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* DespairEventHorizon: A prominent theme, although only [[spoiler: [[BrokenBird Vriska]]]], [[spoiler: [[NotSoStoic Kanaya]]]] and [[spoiler: [[VillainProtagonist Karkat]]]] cross it. In [[spoiler: Karkat]]'s case, [[spoiler:he]] also crosses the MoralEventHorizon.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Nepeta]], for [[spoiler: Karkat]]. If it was worth it, however, [[spoiler: [[ByronicHero is up to debate]]]].
* HowDoIShotWeb: Karkat, at first. He soon gets the hang of it, though.
* HowDoIShotWeb: Karkat, at first. He soon gets the hang of it, though.
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* LittleMissSnarker / CatsAreSnarkers: Nepeta.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: In the fight between [[spoiler: Karkat]] and [[spoiler: Terezi]], the latter clearly has the upper hand due to [[spoiler: her clairvoyancy]]. Luckily, [[spoiler: Karkat can shield himself]].
* NoOSHACompliance: Erhellen [[spoiler: aka Vriska]]'s barrier.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Everyone acts more serious than they are in the webcomic: Karkat's only curses are [[GoshDangItToHeck not so hard]], Nepeta's cuteness is DownPlayed, Vriska's a little less bitchy, but Terezi is written as ''extremely'' dishonest and stubborn. It's subverted and justified. This is [[CrapSackWorld Alternia]] and [[BreakTheCutie Madoka Magica]] combined.
** There is only one situation where Karkat swears, upon getting hit by [[spoiler: Witch!Kanaya]], and even then it's a GoshDangItToHeck.
* PimpedOutDress: Kanaya.
** Subverted with Nepeta, who is described as having a hunting coat instead, contradicting a lot of stereotypes.
*** Karkat is a possible candidate. His Puer Magi form has the feather arrangement, his Soul Gem in the middle of the feathers, and pieces of fabric tied to his neck and both wrists.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: In the fight between [[spoiler: Karkat]] and [[spoiler: Terezi]], the latter clearly has the upper hand due to [[spoiler: her clairvoyancy]]. Luckily, [[spoiler: Karkat can shield himself]].
* NoOSHACompliance: Erhellen [[spoiler: aka Vriska]]'s barrier.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Everyone acts more serious than they are in the webcomic: Karkat's only curses are [[GoshDangItToHeck not so hard]], Nepeta's cuteness is DownPlayed, Vriska's a little less bitchy, but Terezi is written as ''extremely'' dishonest and stubborn. It's subverted and justified. This is [[CrapSackWorld Alternia]] and [[BreakTheCutie Madoka Magica]] combined.
** There is only one situation where Karkat swears, upon getting hit by [[spoiler: Witch!Kanaya]], and even then it's a GoshDangItToHeck.
* PimpedOutDress: Kanaya.
** Subverted with Nepeta, who is described as having a hunting coat instead, contradicting a lot of stereotypes.
*** Karkat is a possible candidate. His Puer Magi form has the feather arrangement, his Soul Gem in the middle of the feathers, and pieces of fabric tied to his neck and both wrists.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness:
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* PimpedOutDress:
** Subverted with Nepeta, who is described as having a hunting coat instead, contradicting a lot of stereotypes.
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%%** Kanaya.
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** WhatCouldHaveBeen: The previous title was '[[ProtagonistTitle Ka]][[ProtagonistJourneyToVillain rk]][[AntagonistTitle at]], [[OurLichesAreDifferent Puer Magi]]'.
*** The original plan of the author was to let loose a bit more about her and Karkat's past, Dave would be mentioned as her new matespirit. However, this was abandoned due to this being set in an Alternate Universe where Dave doesn't even exist (yet).
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: The title.
*** The original plan of the author was to let loose a bit more about her and Karkat's past, Dave would be mentioned as her new matespirit. However, this was abandoned due to this being set in an Alternate Universe where Dave doesn't even exist (yet).
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: The title.
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*** The original plan of the author was to let loose a bit more about her and Karkat's past, Dave would be mentioned as her new matespirit. However, this was abandoned due to this being set in an Alternate Universe where Dave doesn't even exist (yet).
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*** Taken to a higher level when Nepeta says: 'I'm done with you. DONE.' to [[spoiler: Karkat]]. Heidi's mother in ''So B. It'' used to say 'Done.' when she was done with a (usually easy) task, but also used it out of frustration (ex. tying her shoelaces, she stopped doing that very soon). Nepeta [[CatNinja who's certainly]] '''[[AdaptationalBadass not]]''' [[AdaptationalIntelligence mentally disabled]] is just as done with [[spoiler: Karkat]] as the mother of Heidi with those tasks.
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** The chapter names are a reference to these six songs:
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xaYaPQUkPNM Written in Stone]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AzJ7CvzoDxc Golden Fields]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lZHzjYv7G70 Mystic Tides]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0LYbJ9NBCRY 20 Years Later]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=orn7TOJyh70 Starlight]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dUPwDqAezek Embers To Dust]]
* SoundtrackDissonance: The tracks linked above are all rather bouncy.
* TakingTheBullet: [[spoiler: Nepeta, with harsh consequences]].
* TitleDrop: Subverted. In the chapters, the titles never get mentioned and don't resemble them [[NonIndicativeName at all]].
** However the last title (Embers to Dust) can be taken as something precious dissolving into dust, [[spoiler: aka Karkat turning into a witch]]. If so, it was completely unintentional.
* {{Understatement}}: The discription of chapter five:
--> [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Things]] [[CurbStompBattle get]] [[TakingTheBullet shaken]] [[HeroicSacrifice up]] [[{{Revenge}} a]] [[ProtagonistJourneyToVillain bit]].
* TheUnfought: [[spoiler: [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie Karkinos]]]].
--> [[spoiler: ''[[DespairEventHorizon Game over]]'']].
* [[UselessBoyfriend Useless Girlfriend]]: Nepeta, at first. Later, subverted.
* [[spoiler: VillainProtagonist]]: Ultimately.
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xaYaPQUkPNM Written in Stone]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AzJ7CvzoDxc Golden Fields]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lZHzjYv7G70 Mystic Tides]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0LYbJ9NBCRY 20 Years Later]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=orn7TOJyh70 Starlight]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dUPwDqAezek Embers To Dust]]
* SoundtrackDissonance: The tracks linked above are all rather bouncy.
* TakingTheBullet: [[spoiler: Nepeta, with harsh consequences]].
* TitleDrop: Subverted. In the chapters, the titles never get mentioned and don't resemble them [[NonIndicativeName at all]].
** However the last title (Embers to Dust) can be taken as something precious dissolving into dust, [[spoiler: aka Karkat turning into a witch]]. If so, it was completely unintentional.
* {{Understatement}}: The discription of chapter five:
--> [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Things]] [[CurbStompBattle get]] [[TakingTheBullet shaken]] [[HeroicSacrifice up]] [[{{Revenge}} a]] [[ProtagonistJourneyToVillain bit]].
* TheUnfought: [[spoiler: [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie Karkinos]]]].
--> [[spoiler: ''[[DespairEventHorizon Game over]]'']].
* [[UselessBoyfriend Useless Girlfriend]]: Nepeta, at first. Later, subverted.
* [[spoiler: VillainProtagonist]]: Ultimately.
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*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xaYaPQUkPNM Written in Stone]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AzJ7CvzoDxc Golden Fields]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lZHzjYv7G70 Mystic Tides]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0LYbJ9NBCRY 20 Years Later]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=orn7TOJyh70 Starlight]]
*** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dUPwDqAezek Embers To Dust]]
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* TitleDrop: Subverted. In the chapters, the titles never get mentioned and don't resemble them [[NonIndicativeName at all]].
** However the last title (Embers to Dust) can be taken as something precious dissolving into dust, [[spoiler: aka Karkat turning into a witch]]. If so, it was completely unintentional.
--> [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Things]] [[CurbStompBattle get]] [[TakingTheBullet shaken]] [[HeroicSacrifice up]] [[{{Revenge}} a]] [[ProtagonistJourneyToVillain bit]].
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** Karkat - Chest
** Nepeta - [[StealthPun Heart]]
** Kanaya - Stomach
** Vriska - Lower Back
** Terezi - Intestines. Located lower than Kanaya's, but higher than Vriska's
** Also, [[spoiler: Karkinos' barrier seems full of it]].
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Subverted. All characters, including the mentioned ones, get proper [[spoiler: though [[DownerEnding sad]]]] closure. This is due to the [[spoiler: true nature of the contracted]].
* WhatHaveIBecome: [[spoiler: Karkat]] heavily questions this h[[spoiler:im]]self at the end right before [[spoiler: witching out]].
* WholePlotReference: [[spoiler: In the fight between two rivals, a lively character is doomed to die. Both of the rivals promise not to tell anything to the character about it, but the character eventually discovers it and says they would be giving one of the rivals a taste of their own medicine. The characters lover, however, manages to calm them down and confront their rival himself, who strangles the lover almost immediately and leaves them for dead. When they finally wake up, they overhear a conversation between the lively character and their rival and kills them both before [[DespairEventHorizon fully falling into despair]] [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie and losing it]]]]. Admit it, the plot is Turnabout Corner if it was on Alternia and enacted by Puer Magi.
** PlayingGertrude: Terezi and Karkat, both having the age of teenagers at the time, play [[spoiler: Pal Meraktis]], age [[spoiler: 46]] and [[spoiler: Alita Tiala]], whose age is [[spoiler: 21]]. The difference between Nepeta and [[spoiler: Wocky]] is smaller, [[spoiler: Wocky]] being [[spoiler: 19]].
* {{Yandere}}: [[spoiler: Karkinos]].
** Nepeta - [[StealthPun Heart]]
** Kanaya - Stomach
** Vriska - Lower Back
** Terezi - Intestines. Located lower than Kanaya's, but higher than Vriska's
** Also, [[spoiler: Karkinos' barrier seems full of it]].
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Subverted. All characters, including the mentioned ones, get proper [[spoiler: though [[DownerEnding sad]]]] closure. This is due to the [[spoiler: true nature of the contracted]].
* WhatHaveIBecome: [[spoiler: Karkat]] heavily questions this h[[spoiler:im]]self at the end right before [[spoiler: witching out]].
* WholePlotReference: [[spoiler: In the fight between two rivals, a lively character is doomed to die. Both of the rivals promise not to tell anything to the character about it, but the character eventually discovers it and says they would be giving one of the rivals a taste of their own medicine. The characters lover, however, manages to calm them down and confront their rival himself, who strangles the lover almost immediately and leaves them for dead. When they finally wake up, they overhear a conversation between the lively character and their rival and kills them both before [[DespairEventHorizon fully falling into despair]] [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie and losing it]]]]. Admit it, the plot is Turnabout Corner if it was on Alternia and enacted by Puer Magi.
** PlayingGertrude: Terezi and Karkat, both having the age of teenagers at the time, play [[spoiler: Pal Meraktis]], age [[spoiler: 46]] and [[spoiler: Alita Tiala]], whose age is [[spoiler: 21]]. The difference between Nepeta and [[spoiler: Wocky]] is smaller, [[spoiler: Wocky]] being [[spoiler: 19]].
* {{Yandere}}: [[spoiler: Karkinos]].
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** Nepeta - [[StealthPun Heart]]
** Kanaya - Stomach
** Vriska - Lower Back
** Terezi - Intestines. Located lower than Kanaya's, but higher than Vriska's
** Also, [[spoiler: Karkinos' barrier seems full of it]].
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Subverted. All characters, including the mentioned ones, get proper [[spoiler: though [[DownerEnding sad]]]] closure. This is due to the [[spoiler: true nature of the contracted]].
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* WholePlotReference: [[spoiler: In the fight between two rivals, a lively character is doomed to die. Both of the rivals promise not to tell anything to the character about it, but the character eventually discovers it and says they would be giving one of the rivals a taste of their own medicine. The characters lover, however, manages to calm them down and confront their rival himself, who strangles the lover almost immediately and leaves them for dead. When they finally wake up, they overhear a conversation between the lively character and their rival and kills them both before [[DespairEventHorizon fully falling into despair]] and [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie
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* WeaponOfChoice:
** Karkat - A sickle [[spoiler: and vein magic]]
** Nepeta - [[WolverineClaws Claws the size of her head]] and CharmPerson
** Kanaya - An [[ChainsawGood enchanted chainsaw]]
** Vriska - A Fluorite Octet which can summon multiple weapons
** Terezi - A cane, but also [[spoiler: has used a noose to strangle Karkat]]
** Karkat - A sickle [[spoiler: and vein magic]]
** Nepeta - [[WolverineClaws Claws the size of her head]] and CharmPerson
** Kanaya - An [[ChainsawGood enchanted chainsaw]]
** Vriska - A Fluorite Octet which can summon multiple weapons
** Terezi - A cane, but also [[spoiler: has used a noose to strangle Karkat]]
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* WholePlotReference: [[spoiler: In the fight between two rivals, a lively character is doomed to die. Both of the rivals promise not to tell anything to the character about it, but the character eventually discovers it and says they would be giving one of the rivals a taste of their own medicine. The characters lover, however, manages to calm them down and confront their rival himself, who strangles the lover almost immediately and leaves them for dead. When they finally wake up, they overhear a conversation between the lively character and their rival and [[KillEmAll kills them both]] before [[DespairEventHorizon fully falling into despair]] [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie and losing it]]]]. Admit it, the plot is Turnabout Corner if it was on Alternia and enacted by Puer Magi.
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* WholePlotReference: [[spoiler: In the fight between two rivals, a lively character is doomed to die. Both of the rivals promise not to tell anything to the character about it, but the character eventually discovers it and says they would be giving one of the rivals a taste of their own medicine. The characters lover, however, manages to calm them down and confront their rival himself, who strangles the lover almost immediately and leaves them for dead. When they finally wake up, they overhear a conversation between the lively character and their rival and [[KillEmAll kills them both]] both before [[DespairEventHorizon fully falling into despair]] [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie and losing it]]]]. Admit it, the plot is Turnabout Corner if it was on Alternia and enacted by Puer Magi.