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** DarkChick: Romano Liao. She is, after all, used to tie Anton to their cause by marrying his nephew.
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** DarkChick: Romano Liao. She is, after all, used to tie Anton to their cause by marrying his nephew.
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False Prophets (on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/false-prophets-battletech-cyoa.637198/ SB]] and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/false-prophets-battletech-cyoa.47038/ SV]]) is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Acyl. The story follows (mostly) Erin Larkin, who graduated from Comstar's military training the day before waking up with memories of a life as a 21st century Battletech fan, and learning she has inherited the core of a mercenary unit from her father.
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** TheBrute: Marcus Barton, of McCarron's Armored Cavalry. More than once he takes on the Fighting Tigers as part of Max's schemes. It never quite works out for him.
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** TheBrute: Marcus Barton, of McCarron's [=McCarron=]'s Armored Cavalry. More than once he takes on the Fighting Tigers as part of Max's schemes. It never quite works out for him.
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[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/false-prophets-battletech-cyoa.47038/ False Prophets]] is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Acyl. The story follows (mostly) Erin Larkin, who graduated from Comstar'ss military training the day before waking up with memories of a life as a 21st century Battletech fan, and learning she has inherited the core of a mercenary unit from her father.
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False Prophets (on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/false-prophets-battletech-cyoa.637198/ SB]] and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/false-prophets-battletech-cyoa.47038/ False Prophets]] SV]]) is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Acyl. The story follows (mostly) Erin Larkin, who graduated from Comstar'ss Comstar's military training the day before waking up with memories of a life as a 21st century Battletech fan, and learning she has inherited the core of a mercenary unit from her father.
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!!''Fanfic/FalseProphets'' provides examples of the next tropes:
* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Janos Marik is so frustrated by Cranston Snord's ragtag band of misfits that he creates Carp's Commandos, a unit recruited out of the FWLM's military stockades, to mirror image them.
* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Janos Marik is so frustrated by Cranston Snord's ragtag band of misfits that he creates Carp's Commandos, a unit recruited out of the FWLM's military stockades, to mirror image them.
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!!''Fanfic/FalseProphets'' provides examples of the next following tropes:
* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Janos Marik is so frustrated by Cranston Snord's ragtag band of misfits that he creates Carp's Commandos, a unit recruited out of the FWLM's military stockades,to as a mirror image of them.
* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Janos Marik is so frustrated by Cranston Snord's ragtag band of misfits that he creates Carp's Commandos, a unit recruited out of the FWLM's military stockades,
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* PunchClockVillain: Marcus Barton and Cranston Snord both fill this role for the Fighting Tigers, they're Mercs who happen to be fighting on the other side.
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* PunchClockVillain: Marcus Barton and Cranston Snord both fill this role for the Fighting Tigers, they're Mercs as mercs who happen to be fighting on the other side.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Anton Marik [[spoiler: and at least for a while, his nephew Gerald]]. Also Martin Marik, who in canon died in 3018 for reasons that have never been explained. Here he survives whatever it was.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Anton Marik and his nephew Gerald [[spoiler: and at least for a while, his nephew Gerald]].while]]. Also Martin Marik, who in canon died in 3018 for reasons that have never been explained. Here he survives whatever it was.
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** BigBad: Maximilian Liao, Chancellor of the Capellan Confederation or, less formally, Celestial Wisdom
** TheDragon: Anton Marik, who acts as frontman for most of Max Liao's schemes in the Free Worlds League
** TheDragon: Anton Marik, who acts as frontman for most of Max Liao's schemes in the Free Worlds League
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** BigBad: Maximilian Liao, Chancellor of the Capellan Confederation or, less formally, Celestial Wisdom
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** TheDragon: Anton Marik, who acts as frontman for most of Max Liao's schemes in the Free WorldsLeagueLeague.
** TheDragon: Anton Marik, who acts as frontman for most of Max Liao's schemes in the Free Worlds
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** TheBrute: Marcus Barton, of Mccarron's Armored Cavalry. More than once he takes on the Fighting Tigers as part of Max's schemes. It never quite works out for him.
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** TheBrute: Marcus Barton, of Mccarron's McCarron's Armored Cavalry. More than once he takes on the Fighting Tigers as part of Max's schemes. It never quite works out for him.
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* Troll: Erin believes that Martin Marik is borderline flirting with her just to get the media in a frenzy about the Captain-General's heir being an item with a merc.
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* Troll: TheGadfly: Erin believes that Martin Marik is borderline flirting with her just to get the media in a frenzy about the Captain-General's heir being an item with a merc.
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** TheBrute: Marcus Barton, of McCarron's Armored Cavalry. More than once he takes on the Fighting Tigers as part of Max's schemes. It never quite works out for him.
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** TheBrute: Marcus Barton, of McCarron's Mccarron's Armored Cavalry. More than once he takes on the Fighting Tigers as part of Max's schemes. It never quite works out for him.
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[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/false-prophets-battletech-cyoa.47038/ False Prophets]] is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Acyl. The story follows (mostly) Erin Larkin, who graduated from ComGuards military training the day before waking up with memories of a life as a 21st century Battletech fan, and learning she has inherited the core of a mercenary unit from her father.
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[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/false-prophets-battletech-cyoa.47038/ False Prophets]] is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Acyl. The story follows (mostly) Erin Larkin, who graduated from ComGuards Comstar'ss military training the day before waking up with memories of a life as a 21st century Battletech fan, and learning she has inherited the core of a mercenary unit from her father.
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* BastardBastard: Kaisen Song, who prefers to call himself Kaisen Zou. It's not that his father didn't give him a fortune, but that's not enough for him.
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* FreudianTrio: Gabriela is the Id, Raj is the Superego, Erin is the Ego
* HeroicBastard: Erin, quite literally.
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Corian Zou
* HeroicBastard: Erin, quite literally.
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Corian Zou
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Adena Zou, Erin's niece, inherited an entire planet when she was 17 and is trying to do well by it.
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* TheEvilPrince: Corian Zou, Kaisen's partner in crime and a legitimate Zou...
* ThePsychoRangers: Through the later arcs.
** BigBad: Maximilian Liao, Chancellor of the Capellan Confederation or, less formally, Celestial Wisdom
** TheDragon: Anton Marik, who acts as frontman for most of Max Liao's schemes in the Free Worlds League
** EvilGenius: Cranston Snord. Given the usual grey-on-grey morality, he's not especially evil. But definitely a genius.
** TheBrute: Marcus Barton, of McCarron's Armored Cavalry. More than once he takes on the Fighting Tigers as part of Max's schemes. It never quite works out for him.
** DarkChick: Romano Liao. She is, after all, used to tie Anton to their cause by marrying his nephew.
* ThePsychoRangers: Through the later arcs.
** BigBad: Maximilian Liao, Chancellor of the Capellan Confederation or, less formally, Celestial Wisdom
** TheDragon: Anton Marik, who acts as frontman for most of Max Liao's schemes in the Free Worlds League
** EvilGenius: Cranston Snord. Given the usual grey-on-grey morality, he's not especially evil. But definitely a genius.
** TheBrute: Marcus Barton, of McCarron's Armored Cavalry. More than once he takes on the Fighting Tigers as part of Max's schemes. It never quite works out for him.
** DarkChick: Romano Liao. She is, after all, used to tie Anton to their cause by marrying his nephew.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Anton Marik [[Spoiler: and at least for a while, his nephew Gerald]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Anton Marik [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: and at least for a while, his nephew Gerald]].Gerald]]. Also Martin Marik, who in canon died in 3018 for reasons that have never been explained. Here he survives whatever it was.
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[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/false-prophets-battletech-cyoa.47038/ False Prophets]] is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Acyl.
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[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/false-prophets-battletech-cyoa.47038/ False Prophets]] is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Acyl.
Acyl. The story follows (mostly) Erin Larkin, who graduated from ComGuards military training the day before waking up with memories of a life as a 21st century Battletech fan, and learning she has inherited the core of a mercenary unit from her father.
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[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/false-prophets-battletech-cyoa.47038/ False Prophets]] is a ''TabletopGame/BattleTech'' fanfic written by Acyl.
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!!''Fanfic/FalseProphets'' provides examples of the next tropes:
* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Janos Marik is so frustrated by Cranston Snord's ragtag band of misfits that he creates Carp's Commandos, a unit recruited out of the FWLM's military stockades, to mirror image them.
* CadreOfForeignBodyguards: The Fighting Tigers form part of Martin Marik's security when he visits Solaris VII.
* PrivateMilitaryContractors: The Hujun, aka the Fighting Tigers of Dalian, make up the main cast.
* PunchClockVillain: Marcus Barton and Cranston Snord both fill this role for the Fighting Tigers, they're Mercs who happen to be fighting on the other side.
* SelfInsertFic: The primary viewpoint character, Erin Larkin, has the memories of the author.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Anton Marik [[Spoiler: and at least for a while, his nephew Gerald]].
* TaughtByExperience: The Fighting Tigers' plan for defending their homeworld is modelled on what they faced invading another world. Of course, they won, so their starting point is to look at every decision the defenders made and do the opposite.
* Troll: Erin believes that Martin Marik is borderline flirting with her just to get the media in a frenzy about the Captain-General's heir being an item with a merc.
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!!''Fanfic/FalseProphets'' provides examples of the next tropes:
* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Janos Marik is so frustrated by Cranston Snord's ragtag band of misfits that he creates Carp's Commandos, a unit recruited out of the FWLM's military stockades, to mirror image them.
* CadreOfForeignBodyguards: The Fighting Tigers form part of Martin Marik's security when he visits Solaris VII.
* PrivateMilitaryContractors: The Hujun, aka the Fighting Tigers of Dalian, make up the main cast.
* PunchClockVillain: Marcus Barton and Cranston Snord both fill this role for the Fighting Tigers, they're Mercs who happen to be fighting on the other side.
* SelfInsertFic: The primary viewpoint character, Erin Larkin, has the memories of the author.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Anton Marik [[Spoiler: and at least for a while, his nephew Gerald]].
* TaughtByExperience: The Fighting Tigers' plan for defending their homeworld is modelled on what they faced invading another world. Of course, they won, so their starting point is to look at every decision the defenders made and do the opposite.
* Troll: Erin believes that Martin Marik is borderline flirting with her just to get the media in a frenzy about the Captain-General's heir being an item with a merc.
