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It's archived [[https://myimmortal.fandom.com/wiki/Chapter_One:_Helena_(Ghost_of_You) here]] on a dedicated wiki.
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It's archived [[https://myimmortal.fandom.com/wiki/Chapter_One:_Helena_(Ghost_of_You) here]] on a dedicated wiki.
wiki. An [[MSTing MST]] of it can be found [[https://theasylumriffs.wordpress.com/2022/11/05/ghost-of-you/ here.]]
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* InterchangeableAsianCultures: Cho Chang (who is Chinese) apparently has an apartment in Tokyo.
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* InterchangeableAsianCultures: Cho Chang (who is Chinese) apparently has an apartment in Tokyo.Tokyo, that she shares with Ginny and Hermione. Somewhat justified as the "goffs" from the My Immortal universe have been established to love "Japanese culture" (which they understand just as well as they do about being goth), and the goths in this story would probably feel the same way.
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* ModernAUFic: Raven outright admits in the author's notes that she doesn't care when ''Harry Potter'' takes place, so she's making it take place in the then-modern day (2006).
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-->I don't give a fuck when HP takes place. This takes place NOW, and it's MY story, so they can have iPods and NORMAL clothes and shit if I want them 2.
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''Ghost Of You'' is a final collaboration supposedly between Tara Gilesbie and Raven, the authors of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''. In many ways, it can be considered a true SpiritualSequel to the original, bearing most of the same motifs and themes, though it is much shorter (only one chapter, ''Helena'') and a bit better written.
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''Ghost Of of You'' is a final collaboration supposedly between Tara Gilesbie and Raven, the authors of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''. In many ways, it can be considered a true SpiritualSequel to the original, bearing most of the same motifs and themes, though it is much shorter (only one chapter, ''Helena'') and a bit better written.
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''[[https://myimmortal.fandom.com/wiki/Chapter_One:_Helena_(Ghost_of_You Ghost Of You]]'' is a final collaboration supposedly between Tara Gilesbie and Raven, the authors of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''. In many ways, it can be considered a true SpiritualSequel to the original, bearing most of the same motifs and themes, though it is much shorter (only one chapter, ''Helena'') and a bit better written.
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''[[http://imm.dh.obdurodon.org/documents/MyImmortalComplete.doc Ghost Of You]]''[[note]]Additional document within this; full chapter more accessible [[https://myimmortal.fandom.com/wiki/Chapter_One:_Helena_(Ghost_of_You) here]].[[/note]] is an apocryphal final collaboration supposedly between Creator/TaraGilesbie and Raven, the authors of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''. In many ways, it can be considered a true SpiritualSequel to the original, bearing most of the same motifs and themes, though it is much shorter (only one chapter, ''Helena'') and much better written.
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''[[http://imm.dh.obdurodon.org/documents/MyImmortalComplete.doc Ghost Of You]]''[[note]]Additional document within this; full chapter more accessible [[https://myimmortal.fandom.com/wiki/Chapter_One:_Helena_(Ghost_of_You) here]].[[/note]] is an apocryphal final collaboration supposedly between Tara Gilesbie Creator/TaraGilesbie and Raven, the authors of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''. In many ways, it can be considered a true SpiritualSequel to the original, bearing most of the same motifs and themes, though it is much shorter (only one chapter, ''Helena'') and much better written.
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''[[http://imm.dh.obdurodon.org/documents/MyImmortalComplete.doc Ghost Of You]]''[[note]]Additional document within this.[[/note]] is an apocryphal final collaboration supposedly between Tara Gilesbie and Raven, the authors of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''. In many ways, it can be considered a true SpiritualSequel to the original, bearing most of the same motifs and themes, though it is much shorter (only one chapter, ''Helena'') and much better written.
Hermione Granger discovers her real parents are pureblood wizards and that she was kidnapped at birth. She kills her adoptive parents and becomes a goth. She and her friends live in Cho Chang's Tokyo apartment until they snow board into Hogwarts. There, Luna Lovegood annoys them and they flip her off, but Draco sits next to them. And the story ends.
Hermione Granger discovers her real parents are pureblood wizards and that she was kidnapped at birth. She kills her adoptive parents and becomes a goth. She and her friends live in Cho Chang's Tokyo apartment until they snow board into Hogwarts. There, Luna Lovegood annoys them and they flip her off, but Draco sits next to them. And the story ends.
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''[[http://imm.dh.obdurodon.org/documents/MyImmortalComplete.doc Ghost Of You]]''[[note]]Additional document within this.this; full chapter more accessible [[https://myimmortal.fandom.com/wiki/Chapter_One:_Helena_(Ghost_of_You) here]].[[/note]] is an apocryphal final collaboration supposedly between Tara Gilesbie and Raven, the authors of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''. In many ways, it can be considered a true SpiritualSequel to the original, bearing most of the same motifs and themes, though it is much shorter (only one chapter, ''Helena'') and much better written.
Hermione Granger discovers her real parents are pureblood wizards and that she was kidnapped at birth. She kills her adoptive parents and becomes a goth. She and her friends live in Cho Chang's Tokyo apartment until theysnow board into Hogwarts. There, Luna Lovegood annoys them and they flip her off, but Draco sits next to them. And the story ends.
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* AbusiveParents: Hermione's, who had "had spat on her, abused her, [[ParentalNeglect neglected her]]". Quite a massive downgrade from canon, to quote the author, "[[InsaneTrollLogic this is possible because it is never implied that it's NOT true]]''.
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''[[http://imm.dh.obdurodon.org/documents/MyImmortalComplete.doc Ghost Of You]]''[[note]]Additional document within this.[[/note]] is an apocryphal final collaboration supposedly between Tara Gilesbie and Raven, the authors of ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''. In many ways, it can be considered a true SpiritualSequel to the original, bearing most of the same motifs and themes, though it is much shorter (only one chapter, ''Helena'') and much better written.
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Hermione Granger discovers her real parents are pureblood wizards and that she was kidnapped at birth. She kills her adoptive parents and becomes a goth. She and her friends live in Cho Chang's Tokyo apartment until they now snow board into Hogwarts. There, Luna Lovegood annoys them and they flip her off, but Draco sits next to them. And the story ends.
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* AbusiveParents: Hermione's, who had "had spat on her, abused her, [[ParentalNeglect neglected her]]". qQuite Quite a massive downgrade from canon, to quote the author, "[[InsaneTrollLogic this is possible because it is never implied that it's NOT true]]''.
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