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--> "Are you sure? I don't see any miasma, and I'm almost positive we don't have any dead dwarves in the basement."
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--> "Well, anyway, the point is, we can be ESP buddies! Now all we need is an alien, a time traveler, a slider, an omnipotent Japanese schoolgirl, and a snarky narrator! Ooh! Do you think Twilight could be snarky enough? I'm sure she could make enough obscure literary allusions, and she's done lots of voiceovers when she's dictating letters to Princess Celestia!"
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--> "Sorry, sorry. I just get so excited sometimes, it gets hard to stop myself, and before I know it people are accusing me of turning Rainbow Dash into cupcakes and I don't know where to even begin with that kind of recipe and--"
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--> "Wow, you've got some kind of Ditzy Sense? That's so cool! I thought I was the only pony in the whole wide world that had that kind of ability! Well, me and my sisters. And Mom. And Granny Pie. And--"
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--> ''Years in the past, but not many...''
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---> Rejected Title: Undying Morbid Flashback of a Fateful Hour's Soulbound Miracle
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---> Rejected Title: Undying Morbid Flashback of a Fateful Hour's Soulbound MiracleMiracle\\
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-->'''Mr. Cake:''' Thin pot holder! I'm okay!
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* GroinAttack: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/2/elementals-of-harmony/plans-making-contact Plans Making Contact]]:
--> Also to her shock and dismay was the unicorn horn jabbing a very sensitive spot... Ditzy Doo performing an impressive headstand while wearing an expression of unspeakable pain. As the pegasus tipped forward, Rarity could see why. "Oh dear..." ... Several apologies and a discreet ice pack later, the two continued their conversation under more equitable conditions, both seated (Ditzy rather gingerly)[.]
--> Also to her shock and dismay was the unicorn horn jabbing a very sensitive spot... Ditzy Doo performing an impressive headstand while wearing an expression of unspeakable pain. As the pegasus tipped forward, Rarity could see why. "Oh dear..." ... Several apologies and a discreet ice pack later, the two continued their conversation under more equitable conditions, both seated (Ditzy rather gingerly)[.]
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* {{Epiphora}}: From "Plans Making Contact": Ditzy's resolve to save the world:
--> No, she could make this work. She had to make this work.
--> No, she could make this work. She had to make this work.
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* {{Mesodiplosis}}: "How Pinkie Got Her Cutie Mark": Using "for" to indicate that all these are representing the same balance:
-->'''Teferi:''' This plane seems to expect a balance. Creation for destruction. Order for chaos. Harmony for discord."
-->'''Teferi:''' This plane seems to expect a balance. Creation for destruction. Order for chaos. Harmony for discord."
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** Morbid Flashback's Author's Note mentions ''VideoGame/TouhouProject'':
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** Morbid Flashback's Author's Note mentions ''VideoGame/TouhouProject'':''Franchise/TouhouProject'':
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** Morbid Flashback's Author's Note mentions ''VideoGame/TouhouProject'':
---> Rejected Title: Undying Morbid Flashback of a Fateful Hour's Soulbound Miracle
That said, I wouldn't be surprised if there's a Touhou game with something like that for a name...
---> Rejected Title: Undying Morbid Flashback of a Fateful Hour's Soulbound Miracle
That said, I wouldn't be surprised if there's a Touhou game with something like that for a name...
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*** When Pinkie reveals that Soarin's mom's name is [[Film/YoungFrankenstein Frau Blucher, a whiny is heard from the Kitchen of Sugarcube Corner]].
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Physical rather than moral. The oil finds a way to get at most of the Mane Six, but is incompatible with the Element of Kindness, rendering Fluttershy immune.
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* NoIndoorVoice: Vorinclex, who is physiologically incapable of volume control.
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* NoIndoorVoice: Vorinclex, who Vorinclex is physiologically incapable of volume control.
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* PartiallyCivilizedAnimal: Angel Bunny's species, the lagomaths.
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* AlternateSpeciesCounterpart: Due to a universal ban on humans, humanoids that arrive in to the plane of Ungula turn into an equinoid counterpart of themselves.
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** Soarin' of the Wonderbolts has the last name 'Markov'; HilarityEnsues when Ditzy tells Rainbow Dash that Sorin Markov is coming over for a visit.
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** Soarin' of the Wonderbolts has the last name 'Markov'; HilarityEnsues hilarity ensues when Ditzy tells Rainbow Dash that Sorin Markov is coming over for a visit.
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* DrillSergeantNasty: Cheerilee, full stop. She has a lot of free-floating rage because Celestia stupidly enacted a law against killing hopeless idiots like Snips and Snails and a platoon to whip into shape. The results [[HilarityEnsues should be entertaining.]]
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* DrillSergeantNasty: Cheerilee, full stop. She Cheerilee has a lot of free-floating rage because Celestia stupidly enacted a law against killing hopeless idiots like Snips and Snails and a platoon to whip into shape. The results [[HilarityEnsues should be entertaining.]]shape.
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* IGotBigger: The glistening oil has some rather dramatic effects on Spike.
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* AnAesop: The epilogue gives us [[EpilogueLetter a friendship report\\ from Twilight, which gives us two:
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* AnAesop: The epilogue gives us [[EpilogueLetter a friendship report\\ report]] from Twilight, which gives us two:
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* DieOrFly: [[spoiler:Dinky figures out her [[AntiMagic special talent]] less than a second before she gets wiped from existence.]]
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* DieOrFly: [[spoiler:Dinky [[spoiler:Dinky]] figures out her [[spoiler:her [[AntiMagic special talent]] talent]]]] less than a second before she gets wiped from existence.]]
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* DrawExtraCards: The card described at the end of the Epilogue, "Go Postal", the number based on damage numbers:
--> Whenever a creature you control deals combat damage to a player this turn, draw that many cards.
--> Whenever a creature you control deals combat damage to a player this turn, draw that many cards.
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--> ''Years in the past, but not many...]]''
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--> ''Years in the past, but not many...]]''''
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** To characters in the ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' light novel series:
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** To characters in the ''LightNovel/HaruhiSuzumiya'' ''Literature/HaruhiSuzumiya'' light novel series: