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* FemalesAreMoreInnocent: The two female characters are kind and caring towards each other. Miya's mother and aunt are also very nice and friendly towards Yui upon meeting the girl. The only males in the story who aren't cruel or sadistic like the Sakamakis are Miya's little brother, Haruki, their grandfather, and Yui's adoptive father, Seiji.
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* TheBet: Ayato challenge Miya to a basketball game and made a bet with her in which that if he wins, Yui and Miya would never speak to each other again.
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Miya point out the flaws of the bet she and Ayato did in the aftermath of their basketball challenge. Yui would have still manage to talk to Miya at some point since they're classmates, and Ayato lives in the house as Yui. Ayato even began to realize how idiotic his plan was.
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* FantasticRacism: Miya is look down by the Sakamaki brothers due to her being an UnevenHybride {{Kitsune}}.
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* FantasticRacism: Miya is look down by the Sakamaki brothers due to her being an UnevenHybride UnevenHybrid {{Kitsune}}.
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* FantasticRacism: Miya is look down by the Sakamaki brothers due to her being an UnevenHybride {{Kitsune}}.
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* MistakenIdentity: When Miya didn't show up at school in weeks, Yui went to the restroom and overhead two girls talking about Miya was found dead. [[spoiler:However, Miya was had actually been taking care of her sick mother and the woman who was mistaken as her was really a woman named Minako Tenjou.]]
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* {{Nephewism}}: Haruki lives with his aunt since his mother works all day and his older sister goes to school night. However, it's shown that he has a good relationship with them and visits them whenever he can.
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* {{Nephewism}}: Haruki lives with his aunt aunt, Michi, since his mother works all day and his older sister goes to school night. However, it's shown that he has a good relationship with them and visits them whenever he can.
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* FemalesAreMoreInnocent:FemalesAreMoreInnocent: The two female characters are kind and caring towards each other. Miya's mother and aunt are also very nice and friendly towards Yui upon meeting the girl. The only males in the story who aren't cruel or sadistic like the Sakamakis are Miya's little brother, Haruki, their grandfather, and Yui's adoptive father, Seiji.
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* ForbiddenFriendship: Yui's close friendship with Miya is strongly look down by the Sakamakis, especially Reiji who sees Miya as if she's a disgust vermin due to her [[spoiler:UnevenHybrid lineage.]]
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* ForbiddenFriendship: Yui's close friendship with Miya is strongly look down by the Sakamakis, especially Reiji who sees Miya as if she's a disgust vermin due to her [[spoiler:UnevenHybrid lineage.]]
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* ForbiddenFriendship: Yui's close friendship with Miya is strongly look down by the Sakamakis, especially Reiji who sees Miya as if she's a disgust vermin due to her [[spoiler:UnevenHybrid lineage.
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* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:In Dusk Ending, Miya is killed by Reiji and Yui is unable to handle the pain of loosing her beloved friend, choosing to end her own life to be Miya.]]
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: The friendship between Yui and Miya is very close that one could argue that they're dating. [[spoiler:Also when they tried to run away from the Sakamakis, it almost look like they were eloping.]]
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: The friendship between Yui and Miya is very close that one could argue that they're dating. [[spoiler:Also [[spoiler:Also, when they tried to run away from the Sakamakis, it almost look like they were eloping.]]]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:In Dusk Ending, Yui committed suicide after the Sakamakis murder Miya, pulling a TogetherInDeath.]]
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* AlcoholicParent: Miya's mother is this. But it's mostly PlayedForLaughs and the latter clearly shows to care about her and Haruki.
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* AlcoholicParent: Miya's mother mother, Ayaka, is this. But it's mostly PlayedForLaughs and the latter clearly shows to care about her and Haruki.
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** Shu sees the friendship between the girls as his own that he had with his human friend Edgar.
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** Shu sees the friendship between the girls as his own old one that he once had with his human friend Edgar.
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* MultipleEndings: There're three different endings like in the canon series. Dusk Ending, Midnight Ending, and Dawn Ending.
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* MultipleEndings: There're three different endings like in the canon series. series: Dusk Ending, Midnight Ending, and Dawn Ending.
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* KickTheDog: As a ''Diabolik Lovers'' fanfic, there are several moments of the brothers' cruel treatment towards Yui.
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* AlcoholicParent: Miya's mother is this. But it's mostly PlayWithLaughs and the latter clearly shows to care about her and Haruki.
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* AlcoholicParent: Miya's mother is this. But it's mostly PlayedWithLaughs and the latter clearly shows to care about her and Haruki.
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* MismatchedEyes: Miya has them. One green and one blue.
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* AFriendInNeed: Miya wants to save Yui from the Sakamakis, even when the first latter doesn't her friend to get hurt because of her.
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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Miya isn't unaware that the Sakamaki brothers are vampires and Yui is their Sacrificial Bride. [[spoiler:It isn't until the climax where Yui finally admites her the truth about her circumstance after the former figured it on her own.]]
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* TheGhost: The Sakamaki brothers' father, Karlheinz, has been mention in an early chapter, but he has never had actual appearance in the story. Karl had only summed his sons to tell them that he felt a strong force in the area that they live in.
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* TheGhost: The Sakamaki brothers' father, Karlheinz, has been mention in an early chapter, but he has never had actual appearance in the story. Karl had only summed summoned his sons to tell them that he felt a strong force in the area that they live in.
