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* TriangRelations: [[spoiler:Type 4; Shizune has unrequited feelings for Misha (but not Hisao despite being bisexual), while Misha and Hisao are in a relationship]].
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: [[spoiler:Emi and Shizune]]
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* AdaptationalSexuality:
** Shizune is bisexual, whereas her canon self is heterosexual. In the fic, she has an unrequited love for Misha, while the opposite was true in canon.
** Misha is heterosexual, wheras her canon self is a lesbian. In canon, she was in love with Shizune and ''doesn't'' enjoy having sex with Hisao. In this fic, she [[spoiler:is in a relationship with Hisao]].
** Emi is a lesbian, whereas her canon self is heterosexual, or at least mainly interested in boys.
** Shizune is bisexual, whereas her canon self is heterosexual. In the fic, she has an unrequited love for Misha, while the opposite was true in canon.
** Misha is heterosexual, wheras her canon self is a lesbian. In canon, she was in love with Shizune and ''doesn't'' enjoy having sex with Hisao. In this fic, she [[spoiler:is in a relationship with Hisao]].
** Emi is a lesbian, whereas her canon self is heterosexual, or at least mainly interested in boys.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: Shizune
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A VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic by Goldilurks that, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], focuses on Shizune’s perspective. The fic takes place after Act 1, with the events leading up to Shizune’s route having taken place[[note]]Shizune is around when Emi crashes into Hisao, and spends the festival with him, although Hisao has agreed to go running with Emi[[/note]]. Shizune confronts Emi about her running sessions with him conflicting with Student Council work, and learns about his heart condition for the first time. Shizune works out a compromise with Emi; if she can show up for morning runs for two weeks, she gets veto power over Hisao’s exercise schedule.
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A VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo'' fanfic by Goldilurks that, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], focuses on Shizune’s perspective. The fic takes place after Act 1, with the events leading up to Shizune’s route having taken place[[note]]Shizune is around when Emi crashes into Hisao, and spends the festival with him, although Hisao has agreed to go running with Emi[[/note]]. Shizune confronts Emi about her running sessions with him conflicting with Student Council work, and learns about his heart condition for the first time. Shizune works out a compromise with Emi; if she can show up for morning runs for two weeks, she gets veto power over Hisao’s exercise schedule.
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* [[ManipulativeBastard Manipulative Bitch]]: Shizune, again, self-admitted.
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-->'''Shizune narrating''':I grimaced at those memories. Fucking St. Pfil’s transfer students.
-->'''Misha''': "What? You’re relapsing into Supreme Overlady mode again. Is another intervention in order?"
-->'''Misha''': "What? You’re relapsing into Supreme Overlady mode again. Is another intervention in order?"
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-->'''Shizune narrating''':I grimaced at those memories. Fucking St. Pfil’s transfer students.
-->'''Misha''':students.\\
'''Misha''': "What? You’re relapsing into Supreme Overlady mode again. Is another intervention in order?"
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'''Misha''': "What? You’re relapsing into Supreme Overlady mode again. Is another intervention in order?"
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A KatawaShoujo fanfic by Goldilurks that, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], focuses on Shizune’s perspective. The fic takes place after Act 1, with the events leading up to Shizune’s route having taken place[[note]]Shizune is around when Emi crashes into Hisao, and spends the festival with him, although Hisao has agreed to go running with Emi[[/note]]. Shizune confronts Emi about her running sessions with him conflicting with Student Council work, and learns about his heart condition for the first time. Shizune works out a compromise with Emi; if she can show up for morning runs for two weeks, she gets veto power over Hisao’s exercise schedule.
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A KatawaShoujo VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo fanfic by Goldilurks that, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], focuses on Shizune’s perspective. The fic takes place after Act 1, with the events leading up to Shizune’s route having taken place[[note]]Shizune is around when Emi crashes into Hisao, and spends the festival with him, although Hisao has agreed to go running with Emi[[/note]]. Shizune confronts Emi about her running sessions with him conflicting with Student Council work, and learns about his heart condition for the first time. Shizune works out a compromise with Emi; if she can show up for morning runs for two weeks, she gets veto power over Hisao’s exercise schedule.
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Characters in this fic have roommates, while in KatawaShoujo, all the girls have their own rooms (but in fairness, Hisao never visits Shizune or Misha’s rooms, leaving open the possibility that they share one).
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Characters in this fic have roommates, while in KatawaShoujo, VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo, all the girls have their own rooms (but in fairness, Hisao never visits Shizune or Misha’s rooms, leaving open the possibility that they share one).
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A KatawaShoujo fanfic by Goldilurks that, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], focuses on Shizune’s perspective. The fic takes place after Act 1, with the events leading up to Shizune’s route having taken place[[hottip:*:Shizune is around when Emi crashes into Hisao, and spends the festival with him, although Hisao has agreed to go running with Emi]]. Shizune confronts Emi about her running sessions with him conflicting with Student Council work, and learns about his heart condition for the first time. Shizune works out a compromise with Emi; if she can show up for morning runs for two weeks, she gets veto power over Hisao’s exercise schedule.
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A KatawaShoujo fanfic by Goldilurks that, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], focuses on Shizune’s perspective. The fic takes place after Act 1, with the events leading up to Shizune’s route having taken place[[hottip:*:Shizune place[[note]]Shizune is around when Emi crashes into Hisao, and spends the festival with him, although Hisao has agreed to go running with Emi]].Emi[[/note]]. Shizune confronts Emi about her running sessions with him conflicting with Student Council work, and learns about his heart condition for the first time. Shizune works out a compromise with Emi; if she can show up for morning runs for two weeks, she gets veto power over Hisao’s exercise schedule.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Shizune points out in Chapter 3 that Misha is chewing her lip nervously, as she does when she knows she will fail a test, and that she has not been snarking around her. Misha says the latter is out of consideration for Shizune being upset over Emi not returning her texts, [[spoiler:but it turns out that Misha is most likely nervous over her SecretRelationship]].
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A KatawaShoujo fanfic by Goldilurks that, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], focuses on Shizune’s perspective. The fic takes place after Act 1, with the events leading up to Shizune’s route having taken place[[hottip:*:Shizune is around when Emi crashes into Hisao, and spends the festival with him]].him, although Hisao has agreed to go running with Emi]]. Shizune confronts Emi about her running sessions with him conflicting with Student Council work, and learns about his heart condition for the first time. Shizune works out a compromise with Emi; if she can show up for morning runs for two weeks, she gets veto power over Hisao’s exercise schedule.
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Can be found [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=2708#p45716 here]].
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Can be found [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=2708#p45716 here]].
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** Shizune and Misha are both somewhat upset with Hisao for not telling them about his condition.
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A KatawaShoujo fanfic that, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], focuses on Shizune’s perspective. The fic takes place after Act 1, with the events leading up to Shizune’s route having taken place[[hottip:*:Shizune is around when Emi crashes into Hisao, and spends the festival with him]]. Shizune confronts Emi about her running sessions with him conflicting with Student Council work, and learns about his heart condition for the first time. Shizune works out a compromise with Emi; if she can show up for morning runs for two weeks, she gets veto power over Hisao’s exercise schedule.
*AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Characters in this fic have roommates, while in KatawaShoujo, all the girls have their own rooms (but in fairness, Hisao never visits Shizune or Misha’s rooms, leaving open the possibility that they share one).
*BiTheWay: Shizune
*DeadpanSnarker: Not only Shizune, but also Misha. The author comments that they have this going on in their sign language exchanges.
*ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: The story is told from Shizune’s perspective.
*FacePalm: Hisao during the argument on the roof.
*FirstNameBasis:
**Shizune calls Misha by her first name, "Shiina", in this fic.
**Shizune temporarily, then permanently, switches to FirstNameBasis for Emi.
**Shizune wonders if Hisao is interested in Emi if he calls her by her first name, and Misha seems disappointed [[spoiler:because she is in love with Hisao]]
*FlatWhat: Shizune, after finding out about Hisao running with Emi
*{{Foreshadowing}}: Misha gets disappointed when Shizune suggests that Hisao might be “interested” in Emi. This and other clues, pointed out after the fact, foreshadow [[spoiler:Hisao and Misha’s relationship]]
*GoingCommando: Emi at the end, having given Shizune the pair of bloomers she was wearing.
*HeroicBSOD: Shizune after [[spoiler:finding out that Hisao and Misha are in a relationship and never told her]]
*HypocrisyNod: Shizune, on getting angry over Emi’s "manipulative" practical joke, inwardly acknowledges her own manipulative nature.
* IncompatibleOrientation: Shizune and Misha; the former is bisexual and the latter is heterosexual. Subverted when Shizune asks [[spoiler:Emi]] if she is bisexual, and is somewhat dismayed when her answer is no, but then [[spoiler:Emi]] clarifies that she is a lesbian.
*LockedOutOfTheLoop: Shizune says that because she’s deaf, she never hears school gossip, and resents not being told about Hisao’s condition [[spoiler:or relationship with Misha]].
*[[ManipulativeBastard Manipulative Bitch]]: Shizune, again, self-admitted.
*MistakenMessage: Shizune once mistakes Misha’s translating Rin’s response for speaking for herself
*NoodleIncident: Two of them, possibly in regard to Shizune's past love life.
-->'''Shizune narrating''':I grimaced at those memories. Fucking St. Pfil’s transfer students.
-->'''Misha''': "What? You’re relapsing into Supreme Overlady mode again. Is another intervention in order?"
*NoseBleed: Shizune has one at the end of the fic, after Emi reveals that she is GoingCommando.
*RelationshipReveal: [[spoiler:Shizune finds Misha and Hisao having sex]]
*SchoolgirlLesbians: [[spoiler:Emi and Shizune]]
*SecondLove: After being rejected by Misha and having at least two failed relationships, Shizune ends up with [[spoiler:Emi, who is a lesbian]]
*SecretRelationship: [[spoiler:Hisao and Misha]]
*SnarkToSnarkCombat: Misha and Shizune.
* ThirdOptionAdaptation: The setting appears to be a continuation of Emi and Shizune’s routes, given that Hisao has agreed to go running with Emi but is also on the student council (favoring both Shizune and Emi will get you to a difficult to reach scene, but you must choose one or the other). [[spoiler:Hisao ultimately ends up with Misha]]
*ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: Shizune, when angry
-->"Did you get a good laugh off that prank, bitch?"
*TriangRelations: [[spoiler:Type 4; Shizune has unrequited feelings for Misha (but not Hisao despite being bisexual), while Misha and Hisao are in a relationship]].
*UnreliableNarrator: Being deaf, Shizune cannot say for certain what people are talking about, apart from what she speculates or Misha translates, and her assumptions are sometimes incorrect.
*VitriolicBestBuds: Misha and Shizune. They exchange barbs at each other, but Shizune is grateful to Misha for not abandoning her despite rejecting her confession
*WhamLine
-->'''Shizune''': I hit 'Send' as I turned the handle and walked in on Shiina and Hisao [[spoiler:[[RelationshipReveal fucking on my bed]].]]
*WhatTheHellHero:
**After Shizune offers to keep running on the condition that Emi join the Student Council as a "sports rep", she gets a text message simply saying "screw u" in response and Emi refuses to respond to her texts for a while. Emi later calls her out on the offer being "blackmail"
**Shizune later gives one to Emi when the latter disappears out of her field of view for a while, seemingly as a prank. She inwardly acknowledges that it’s [[HypocrisyNod somewhat hypocritical]] to call Emi out for being manipulative, but continues nevertheless.
*AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Characters in this fic have roommates, while in KatawaShoujo, all the girls have their own rooms (but in fairness, Hisao never visits Shizune or Misha’s rooms, leaving open the possibility that they share one).
*BiTheWay: Shizune
*DeadpanSnarker: Not only Shizune, but also Misha. The author comments that they have this going on in their sign language exchanges.
*ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: The story is told from Shizune’s perspective.
*FacePalm: Hisao during the argument on the roof.
*FirstNameBasis:
**Shizune calls Misha by her first name, "Shiina", in this fic.
**Shizune temporarily, then permanently, switches to FirstNameBasis for Emi.
**Shizune wonders if Hisao is interested in Emi if he calls her by her first name, and Misha seems disappointed [[spoiler:because she is in love with Hisao]]
*FlatWhat: Shizune, after finding out about Hisao running with Emi
*{{Foreshadowing}}: Misha gets disappointed when Shizune suggests that Hisao might be “interested” in Emi. This and other clues, pointed out after the fact, foreshadow [[spoiler:Hisao and Misha’s relationship]]
*GoingCommando: Emi at the end, having given Shizune the pair of bloomers she was wearing.
*HeroicBSOD: Shizune after [[spoiler:finding out that Hisao and Misha are in a relationship and never told her]]
*HypocrisyNod: Shizune, on getting angry over Emi’s "manipulative" practical joke, inwardly acknowledges her own manipulative nature.
* IncompatibleOrientation: Shizune and Misha; the former is bisexual and the latter is heterosexual. Subverted when Shizune asks [[spoiler:Emi]] if she is bisexual, and is somewhat dismayed when her answer is no, but then [[spoiler:Emi]] clarifies that she is a lesbian.
*LockedOutOfTheLoop: Shizune says that because she’s deaf, she never hears school gossip, and resents not being told about Hisao’s condition [[spoiler:or relationship with Misha]].
*[[ManipulativeBastard Manipulative Bitch]]: Shizune, again, self-admitted.
*MistakenMessage: Shizune once mistakes Misha’s translating Rin’s response for speaking for herself
*NoodleIncident: Two of them, possibly in regard to Shizune's past love life.
-->'''Shizune narrating''':I grimaced at those memories. Fucking St. Pfil’s transfer students.
-->'''Misha''': "What? You’re relapsing into Supreme Overlady mode again. Is another intervention in order?"
*NoseBleed: Shizune has one at the end of the fic, after Emi reveals that she is GoingCommando.
*RelationshipReveal: [[spoiler:Shizune finds Misha and Hisao having sex]]
*SchoolgirlLesbians: [[spoiler:Emi and Shizune]]
*SecondLove: After being rejected by Misha and having at least two failed relationships, Shizune ends up with [[spoiler:Emi, who is a lesbian]]
*SecretRelationship: [[spoiler:Hisao and Misha]]
*SnarkToSnarkCombat: Misha and Shizune.
* ThirdOptionAdaptation: The setting appears to be a continuation of Emi and Shizune’s routes, given that Hisao has agreed to go running with Emi but is also on the student council (favoring both Shizune and Emi will get you to a difficult to reach scene, but you must choose one or the other). [[spoiler:Hisao ultimately ends up with Misha]]
*ThisIsForEmphasisBitch: Shizune, when angry
-->"Did you get a good laugh off that prank, bitch?"
*TriangRelations: [[spoiler:Type 4; Shizune has unrequited feelings for Misha (but not Hisao despite being bisexual), while Misha and Hisao are in a relationship]].
*UnreliableNarrator: Being deaf, Shizune cannot say for certain what people are talking about, apart from what she speculates or Misha translates, and her assumptions are sometimes incorrect.
*VitriolicBestBuds: Misha and Shizune. They exchange barbs at each other, but Shizune is grateful to Misha for not abandoning her despite rejecting her confession
*WhamLine
-->'''Shizune''': I hit 'Send' as I turned the handle and walked in on Shiina and Hisao [[spoiler:[[RelationshipReveal fucking on my bed]].]]
*WhatTheHellHero:
**After Shizune offers to keep running on the condition that Emi join the Student Council as a "sports rep", she gets a text message simply saying "screw u" in response and Emi refuses to respond to her texts for a while. Emi later calls her out on the offer being "blackmail"
**Shizune later gives one to Emi when the latter disappears out of her field of view for a while, seemingly as a prank. She inwardly acknowledges that it’s [[HypocrisyNod somewhat hypocritical]] to call Emi out for being manipulative, but continues nevertheless.
