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* ShoutOut: With nebulous overlap between both {{Fanon}} and SharedUniverse. There are numerous references to story elements specific to other ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo'' fanfics, like '' [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687&hilit=tomorrow%27s+doom Tomorrow's Doom]]'', the ''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=7632 Kagami Pseudo-Route]]'', and ''FanFic/MeanTimeToBreakdown''. (The authors of those stories all share their work on the ''Katawa Shoujo'' [[http://ks.renai.us/viewforum.php?f=52 Fan Fiction Forum]] and have a rapport.)
** Played straighter towards the end of the story, when Hanako makes friends with [[spoiler: Ritsu Tainaka, a student in her class, and she turns out to be... [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Ritsu Tainaka]]. As in, ''the exact character from Manga/KOn,'' transferred to Yamaku because she developed carpal tunnel in both hands. Dewelar literally made the entirety of ''Katawa Shoujo'' a ''de facto'' ''Manga/KOn'' AU.]]

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* ShoutOut: With nebulous overlap between both {{Fanon}} and SharedUniverse. There are numerous references to story elements specific to other ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo'' fanfics, like '' [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687&hilit=tomorrow%27s+doom Tomorrow's Doom]]'', the ''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=7632 Kagami Pseudo-Route]]'', and ''FanFic/MeanTimeToBreakdown''. (The authors of those stories all share their work on the ''Katawa Shoujo'' [[http://ks.renai.us/viewforum.php?f=52 Fan Fiction Forum]] and have a rapport.)
** Played straighter towards Towards the end of the story, when Hanako makes friends with [[spoiler: Ritsu Tainaka, a student in her class, and she turns out to be... [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Ritsu Tainaka]]. As in, ''the exact the ''exact'' character from Manga/KOn,'' ''Manga/KOn'', who transferred to Yamaku because she developed carpal tunnel in both hands. Dewelar literally made the entirety of ''Katawa Shoujo'' a ''de facto'' ''Manga/KOn'' AU.]]

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* LoveTriangle: In the wake of his breakup with Lilly, both Emi and Hanako become interested in Hisao, and that forms the foundation for much of the drama in the story. [[spoiler: For a small portion of the story,]] ''Lilly herself'' acts as sort of a ThirdOptionLoveInterest.



* TriangRelations: Type 3. In the wake of his breakup with Lilly, both Emi and Hanako become interested in Hisao, and that forms the foundation for much of the drama in the story. [[spoiler: For a small portion of the story,]] ''Lilly herself'' acts as sort of a ThirdOptionLoveInterest.
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** Played straighter towards the end of the story, when Hanako makes friends with [[spoiler: Ritsu Tainaka, a student in her class, and she turns out to be... [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Ritsu Tainaka]]. As in, ''the exact character from Manga/KOn,'' transferred to Yamaku because she developed carpal tunnel in both hands. [[CrazyAwesome Dewelar literally made the entirety of]] ''Katawa Shoujo'' a ''de facto'' ''Manga/KOn'' AU.]]

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** Played straighter towards the end of the story, when Hanako makes friends with [[spoiler: Ritsu Tainaka, a student in her class, and she turns out to be... [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Ritsu Tainaka]]. As in, ''the exact character from Manga/KOn,'' transferred to Yamaku because she developed carpal tunnel in both hands. [[CrazyAwesome Dewelar literally made the entirety of]] of ''Katawa Shoujo'' a ''de facto'' ''Manga/KOn'' AU.]]
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* MissingMom: In one case, averted ''magnificently.'' [[spoiler: Shizune's mother, Mayoi, who is often perceived by the fandom to be deceased, turns out to have [[SheWasRightThereAllAlong Right There All Along]]—she lives near Yamaku Academy, in fact—but Shizune is uncomfortable bringing her up because she's still reeling from Mayoi [[LastHetRomance leaving her father for a woman]].]]

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* MissingMom: In one case, averted ''magnificently.'' [[spoiler: Shizune's mother, Mayoi, who is often perceived by the fandom to be deceased, turns out to have [[SheWasRightThereAllAlong been [[HeWasRightThereAllAlong Right There All Along]]—she lives near Yamaku Academy, in fact—but Shizune is uncomfortable bringing her up because she's still reeling from Mayoi [[LastHetRomance leaving her father for a woman]].]]
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->"One of the things that drew me here was the sense of being away from the pace of the rest of the school, like being in a little pocket of a different place. Today, some of that feeling is missing.

->''But how much of that is the empty school, and how much of it is Lilly's absence?''"

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->"One of the things that drew me here was the sense of being away from the pace of the rest of the school, like being in a little pocket of a different place. Today, some of that feeling is missing.

->''But
missing.\\
But
how much of that is the empty school, and how much of it is Lilly's absence?''"



* DoorStopper: The story is over 300,000 words long. That's longer than ''Literature/TheTwoTowers'' and ''Literature/ReturnOfTheKing'' combined, and probably longer than the Lilly route itself.

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* DoorStopper: The story is over 300,000 words long. That's longer than ''Literature/TheTwoTowers'' ''[[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings "The Two Towers" and ''Literature/ReturnOfTheKing'' "The Return Of The King"]]'' combined, and probably longer than the Lilly route itself.



* SwitchingPOV: Mostly between Hisao, Lilly, Emi and Hanako, with a few one-shot perspectives throughout the story: [[spoiler: Akira, Shizune, Misha, Meiko, Rin, Taka-Taka, and Noriko.]]

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* SwitchingPOV: Mostly between Hisao, Lilly, Emi and Hanako, with a few one-shot perspectives throughout the story: [[spoiler: Akira, [[spoiler:Akira, Shizune, Misha, Meiko, Rin, Taka-Taka, and Noriko.]]
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* DoorStopper: The story is over 300,000 words long. That's longer than ''TheTwoTowers'' and ''ReturnOfTheKing'' combined, and probably longer than the Lilly route itself.

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* DoorStopper: The story is over 300,000 words long. That's longer than ''TheTwoTowers'' ''Literature/TheTwoTowers'' and ''ReturnOfTheKing'' ''Literature/ReturnOfTheKing'' combined, and probably longer than the Lilly route itself.
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* RecursiveFanfiction: In the ''slightest'' sense. Miss Yumi, Hanako's [[OriginalCharacter OC]] therapist in Guest Poster's ''{{Sisterhood}},'' is also a character in this story. The stories also have some superficial structural similarity—they're both long [[ContinuationFic Continuation Fics]] with SwitchingPOV—but they go in ''completely'' different directions. See also ShoutOut.

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* RecursiveFanfiction: In the ''slightest'' sense. Miss Yumi, Hanako's [[OriginalCharacter OC]] therapist in Guest Poster's ''{{Sisterhood}},'' ''Fanfic/{{Sisterhood}},'' is also a character in this story. The stories also have some superficial structural similarity—they're both long [[ContinuationFic Continuation Fics]] {{Continuation Fic}}s with SwitchingPOV—but they go in ''completely'' different directions. See also ShoutOut.
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''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=8919&p=172357#p172355 Developments]]'' is an ''[[DoorStopper epic]]'' KatawaShoujo ContinuationFic by Tropers/{{Dewelar}}. Stemming from the Lilly route of the VisualNovel, it distinguishes itself from similar stories in the fandom by kicking off shortly before the end of the ''[[BadEnd Bad]][[BrokenBase /]][[FandomHeresy Neutral]]'' ending, rather than the more popular [[GoldenEnding Good Ending]], and carrying on straight through from there.

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''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=8919&p=172357#p172355 Developments]]'' is an ''[[DoorStopper epic]]'' KatawaShoujo ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo'' ContinuationFic by Tropers/{{Dewelar}}. Stemming from the Lilly route of the VisualNovel, it distinguishes itself from similar stories in the fandom by kicking off shortly before the end of the ''[[BadEnd Bad]][[BrokenBase /]][[FandomHeresy Neutral]]'' ending, rather than the more popular [[GoldenEnding Good Ending]], and carrying on straight through from there.



'''Tropes associated with Developments'''

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'''Tropes !!Tropes associated with Developments'''
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* ShoutOut: With nebulous overlap between both {{Fanon}} and SharedUniverse. There are numerous references to story elements specific to other KatawaShoujo fanfics, like '' [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687&hilit=tomorrow%27s+doom Tomorrow's Doom]]'', the ''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=7632 Kagami Pseudo-Route]]'', and ''FanFic/MeanTimeToBreakdown''. (The authors of those stories all share their work on the KatawaShoujo [[http://ks.renai.us/viewforum.php?f=52 Fan Fiction Forum]] and have a rapport.)
** Played straighter towards the end of the story, when Hanako makes friends with [[spoiler: Ritsu Tainaka, a student in her class, and she turns out to be... [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Ritsu Tainaka]]. As in, ''the exact character from Manga/KOn,'' transferred to Yamaku because she developed carpal tunnel in both hands. [[CrazyAwesome Dewelar literally made the entirety of]] KatawaShoujo a ''de facto'' Manga/KOn AU.]]

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* ShoutOut: With nebulous overlap between both {{Fanon}} and SharedUniverse. There are numerous references to story elements specific to other KatawaShoujo ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo'' fanfics, like '' [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687&hilit=tomorrow%27s+doom Tomorrow's Doom]]'', the ''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=7632 Kagami Pseudo-Route]]'', and ''FanFic/MeanTimeToBreakdown''. (The authors of those stories all share their work on the KatawaShoujo ''Katawa Shoujo'' [[http://ks.renai.us/viewforum.php?f=52 Fan Fiction Forum]] and have a rapport.)
** Played straighter towards the end of the story, when Hanako makes friends with [[spoiler: Ritsu Tainaka, a student in her class, and she turns out to be... [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Ritsu Tainaka]]. As in, ''the exact character from Manga/KOn,'' transferred to Yamaku because she developed carpal tunnel in both hands. [[CrazyAwesome Dewelar literally made the entirety of]] KatawaShoujo ''Katawa Shoujo'' a ''de facto'' Manga/KOn ''Manga/KOn'' AU.]]
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* ShoutOut: With nebulous overlap between both {{Fanon}} and SharedUniverse. There are numerous references to story elements specific to other KatawaShoujo fanfics, like '' [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687&hilit=tomorrow%27s+doom Tomorrow's Doom]]'', the ''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=7632 Kagami Pseudo-Route]]'', and ''FanFic/MeanTimeToBreakdown''. (The authors of those stories all share their work on the KatawaShoujo Fanfiction Forum and have a rapport.)
** Played straighter towards the end of the story, when Hanako makes friends with [[spoiler: Ritsu Tainaka, a character in her class, and she turns out to be... Ritsu Tainaka. As in, ''the exact character from Manga/KOn,'' transferred to Yamaku because she developed carpal tunnel in both hands. [[CrazyAwesome Dewelar literally made the entirety of]] KatawaShoujo a ''de facto'' Manga/KOn AU.]]

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* ShoutOut: With nebulous overlap between both {{Fanon}} and SharedUniverse. There are numerous references to story elements specific to other KatawaShoujo fanfics, like '' [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687&hilit=tomorrow%27s+doom Tomorrow's Doom]]'', the ''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=7632 Kagami Pseudo-Route]]'', and ''FanFic/MeanTimeToBreakdown''. (The authors of those stories all share their work on the KatawaShoujo Fanfiction Forum [[http://ks.renai.us/viewforum.php?f=52 Fan Fiction Forum]] and have a rapport.)
** Played straighter towards the end of the story, when Hanako makes friends with [[spoiler: Ritsu Tainaka, a character student in her class, and she turns out to be... [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Ritsu Tainaka.Tainaka]]. As in, ''the exact character from Manga/KOn,'' transferred to Yamaku because she developed carpal tunnel in both hands. [[CrazyAwesome Dewelar literally made the entirety of]] KatawaShoujo a ''de facto'' Manga/KOn AU.]]
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* GivenNameReveal: Dewelar gives one to Nurse. It's [[spoiler: Goro Kaneshiro]].

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* GivenNameReveal: Dewelar gives one to Nurse. It's [[spoiler: Goro Kaneshiro]]. This is a ShoutOut to Brythain's ''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=9422 After The Dream]],'' where the name first appeared.
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"One of the things that drew me here was the sense of being away from the pace of the rest of the school, like being in a little pocket of a different place. Today, some of that feeling is missing.

''But how much of that is the empty school, and how much of it is Lilly's absence?''"

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"One ->"One of the things that drew me here was the sense of being away from the pace of the rest of the school, like being in a little pocket of a different place. Today, some of that feeling is missing.

''But ->''But how much of that is the empty school, and how much of it is Lilly's absence?''"
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* MissingMom: In one case, averted ''magnificently.'' [[spoiler: Shizune's mother, Mayoi, who is often perceived by the fandom to be deceased, turns out to have [[SheWasRightThereAllAlong RightThereAllAlong]]—she lives near Yamaku Academy, in fact—but Shizune is uncomfortable bringing her up because she's still reeling from Mayoi [[LastHetRomance leaving her father for a woman]].]]

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* MissingMom: In one case, averted ''magnificently.'' [[spoiler: Shizune's mother, Mayoi, who is often perceived by the fandom to be deceased, turns out to have [[SheWasRightThereAllAlong RightThereAllAlong]]—she Right There All Along]]—she lives near Yamaku Academy, in fact—but Shizune is uncomfortable bringing her up because she's still reeling from Mayoi [[LastHetRomance leaving her father for a woman]].]]
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* DoorStopper: The story is over 300,000 words long. That's longer than ''TheTwoTowers'' and ''ReturnOfTheKing'' combined, and probably longer than the Lilly route itself.
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"One of the things that drew me here was the sense of being away from the pace of the rest of the school, like being in a little pocket of a different place. Today, some of that feeling is missing.

''But how much of that is the empty school, and how much of it is Lilly's absence?''"

''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=8919&p=172357#p172355 Developments]]'' is an ''[[DoorStopper epic]]'' KatawaShoujo ContinuationFic by Tropers/{{Dewelar}}. Stemming from the Lilly route of the VisualNovel, it distinguishes itself from similar stories in the fandom by kicking off shortly before the end of the ''[[BadEnd Bad]][[BrokenBase /]][[FandomHeresy Neutral]]'' ending, rather than the more popular [[GoldenEnding Good Ending]], and carrying on straight through from there.

Rather than being told exclusively from Hisao's perspective, as in the visual novel, this story retains the first-person present tense narration but utilizes a SwitchingPOV, with each chapter following a different character—generally Hisao, Lilly, Emi and Hanako, but with several other perspectives occasionally thrown in to mix things up.

While dealing heavily with the aftermath of Hisao and Lilly's ruined relationship, this is by no means a FixFic—there's no long, inevitable march to a predictable reconciliation. Rather, the story becomes even ''more'' complex, as other people (including those who had become OutOfFocus in the canon route) begin to step into Hisao's life in the wake of his breakup with Lilly, and, gradually, the lines of a LoveTriangle begin to materialize... making things more than a little ''complicated'' for all parties involved.

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'''Tropes associated with Developments'''

* AscendedExtra: Several characters, overlapping with OCStandIn—many of the characters in the story had ''no dialogue whatsoever'' in the visual novel, if they ''[[TheGhost personally appeared]] [[UnknownCharacter at all.]]'' See also UnexpectedCharacter, below.
* CharacterDevelopment: Oodles and oodles, for every character in the story.
* ContinuationFic: Of Lilly's ''[[BuffySpeak non-Good]]'' ending. (Because of that ending's idiosyncratically non-confrontational tone, [[BrokenBase the fandom is split]] over whether it should be called a Bad Ending or a Neutral Ending.)
* GivenNameReveal: Dewelar gives one to Nurse. It's [[spoiler: Goro Kaneshiro]].
* MissingMom: In one case, averted ''magnificently.'' [[spoiler: Shizune's mother, Mayoi, who is often perceived by the fandom to be deceased, turns out to have [[SheWasRightThereAllAlong RightThereAllAlong]]—she lives near Yamaku Academy, in fact—but Shizune is uncomfortable bringing her up because she's still reeling from Mayoi [[LastHetRomance leaving her father for a woman]].]]
* OriginalCharacter: Fewer than you'd think—most of the characters introduced in this story [[OCStandIn already existed somewhere in canon.]] One notable exception is Takako Hamaguchi, a first-year student in the Newspaper Club.
* OutOfFocus: Kenji, Miki, Hideaki, and Jigoro. Conversely, Emi and Rin, who all but completely disappeared for the latter half of Lilly's route, come back with a ''vengeance''.
* ParentsAsPeople: The fic explores Meiko's character and backstory much more elaborately than it was in Emi's route, and she has something of a [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled past.]] This is true for [[spoiler: Mayoi]] as well. Hisao and Rin's parents, on the other hand, remain as invisible as always.
* PoorCommunicationKills: A lack of openness and honesty is the catalyst for Hisao and Lilly's breakup. [[spoiler: The breakup is permanent.]]
* RecursiveFanfiction: In the ''slightest'' sense. Miss Yumi, Hanako's [[OriginalCharacter OC]] therapist in Guest Poster's ''{{Sisterhood}},'' is also a character in this story. The stories also have some superficial structural similarity—they're both long [[ContinuationFic Continuation Fics]] with SwitchingPOV—but they go in ''completely'' different directions. See also ShoutOut.
* ShoutOut: With nebulous overlap between both {{Fanon}} and SharedUniverse. There are numerous references to story elements specific to other KatawaShoujo fanfics, like '' [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=6687&hilit=tomorrow%27s+doom Tomorrow's Doom]]'', the ''[[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=7632 Kagami Pseudo-Route]]'', and ''FanFic/MeanTimeToBreakdown''. (The authors of those stories all share their work on the KatawaShoujo Fanfiction Forum and have a rapport.)
** Played straighter towards the end of the story, when Hanako makes friends with [[spoiler: Ritsu Tainaka, a character in her class, and she turns out to be... Ritsu Tainaka. As in, ''the exact character from Manga/KOn,'' transferred to Yamaku because she developed carpal tunnel in both hands. [[CrazyAwesome Dewelar literally made the entirety of]] KatawaShoujo a ''de facto'' Manga/KOn AU.]]
* SwitchingPOV: Mostly between Hisao, Lilly, Emi and Hanako, with a few one-shot perspectives throughout the story: [[spoiler: Akira, Shizune, Misha, Meiko, Rin, Taka-Taka, and Noriko.]]
* ThoseTwoGuys: Yoshi and Noriko, to Hisao. Naomi and Natsume also serve this role for Hanako.
* TriangRelations: Type 3. In the wake of his breakup with Lilly, both Emi and Hanako become interested in Hisao, and that forms the foundation for much of the drama in the story. [[spoiler: For a small portion of the story,]] ''Lilly herself'' acts as sort of a ThirdOptionLoveInterest.
* UnexpectedCharacter: The unnamed, unseen [[SpearCarrier second-year student who speaks a single contemptuous line]] about Hanako in Lilly's route? Her name is Noriko Yoshimura and she's one of the ''more important'' characters in the fic. The blind boy in the Art Club that Rin speaks pensively about in Act One? His name is Yoshiro Kamisaka, and he becomes the ClassRepresentative of 3-2 after Lilly departs. And that's just the ''tip of the iceberg.''

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