though he invaded Planet Vegeta once and Vegeta himself subsequently genocided his entire species.
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* BloodKnight: Saiyans, with few exceptions, relish an opportunity to fight, especially if it's against a strong opponent.
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* BloodKnight: Saiyans, with few exceptions, relish an opportunity to fight, especially if it's against a strong opponent. The Khunds are also this, which led to both races being a sort of FriendlyEnemy.
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* ZeroApprovalGambit: Koter's grand plan for The Reach Empire. Recognizing the stagnantion in the Reach, he seizes absolute power of a dictator for himself in order to break the power of the old families in the empire all the while planning his own downfall. As Vril noted, history will remember him poorly even though he succeeded in accomplishing everything he set out to.
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* BigEater: Saiyans have always been this in canon, though while it's usually more of a RunningGag. Here the fact that Saiyans eat way more than the average person is actually taken more seriously as it makes them more susceptible to sieges.
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* BigEater: Saiyans have always been this in canon, though while it's usually more of a RunningGag. Here the fact that Saiyans eat way more than the average person is actually taken more seriously as it makes them more susceptible to sieges.
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* BigEater: Saiyans have always been this in canon, though while it's usually more of a RunningGag. Here the fact that Saiyans eat way more than the average person is actually taken more seriously as it makes them more susceptible to sieges.
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* CallingYourAttack: Tarble occasionally shouts the name of his attack. When Cooler queries him about it once, the confused Tarble claims it improves his attack.
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* FusionFic: The fic merges the Dragon Ball and DC universe settings, so that the Trade Organization is coexisting with The Reach and Thanagarian Empire in the same galaxy for example. Not a difficult thing to do as neither verse is lacking in BloodKnight race of aliens or Galactic Conquest enthusiasts.
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* ItAmusedMe: Basically the entire reason why Frieza does anything, with the author outright comparing him with a fat, lazy cat. He showers Tarble with favors because he finds Tarble interesting, allows King Vegeta to plan rebellion against the Trade Organization and Bardock's own rebellion against King Vegeta because he thinks it's funny and keep stoking Vegeta's jealousy and resentment to Tarble while continually giving them more power and influence within the Trade Organization just for the purpose of making their clash grander.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeach: Teach has a short one for the Amazons after Queen Hippolyta demands that Tarble leave Themyscira.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeach: TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Teach has a short one for the Amazons after Queen Hippolyta demands that Tarble leave Themyscira.
