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* {{Bizarrchitecture}}: The castle contains some rooms that one would think to be strange for a European-esque castle, such as the fitness room in the South Wing, or just generally impractical, such treasure room in the West Wing.

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* {{Bizarrchitecture}}: The castle contains some rooms that one would think to be strange for a European-esque castle, such as the fitness room in the South Wing, or just generally impractical, such as the treasure room in the West Wing.
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*TheDoorSlamsYou: Hana ends up on the receiving end of this during the prologue when Kaneki, not realizing Hana was standing outside, hits her with the door to the furnace room.
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*DeathOfAChild: Although the death itself happened several years prior to the events of the fic, Chapter 2 describes the incident that killed Kaneki's little sister, [[PosthumousCharacter Yuna]], who was seven years old at the time of her death.
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*EnmityWithAnObject: While doing a small investigation of the East Wing's upper floor by herself in Chapter 4, Hana takes her frustration over not finding anything out by yelling at the security cameras in the lounge and eastern watchtower.

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* EveryoneIsASuspect: Akira claims this during Chapter 2's investigation, due to the fact that the murder occurring during nighttime means it is likely nobody has a solid alibi for the time of the crime.



* EveryoneIsASuspect: Akira claims this during Chapter 2's investigation, due to the fact that the murder occurring during nighttime means it is likely nobody has a solid alibi for the time of the crime.

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* EveryoneIsASuspect: Akira claims this during Chapter 2's investigation, due *EvidenceScavengerHunt: In true [[Franchise/DanganRonpa Danganronpa]] fashion, each chapter has a "Deadly Life" section in which Hana and her classmates must gather evidence that could help point to the fact that the murder occurring during nighttime means it is likely nobody has a solid alibi for the time of the crime. killer's identity.
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{{Egopolis}}: Downplayed in that Monokuma doesn't have images of himself plastered all over the castle, but Hana does see a few self portraits of the bear hung up in the hallways of the West Wing.

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{{Egopolis}}: *{{Egopolis}}: Downplayed in that Monokuma doesn't have images of himself plastered all over the castle, but Hana does see a few self portraits of the bear hung up in the hallways of the West Wing.
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**Monokuma's spear gun weapons that he brings out during the third trial are known as the "Arms of Gungnir", likely a reference to the regular Spears of Gungnir seen in the canon games.


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*[[ThisBananaIsArmed This Throne is Armed:]] Monokuma reveals in the third trial that he has a set of five [[{{BFG}} massive]] [[HarpoonGun spear guns]] built in to the back of his throne in the trial room, which he can control using a small panel hidden in one of the armrests. Fortunately, he doesn't fire at anyone, but it's more than enough to bring the trial back into order.


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**During the third trial, we get this confession/confirmation from the one who attacked Hana in the wine room a day prior:
--->'''Tadao:''' I admit it. The one who attacked you in the wine room just before the end of nighttime, and the one you saw wandering the castle that hour...was me.
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* YouWakeUpInARoom: Hana first wakes up in the castle lying on a bed in her designated bedroom.

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* YouWakeUpInARoom: Hana first wakes up in the castle lying on a bed in her designated bedroom.bedroom.

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** In Chapter 2, Itachi's execution is built up as a standard [[Franchise/DanganRonpa Danganronpa]]-style execution...and then he [[DrivenToSuicide commits suicide.]]

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** In Chapter 2, Itachi's execution is built up as a standard [[Franchise/DanganRonpa Danganronpa]]-style execution...execution: he is thrown into a [[UsefulNotes/TheGloryThatWasRome Colosseum]] and then forced to fend of several robots based on warriors from different time periods. Then he [[DrivenToSuicide commits suicide.]]
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*ShrineToTheFallen: At the very start of Chapter 4, Rumi and Hinata set up a makeshift memorial in the dining room for the students that have died.
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*DoubleEntendre: [[ItMakesSenseInContext This exchange]] between Rumi, Hana, and Hinata during Chapter 4:
->'''Rumi:''' If not now, when!? We all know how easy it is to lose your life around here- that's why you need to grab hold of the present as tight as you can!
->'''Hana:''' The only thing I'm 'grabbing hold of' is time to search around this wing!
->'''Hinata:''' Y'know, as much as I love hearing you girls talk about grabbing hold of things-
->'''Hana:''' Don't make this worse, Hinata!


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**Akira attempts to do her own version of this in Chapter 3 when laying out her case against Saku.
*SympathyForTheDevil: In Chapter 4, Rumi and Hiroshi show some level of pity for Tadao following the events of Chapter 3- Rumi adds his picture to the memorial of the dead students and insists on keeping it there, while Hiroshi also tries to defend this decision of hers by reminding the group of Tadao's [[TragicDream true]] [[CynicismCatalyst motive]] for committing murder in the first place.
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**After having seen both the armory and the training room in the East Wing, Hana questions their purpose and asks if the mastermind wants them to [[{{Disney/Mulan}} "defeat the Huns."]]


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*TragicMistake: The murder that occurs in Chapter 2 seems to be built on this trope in several ways:
**The victim, Kaneki, actually makes ''two'' fatal mistakes that cause her death:
***The first mistake was when Kaneki was younger; her parents warned her and her younger sister, Yuna, against going out to the woods one day due to an upcoming storm. Kaneki, however, chooses to disobey them and goes to the forest with Yuna anyways. This results in them getting caught up in the bad weather in a rather dangerous area, which causes Yuna to slip and fall down a large drop-off, ultimately killing her and leaving Kaneki traumatized and [[ILetGwenStacyDie guilt-ridden.]]
***The second mistake takes place in the story proper; Asuna receives a strange note apparently sent by Kaneki, and she decides to speak to her friend directly about it. Upon receiving the note, Kaneki chooses ''not'' to tell the other students about it and work with them to prevent another murder, instead keeping the note a secret from everyone so she can try and solve the problem [[IWorkAlone by herself.]] She does succeed in preventing Asuna from being murdered...at the cost of being murdered in her place.
**The killer, Itachi, makes an ''extremely'' poor decision of his own. When he is confronted by Kaneki in the storage room, while [[WhatTheHellHero she is furious with him for what he had planned to do,]] she ultimately manages to calm herself and try to talk Itachi out of killing someone. She even goes as far as to offer to [[SecretKeeper keep quiet about what he had been planning,]] as long as he never attempts to kill someone again. Itachi, rather than listen to Kaneki and accept her offer, gives in to his mental stress and repressed emotions; this causes ''him'' to become enraged with ''her,'' [[FreakOut fly into a massive rage,]] and attack/kill Kaneki as a result.
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12999713/1/Fractured-Fates here]]. It is currently in-progress, with a prologue and three chapters concluded. Be warned: '''''all spoilers below are unmarked,''''' because like its [[Franchise/DanganRonpa canon counterpart]] it would be difficult to list tropes for this fic without spoiling everything.

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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12999713/1/Fractured-Fates here]]. It is currently in-progress, with a prologue and three chapters concluded.concluded and a fourth chapter currently in-progress. Be warned: '''''all spoilers below are unmarked,''''' because like its [[Franchise/DanganRonpa canon counterpart]] it would be difficult to list tropes for this fic without spoiling everything.



* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Two Girls:]] [[DeadpanSnarker Deadpan Snarker]] Shiori and [[TheHeart heartful]] Rumi form this as the story goes on. It's played with, however, in that the two have much more plot relevance than most examples of this trope.

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* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Two Girls:]] [[DeadpanSnarker Deadpan Snarker]] Shiori and [[TheHeart heartful]] [[GenkiGirl Genki Girl]] Rumi form this as the story goes on.on- Hana even meets the two of them in the Prologue at the same time. It's played with, however, in that the two have much more plot relevance than most examples of this trope.
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*DesignatedGirlFight: During the female students' trip to the library in Chapter 1, Shiori is incredibly annoyed by Kaneki throwing books off the bookshelves in the hopes of finding some kind of secret room or passage. It ends up escalating off-screen to the point where Shiori and Kaneki start to fight...with books. It even gets to the point where Rumi, frustrated with the two's conflict, joins in herself out of anger.


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{{Egopolis}}: Downplayed in that Monokuma doesn't have images of himself plastered all over the castle, but Hana does see a few self portraits of the bear hung up in the hallways of the West Wing.
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*MalevolentArchitecture: Downplayed overall, but there are numerous examples of dangerous design choices throughout the castle.
**In the South Wing, the door to the study was installed backwards, meaning the door could only be locked from the outside and therefore someone could easily trap another student inside by simply locking the door. Guess how the killer prevents their target from escaping in Chapter 2?
**The West Wing has a wine room with faulty lighting- sometimes the lights would turn on, and sometimes they wouldn't. Later on, this prevents Hana from being able to see who attacked her in that same room; it also prevents the third killer from seeing that Shiro had written a message in his notebook that would incriminate them.
**The railing on the second floor of the East Wing is described as being loose and wobbly, which could mean someone leaning on it too hard would break the railing and cause that person to fall.
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*AttackOfThe50FootWhatever: Hana's [[NightmareSequence nightmare]] in Chapter 3 depicts a gigantic, rampaging Monokuma.
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*AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: Chapter ??? takes place from the perspective of an unnamed observer watching over the killing game (implied to be the mastermind).


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*NightmareSequence: Hana goes through one of these on two occasions: the first was during Part 5 of Chapter 3, and the second towards the beginning of Chapter 4.
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[[caption-width-right:246:The story's cover art [[note]]Top row, far left and going right: [[TheStoic Itachi Kunata]], [[NonIdleRich Tadao Shimaru]], [[DeadpanSnarker Shiori Sauchi]], [[CreepyMortician Hiroshi Ashi]], [[ShipperOnDeck Rumi Hamasaki]]. Middle row: [[{{Chuunibyou}} Azami Kurobe]], [[OnlySaneMan Mikio Nakamura]], [[PassionateSportsGirl Hana Amari]], [[CrusadingLawyer Akira Rimutsu]], [[GentleGiant Saku Yamamoto]]. Bottom row: [[LargeHam Ryoto Miura]], [[{{Troll}} Hinata Yonade]], [[NervousWreck Asuna Izumi]], [[PerpetualSmiler Shiro Koichi]], [[AdventurerArchaeologist Kaneki Tenmaru]].[[/note]]]]

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[[caption-width-right:246:The story's cover art [[note]]Top row, far left and going right: [[TheStoic Itachi Kunata]], [[NonIdleRich Tadao Shimaru]], [[DeadpanSnarker Shiori Sauchi]], [[CreepyMortician Hiroshi Ashi]], [[ShipperOnDeck Rumi Hamasaki]]. Middle row: [[{{Chuunibyou}} Azami Kurobe]], [[OnlySaneMan Mikio Nakamura]], [[PassionateSportsGirl [[TheProtagonist Hana Amari]], [[CrusadingLawyer Akira Rimutsu]], [[GentleGiant Saku Yamamoto]]. Bottom row: [[LargeHam Ryoto Miura]], [[{{Troll}} Hinata Yonade]], [[NervousWreck Asuna Izumi]], [[PerpetualSmiler Shiro Koichi]], [[AdventurerArchaeologist Kaneki Tenmaru]].[[/note]]]]



Hana Amari is a girl who is average in appearance, but in reality holds exceptional talent; specifically, she has recently been scouted by the famed Hope's Peak Academy to attend as the Ultimate Surfer. Unfortunately, whatever excitement or fear she may have felt is all throw out the window when her first day at the academy takes a turn for the strange. Suddenly, Hana and her fourteen other classmates find themselves in a mysterious castle, with a [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaTriggerHappyHavoc certain monochrome bear]] appearing and forcing them into a game of kill or be killed. Now, Hana and her friends must uncover the mysteries lurking in the halls of their prison in order to learn the truth behind this killing game...or face the dread of despair. But the truth...may be even darker than Hana could have ever imagined.

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[[PassionateSportsGirl Hana Amari Amari]] is a girl who is average in appearance, but in reality holds exceptional talent; specifically, she has recently been scouted by the famed Hope's Peak Academy to attend as the Ultimate Surfer. Unfortunately, whatever excitement or fear she may have felt is all throw out the window when her first day at the academy takes a turn for the strange. Suddenly, Hana and her fourteen other classmates find themselves in a mysterious castle, with a [[VisualNovel/DanganronpaTriggerHappyHavoc certain monochrome bear]] appearing and forcing them into a game of kill or be killed. Now, Hana and her friends must uncover the mysteries lurking in the halls of their prison in order to learn the truth behind this killing game...or face the dread of despair. But the truth...may be even darker than Hana could have ever imagined.
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*** Interestingly enough, Chapter 2 also plays this trope straight in the form of a paper Shiro wrote a poem on with a strange blood pattern on it (later revealed to have been a bootprint).

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*** Interestingly enough, Chapter 2 also plays this trope straight in straight. In the form storage room, Saku finds a piece of a paper Shiro wrote a poem on with one of Shiro's poems written on it, which also has a strange blood pattern on it (later revealed to have been a bootprint).it. Hiroshi later states the bloodstains, when the paper is folded properly, are actually the victim's bootprint.
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** In Chapter 3, Tadao's execution takes this [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]- he is almost sliced by a giant knife, crushed by a giant meat mallet, and suffocated in a giant plastic bag before he is ultimately thrown into an oven with a giant chicken dish and [[KillItFire burned alive.]]

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** In Chapter 3, Tadao's execution takes this [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]- he is almost sliced by a giant knife, crushed by a giant meat mallet, and suffocated in a giant plastic bag before he is ultimately thrown into an oven with a giant chicken dish and [[KillItFire [[KillItWithFire burned alive.]]
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** In Chapter 1, it appears as if Azami is about to be crushed between a pair of giant stone blocks with mirrors on one side...but those turned out to be fake. The alternative, however, is not much better.

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** In Chapter 1, it appears as if Azami is about to be crushed between a pair of giant stone blocks with mirrors on one side...but those turned out to be fake. The alternative, [[DeathOfAThousandCuts alternative]], however, is not much better.



** In Chapter 3, Tadao's execution takes this [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]- he is almost sliced by a giant knife, crushed by a giant meat mallet, and suffocated in a giant plastic bag before he is ultimately thrown into an oven with a giant chicken dish and burned alive.

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** In Chapter 3, Tadao's execution takes this [[UpToEleven Up To Eleven]]- he is almost sliced by a giant knife, crushed by a giant meat mallet, and suffocated in a giant plastic bag before he is ultimately thrown into an oven with a giant chicken dish and [[KillItFire burned alive.]]


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***Interestingly enough, Chapter 2 also plays this trope straight in the form of a paper Shiro wrote a poem on with a strange blood pattern on it (later revealed to have been a bootprint).
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* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: Even after Mikio and Azami are dead, Hana still thinks about them quite often, and the first murder and trial are often brought up by the other students.
**Tadao also cites Azami's murder of Mikio to be [[CynicismCatalyst what kickstarted]] his belief that there was no way to stop the killing game and that the only way to escape the castle was via murder.

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* SanitySlippage: Asuna appears to be going through this in Chapter 3 as a result of [[BreakTheCutie everything that happened]] in the chapter prior. She comes out of it as of Chapter 3, Part 5.

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* SanitySlippage: Asuna appears to be going goes through this in for a majority of Chapter 3 as a result of [[BreakTheCutie everything that happened]] in the chapter prior. She starts to comes out of it as towards the very end of Chapter 3, Part 5. 4, and appears fully back to normal by Part 5.



** Then, in Chapter 3, Asuna undergoes a complete personality change after misinterpreting the advice Akira had given her after Kaneki's trial. She believed that, when Akira told her not to let her grief control her, she shouldn't let herself grieve or truly feel anything ''at all'' (not helped by the guilt she was already feeling). This results in Asuna becoming completely [[TookALevelInJerkass vicious and hostile]] towards her classmates, only being brought out of it when Hana basically spells out what Akira actually meant. In short: Asuna was doing exactly what Akira told her NOT to do.
*** Not to mention Hana even names this trope when explaining this to Asuna.

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** Then, in Chapter 3, Asuna undergoes a complete personality change after misinterpreting the advice Akira had given her after Kaneki's trial. She believed that, when Akira told her not to let her grief control her, she shouldn't let herself grieve or truly feel anything ''at all'' ''anything'' at all (not helped by the guilt she was already feeling). This results in Asuna becoming completely [[TookALevelInJerkass vicious and hostile]] towards her classmates, only being brought out of it when Hana basically spells out what Akira actually meant. In short: Asuna was doing exactly what Akira told her NOT to do. \n*** Not to mention Hana even names this trope when explaining this to Asuna.
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* OnceMoreWithClarity: The opening of the story depicts Hana being woken up in a hallway by a boy named Hiroshi, after having passed out as a result of finding something in a room with blood on the floor. This scene is repeated word-for-word in Part 4 of Chapter 1, only now with full context: Hana had just discovered Mikio's body in the fitness room, and passed out in the hallway as a result.

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* OnceMoreWithClarity: The opening of the story depicts Hana being woken up in a hallway by a boy named Hiroshi, after (presumably) having passed out as a result of due finding something in a room with blood on the floor. This scene is repeated word-for-word in Part 4 at the beginning of Chapter 1, 1's Deadly Life, only now with full context: Hana had just discovered Mikio's body in the fitness room, and passed out in the hallway as a result.
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* IronicDeath: Itachi's botched execution, as he commits suicide with the same weapon (a second hunting knife identical to the murder weapon) he used to kill Kaneki.

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* IronicDeath: Itachi's IronicDeath:
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botched execution, as he commits suicide with the same weapon (a second hunting knife knife, identical to the murder weapon) he used to kill Kaneki.Kaneki.
**The different parts of Tadao's execution reflect the things he did to his victims: nearly being sliced by a kitchen knife like he stabbed Hana, almost suffocating in a giant plastic bag like he strangled Saku, and narrowly being crushed by a meat mallet like he fatally bludgeoned Shiro.
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** In the third trial, Tadao is disregarding Hana's claim that he is involved in the murders of Saku and Shiro, naming several pieces of evidence in mockery of the circumstantial evidence against him. One of those pieces of evidence is the "red wine bottle" that Hana claimed was used to knock out Saku...but nobody had ever specified what color the wine bottle that was, and it was in fact something that only four people should know about: Hana, Hiroshi, Akira, and the person who attacked Hana in the wine room the day before the murders.

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** In the third trial, Tadao is disregarding Hana's claim that he is involved in the murders of Saku and Shiro, naming several pieces of evidence in mockery of the circumstantial evidence against him. One of those pieces of evidence is the "red wine bottle" that Hana claimed was used to knock out Saku...but nobody had ever specified what color ''color'' the wine bottle that was, and in question was. In fact, it was in fact something that only four people should know have known about: Hana, Hiroshi, Akira, and the person who attacked Hana in the wine room the day before the murders.
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* {{Bizarrchitecture}}: The castle contains some rooms that one would think to be strange or impractical, such as the fitness room in the South Wing or the treasure room in the West Wing.

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* {{Bizarrchitecture}}: The castle contains some rooms that one would think to be strange or impractical, for a European-esque castle, such as the fitness room in the South Wing Wing, or the just generally impractical, such treasure room in the West Wing.



* FourIsDeath: Averted in Chapter 1, where Mikio's body is found in Part 3. Played straight in Chapter 2, where Kaneki's body is found at the end of Part 4.

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* FourIsDeath: Averted in Chapter 1, where Mikio's body is found in Part 3. Played straight in Chapter 2, where Kaneki's body is found at the end of Part 4.
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* DeadlyDeferredConversation: Both Hana and Asuna want to know why Kaneki had been acting so [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness strange]] that day; Kaneki, feeling guilty about her behavior, promises them that she will explain everything the next day. Unfortunately for her, she winds up murdered that same night.

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* DeadlyDeferredConversation: Both During Part 4 of Chapter 2, Kaneki spends the day acting uncharacteristically subdued and anxious, and Hana and Asuna want to know why Kaneki had been acting so [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness strange]] that day; find out why. Kaneki, feeling guilty about her behavior, promises them that she will explain everything the next day. Unfortunately day; unfortunately for her, she winds up murdered that same night.
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*** The dumbwaiter that goes between the wine room and the smaller banquet room is utilized by the killer as a means to move between the top and bottom floors of the West Wing ver quickly.

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*** The dumbwaiter that goes between the wine room and the smaller banquet room is utilized by the killer as a means to move between the top and bottom floors of the West Wing ver very quickly.
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** At the beginning of Chapter 3's Deadly Life, Monokuma comments on Saku's death by mentioning how "the burly ones usually last a little longer than this", referencing the Danganronpa trope of the [[BigHeartedMuscle Big-Hearted Muscle]] characters dying in Chapter 4.

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** At the beginning of Chapter 3's Deadly Life, Monokuma comments on Saku's death by mentioning how "the burly ones usually last a little longer than this", referencing the Danganronpa trope of the [[BigHeartedMuscle Big-Hearted Muscle]] [[BigGuy large and muscular]] characters dying in Chapter 4.4 rather than Chapter 3.

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