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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: WordOfGod in the (defunct) Discord server states that EON's Airy is trans.
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* ParentalNeglect: In the [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext rainbow river scene]], Chandler deliberately ignored Hunter in one of the memories, looking at a television. It comes back to bite Hunter as he stands down from a fight because of Chandler finally looking at him.
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* ParentalNeglect: In the [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext rainbow river scene]], Chandler deliberately ignored Hunter in one of the memories, looking at a television. It comes back to bite Hunter as he stands down from a fight because of [[spoiler: Chandler finally looking at him.him]].
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* LegallyDead: If a character dies, or is assumed to die, then they fit this trope. All because in EON, [[DeathIsCheap Death Is (Relatively) Cheap]].
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* FamilyDisunion: It got so bad that Hunter even ''expresses how he felt he was better off not knowing his brother was alive.''
--> '''Hunter:''' Man, do I wish none of this actually happened.
--> '''Hunter:''' Man, do I wish none of this actually happened.
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* NoAnimosityInTheAfterlife: Inverted for [[spoiler: Kairos]] who, after dying to someone he trusted (and underestimated), is full of nothing but revenge.
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* OriginalCharacters: ''Several.'' To count a few...
** Four new characters related to Airy.
** ''Ten'' characters that appear solely in flashbacks.
** Four new characters related to Airy.
** ''Ten'' characters that appear solely in flashbacks.
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** Same goes for Alex's surname, Stanley.
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* MeaningfulRename: Lucius Relict, lucius relating to light and relict being an archaic term for widow. It's fitting for [[spoiler: Chandler]].
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* MeaningfulRename: Lucius Relict, lucius Lucius relating to light and relict being an archaic term for widow. It's fitting for [[spoiler: Chandler]].
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* SuperDrowningSkills: Airy sinks like a stone in the first chapter since he is made out of metal. He manages to survive after Liam helps him out.
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* SuperDrowningSkills: Airy sinks like a stone in the first chapter since he is he's made out of metal. He manages to survive after Liam helps him out.
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* TilMurderDoUsPart: Murder-Suicide with Lisa and Chandler. [[spoiler: Chandler, not being made out of glass, [[BungledSuicide survived]]]].
* WeirdSun: The Sun on the plane appears and disappears based on if the plug is connected.
* WeirdSun: The Sun on the plane appears and disappears based on if the plug is connected.
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* TilMurderDoUsPart: Specifically Murder-Suicide with Lisa and Chandler. [[spoiler: Chandler, not being made out of glass, [[BungledSuicide survived]]]].
* WeirdSun: The Sun on the plane appears and disappears based on if the plug is connected. It doesn't turn dark, rather a heavy fog fills the plane.
* WeirdSun: The Sun on the plane appears and disappears based on if the plug is connected. It doesn't turn dark, rather a heavy fog fills the plane.
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** You ''also'' run the risk of going to a universe that can change you permanently, as was the case for [[spoiler: Silas/Absracty]].
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** You ''also'' run the risk of going to a universe that can change you permanently, as was the case for [[spoiler: Silas/Absracty]].Silas/Abstracty]].
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* ParentalNeglect: In the [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext river scene]], Chandler deliberately ignored Hunter in one of the memories.
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* ParentalNeglect: In the [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext rainbow river scene]], Chandler deliberately ignored Hunter in one of the memories.memories, looking at a television. It comes back to bite Hunter as he stands down from a fight because of Chandler finally looking at him.
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: Chandler pulls this off to avoid repercussions for killing Lisa.]]
* ParentalNeglect: In the [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext river scene]], Chandler deliberately ignored Hunter in one of the memories.
* ParentalNeglect: In the [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext river scene]], Chandler deliberately ignored Hunter in one of the memories.
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The title is a reference to the [[Music/{{TheOcean}} Pelagial]] album, and each chapter title is a pelagic layer, with unique secondary titles for each of the chapters.
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* DullEyesOfUnhappiness: Airy's remaining eye is considered this.
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* MetaphoricallyTrue: Silas ''did'' get sent on their way home, just [[ImpossibleTask without a code]].
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** Chris' surname is Klarus, a brand of flashlight.
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* AlliterativeName: Downplayed, but phonetically alliterative for '''C'''hris '''K'''larus.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Liam and Bryce looked oddly suspicious to Chris, which made him contact the only person he trusted. '''[[KnightTemplarBigBrother Hunter]]'''.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Liam and Bryce looked oddly suspicious to Chris, which made him contact the only person he trusted. trusted... '''[[KnightTemplarBigBrother Hunter]]'''.Hunter]]'''.
* SelfAppliedNickname: Airy was Hunter's AffectionateNickname for his younger brother, Aaron. The meaning is distorted enough to make Hunter uncomfortable.
* SelfAppliedNickname: Airy was Hunter's AffectionateNickname for his younger brother, Aaron. The meaning is distorted enough to make Hunter uncomfortable.
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* OnlyOneAfterlife: When you die, you go to the Waiting Room. If you can't find the radio, you're effectively stuck there with visions of your loved ones leading you further away from it.
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* OnlyOneAfterlife: When you die, you go to the Waiting Room. If you can't find the radio, [[InterdimensionalTravelDevice radio]], you're effectively stuck there with visions of your loved ones leading you further away from it.
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* HappyMarriageCharade: Chandler and Lisa, at least until Chandler snaps.
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* MeaningfulRename: Lucius Relict, lucius relating to light and relict being an archaic term for widow. It's fitting for Chandler.
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* MeaningfulRename: Lucius Relict, lucius relating to light and relict being an archaic term for widow. It's fitting for Chandler.[[spoiler: Chandler]].
* OnlyOneAfterlife: When you die, you go to the Waiting Room. If you can't find the radio, you're effectively stuck there with visions of your loved ones leading you further away from it.
** If you don't see any illusions, it just gets darker the further away you go, and there's ''no landmarks in sight to guide you back''. Lisa has been walking alone for over a decade.
* OnlyOneAfterlife: When you die, you go to the Waiting Room. If you can't find the radio, you're effectively stuck there with visions of your loved ones leading you further away from it.
** If you don't see any illusions, it just gets darker the further away you go, and there's ''no landmarks in sight to guide you back''. Lisa has been walking alone for over a decade.
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* TilMurderDoUsPart: Murder-Suicide with Lisa and Chandler. [[spoiler: Chandler, not being made out of glass, [[BungledSuicide survived]]]].
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* DrowningMySorrows: Lucius does this often, understandable as he [[spoiler:killed his wife in a car accident and fled the ''country'']].
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* MeaningfulRename: Lucius Relict, lucius relating to light and relict being an archaic term for widow. It's fitting to for Chandler.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: WordOfGod states that EON's Airy is trans.
* BatterUp: Hunter uses a baseball bat as a weapon.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: WordOfGod in the (defunct) Discord server states that EON's Airy is trans.
* BatterUp: Hunter uses a baseball bat asa weapon.his weapon of choice.
* BatterUp: Hunter uses a baseball bat as
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** You also ''also'' run the risk of going to a universe that can change you permanently, as is was the case for Silas.[[spoiler: Silas/Absracty]].
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** You also run the risk of going to a universe that can change you permanently.
* DoomMagnet: Almost all of Hunter's entire immediate family have died in a car crash.
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** You also run the risk of going to a universe that can change you permanently.
permanently, as is the case for Silas.
* DoomMagnet: Almost all of Hunter's entire immediate family have died in a carcrash.crash, save for Chris.
* DoomMagnet: Almost all of Hunter's entire immediate family have died in a car
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* HalfSiblingAngst: Averted, Chris and Hunter get along just fine.
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: '''Hunter.''' As soon as he finds out that his younger brother is alive and ''injured'', it doesn't matter how far away you are or how well you hide.
* LightIsNotGood: Several flashbacks have implied someone else used the computer before Airy, and that they pretended they were the Sun itself. It's also implied they killed someone to "send them home".
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: '''Hunter.''' As soon as he finds out that his younger brother is alive and ''injured'', it doesn't matter how far away you are or how well you hide.
* LightIsNotGood: Several flashbacks have implied someone else used the computer before Airy, and that they pretended they were the Sun itself. It's also implied they killed someone to "send them home".
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* HalfSiblingAngst: Averted, Chris and Hunter get along just fine.
fine, mostly due to Hunter's desperate attempts to have ''any'' family.
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: '''Hunter.''' As soon as he finds out that his younger brother is alive and ''injured'', it doesn't matter how far away you are or how well youhide.
hide, he will beat you senseless. It gets awkward for him when ''Airy'' is the one who has done wrong to his "kidnappers".
* LightIsNotGood: Several flashbacks have implied someone else used the computer before Airy, and that they pretended they were theSun itself.''Sun itself''. It's also implied they killed someone to "send them home".
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: '''Hunter.''' As soon as he finds out that his younger brother is alive and ''injured'', it doesn't matter how far away you are or how well you
* LightIsNotGood: Several flashbacks have implied someone else used the computer before Airy, and that they pretended they were the
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* SuperDrowningSkills: Airy sinks like a stone in the first chapter because he is made out of metal. He manages to survive after Liam helps him
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Liam and Bryce looked oddly suspicious to Chris, which made him contact the only person he trusted. '''[[KnightTemplarBigBrother Hunter]]'''.
* SuperDrowningSkills: Airy sinks like a stone in the first chapterbecause since he is made out of metal. He manages to survive after Liam helps himhim out.
* SuperDrowningSkills: Airy sinks like a stone in the first chapter
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* ParentsKnowTheirChildren: Chandler recognised Airy.
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* ParentsKnowTheirChildren: Chandler recognised Airy.Airy, while the latter was simply confused.
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* DyeHard: WordOfGod states that Airy and Hunter dyed their hair blue, Hunter continuing to do so after Airy died.
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''Eon: Pelagial'' is a ''WebAnimation/{{ONE}}'' fanfiction written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/SaltedSour SaltedSour]] and published on Archive of our Own. You can read it [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42110784/chapters/105723405 here]].
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: WordOfGod states that EON's Airy is trans.
* DoomMagnet: Almost all of Hunter's entire immediate family have died in a car crash.
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** Four new characters related to Airy.
** ''Ten'' characters that appear solely in flashbacks.
* ParentsKnowTheirChildren: Chandler recognised Airy.
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** ''Ten'' characters that appear solely in flashbacks.
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''Eon: Pelagial'' is a ''WebAnimation/{{ONE}}'' fanfiction written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/SaltedSour SaltedSour]] and published on Archive of our Own. You can read it [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/42110784/chapters/105723405 here]].
It follows Airy sending the contestants (and himself) back after he almost [[SuperDrowningSkills drowned]]. The story goes from [[RoadTripPlot "Liam and Bryce trying to reach Amelia, with Airy tagging along"]] to "The worst family reunion in history".
The title is a reference to the [[Music/{{TheOcean}} Pelagial]] album, and each chapter title is a pelagic layer, with unique secondary titles for each of the chapters.
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!! Eon: Pelagial contains examples of:
* BatterUp: Hunter uses a baseball bat as a weapon.
* DeathIsCheap: It's complicated. On one hand, if you have the correct code you can go back to your universe after you die. On the other hand, if you don't, you'll have to find it, which is nigh-impossible.
* DyeHard: WordOfGod states that Airy and Hunter dyed their hair blue, Hunter continuing to do so after Airy died.
* FieryRedhead: Inverted. In the human designs, Hunter's hair is dyed blue.
* HalfSiblingAngst: Averted, Chris and Hunter get along just fine.
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: '''Hunter.''' As soon as he finds out that his younger brother is alive and ''injured'', it doesn't matter how far away you are or how well you hide.
* LightIsNotGood: Several flashbacks have implied someone else used the computer before Airy, and that they pretended they were the Sun itself. It's also implied they killed someone to "send them home".
* MeaningfulName: Several.
** The ''Lanthorne'' family are all objects related to light.
** Hunter spends the first few chapters stalking Liam and Bryce. It's even Lampshaded in a chapter.
** Chandler is a title for someone who makes candles. Chandler is ''also'' the name of a candle.
* MeaningfulRename: Lucius Relict, lucius relating to light and relict being an archaic term for widow. It's fitting to Chandler.
* OriginalCharacters: ''Several.''
* PlayingWithFire: Hunter's modus operandi is setting himself on fire as he fights in the dark.
* SuperDrowningSkills: Airy sinks like a stone in the first chapter because he is made out of metal. He manages to survive after Liam helps him
** Later, another character also drowns for the same reason.
* WeirdSun: The Sun on the plane appears and disappears based on if the plug is connected.
It follows Airy sending the contestants (and himself) back after he almost [[SuperDrowningSkills drowned]]. The story goes from [[RoadTripPlot "Liam and Bryce trying to reach Amelia, with Airy tagging along"]] to "The worst family reunion in history".
The title is a reference to the [[Music/{{TheOcean}} Pelagial]] album, and each chapter title is a pelagic layer, with unique secondary titles for each of the chapters.
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!! Eon: Pelagial contains examples of:
* BatterUp: Hunter uses a baseball bat as a weapon.
* DeathIsCheap: It's complicated. On one hand, if you have the correct code you can go back to your universe after you die. On the other hand, if you don't, you'll have to find it, which is nigh-impossible.
* DyeHard: WordOfGod states that Airy and Hunter dyed their hair blue, Hunter continuing to do so after Airy died.
* FieryRedhead: Inverted. In the human designs, Hunter's hair is dyed blue.
* HalfSiblingAngst: Averted, Chris and Hunter get along just fine.
* KnightTemplarBigBrother: '''Hunter.''' As soon as he finds out that his younger brother is alive and ''injured'', it doesn't matter how far away you are or how well you hide.
* LightIsNotGood: Several flashbacks have implied someone else used the computer before Airy, and that they pretended they were the Sun itself. It's also implied they killed someone to "send them home".
* MeaningfulName: Several.
** The ''Lanthorne'' family are all objects related to light.
** Hunter spends the first few chapters stalking Liam and Bryce. It's even Lampshaded in a chapter.
** Chandler is a title for someone who makes candles. Chandler is ''also'' the name of a candle.
* MeaningfulRename: Lucius Relict, lucius relating to light and relict being an archaic term for widow. It's fitting to Chandler.
* OriginalCharacters: ''Several.''
* PlayingWithFire: Hunter's modus operandi is setting himself on fire as he fights in the dark.
* SuperDrowningSkills: Airy sinks like a stone in the first chapter because he is made out of metal. He manages to survive after Liam helps him
** Later, another character also drowns for the same reason.
* WeirdSun: The Sun on the plane appears and disappears based on if the plug is connected.
