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* {{Blackmail}}: Rei blackmails Chihiro and her ''friend'' to force them to stop bothering her:
-->'''Rei:''' If you two continue along this path, me telling the whole class what you sound like during orgasm will be the *second*-worst thing to happen to you today, because I will start dropping hints about how poorly soundproofed the bathroom stalls are.\\
'''Chihiro:''' You wouldn't dare.\\
'''Rei:''' Are you sure enough of that to risk it? I am not asking a lot, Tanaka; all I want you to do is to stop mocking me.\\
'''Chihiro:''' Fine. You win. I'll just have to content myself with watching you and the gaijin fight over Shinji instead.
-->'''Rei:''' If you two continue along this path, me telling the whole class what you sound like during orgasm will be the *second*-worst thing to happen to you today, because I will start dropping hints about how poorly soundproofed the bathroom stalls are.\\
'''Chihiro:''' You wouldn't dare.\\
'''Rei:''' Are you sure enough of that to risk it? I am not asking a lot, Tanaka; all I want you to do is to stop mocking me.\\
'''Chihiro:''' Fine. You win. I'll just have to content myself with watching you and the gaijin fight over Shinji instead.
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''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' by TRopers/{{Jake}} (author of ''Fanfic/TheNextFrontier'') is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' PeggySue fanfic inspired by ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'' and full of comedy, drama, romance, snark and the "Israfel Special". It can be found in the Sufficient Velocity forums in [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.17721/ this thread]], on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.338508/ SpaceBattles]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5671597 AO3]]. The AO3 version is not up-to date with the forum versions, although the AO3 version fixes various typos and other minor errors pointed out on the forums and the Sufficient Velocity version is where most of the short exerpts from forthcoming updates get posted as it's the most active thread. A rough first draft can be read [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/working-title-doing-it-right-this-time-evangelion-extremely-rough-draft.14636/ here]].
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''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' by TRopers/{{Jake}} Tropers/{{Jake}} (author of ''Fanfic/TheNextFrontier'') is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' PeggySue fanfic inspired by ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'' and full of comedy, drama, romance, snark and the "Israfel Special". It can be found in the Sufficient Velocity forums in [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.17721/ this thread]], on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.338508/ SpaceBattles]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5671597 AO3]]. The AO3 version is not up-to date with the forum versions, although the AO3 version fixes various typos and other minor errors pointed out on the forums and the Sufficient Velocity version is where most of the short exerpts from forthcoming updates get posted as it's the most active thread. A rough first draft can be read [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/working-title-doing-it-right-this-time-evangelion-extremely-rough-draft.14636/ here]].
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* Macgyvering: Kaworu's improvised time machine. When this was hinted at on the forum thread it was immediately suggested that he was "the Angelic Macgyver", but in practice he's more the Angelic [[Webcomic/SluggyFreelance Riff]].
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* Macgyvering: MacGyvering: Kaworu's improvised time machine. When this was hinted at on the forum thread it was immediately suggested that he was "the Angelic Macgyver", but in practice he's more the Angelic [[Webcomic/SluggyFreelance Riff]].
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* McGuyvering: Kaworu's improvised time machine. When this was hinted at on the forum thread it was immediately suggested that he was "the Angelic McGuyver", but in practice he's more the Angelic [[Webcomic/SluggyFreelance Riff]].
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* McGuyvering: Macgyvering: Kaworu's improvised time machine. When this was hinted at on the forum thread it was immediately suggested that he was "the Angelic McGuyver", Macgyver", but in practice he's more the Angelic [[Webcomic/SluggyFreelance Riff]].
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''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' by TRopers/{{Jake}} (autor of ''Fanfic/TheNextFrontier'') is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' PeggySue fanfic inspired by ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'' and full of comedy, drama, romance, snark and the "Israfel Special". It can be found in the Sufficient Velocity forums in [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.17721/ this thread]], on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.338508/ SpaceBattles]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5671597 AO3]]. The AO3 version is not up-to date with the forum versions, although the AO3 version fixes various typos and other minor errors pointed out on the forums and the Sufficient Velocity version is where most of the short exerpts from forthcoming updates get posted as it's the most active thread. A rough first draft can be read [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/working-title-doing-it-right-this-time-evangelion-extremely-rough-draft.14636/ here]].
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''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' by TRopers/{{Jake}} (autor (author of ''Fanfic/TheNextFrontier'') is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' PeggySue fanfic inspired by ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'' and full of comedy, drama, romance, snark and the "Israfel Special". It can be found in the Sufficient Velocity forums in [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.17721/ this thread]], on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.338508/ SpaceBattles]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5671597 AO3]]. The AO3 version is not up-to date with the forum versions, although the AO3 version fixes various typos and other minor errors pointed out on the forums and the Sufficient Velocity version is where most of the short exerpts from forthcoming updates get posted as it's the most active thread. A rough first draft can be read [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/working-title-doing-it-right-this-time-evangelion-extremely-rough-draft.14636/ here]].
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* DuctTapeForEverything: Kaworu's improvised time machine has duct tape as an important structural component. Shinji does not find this reassuring.
* McGuyvering: Kaworu's improvised time machine. When this was hinted at on the forum thread it was immediately suggested that he was "the Angelic McGuyver", but in practice he's more the Angelic [[Webcomic/SluggyFreelance Riff]].
* NoOSHACompliance: Kaworu's desperately improvised time machine required several very important safety features of an already-damaged S2 Engine to be disabled. StuffBlowingUp ensues.
* YourHeadAsplode: Kaworu neglected to mention that this was a side effect of the MentalTimeTravel technique he McGuyver'd up. Not that it really mattered given the overclocked S2 Organ powering it ''also'' asplode shortly afterwards.
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->''"How does someone as naturaly clingy and possessive as me successfully practice polyamory, you mean?" Asuka smirked. "Easy. I'm clingy and possessive of both of them."''
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->''"How does someone as naturaly naturally clingy and possessive as me successfully practice polyamory, you mean?" Asuka smirked. "Easy. I'm clingy and possessive of both of them."''
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* EarthShatteringKaboom: When [[spoiler:Kaworu]] sent everyone back in time, Lilith's S2 engine overloaded and exploded, blowing Earth up.
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* EarthShatteringKaboom: When [[spoiler:Kaworu]] sent everyone back in time, Lilith's time [[MacGyvering via an FTL communcations device, Lilltih's S2 engine, and a Dr. Akagi designed brain scanner]], said S2 engine overloaded and exploded, blowing Earth up.
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* DoomedHometown: [[spoiler:Earth blew up]] when Kaworu sent everyone back in time.
* EarthShatteringKaboom: When [[spoiler:Kaworu]] sent everyone back in time, Lilith's S2 engine overloaded and exploded, blowing Earth up.
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* GroinAttack: The story opens with Rei being the one to take on Sachiel solo instead of Shinji. She also has [[PercussiveTherapy a certain amount of aggression to work off.]] This trope is the ''first'' thing she tries, and [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Sachiel's day just gets worse from there.]]
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* GroinAttack: GroinAttack:
** The story opens with Rei being the one to take on Sachiel solo instead of Shinji. She also has [[PercussiveTherapy a certain amount of aggression to work off.]] This trope is the ''first'' thing she tries, and [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Sachiel's day just gets worse from there.]]
** The story opens with Rei being the one to take on Sachiel solo instead of Shinji. She also has [[PercussiveTherapy a certain amount of aggression to work off.]] This trope is the ''first'' thing she tries, and [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown Sachiel's day just gets worse from there.]]
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** [[spoiler:Shinji]] kicked [[spoiler:Kaworu]] in the groin after Third Impact.
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* SufficientlyAdvancedAlien: Asuka invokes the trope's name when Kaworu talks about Adam and Lilith's creators.
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''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' by TRopers/{{Jake}} (autor of ''Fanfic/TheNextFrontier'') is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' PeggySue fanfic inspired by ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'' and full of comedy, drama, romance, snark and the "Israfel Special". It can be found in the Sufficient Velocity forums in [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.17721/ this thread]], on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.338508/ SpaceBattles]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5671597 AO3]]. The AO3 version is not up-to date with the forum versions, and the spacebattles version is not up to date with the sufficientvelocity version. A rough first draft can be read [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/working-title-doing-it-right-this-time-evangelion-extremely-rough-draft.14636/ here]].
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''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' by TRopers/{{Jake}} (autor of ''Fanfic/TheNextFrontier'') is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' PeggySue fanfic inspired by ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'' and full of comedy, drama, romance, snark and the "Israfel Special". It can be found in the Sufficient Velocity forums in [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.17721/ this thread]], on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.338508/ SpaceBattles]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5671597 AO3]]. The AO3 version is not up-to date with the forum versions, although the AO3 version fixes various typos and other minor errors pointed out on the forums and the spacebattles Sufficient Velocity version is not up to date with where most of the sufficientvelocity version.short exerpts from forthcoming updates get posted as it's the most active thread. A rough first draft can be read [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/working-title-doing-it-right-this-time-evangelion-extremely-rough-draft.14636/ here]].
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''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' by TRopers/{{Jake}} (autor of ''Fanfic/TheNextFrontier'') is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' PeggySue fanfic inspired by ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'' and full of comedy, drama, romance, snark and the "Israfel Special". It can be found in the Sufficient Velocity forums in [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.17721/ this thread]], on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.338508/ SpaceBattles]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5671597 AO3]]. The AO3 version is not up-to date with the forum versions. A rough first draft can be read [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/working-title-doing-it-right-this-time-evangelion-extremely-rough-draft.14636/ here]].
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''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' by TRopers/{{Jake}} (autor of ''Fanfic/TheNextFrontier'') is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' PeggySue fanfic inspired by ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'' and full of comedy, drama, romance, snark and the "Israfel Special". It can be found in the Sufficient Velocity forums in [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.17721/ this thread]], on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.338508/ SpaceBattles]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5671597 AO3]]. The AO3 version is not up-to date with the forum versions.versions, and the spacebattles version is not up to date with the sufficientvelocity version. A rough first draft can be read [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/working-title-doing-it-right-this-time-evangelion-extremely-rough-draft.14636/ here]].
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''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' by TRopers/{{Jake}} (autor of ''Fanfic/TheNextFrontier'') is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' PeggySue fanfic inspired by ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'' and full of comedy, drama, romance, snark and the "Israfel Special". It can be found in the Sufficient Velocity forums in [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.17721/ this thread]], on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.338508/ SpaceBattles]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5671597 AO3]]. A rough first draft can be read [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/working-title-doing-it-right-this-time-evangelion-extremely-rough-draft.14636/ here]].
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''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'' by TRopers/{{Jake}} (autor of ''Fanfic/TheNextFrontier'') is a ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' PeggySue fanfic inspired by ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'' and full of comedy, drama, romance, snark and the "Israfel Special". It can be found in the Sufficient Velocity forums in [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.17721/ this thread]], on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/evangelion-doing-it-right-this-time.338508/ SpaceBattles]] or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/5671597 AO3]]. The AO3 version is not up-to date with the forum versions. A rough first draft can be read [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/working-title-doing-it-right-this-time-evangelion-extremely-rough-draft.14636/ here]].
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* MathematiciansAnswer: When Toji and Asuka are discussing their situation for the first time:
-->'''Toji''': Aw, hell, what part of this ''isn't'' weird
-->'''Asuka''': The time travel, or me not being a bitch?
-->'''Toji''': Yes
-->'''Toji''': Aw, hell, what part of this ''isn't'' weird
-->'''Asuka''': The time travel, or me not being a bitch?
-->'''Toji''': Yes
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* RedHeadedHero: Asuka is a redhead and a HumongousMecha pilot. After having utterly failed in the original timeline and returning to the past together with her fellow pilots she is the one encourages Shinji to actually try "to save this clusterfuck".
* RedIsHeroic: Asuka wears red and her HumongousMecha is red, too.
* RedIsHeroic: Asuka wears red and her HumongousMecha is red, too.
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-->'''Asuka:''' ''[half-heartedly]'' Was it absolutely necessary to pull a gun on him?" Asuka chided, half-heartedly.\\
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-->'''Asuka:''' ''[half-heartedly]'' Was it absolutely necessary to pull a gun on him?" Asuka chided, half-heartedly.\\him?"
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* WhatIf: What if the three Children and several more characters went back in time? And the Children were so sick of love triangles and belligerent sexual tension that they agreed to have a three-ways relationship?
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* CoolBigSis: After finding out [[spoiler:Rei is her mother's clon,]] Ritsuko changes completely her behaviour towards Rei, treating her like her little sister and being quite overprotective from her.
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* CoolBigSis: After finding out [[spoiler:Rei is her mother's clon,]] clone,]] Ritsuko changes completely her behaviour towards Rei, treating her like her little sister and being quite overprotective from her.
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* HairFlip: Asuka discovers that being able to do these properly is an unexpected fringe benefit to ditching [[ImportantHairAccessory her signature nerve-clip barrettes]].
--> ''I should've thought of this ages ago. My old hairstyle just doesn't emphasise a dramatic gesture the same way.''
--> ''I should've thought of this ages ago. My old hairstyle just doesn't emphasise a dramatic gesture the same way.''
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* ImportantHairAccessory: Asuka stops wearing her iconic red clips when she realized that they symbolized how little she'd had in her life except piloting.
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* ImportantHairAccessory: Asuka stops makes the important decision to ''stop'' wearing her iconic red clips neural connectors as barrettes, to symbolise the fact that being an Evangelion pilot isn't ''all'' of who she is anymore. And then a few scenes later she discovers a practical advantage; a long ponytail makes it possible to do a proper HairFlip for emphasis when she realized that they symbolized how little she'd had in her life except piloting.making a dramatic gesture.
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* BrotherSisterIncest: Subverted. Shinji and Asuka thought that [[spoiler:Rei was his sister due to her being a Yui clone. However in this timeline she is genetically Ritsuko's little sister by way of her being a clone of Akagi.]]
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* BrotherSisterIncest: Subverted. Shinji and Asuka thought that [[spoiler:Rei was his sister due to her being a Yui clone. However in this timeline she is genetically Ritsuko's little sister by way of her being a clone of Naoko Akagi.]]
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To read other Evangelion PeggySue fanfiction go to ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Manga/ReTake'' or ''Fanfic/NGEMitigation''. Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'', ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' and ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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To read other Evangelion PeggySue fanfiction go to ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Manga/ReTake'' or ''Fanfic/NGEMitigation''. Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'', ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' and ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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** Asuka and Rei like playing games, especially classic games. Rei is very fond of ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVI'' and other UsefulNotes/SuperNintendoEntertainmentSystem games.
** And it was Maya who lent Rei her Super Famicom.
** Asuka and Rei like playing games, especially classic games. Rei is very fond of ''VideoGame/FinalFantasyVI'' and other UsefulNotes/SuperNintendoEntertainmentSystem games.
** And it was Maya who lent Rei her Super Famicom.
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* CrazyCatLady: There's some debate as to whether or not Ritsuko's a straight example, as she doesn't have an actual animal-hoarding issue as such, but she's definitely not quite right in the head and really likes cats. [[spoiler:And CatGirls, it turns out.]]
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* CrazyCatLady: There's some debate as to whether or not Ritsuko's a straight example, as she doesn't have an actual animal-hoarding issue as such, but she's definitely not quite right in the head and really likes cats. [[spoiler:And CatGirls, {{catgirl}}s, it turns out.]]
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* SafeSaneAndConsensual: Ritsuko and Maya are in bondage. Their sex life is loving, based on mutual respect and it has well-defined rules and boundaries.
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* SafeSaneAndConsensual: Ritsuko and Maya are in bondage. have taken up BDSM. Their sex life is loving, based on mutual respect and it has well-defined rules and boundaries.boundaries; it's probably the healthiest relationship Ritsuko's had in years.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Asuka on Kensuke, after he makes a rather tactless remark:
--> ''Not sure if on the autistic spectrum, or just being a jerk.''
** Not that these possibilities are in any way mutually exclusive, of course...
--> ''Not sure if on the autistic spectrum, or just being a jerk.''
** Not that these possibilities are in any way mutually exclusive, of course...
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* MeaningfulRename: After returning to the past Rei decides she is no longer Rei Ayanami, Yui Ikari's clon had no dreams or hopes and wished for nothing else than the peace of oblivion. She is now Rei Akagi, Ritsuko's little sister what wants to find out what she wants to do when she grows up.
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* MeaningfulRename: After returning to the past Rei decides she is no longer Rei Ayanami, Yui Ikari's clon clone had no dreams or hopes and wished for nothing else than the peace of oblivion. She is now Rei Akagi, Ritsuko's little sister what wants to find out what she wants to do when she grows up.
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* RelationshiipUpgrade: Ritsuko and Maya have been building up to one behind the scenes since Ritsuko left Gendo, but in Chapter 3 they go public with it. ''Very'' public.
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* RelationshiipUpgrade: RelationshipUpgrade: Ritsuko and Maya have been building up to one behind the scenes since Ritsuko left Gendo, but in Chapter 3 they go public with it. ''Very'' public.
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* LapPillow: In the initial draft, Shinji, Asuka and Rei combined this with SleepCute. After their first date, Asuka leaned on Shinji as Rei rested her head on both their laps, and they fell asleep.
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* OneThingLedToAnother: Touji and Hikari reveal that Hikari visited Touji after the fight against Bardiel. When she saw that he was feeling awfully depressed and hopeless, she tried to cheer him up... and before they realizing what was happening, she was giving him "something to live for".
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* SafeSaneAndConsensual: Ritsuko and Maya are in bondage. Their sex life is loving, based on mutual respect and it has well-defined rules and boundaries.
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To read other Evangelion PeggySue fanfiction go to ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Manga/ReTake'' or ''Fanfic/NGEMitigation''. Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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To read other Evangelion PeggySue fanfiction go to ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Manga/ReTake'' or ''Fanfic/NGEMitigation''. Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'', ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' and ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionGenocide'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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* TheBait: Shinji decides to be the bait when he and Rei fight Shamshel.
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* TheBerserker: Shinji's fighting "style" can be summed up in raw, thoughtless violence with no regard for his own safety.
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* SanctuaryOfSolitude: In Chapter 1, Asuka finds a small church and spends some time there, for the first time since her mother died.
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* ExpositoryHairstyleChange: Asuka removes her hair-clips and ties back her hair into a ponytail when she decides that she's done with devoting her life exclusively to piloting Evangelions.
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* MarshmallowHell: [[spoiler:After remembering everything,]] Misato gave Shinji one. Rei poited out dryly that she was suffocating Shinji.
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* MarshmallowHell: [[spoiler:After remembering everything,]] Misato gave Shinji and Asuka one. Rei poited pointed out dryly that she was suffocating Shinji.
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* {{Seppuku}}: Discussed (semi-jokingly) by Shinji, as he is rather sore about being essentially press-ganged into being Kaworu's ''kaishakunin'', and avows that if they end up going through the whole "ICannotSelfTerminate" thing again [[PeggySue this time around]] he's going to make him observe the proper ceremonies first.
