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* FantasticRacism: The Sakamaki brothers (especially Reiji) look down on Miya due to her being [[spoiler:an UnevenHybrid {{Kitsune}}.]]
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* FantasticRacism: The Sakamaki brothers (especially Reiji) look down on Miya due to her being [[spoiler:an UnevenHybrid {{Kitsune}}.kitsune.]]
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* AsianFoxSpirit: [[spoiler:Miya and her family are descendants of a union between a Kitsune who married human.]]
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* {{Kitsune}}: [[spoiler:Miya and her family are descendants of a union between a Kitsune who married human.]]
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* MismatchedEyes: Miya has one green eye and one blue.
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: The friendship between Yui and Miya is very close that one could argue that they're dating. [[spoiler:Also, when they tried to run away from the Sakamakis, it almost look like they were eloping.]]
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Miya point out the flaws of the bet she and Ayato made in the aftermath of their basketball challenge. Yui would have still manage to talk to Miya at some point since they're classmates, and Ayato lives in the house as Yui. Ayato even began to realize how idiotic his plan was.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Miya point out the flaws of the bet she and Ayato made in the aftermath of their basketball challenge. Yui would have still manage to talk to Miya at some point since they're classmates, and Ayato lives in the same house as Yui. Ayato even began to realize how idiotic his plan was.
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Miya point out the flaws of the bet she and Ayato made in the aftermath of their basketball challenge. Yui would have still manage to talk to Miya at some point since they're classmates, and Ayato lives in the house as Yui. Ayato even began to realize how idiotic his plan was.
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: DidntThinkThisThrough: Miya point out the flaws of the bet she and Ayato made in the aftermath of their basketball challenge. Yui would have still manage to talk to Miya at some point since they're classmates, and Ayato lives in the house as Yui. Ayato even began to realize how idiotic his plan was.
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* FantasticRacism: The Sakamaki brothers (especially Reiji) look down on Miya due to her being an UnevenHybrid {{Kitsune}}.
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* FantasticRacism: The Sakamaki brothers (especially Reiji) look down on Miya due to her being an [[spoiler:an UnevenHybrid {{Kitsune}}. {{Kitsune}}.]]
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* GrewASpine: Yui's becoming stronger and stronger in her own way, and is able to stand up against the brothers. [[spoiler:Something that Reiji clearly disapproves of, due to the fact he believes that she was better as the gentle and obedient woman that she was when she first came to them.]]
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* GrewASpine: Yui's becoming stronger and stronger in her own way, and is able to stand up against the brothers. [[spoiler:Something Something that Reiji clearly disapproves of, due to the fact he believes that she was better as the gentle and obedient woman that she was when she first came to them.]] them.
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* {{Kitsune}}: Miya and her family are descendants of a union between a Kitsune who married human.
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* {{Kitsune}}: Miya [[spoiler:Miya and her family are descendants of a union between a Kitsune who married human. human.]]
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* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:In Dusk Ending, Miya is killed by Reiji and Yui is unable to handle the pain of loosing her beloved friend, choosing to end her own life to be Miya.]]
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* TogetherInDeath: [[spoiler:In Dusk Ending, Miya is killed by Reiji and Yui is unable to handle the pain of loosing her beloved friend, choosing to end her own life to be with Miya.]]
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* UnevenHybrid: Miya and her family are this. They have more human blood than demon blood due to their lineage always marring humans.
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* UnevenHybrid: Miya [[spoiler:Miya and her family are this. They have more human blood than demon blood due to their lineage always marring humans. ]]
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* AlcoholicParent: Miya's mother, Ayaka, is this. But it's mostly PlayedForLaughs and the latter clearly shows to care about her and Haruki.
* AllMenArePerverts: Laito, of course.
* AmbiguouslyHuman: Miya's extremely too strong to be a mere human. She's able to fight off the Sakamaki brothers despite they could easily take her down. Reiji has been researching what she is, believing she's from a demon bloodline. [[spoiler:Miya reveals to Yui that she and her whole family are descends from the Japanese demon: the Kitsune Bride.]]
* AllMenArePerverts: Laito, of course.
* AmbiguouslyHuman: Miya's extremely too strong to be a mere human. She's able to fight off the Sakamaki brothers despite they could easily take her down. Reiji has been researching what she is, believing she's from a demon bloodline. [[spoiler:Miya reveals to Yui that she and her whole family are descends from the Japanese demon: the Kitsune Bride.]]
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* AlcoholicParent: Miya's mother, Ayaka, is this.has a drinking problem. But it's mostly PlayedForLaughs and the latter clearly shows to care about her and Haruki.
* %%* AllMenArePerverts: Laito, of course.
* AmbiguouslyHuman: Miya'sextremely far too strong to be a mere human. She's able to fight off the Sakamaki brothers despite the fact that they could easily take her down. Reiji has been researching what she is, believing she's from a demon bloodline. [[spoiler:Miya reveals to Yui that she and her whole family are descends from descendants of the Japanese demon: the Kitsune Bride.]]
* AmbiguouslyHuman: Miya's
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* CoolBigSis: Miya is this to her younger brother Haruki.
* CoolBigSis: Miya is this to her younger brother Haruki.
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* DidNotThinkThisThrough: Miya point out the flaws of the bet she and Ayato did made in the aftermath of their basketball challenge. Yui would have still manage to talk to Miya at some point since they're classmates, and Ayato lives in the house as Yui. Ayato even began to realize how idiotic his plan was.
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* FantasticRacism: Miya is look down by the Sakamaki brothers (escpically Reiji) due to her being an UnevenHybrid {{Kitsune}}.
* ForbiddenFriendship: Yui's close friendship with Miya is strongly look down by the Sakamakis, especially Reiji who sees Miya as if she's a disgust vermin due to her [[spoiler:UnevenHybrid lineage.]]
* ForbiddenFriendship: Yui's close friendship with Miya is strongly look down by the Sakamakis, especially Reiji who sees Miya as if she's a disgust vermin due to her [[spoiler:UnevenHybrid lineage.]]
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* FantasticRacism: Miya is look down by the The Sakamaki brothers (escpically (especially Reiji) look down on Miya due to her being an UnevenHybrid {{Kitsune}}.
* ForbiddenFriendship: Yui's close friendship with Miya is stronglylook looked down on by the Sakamakis, especially Reiji who sees Miya as if she's a disgust disgusting vermin due to her [[spoiler:UnevenHybrid lineage.]]
* ForbiddenFriendship: Yui's close friendship with Miya is strongly
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* FriendlessBackground: Yui was this before she met Miya. This was due because her seemingly "close" relationship to the Sakamaki brothers.
* TheGhost: The Sakamaki brothers' father, Karlheinz, has been mention in an early chapter, but he has never had actual appearance in the story. Karl had only summoned his sons to tell them that he felt a strong force in the area that they live in.
* GrewASpine: Yui does this. She's becoming more and more stronger in her own way against the brothers. [[spoiler:Something that Reiji clearly disapproves due to the fact he believes that she better as a gentle and obedient woman that she original first came to them.]]
* TheGhost: The Sakamaki brothers' father, Karlheinz, has been mention in an early chapter, but he has never had actual appearance in the story. Karl had only summoned his sons to tell them that he felt a strong force in the area that they live in.
* GrewASpine: Yui does this. She's becoming more and more stronger in her own way against the brothers. [[spoiler:Something that Reiji clearly disapproves due to the fact he believes that she better as a gentle and obedient woman that she original first came to them.]]
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* FriendlessBackground: Yui was this had no friends before she met Miya. This was due because of her seemingly "close" relationship to the Sakamaki brothers.
* TheGhost: The Sakamaki brothers' father, Karlheinz, has beenmention mentioned in an early chapter, but he has never had actual appearance in the story. Karl had only summoned his sons to tell them that he felt a strong force in the area that they live in.
* GrewASpine:Yui does this. She's Yui's becoming more stronger and more stronger in her own way way, and is able to stand up against the brothers. [[spoiler:Something that Reiji clearly disapproves of, due to the fact he believes that she was better as a the gentle and obedient woman that she original was when she first came to them.]]
* TheGhost: The Sakamaki brothers' father, Karlheinz, has been
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* {{Kitsune}}: Miya and her family are descendants from a union between one who married human.
* MismatchedEyes: Miya has them. One green and one blue.
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* {{Kitsune}}: Miya and her family are descendants from of a union between one a Kitsune who married human.
* MismatchedEyes: Miya hasthem. One one green eye and one blue.
* MismatchedEyes: Miya has
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* ParentsAsPeople: Ayaka is a flaw flawed mother but she does really love both of her children.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Miya the loud, sporty, hot-tempered tomboy while Yui is the gentle, soft, sensitive girly-girl.
* TrueCompanions: Yui and Miya are this. The two risk their lives for each other many times in the story.
* UndyingLoyalty: Both Yui and Miya have this towards each other.
* TrueCompanions: Yui and Miya are this. The two risk their lives for each other many times in the story.
* UndyingLoyalty: Both Yui and Miya have this towards each other.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Miya is the loud, sporty, hot-tempered tomboy while Yui is the gentle, soft, sensitive girly-girl.
* TrueCompanions: Yui and Miyaare this. The two risk their lives for each other many times in the story.
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* TrueCompanions: Yui and Miya
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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Miya isn't unaware that the Sakamaki brothers are vampires and Yui is their Sacrificial Bride. [[spoiler:It isn't until the climax where Yui finally admites her the truth about her circumstance after the former figured it on her own.]]
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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: Miya isn't unaware that the Sakamaki brothers are vampires and Yui is their Sacrificial Bride. [[spoiler:It isn't until the climax where Yui finally admites tells her the truth about her circumstance circumstances after the former Miya figured it out on her own.]]
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* ParentsAsPeople: Ayaka is a flaw mother but she does really love both of her children.
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* FantasticRacism: Miya is look down by the Sakamaki brothers due to her being an UnevenHybrid {{Kitsune}}.
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* FantasticRacism: Miya is look down by the Sakamaki brothers (escpically Reiji) due to her being an UnevenHybrid {{Kitsune}}.
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** Shu sees the friendship between the girls as his old one that he once had with his human friend Edgar.
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** Shu sees the friendship between the girls as similar to his old one that he once had with his human friend Edgar.